Horizon:Kimitoasamade 1B Chapter 6 - Revision history

Muton at 03:58, 4 May 2016

2016-05-04T03:58:27Z

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	This was just one path toward the future.		This was just one path toward the future.

	Edel Brocken was a company located somewhere in M.H.R.R. that developed equipment exclusively for Technohexen. Any licensed Technohexen who had reached a certain level would suddenly have an Edel Brocken pamphlet and passcode sent to them. If they ignored it, they would never have any dealings with Edel Brocken. If they registered, they would have occasional dealings with Edel Brocken, seemingly whenever the company felt like it.		Edel Brocken was a company located somewhere in M.H.R.R. that developed equipment exclusively for Technohexen. Any licensed Technohexen who had reached a certain level would suddenly have an Edel Brocken pamphlet and passcode sent to them. If they ignored it, they would never have any dealings with Edel Brocken. If they registered, they would have occasional dealings with Edel Brocken, seemingly whenever the company felt like it.

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2016-04-09T23:47:30Z

Fixed typos.

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	In Shinto, all things had a “staring point”, so to set up that starting point appropriately, she stopped at the top of the bridge in front of the school building. Mitotsudaira responded in kind, but Asama had her eyes focused straight ahead and started on without the other two.		In Shinto, all things had a “staring point”, so to set up that starting point appropriately, she stopped at the top of the bridge in front of the school building. Mitotsudaira responded in kind, but Asama had her eyes focused straight ahead and started on without the other two.

	“Wait ,wait. Hold it, Asama. Heh heh. Why are you in such a rush? We aren’t going to run away, you know?”		“Wait, wait. Hold it, Asama. Heh heh. Why are you in such a rush? We aren’t going to run away, you know?”

	“Eh!? Oh, r-right.”		“Eh!? Oh, r-right.”
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	“That’s exactly the kind of distance I want from you.”		“That’s exactly the kind of distance I want from you.”

	She smiled a little and took off. With a flap her wings, she kicked off the warehouse wall and soared high into the sky.		She smiled a little and took off. With a flap of her wings, she kicked off the warehouse wall and soared high into the sky.

	“What do you call this?”		“What do you call this?”

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2016-03-12T05:32:52Z

Chapter 6: Revealed Ones at a Place of Passage: typos

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	In other words…		In other words…

	“I can only embrace your arm and grope your breasts because ~~we’re~~ of the romance between us.”		“I can only embrace your arm and grope your breasts because of the romance between us.”

	“That is not why. Familial love and friendship also counts.” Instead of removing Kimi, Asama just let her shoulders fall. “But with the Apocalypse approaching, there really have been more mysterious phenomena lately. As the Asama Shrine’s #2, I do have a lot of defenses like that in place.”		“That is not why. Familial love and friendship also counts.” Instead of removing Kimi, Asama just let her shoulders fall. “But with the Apocalypse approaching, there really have been more mysterious phenomena lately. As the Asama Shrine’s #2, I do have a lot of defenses like that in place.”
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	…''Ah.		…''Ah.

	A white handkerchief had ~~bene~~ laid out on the bench where her head had been resting.		A white handkerchief had been laid out on the bench where her head had been resting.

	It belonged to Margot. The girl had continued on with their work instead of worrying too much. Naruze would have felt like a burden otherwise, so she appreciated it. And…		It belonged to Margot. The girl had continued on with their work instead of worrying too much. Naruze would have felt like a burden otherwise, so she appreciated it. And…

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2016-03-12T03:25:23Z

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