68.109.52.245 at 03:45, 3 September 2015

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	“Sorry!”		“Sorry!”

	She flew to the side of westernmost transport ship.		She flew to the side of the westernmost transport ship.

	She saw Guericke and the others on board gasping and she sent Righteousness’s right shoulder slamming into the ship carrying the Europeans.		She saw Guericke and the others on board gasping and she sent Righteousness’s right shoulder slamming into the ship carrying the Europeans.

Txtracer: Missed one

2015-07-06T13:10:50Z

Missed one

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	She had lived on and used her experience to strengthen herself.		She had lived on and used her experience to strengthen herself.

	Katsuie ~~was~~ had been born much more recently, but he had still trained and grown stronger in order to improve himself.		Katsuie had been born much more recently, but he had still trained and grown stronger in order to improve himself.

	Even though he was of the combat type, his age was only a bit over one hundred. She had heard he had joined P.A. Oda in order to experience the intense fighting there, but if that was enough for him to move at the same time as her…		Even though he was of the combat type, his age was only a bit over one hundred. She had heard he had joined P.A. Oda in order to experience the intense fighting there, but if that was enough for him to move at the same time as her…

Txtracer: typos

2015-07-05T05:55:53Z

typos

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	In the park a bit north of Magdeburg’s cathedral, the evacuees and ~~hemisphere~~ were being loaded onto the transport ships supplied by the city.		In the park a bit north of Magdeburg’s cathedral, the evacuees and hemispheres were being loaded onto the transport ships supplied by the city.

	There were three Dragon-class ships there. Guericke and the other Europeans boarded one, Masazumi, Kimi, Asama, and the Far Easterners boarded another, and the hemisphere cart was loaded onto the final one by Righteousness and the Palais-Cardinal. Adele guided them as they loaded it.		There were three Dragon-class ships there. Guericke and the other Europeans boarded one, Masazumi, Kimi, Asama, and the Far Easterners boarded another, and the hemisphere cart was loaded onto the final one by Righteousness and the Palais-Cardinal. Adele guided them as they loaded it.
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	Anne added “right?” while looking to Adele and the others working in the hangar.		Anne added “right?” while looking to Adele and the others working in the hangar.

	They had all started working tying down the ~~hemisphere~~ inside the hangar, but they turned back toward Anne, and…		They had all started working tying down the hemispheres inside the hangar, but they turned back toward Anne, and…

	“————”		“————”
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	“Yes. The defense of the riverside path has started in earnest.”		“Yes. The defense of the riverside path has started in earnest.”

	Work tying down the ~~hemisphere~~ was continuing inside the hangar, but the transport ship was not waiting for it to finish. Bands of mist began to appear around its waterline. Seeing that, Righteousness asked a question.		Work tying down the hemispheres was continuing inside the hangar, but the transport ship was not waiting for it to finish. Bands of mist began to appear around its waterline. Seeing that, Righteousness asked a question.

	“So it’ll be leaving as soon as everything’s ready?”		“So it’ll be leaving as soon as everything’s ready?”
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	“I wasn’t accusing you of anything, so don’t apologize.”		“I wasn’t accusing you of anything, so don’t apologize.”

	Anne smiled on the silver god of war’s shoulder. As if protecting the three transport ships, she had the god of war take a step north and place a hand on the scabbard at its waist.		Anne smiled from the silver god of war’s shoulder. As if protecting the three transport ships, she had the god of war take a step north and place a hand on the scabbard at its waist.

	Another powerful sound of impact came from the direction of the river.		Another powerful sound of impact came from the direction of the river.
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	The one by the river caught and supported his comrade with his shoulder.		The one by the river caught and supported his comrade with his shoulder.

	That was when Tomoe attacked,		That was when Tomoe attacked.

	As her left hammer had missed, she swung it straight up as if to pull her body toward the sky.		As her left hammer had missed, she swung it straight up as if to pull her body toward the sky.
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	“Your feet are wide open.”		“Your feet are wide open.”

	Ignoring the two shells passing by her back and below her chest, she swept out the feet of the central mobile shell ~~that’s~~ balance had been thrown off by the shell hits.		Ignoring the two shells passing by her back and below her chest, she swept out the feet of the central mobile shell whose balance had been thrown off by the shell hits.

	Rather than hit the mobile shell’s legs with the striking surface, she snagged and threw ~~his~~ legs with the joint between the hammer and handle.		Rather than hit the mobile shell’s legs with the striking surface, she snagged and threw its legs with the joint between the hammer and handle.

	The mobile shell and shield spun around and a flying shell struck ~~his~~ back.		The mobile shell and shield spun around and a flying shell struck its back.

	The remaining mobile shell by the river held a weapon in the arm that had supported his comrade.		The remaining mobile shell by the river held a weapon in the arm that had supported his comrade.
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	It was a vertical attack.		It was a vertical attack.

	“You Catholics love idol ~~worshipping~~ your images of Jesus or the cross. You’re so focused on those things that you’ve lost sight of the teachings in the Testament copies.”		“You Catholics love idol-worshiping your images of Jesus or the cross. You’re so focused on those things that you’ve lost sight of the teachings in the Testament copies.”

	The attack landed and Tomoe spoke quietly to her enemy while the sound of smashing metal rang out.		The attack landed and Tomoe spoke quietly to her enemy while the sound of smashing metal rang out.
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	They were crushed.		They were crushed.

	Tomoe grabbed the handle of the fallen hammer with her left hand and moved forward. She leaned forward and raced toward the enemy as if ~~pursing~~ the giant vanishing books of light.		Tomoe grabbed the handle of the fallen hammer with her left hand and moved forward. She leaned forward and raced toward the enemy as if pursuing the giant vanishing books of light.

	That was when the muddy Elbe River shook to her left.		That was when the muddy Elbe River shook to her left.
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	Tomoe focused on the position on her left that she was just about to pass.		Tomoe focused on the position on her left that she was just about to pass.

	With the enemy group up ahead, turning her body and focus to the left was dangerous, but the person who had suddenly rushed in outdid that.		With the enemy group up ahead, turning her body and focus to the left was dangerous; but the person who had suddenly rushed in outdid that.

	…''He’s even more dangerous!		…''He’s even more dangerous!
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	She flew to the side of westernmost transport ship.		She flew to the side of westernmost transport ship.

	She saw Guericke and the others ~~onboard~~ gasping and she sent Righteousness’s right shoulder slamming into the ship carrying the Europeans.		She saw Guericke and the others on board gasping and she sent Righteousness’s right shoulder slamming into the ship carrying the Europeans.

	She fully opened the flight devices on the god of war’s back and spread them like butterfly wings.		She fully opened the flight devices on the god of war’s back and spread them like butterfly wings.

Strike Forcer: /* Chapter 77: Attacking Woman by the Water */

2015-07-02T10:47:00Z

Chapter 77: Attacking Woman by the Water

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	She had lived on and used her experience to strengthen herself.		She had lived on and used her experience to strengthen herself.

	Katsuie was had ~~bene~~ born much more recently, but he had still trained and grown stronger in order to improve himself.		Katsuie was had been born much more recently, but he had still trained and grown stronger in order to improve himself.

	Even though he was of the combat type, his age was only a bit over one hundred. She had heard he had joined P.A. Oda in order to experience the intense fighting there, but if that was enough for him to move at the same time as her…		Even though he was of the combat type, his age was only a bit over one hundred. She had heard he had joined P.A. Oda in order to experience the intense fighting there, but if that was enough for him to move at the same time as her…

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Txtracer: Missed one

Txtracer: typos

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