Horizon:Volume 3 Chapter 04 - Revision history

68.109.55.47: /* Chapter 04: Assemblers under the Eaves */

2016-04-02T19:01:38Z

Chapter 04: Assemblers under the Eaves

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	“That’s the first time I’ve heard that? Ah, I’m also going to take this spring onion.”		“That’s the first time I’ve heard that? Ah, I’m also going to take this spring onion.”

	“Isn’t it about time you paid some money? —However, Kimi hearing it for the first time is that kind of thing. After all, it wasn’t something to be told to someone who was not involved, right? However Horizon, Lord Motonobu turned you into the Logismoi ~~Oplo~~ in order to influence the end of the world. Your mother was also researching the deadly sins, about the fate of karma that people cannot escape from.”		“Isn’t it about time you paid some money? —However, Kimi hearing it for the first time is that kind of thing. After all, it wasn’t something to be told to someone who was not involved, right? However Horizon, Lord Motonobu turned you into the Logismoi Óplo in order to influence the end of the world. Your mother was also researching the deadly sins, about the fate of karma that people cannot escape from.”

	''What do you say?'', said Mitsu once again.		''What do you say?'', said Mitsu once again.

Txtracer: green soybeans -> edamame (see discussion)

2014-11-19T00:19:21Z

green soybeans -> edamame (see discussion)

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	“Ah, this is a potato! Grandmother, even though it is still widely regarded as a prohibited good… —Confiscated! It’s confiscated!”		“Ah, this is a potato! Grandmother, even though it is still widely regarded as a prohibited good… —Confiscated! It’s confiscated!”

	“Hmm, the ~~green soybeans~~ which my father liked are grown here, Kimi-dono. —As an offering to my father's spirit, I think I may also take possession of some.”		“Hmm, the edamame which my father liked are grown here, Kimi-dono. —As an offering to my father's spirit, I think I may also take possession of some.”

	'''“'''Boiled in salt—'''”'''		'''“'''Boiled in salt—'''”'''

Txtracer: after further reflection, I think this conveys the meaning better

2014-11-19T00:09:54Z

after further reflection, I think this conveys the meaning better

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	“—Do you think that something that has completed its purpose is no longer necessary?”		“—Do you think that something that has completed its purpose is no longer necessary?”

	''Judge,'' is what Horizon ~~went~~ to answer. After all, a machine which had completed its purpose will become an unnecessary, useless object. Once you switch to a new good, it is fine for the old good to be disassembled and recycled.		''Judge,'' is what Horizon began to answer. After all, a machine which had completed its purpose will become an unnecessary, useless object. Once you switch to a new good, it is fine for the old good to be disassembled and recycled.

	That’s why Horizon ~~went~~ to voice an affirmative response,		That’s why Horizon started to voice an affirmative response.

	''…No.''		''…No.''

	~~Conducting~~ her thoughts, Horizon shook her head to the side.		Composing her thoughts, Horizon shook her head to the side.

	“I do not think that is true.”		“I do not think that is true.”

Txtracer: small fixes; two places I had to add some clarifying language: one where it wasn't clear who was speaking, another where it wasn't clear what had happened.

2014-11-18T23:49:34Z

small fixes; two places I had to add some clarifying language: one where it wasn't clear who was speaking, another where it wasn't clear what had happened.

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Strike Forcer at 16:26, 12 November 2014

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	==Chapter 04: Assemblers under the Eaves ==		==Chapter 04: Assemblers under the Eaves ==
	[[Image:Horizon3A_0103.jpg\|thumb]]		[[Image:Horizon3A_0103.jpg\|thumb]]
	''Why is it that.''		''Why is it that''

	''The more you try to listen to a story.''		''The more you try to listen to a story''

	''The more you end up telling one.''		''The more you end up telling one''

	'''Point Allocation (Mutual Exchange)'''		'''Point Allocation (Mutual Exchange)'''

Strike Forcer at 22:29, 6 November 2014

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	''The more you end up telling one.''		''The more you end up telling one.''

	'''Point Allocation (~~Reciprocation~~)'''		'''Point Allocation (Mutual Exchange)'''

Strike Forcer at 22:27, 6 November 2014

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	“—You shouldn’t try immediately and come to a conclusion. However, the only advice I can give is to not give up. Get that? I think it would be good for you to go after that child.”		“—You shouldn’t try immediately and come to a conclusion. However, the only advice I can give is to not give up. Get that? I think it would be good for you to go after that child.”

	“Why do you think ~~about~~ that?”		“Why do you think that?”

	''Ah,'' there Mitsu said.		''Ah,'' there Mitsu said.
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	“—”		“—”

	At the side ~~of her~~ who had involuntarily lost her words, Kimi and Futayo stood up together after extracting a green spring onion.		At the Horizon's side, who had involuntarily lost her words, Kimi and Futayo stood up together after extracting a green spring onion.

	“That’s the first time I’ve heard that? Ah, I’m also going to take this spring onion.”		“That’s the first time I’ve heard that? Ah, I’m also going to take this spring onion.”

	“Isn’t it about time you paid some money~~. — However~~, Kimi hearing it for the first time is that kind of thing. After all, it wasn’t something to be told to someone who was not involved, right? However Horizon, Lord Motonobu turned you into the ~~Armour of Deadly Sins~~ in order to influence the end of the world. Your mother was also ~~doing research into~~ the deadly sins~~. About~~ the fate of ~~Karma which~~ people cannot escape from.”		“Isn’t it about time you paid some money? —However, Kimi hearing it for the first time is that kind of thing. After all, it wasn’t something to be told to someone who was not involved, right? However Horizon, Lord Motonobu turned you into the Logismoi Oplo in order to influence the end of the world. Your mother was also researching the deadly sins, about the fate of karma that people cannot escape from.”

	What do you say, Mitsu ~~said~~ once again.		''What do you say?'', said Mitsu once again.

	~~“—There~~ is great value in understanding~~, don’t you agree~~?”		“—Don’t you agree that there is great value in understanding?”


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	“That is also something I’ve heard for the first time, ~~Teacher~~.”		“That is also something I’ve heard for the first time, sensei.”

	~~There~~ Kimi heard an unforeseen voice from the back of the house.		Kimi heard an unforeseen voice from the back of the house.

	~~The~~ familiar voice ~~was,~~		That familiar voice was…

	~~“Teacher~~?”		“Sensei?”

	~~Jud~~, ~~there together with~~ the voice, Oriotorai came from the back of the house carrying paper bags filled with goods. Both Horizon and Futayo turned that direction and ~~then Grandma~~ as well,		''Judge,'' at the same time that her voice, Oriotorai came from the back of the house carrying paper bags filled with goods. Both Horizon and Futayo turned that direction and lastly the grandmother as well.

	“Well, it is something that there was no reason to talk to you about, Makiko.”		“Well, it was something that there was no reason to talk to you about, Makiko.”

	“Grandmother, do you know our teacher?		“Grandmother, do you know our teacher?”

	~~Together~~ with Horizon’s tilted neck question, Oriotorai showed the palm of her hand and urged ~~grandma~~ to go on. In a responsive movement, ~~Grandma~~ placed both her hands on her hips and nodded,		Along with Horizon’s tilted neck question, Oriotorai showed the palm of her hand and urged the grandmother to go on. In a responsive movement, the grandmother placed both her hands on her hips and nodded.

	~~“For~~ Makiko to become a teacher! I was in charge of her history and ritual spell ~~instruction~~. Enough ~~that there was even a time when she stayed over~~ for a ~~period~~. She ate a lot. ~~— So~~, well, I also did teach this child’s former official~~, … I~~ wonder ~~was~~ having two outstanding talents in a row due to the ~~end of the world~~.”		“Who would have thought for Makiko to become a teacher! I was in charge of her history and ritual spell instructions. Enough for her to stay here for a while. She sure ate a lot. —So, well, I also did teach this child’s former official. …I wonder if having two outstanding talents in a row was due to the Apocalypse.”

	No no, ~~there~~ Oriotorai smiled and puffed out her chest.		''No, no,'' Oriotorai smiled and puffed out her chest.

	“Someone like me still has a long way to go, ~~Teacher~~. ~~There are~~ other people who ate more than me."		“Someone like me still has a long way to go, sensei. And there were other people who ate more than me."

	Oriotorai not referring to herself as ~~Teacher~~ was fresh. However, ~~hmm, Grandma~~ and Horizon looked alternatively over ~~here~~ who was repeating deep ~~nods,~~		Oriotorai not referring to herself as sensei was certainly fresh. However, the grandmother and Horizon looked alternatively over there who was repeating deep nods…

	“……”		“……”

	If you were to say that being silent and at a loose end was cute, then it was cute. That’s ~~why,~~		If you were to say that being silent and at a loose end was cute, then this was cute. That’s why…

	“Horizon, are you returning?”		“Horizon, are you returning?”

	~~“— Jud~~, I was able to hear a variety of important stories. Then—?”		“—Judge, I was able to hear a variety of important stories. Then—?”

	From here on, Horizon continued her words with that.		From here on, Horizon continued her words with that.

	“I think that I will ~~search~~ the obscure circumstances regarding my mother. It will be good if there are still records of her residence or ~~grave and the~~ like ~~remain~~ in Musashi, however.”		“I think that I will look for the obscure circumstances regarding my mother. It will be good if there are still records of her residence, a grave or something like that in Musashi, however.”

	That's right, Mitsu nodded.		''That's right,'' Mitsu nodded.

	“There are some steamed sweet jelly beans in the kitchen, so take them and go. Also, Toori is-”		“There are some steamed sweet jelly beans in the kitchen, so take them and go. Also, Toori is-”

	“If you’re talking about foolish brother, he will come later so don’t worry. Foolish brother is not good with difficult ~~talk~~.”		“If you’re talking about foolish brother, he will come later so don’t worry. Foolish brother is not good with difficult talks.”

	“He’s been an idiot from long ago. However, ~~the~~ idiot became king, huh.”		“He’s been an idiot from long ago. However, that idiot became king, huh.”

	Mitsu looked towards ~~Musashi~~		Mitsu looked towards Musashi…

	~~“— The~~ world is also ending.”		“—The world is also ending.”

	From far away ~~from~~ the direction of IZUMO, the sound of a festival orchestra ~~which had been~~ arranged into house style ~~could be heard~~.		From far away the direction of IZUMO, it could be heard the sound of a festival orchestra arranged into house style.

Strike Forcer: /* Chapter 04: Assemblers under the Eaves */

2014-11-06T19:09:39Z

Chapter 04: Assemblers under the Eaves

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Strike Forcer at 14:18, 6 November 2014

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Purin at 02:18, 1 July 2014

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	“Hmm, the green soybeans which my father liked are grown here, Kimi. —As an offering to my father's spirit, I think I may also take possession of some.”		“Hmm, the green soybeans which my father liked are grown here, Kimi. —As an offering to my father's spirit, I think I may also take possession of some.”

	~~『Boiled~~ in ~~Salt—』~~		'''“'''Boiled in Salt—'''”'''

	“I had some left over so I said you could do as you please, but what exactly did you come here to do.”		“I had some left over so I said you could do as you please, but what exactly did you come here to do.”