Horizon:Volume 3 Chapter 05 - Revision history

Strike Forcer at 00:56, 23 November 2014

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	Masazumi said the following to the other party who was bitterly smiling.		Masazumi said the following to the other party who was bitterly smiling.

	“Where is the meeting place? Trumps #9 and England’s Secretary — Ben ~~Johnson~~.”		“Where is the meeting place? Trumps #9 and England’s Secretary — Ben Jonson.”

Strike Forcer at 11:36, 22 November 2014

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	There were no personal servants. The maid model automaton that had been assigned to her through Musashi’s Knights ~~Federation~~ attended to household chores during the day. Mitotsudaira’s afternoon schedule included examining the income and expenditure reports from her agriculture and corporate divisions inside Musashi, granting permissions and giving instructions and also sending her own ideas.		There were no personal servants. The maid model automaton that had been assigned to her through Musashi’s League of Knights attended to household chores during the day. Mitotsudaira’s afternoon schedule included examining the income and expenditure reports from her agriculture and corporate divisions inside Musashi, granting permissions and giving instructions and also sending her own ideas.

	…There were two perfume bottles placed atop the dining room table.		…There were two perfume bottles placed atop the dining room table.
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	The one on the right side was the verification of Mitotsudaira’s inherited name, a parchment with the country crests of the Far East and Hexagone Française stamped on it. The words which were lined up on the page were about fulfilling her role as both the head of the Mito-Matsudaira clan as well as that of a dispatched knight of Hexagone Française.		The one on the right side was the verification of Mitotsudaira’s inherited name, a parchment with the country crests of the Far East and Hexagone Française stamped on it. The words which were lined up on the page were about fulfilling her role as both the head of the Mito-Matsudaira clan as well as that of a dispatched knight of Hexagone Française.

	Lined up in the same manner, on the left side was the certification verifying her affiliation with the Musashi's Knights ~~Federation~~. On this was also the proclamation that Mitotsudaira was welcomed into the top position of the entire federation.		Lined up in the same manner, on the left side was the certification verifying her affiliation with the Musashi's League of Knights. On this was also the proclamation that Mitotsudaira was welcomed into the top position of the entire federation.

	“However… that was not a result of my actual ability.”		“However… that was not a result of my actual ability.”
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	Suddenly she dropped her shoulders and collapsed onto the bed.		Suddenly she dropped her shoulders and collapsed onto the bed.

	She thought that her hair would become horribly disheveled, however it would be fine if she set it later. Anyhow, it was because she had abruptly touched a part of herself that she didn’t like. Even though the incident concerning the Knights ~~Federation~~ should not matter to her after she had decided to follow her King, once again it had come up.		She thought that her hair would become horribly disheveled, however it would be fine if she set it later. Anyhow, it was because she had abruptly touched a part of herself that she didn’t like. Even though the incident concerning the League of Knights should not matter to her after she had decided to follow her King, once again it had come up.

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Txtracer: missed one

2014-11-21T05:55:22Z

missed one

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	“T-That is…”		“T-That is…”

	The idiot shrunk his body, and after taking a position of servitude offered a pile of about ten eroge in her direction. Then he placed his hand on his cheek and in a ~~flirtatiously~~ manner said:		The idiot shrunk his body, and after taking a position of servitude offered a pile of about ten eroge in her direction. Then he placed his hand on his cheek and in a flirtatious manner said:

	“Could you forgive me with this?”		“Could you forgive me with this?”

Txtracer: small fixes and clarifications.

2014-11-20T05:42:28Z

small fixes and clarifications.

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Strike Forcer at 23:38, 8 November 2014

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Strike Forcer at 15:51, 8 November 2014

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Strike Forcer at 02:11, 8 November 2014

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	Mitotsudaira returned home after ~~seeing~~ Horizon and Futayo ~~off~~ from Musashi’s outside entrance.		Mitotsudaira returned home after watching Horizon and Futayo go from Musashi’s outside entrance.

	Because the fighting in the ~~previous day~~ Armada Battle had ~~been~~ concentrated on the starboard side of the ship, ~~the~~ mansion, which ~~lay~~ about four hundred meters ~~away from~~ the ~~hull~~, had ~~only sustained some light~~ damage ~~from fires~~.		Because the previous days fighting in the Armada Battle had concentrated on the starboard side of the ship, her mansion, which was about four hundred meters of the town, only had minor fire damage. Nonetheless, considering the fire threat she had, during the last two weeks the outer wall was rebuilt with stone and the roof with tiles uncommon in Europe.
	Nonetheless, considering the threat ~~of fire~~ she had, during the last two weeks~~, rebuilt~~ the outer wall ~~in a~~ stone ~~material~~ and the roof with ~~western brick, which was still rare~~ in Europe.

	~~… It~~ could be said to be a new residence.		…It could be said to be a new residence.

	In the afternoon, towards the evening, there ~~was~~ no ~~sense~~ of life ~~within~~ the mansion. Neither in the narrow entrance nor in the connected dining room used for guest reception, nor in the sparsely decorated living room.		In the afternoon, towards the evening there were no signs of life at the mansion. Neither in the narrow entrance nor in the connected dining room used for guest reception, nor in the sparsely decorated living room.

	The only things in that place were the persisting perfume smell from the curtains and a pale light.		The only things in that place were the persisting perfume smell from the curtains and a pale light.
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	There were no ~~exclusive~~ servants. The maid model ~~automated doll which~~ had been assigned to her through Musashi’s ~~knight~~ federation attended to household chores during the day. Mitotsudaira’s afternoon schedule included examining the income and expenditure reports from her agriculture and cooperate divisions inside Musashi, granting permissions and giving instructions and also sending her ideas,		There were no personal servants. The maid model automaton that had been assigned to her through Musashi’s knights federation attended to household chores during the day. Mitotsudaira’s afternoon schedule included examining the income and expenditure reports from her agriculture and cooperate divisions inside Musashi, granting permissions and giving instructions and also sending her own ideas.

	~~… There~~ were two perfume bottles placed atop the dining room table.		…There were two perfume bottles placed atop the dining room table.

	The ~~corporate enterprise which she~~ owned had created this new product.		The corporation owned by her had created this new product.

	She ~~understood~~ that inside the bottles there was a cream type with the ~~smell~~ of flowers. This was ~~a consequence of~~ her wolf sense of smell.		She knew that inside the bottles there was a cream type with the scent of flowers. This was due to her wolf sense of smell.

	Mitotsudaira, while thinking about slightly weakening the smell of the flower ~~perfume~~, entered the bedroom. She hung the case of ~~Silver Chain which~~ she had taken with her to the academy on the wall, and then headed ~~for~~ the bed.		Mitotsudaira, while thinking about slightly weakening the smell of the flower fragance, entered the bedroom. She hung the case of silver chains that she had taken with her to the academy on the wall and then headed to the bed.

	After this was ~~the~~ short patrol of her small territory and ~~her~~ work. She had to change into her street clothing equipment.		After this was a short patrol of her small territory and work. She had to change into her street clothing equipment.

	That is why she removed her shoes, detached her uniforms skirt and the sleeves of her shirt, fell onto the bed and suddenly sighed.		That is why she removed her shoes, detached her uniforms skirt and the sleeves of her shirt, fell onto the bed and suddenly sighed.

	~~… What were~~ Horizon and the others doing ~~at the moment.~~		''…What are Horizon and the others doing now?''

	Kimi and Futayo were with her. As she ~~had gone~~ to hear the story of her mother from Kimi’s grandmother she was achieving something significant.		Kimi and Futayo were with her. Given that she was going to hear the story of her mother from Kimi’s grandmother, she was achieving something significant.

	In the same way,		In the same way,
	~~… Everyone~~ else was as well.		…Everyone else was as well.

	The Tachibana married couple desired a comeback, and Mary was aiming for a fulfilling life aboard Musashi.		The Tachibana married couple desired a comeback and Mary was aiming for a fulfilling life aboard Musashi.

	The rest as well, Masazumi and Tomo, Adele and Naomasa, they were all on-board Musashi currently doing repairs and ~~strengthening~~ and ~~the~~ like~~, they~~ were all ~~doings the~~ things that were required of them. ~~However,~~		The rest as well, Masazumi and Tomo, Adele and Naomasa, they were all on-board Musashi currently doing repairs and reinforcing the ship and things like that. They were all doing things that were required of them. However…

	“……”		“……”

Purin at 02:19, 1 July 2014

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	"Ah, Tomo? I think that you are currently searching for a person at the moment; I get the feeling that that person is here. Will you come?”		"Ah, Tomo? I think that you are currently searching for a person at the moment; I get the feeling that that person is here. Will you come?”

	~~『Yeah~~, I’m coming! I’m super coming! Hey Adele, please get the dogs to go ahead!』		'''“'''Yeah, I’m coming! I’m super coming! Hey Adele, please get the dogs to go ahead!'''”'''

	~~『Eh~~? I don’t understand what is going on, but everyone please go on ahead—! Hey Boss, this is an eroge box with the chancellor’s scent so please remember this scent, okay?』		'''“'''Eh? I don’t understand what is going on, but everyone please go on ahead—! Hey Boss, this is an eroge box with the chancellor’s scent so please remember this scent, okay?'''”'''

	~~『Oh~~, we will have the remainder after you come back, right?』		'''“'''Oh, we will have the remainder after you come back, right?'''”'''

	Over there the situation appeared terribly chaotic, however Mary seemed to be having fun. That’s nice; for a moment she hated herself for thinking that, however right now, the situation in front of her eyes took priority.		Over there the situation appeared terribly chaotic, however Mary seemed to be having fun. That’s nice; for a moment she hated herself for thinking that, however right now, the situation in front of her eyes took priority.

Aagcnet: /* Chapter 05: The Supervisor of the Hidden Room */

2014-05-26T17:57:36Z

Chapter 05: The Supervisor of the Hidden Room

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	“Are you stupid, obviously I created it of my own accord, okay?”		“Are you stupid, obviously I created it of my own accord, okay?”

	“It is true ~~that~~ that is the only way that it could have happened, however when did you create it!?”		“It is true that is the only way that it could have happened, however when did you create it!?”

	Oi oi oi, the idiot sighed and readjusted his grip on the pile of boxes at his waist.		Oi oi oi, the idiot sighed and readjusted his grip on the pile of boxes at his waist.
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	At the entrance to the town there was a giant stone shrine arch which straddled the street. It seemed as if it had become a meeting spot with there being a food stall and people who were doing nothing but waiting around.		At the entrance to the town there was a giant stone shrine arch which straddled the street. It seemed as if it had become a meeting spot with there being a food stall and people who were doing nothing but waiting around.

	Among those people there was a tall man that had noticed looked their way and raised one of his hands. That person was wearing the clothing of the Far East; he was either following the tradition of the country or using it as a disguise. That shadow simply showed a smile full of teeth,		Among those people there was a tall man that had noticed, looked their way and raised one of his hands. That person was wearing the clothing of the Far East; he was either following the tradition of the country or using it as a disguise. That shadow simply showed a smile full of teeth,

	“It’s been a while mate, how about a glass?”		“It’s been a while mate, how about a glass?”

62.107.141.49: I'm not sure if the capital M in Ben Johnson's "Mate" was intentional.

2014-02-23T03:08:46Z

I'm not sure if the capital M in Ben Johnson's "Mate" was intentional.

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	In the same way,		In the same way,
	~~…Everyone~~ else was as well.		…everyone else was as well.

	The Tachibana married couple desired a comeback and Mary was aiming for a fulfilling life aboard Musashi.		The Tachibana married couple desired a comeback and Mary was aiming for a fulfilling life aboard Musashi.
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	The one on the right side, was the verification of Mitotsudaira’s inherited name, a parchment with the country crests of the Far East and Hexagone Française stamped on it. The words which were lined up on the page were about fulfilling her role as both the head of the Mito-Mitotsudaira clan as well as that of a dispatched knight of Hexagone Française.		The one on the right side, was the verification of Mitotsudaira’s inherited name, a parchment with the country crests of the Far East and Hexagone Française stamped on it. The words which were lined up on the page were about fulfilling her role as both the head of the Mito-Mitotsudaira clan as well as that of a dispatched knight of Hexagone Française.

	Lined up in the same manner, on the left side was the certification verifying her affiliation with the Musashi ~~Knight~~ Federation. On this was the purport that Mitotsudaira was welcomed into the top position of the entire federation.		Lined up in the same manner, on the left side was the certification verifying her affiliation with the Musashi's Knights Federation. On this was also the purport that Mitotsudaira was welcomed into the top position of the entire federation.

	“However… that was not a result of my actual ability.”		“However… that was not a result of my actual ability.”

	It was something from almost twelve years ago~~. When~~ she had been dispatched here and obtained this certification.		That was something from almost twelve years ago, when she had been dispatched here and obtained this certification.

	~~“… It~~ was because I was dispatched directly from Hexagone Française and I had inherited the name of Mito-Mitotsudaira that they placed a selfish girl in ~~that~~ position, ~~and displayed~~ allegiance to the Testament Union.”		“…It was because I was dispatched directly from Hexagone Française and I had inherited the name of Mito-Mitotsudaira that they placed a selfish girl in such a position, displaying allegiance to the Testament Union.”

	In the past she had not realized this fact and had often pushed her selfishness onto the older knights. She was indignant when they did not listen, however they had soothed her ~~because~~ they were adults.		In the past she had not realized this fact and had often pushed her selfishness onto the older knights. She was indignant when they did not listen, however they had soothed her as they were adults.

	With the passing of time she had become one of the members of the Chancellor’s ~~Board~~ which moved Musashi, and ~~in reality~~ she should have be an equal to ~~them,~~		With the passing of time she had become one of the members of the Chancellor’s Officers which moved Musashi, and actually she should have been an equal to them…

	~~… However~~ at Mikawa she had done it.		…However at Mikawa she had done it.

	She ~~had~~ appeared at the ~~confrontation location as the collective representative~~ of the ~~knights~~ to give the ~~civilian~~ side ~~victory, however in~~ the ~~end she had remained~~ as a ~~knight~~, and furthermore she became allied with the side which had conducted ~~the~~ battle.		She appeared in the place of the confrontation to give victory to the side of the citizens as a representative of the knights' collective, and furthermore she became allied with the side to which she had conducted battle.

	Since that time, there had been no notifications about the knight federation meetings or anything. When she ~~had been~~ trapped in the cargo vessel for two weeks in England, or during the London ~~Tower battle~~, ~~there~~ had ~~been~~ no response at all.		Since that time, there had been no notifications about the knight federation meetings or anything else. When she was trapped in the cargo vessel for two weeks in England, or during the Battle of the Tower of London, she had no response at all.

	She understood that she was being deprived of her role.		She understood that she was being deprived of her role.
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	However, because of her status, there was no possibility of her being publicly stripped of her position.		However, because of her status, there was no possibility of her being publicly stripped of her position.

	She also wanted to ask some of the other knights about the current status of the federation. ~~However,~~		She also wanted to ask some of the other knights about the current status of the federation. However…

	~~“— That~~ is almost as if I am afraid of the reaction of those who are below me, even though I am in ~~the top~~ position.”		“—That is almost as if I am afraid of the reaction of those who are below me, even though I am in an higher position.”

	While lowering her hips onto the bed she let out a sigh.		While lowering her hips onto the bed she let out a sigh.

	~~… She~~ understood however, ~~that~~ she should not ~~have this type of finalized thinking~~.		…She understood however, She knew she should not finish her thoughts that way.

	She was distancing herself from them, by arbitrarily deciding that the other side was avoiding her or not taking her seriously.		She was distancing herself from them by arbitrarily deciding that the other side was avoiding her or not taking her seriously.

	Thinking about it deeply, it was the same as with the case of Mary.		Thinking about it deeply, it was the same as with the case of Mary.
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	She had also unintentionally started to feel down after wrongly guessing that she would be selected as Horizon’s escort.		She had also unintentionally started to feel down after wrongly guessing that she would be selected as Horizon’s escort.

	During inconvenient times she wanted to be alone, or if not that, then she wanted to be together with someone.		During inconvenient times like this she wanted to be alone, or if not that, then she wanted to be together with someone.

	She was selfish, that was a bad habit.		She was selfish, that was a bad habit.

	However she understood quite well when it was ~~that~~ she had become like that.		However she understood quite well when it was when she had become like that.

	“It was a long time ago… about the fourth year of elementary school.”		“It was a long time ago… about the fourth year of elementary school.”

	She looked outside the window. Far away, IZUMO’s Kitsuki-Taisha could be seen in the sky, ~~however,~~		She looked outside the window. Far away, IZUMO’s Kitsuki-Taisha could be seen in the sky, however…

	“It was not this ~~IZUMO.…~~ That was at Bizen IZUMO.”		“It was not this IZUMO… That was at Bizen IZUMO.”

	Suddenly she dropped her shoulders and collapsed onto the bed.		Suddenly she dropped her shoulders and collapsed onto the bed.

	She thought that her hair would become horribly disheveled, however it would be fine if she set it later. Anyhow, it was because she had abruptly touched a part of herself that she didn’t like. Even though the incident concerning the ~~knight~~ federation should not matter to her after she had decided to follow her King, once again it had come up.		She thought that her hair would become horribly disheveled, however it would be fine if she set it later. Anyhow, it was because she had abruptly touched a part of herself that she didn’t like. Even though the incident concerning the knights federation should not matter to her after she had decided to follow her King, once again it had come up.

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	She thought about sleeping for 30 minutes to refresh herself, so while looking out the window she collapsed backwards.
			She thought about sleeping for thirty minutes to refresh herself, so while looking out the window she collapsed backwards.

	Her clothing was partially removed and was in a horrid state, however she thought that since she was alone it was fine.		Her clothing was partially removed and was in a horrid state, however she thought that since she was alone it was fine.
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	She collapsed.		She collapsed.

	~~Immediately~~ following ~~that.~~		And immediately following that…

	Outside the window in the yard with the high wall, an idiot carrying a mountain of eroge was sneakily passing through.		Outside the window, in the yard with the high wall, an idiot carrying a mountain of eroge was sneakily passing through.

	“—!?”		“—!?”