Iris on Rainy Days:Prologue - Revision history

Yasharjitm10 at 15:40, 28 November 2017

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	At first glance, this robot ~~seemed~~ no more than a piece of scrap. But once upon a time, it led a happy life, serving a family and being loved by its master.		At first glance, this robot seems no more than a piece of scrap. But once upon a time, it led a happy life, serving a family and being loved by its master.

2017-11-28T15:40:13Z

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	At first glance, this robot ~~seems~~ no more than a piece of scrap. But once upon a time, it led a happy life, serving a family and being loved by its master.		At first glance, this robot seemed no more than a piece of scrap. But once upon a time, it led a happy life, serving a family and being loved by its master.

2013-03-17T20:56:28Z

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2012-07-10T03:17:58Z

grammar

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	Here is the remains of a scrapped robot.		Here are the remains of a scrapped robot.


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	HRM021-α, its registered name is Iris Rain Umbrella		HRM021-α, its registered name is Iris Rain Umbrella.

2012-07-10T02:57:14Z

grammar and usage edits

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	Here is the ~~scrap~~ of a robot.		Here is the remains of a scrapped robot.


	Its left arm has been torn away with its left shoulder. The remaining right arm bends ~~towards~~ an unnatural direction. The lower body, having been torn off, is ~~non-existent~~. From its stomach, tubes and organ-like parts ~~are crowded~~ out ~~untidily~~.		Its left arm has been torn away with its left shoulder. The remaining right arm bends in an unnatural direction. The lower body, having been torn off, is missing. From its stomach, tubes and organ-like parts spill out messily.


	At first glance, this robot ~~looks~~ no more than a piece of scrap. But once upon a time, it led a happy life, serving in a family and being loved by its master.		At first glance, this robot seems no more than a piece of scrap. But once upon a time, it led a happy life, serving a family and being loved by its master.


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	Based on the data in the mental ~~circuit~~ of HRM021-α, the following record was reconstructed by Ralph Ciel, the First Robotics Laboratory, Oval University.		Based on the data in the mental circuits of HRM021-α, the following record was reconstructed by Ralph Ciel, of the First Robotics Laboratory, Oval University.

2012-01-18T07:00:12Z

mind is not one of the 3 circuits (mental, movement, safety)

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	Based on the data in the ~~mind~~ circuit of HRM021-α, the following record was reconstructed by Ralph Ciel, the First Robotics Laboratory, Oval University.		Based on the data in the mental circuit of HRM021-α, the following record was reconstructed by Ralph Ciel, the First Robotics Laboratory, Oval University.

2012-01-18T06:59:19Z

Grammar

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	At first glance this robot looks no more than a piece of scrap. But once upon a time, it led a happy life, serving in a family and being loved by its master.		At first glance, this robot looks no more than a piece of scrap. But once upon a time, it led a happy life, serving in a family and being loved by its master.

2012-01-18T06:57:11Z

Grammar

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	Its left arm has been torn away with its left shoulder. The remaining right arm bends towards an unnatural direction. The lower body, ~~being~~ torn off, is non-existent. From its stomach, tubes and organ-like parts are crowded out untidily.		Its left arm has been torn away with its left shoulder. The remaining right arm bends towards an unnatural direction. The lower body, having been torn off, is non-existent. From its stomach, tubes and organ-like parts are crowded out untidily.


	At first glance this robot looks no more than a piece of scrap. But once upon a time it led a happy life, serving in a family and being loved by its master.		At first glance this robot looks no more than a piece of scrap. But once upon a time, it led a happy life, serving in a family and being loved by its master.

2011-12-25T14:24:41Z

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