Kamisama no Memochou:Volume 1 Chapter 5 - Revision history

Lne: /* Chapter 5 */ Tenses cleanup and some other miscellaneous edits to improve the flow.

2017-09-13T04:25:30Z

Chapter 5: Tenses cleanup and some other miscellaneous edits to improve the flow.

Umini at 21:13, 19 September 2015

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	After finishing the club activities, I went through the Shuto Expressway by the river, went past the station and arrived at ‘Hanamaru’. After greeting Min-san, I went to the back of the shop.		After finishing the club activities, I went through the Shuto Expressway by the river, went past the station and arrived at ‘Hanamaru’. After greeting Min-san, I went to the back of the shop.

	The only person who was earlier than me that day was Hiro. He wore a coat with gold buttons ~~sewed~~ onto in with a pair of white jeans. I’ve never seen Hiro wearing the same clothes before, but they’ll probably be gifts from women anyways.		The only person who was earlier than me that day was Hiro. He wore a coat with gold buttons sewn onto it with a pair of white jeans. I’ve never seen Hiro wearing the same clothes before, but they’ll probably be gifts from women anyways.

	[[Image:Kamisama no memocho vol01 207.jpg\|thumb\|''Hiro was sitting on the charred gas tank with a phone clamped between his shoulders and ears, and sending messages with the two phones on his hands.'']]		[[Image:Kamisama no memocho vol01 207.jpg\|thumb\|''Hiro was sitting on the charred gas tank with a phone clamped between his shoulders and ears, and sending messages with the two phones on his hands.'']]

Rocko at 20:46, 28 July 2012

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	“Mnnn—— I don’t know.”		“Mnnn—— I don’t know.”

	Just after Hiro answered me, his phone rang again. Hiro picked up the phone, and started his strawberry-like sweet talking, he really doesn’t have any free time. While he was talking on the phone, Hiro’s left hand didn’t stop at all. The thing that was placed on the table seemed to be a map of the places nearby the station, Marui Supermarket, Balco Supermarket, Tokyu Home ~~Centre~~, First Bookshop…… A red pen was used to draw another and another circle on the streets between the shop names that I’ve just seen.		Just after Hiro answered me, his phone rang again. Hiro picked up the phone, and started his strawberry-like sweet talking, he really doesn’t have any free time. While he was talking on the phone, Hiro’s left hand didn’t stop at all. The thing that was placed on the table seemed to be a map of the places nearby the station, Marui Supermarket, Balco Supermarket, Tokyu Home Center, First Bookshop…… A red pen was used to draw another and another circle on the streets between the shop names that I’ve just seen.

	“Phew!”		“Phew!”
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	“Major really went all out!”		“Major really went all out!”

	“I’ve actually finished making the cameras a long time ago, just that installing a verifying software took a long time. There weren’t any missions for pinpointing a certain target until now, so there wasn’t any ~~chane~~ to use it, hehe.”		“I’ve actually finished making the cameras a long time ago, just that installing a verifying software took a long time. There weren’t any missions for pinpointing a certain target until now, so there wasn’t any chance to use it, hehe.”

	“So how do you use these cameras?”		“So how do you use these cameras?”
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	Hiro smiled wryly, is it because my surprised expression is that funny?		Hiro smiled wryly, is it because my surprised expression is that funny?

	“Before he started boxing, he was always taken care by the police. I remember that it was the youth counselors who brought him to the boxing ~~centre~~ while weeping and asked them to take care of him. After he started boxing, he stopped getting into fights.”		“Before he started boxing, he was always taken care by the police. I remember that it was the youth counselors who brought him to the boxing center while weeping and asked them to take care of him. After he started boxing, he stopped getting into fights.”

	In the end, he became a pachinko gambler right now— that was Hiro’s conclusion. I’ve never heard about Tetsu-senpai’s past, but he couldn’t just get information from the police, could he……		In the end, he became a pachinko gambler right now— that was Hiro’s conclusion. I’ve never heard about Tetsu-senpai’s past, but he couldn’t just get information from the police, could he……
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	It was a small plastic bag. There were four red pills in it, and on them were engraved the wings of an angel.		It was a small plastic bag. There were four red pills in it, and on them were engraved the wings of an angel.

	It was the Angel Fix that Yondaime gave me yesterday. That’s right, I originally went back to the ramen shop to give the pills to Alice. I had actually ~~forgotted~~ all about it.		It was the Angel Fix that Yondaime gave me yesterday. That’s right, I originally went back to the ramen shop to give the pills to Alice. I had actually forgotten all about it.

	I lifted up the bag and looked at it through the weak rays of the winter sun.		I lifted up the bag and looked at it through the weak rays of the winter sun.

Asteradragon at 03:15, 27 December 2011

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	==Chapter 2==		==Chapter 5==

	From the next day, my school life became very busy. As soon as school was over, I had to take care of the garden. Sayuri-sensei helped out with that too.		From the next day, my school life became very busy. As soon as school was over, I had to take care of the garden. Sayuri-sensei helped out with that too.

Asteradragon at 03:15, 27 December 2011

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	From the next day, my school life became very busy. As soon as school was over, I had to take care of the garden. Sayuri-sensei helped out with that too.		==Chapter 2==

			From the next day, my school life became very busy. As soon as school was over, I had to take care of the garden. Sayuri-sensei helped out with that too.

	“Before Fujishima-kun entered the Gardening Club, I came over here to help out occasionally too.”		“Before Fujishima-kun entered the Gardening Club, I came over here to help out occasionally too.”

Zephyrus: Toshio --> Toshi

2011-12-24T02:53:15Z

Toshio --> Toshi

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Castor212 at 04:15, 22 December 2011

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	Alice stood up from her bed, black hair flowing on her delicate shoulders. The small queen who forced the wall of machines to obey herself looked at me from above with an icy gaze.		Alice stood up from her bed, black hair flowing on her delicate shoulders. The small queen who forced the wall of machines to obey herself looked at me from above with an icy gaze.

	“Narumi, there’s no difference with eating the pills and dying. Even if your are okay physically, you would also die mentally, do you understand? Never mind, I don’t think you would understand, you won’t get it if you didn’t take it. This is a helpless contradiction.		“Narumi, there’s no difference with eating the pills and dying. Even if your are okay physically, you would also die mentally, do you understand? Never mind, I don’t think you would understand, you won’t get it if you didn’t take it. This is a helpless contradiction."

	I silently listened to Alice’s statement.		I silently listened to Alice’s statement.

Castor212 at 04:11, 22 December 2011

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	I had a feeling that something was not right.		I had a feeling that something was not right.

	I didn’t understand the reason. Raising the plastic bag, I turned its contents over again and again, feeling that something was…… off, but I didn’t know what was wrong with it.”		I didn’t understand the reason. Raising the plastic bag, I turned its contents over again and again, feeling that something was…… off, but I didn’t know what was wrong with it.

	“FU- JI- SHI- MA- KUN!”		“FU- JI- SHI- MA- KUN!”

Zephyrus: Chapter 5 completed

2011-12-22T00:22:33Z

Chapter 5 completed

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2011-12-21T09:18:19Z

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