Kamisama no Memochou:Volume 3 Chapter 1 - Revision history

Rxls at 06:29, 23 July 2017

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	“To congratulate that you left the hospital. It’s a charm from Africa or something like that; it’s supposed to make your wounds heal sooner. But hey, are these crutches just for show or what? You aren’t using them?”		“To congratulate that you left the hospital. It’s a charm from Africa or something like that; it’s supposed to make your wounds heal sooner. But hey, are these crutches just for show or what? You aren’t using them?”

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	Yondaime moved aside the pair of crutches that were leaning against the seat where Ayaka had been until a while ago and sat down.		Yondaime moved aside the pair of crutches that were leaning against the seat where Ayaka had been until a while ago and sat down.
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	Hiro-san held his stomach, laughing at Yondaime’s serious and threatening tone, and in the blink of an eye everyone was laughing too. Even Min-san started calling him Hina-chan, and I also laughed. Of course, that caused Yondaime to hit me, but I was happy. That's because Ayaka was finally laughing, too.		Hiro-san held his stomach, laughing at Yondaime’s serious and threatening tone, and in the blink of an eye everyone was laughing too. Even Min-san started calling him Hina-chan, and I also laughed. Of course, that caused Yondaime to hit me, but I was happy. That's because Ayaka was finally laughing, too.

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Zephyrus: /* Chapter 1 */

2012-02-04T03:14:51Z

Chapter 1

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	Hiro-san held his stomach, laughing at Yondaime’s serious and threatening tone, and in the blink of an eye everyone was laughing too. Even Min-san started calling him Hina-chan, and I also laughed. Of course, that caused Yondaime to hit me, but I was happy. That's because Ayaka was finally laughing, too.		Hiro-san held his stomach, laughing at Yondaime’s serious and threatening tone, and in the blink of an eye everyone was laughing too. Even Min-san started calling him Hina-chan, and I also laughed. Of course, that caused Yondaime to hit me, but I was happy. That's because Ayaka was finally laughing, too.

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	“Back then I had to teach a larger group of people, so teaching two people is easier~” she said somewhat nostalgically. It seemed half of the reason that she taught us was because of personal interest.		“Back then I had to teach a larger group of people, so teaching two people is easier~” she said somewhat nostalgically. It seemed half of the reason that she taught us was because of personal interest.

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	With Ayaka’s desk right next to mine because we had to share the same textbook, I got a weird feeling. What was I to Ayaka right now? A person who was comfortable to be with, maybe?		With Ayaka’s desk right next to mine because we had to share the same textbook, I got a weird feeling. What was I to Ayaka right now? A person who was comfortable to be with, maybe?

Angelanime at 09:26, 17 January 2012

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	This pajama-clad, self-proclaimed detective little girl is my employer. Today, I came to the NEET detective office after school and she said she was going to pay me for my work as a detective assistant, bringing me along to the rooftop.		This pajama-clad, self-proclaimed detective little girl is my employer. Today, I came to the NEET detective office after school and she said she was going to pay me for my work as a detective assistant, bringing me along to the rooftop.

	“What do you mean by why?Those strawberries are your payment.”		“What do you mean by why? Those strawberries are your payment.”

	I almost fell flat on my back from the roof. My upper torso dangled in the air, but I held onto the concrete edge and avoided falling down.		I almost fell flat on my back from the roof. My upper torso dangled in the air, but I held onto the concrete edge and avoided falling down.

Angelanime: some spelling repairs

2012-01-17T09:25:19Z

some spelling repairs

Zephyrus: /* Chapter 1 */

2012-01-17T00:55:25Z

Chapter 1

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	Hearing Alice’s inquiries, Kousaka-senpai stayed silent for awhile, and raised her head.		Hearing Alice’s inquiries, Kousaka-senpai stayed silent for awhile, and raised her head.

	”I want to know of the reason. If we just count the budget of the clubs, I don’t have a reason to object to the amendment of the case as a member of the Inspection if there’s no proper reason. Additionally, the case would probably be passed since the larger clubs agree about this. On the other hand, if there’s a proper reason, I would think of a way to stop ~~Karuoko~~-chan, because……”		”I want to know of the reason. If we just count the budget of the clubs, I don’t have a reason to object to the amendment of the case as a member of the Inspection if there’s no proper reason. Additionally, the case would probably be passed since the larger clubs agree about this. On the other hand, if there’s a proper reason, I would think of a way to stop Kaoruko-chan, because……”

	Kousaka-senpai fixed her gaze on her knees.		Kousaka-senpai fixed her gaze on her knees.

	”Doing all this is just strange, ~~Karuoko~~-chan must have some problems. If we changed the rules, more than half of the cultural clubs would disappear. Even if the structure of the club is small, it might be important to someone.”		”Doing all this is just strange, Kaoruko-chan must have some problems. If we changed the rules, more than half of the cultural clubs would disappear. Even if the structure of the club is small, it might be important to someone.”

	My hand fell on Alice’s thigh with a thwack.		My hand fell on Alice’s thigh with a thwack.
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	”Alice, what are you talking ab—“		”Alice, what are you talking ab—“

	”Only you are able to change Hayano ~~Karuoko’s~~ decision of changing the rules ‘in a practical level’. That was what I meant.”		”Only you are able to change Hayano Kaoruko’s decision of changing the rules ‘in a practical level’. That was what I meant.”

	Alice did not turn back, continuing forcefully.		Alice did not turn back, continuing forcefully.
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	Only the sounds of the cooling fans in the machines and the sounds of the air conditioning functioning remained in the room for a long time. Finally, Senpai raised her head.		Only the sounds of the cooling fans in the machines and the sounds of the air conditioning functioning remained in the room for a long time. Finally, Senpai raised her head.

	”Please help me. I want to stop ~~Karuoko~~-chan.”		”Please help me. I want to stop Kaoruko-chan.”

Zephyrus at 02:14, 16 January 2012

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	”Please help me. I want to stop Karuoko-chan.”		”Please help me. I want to stop Karuoko-chan.”



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Zephyrus at 02:13, 16 January 2012

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	”Please help me. I want to stop Karuoko-chan.”		”Please help me. I want to stop Karuoko-chan.”

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Zephyrus: Chapter 1 complete.

2012-01-16T02:11:53Z

Chapter 1 complete.

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	“Apparently, the gardening committee had become something like a gathering spot for delinquents. Kaoruko-chan’s brother was part of the committee too, but he had a weak heart so he skipped school often. When he occasionally showed up, he was with those delinquents a lot, apparently as some sort of gofer. On an extremely cold day, it seems he was asked to run an errand as a form of bullying— people found him collapsed in the backyard in the end. He was taken to the hospital, but he died there.”		“Apparently, the gardening committee had become something like a gathering spot for delinquents. Kaoruko-chan’s brother was part of the committee too, but he had a weak heart so he skipped school often. When he occasionally showed up, he was with those delinquents a lot, apparently as some sort of gofer. On an extremely cold day, it seems he was asked to run an errand as a form of bullying— people found him collapsed in the backyard in the end. He was taken to the hospital, but he died there.”

			So that’s why the Gardening Committee was abolished?

			“I heard that someone dropped out of school because of this, but nobody knows the details of the whole incident. Anyways, that was how the Committee was closed down, and the flowerbeds and greenhouse were originally planned to be cleared away as well……”

			But……?

			There are still flowers blooming in the school up till now, why is that?

			”I’m not sure about the reason, but the Gardening Club was founded that time.”

			I switched off the power switch of the hair dryer, blankly combing Alice’s hair while thinking repeatedly about what Kousaka-senpai said. The birth of the Gardening Club— what is the reason for that?

			”I’m not sure as well. The fees for maintaining the flowerbeds and the greenhouse were then listed into the budget of the clubs in the Student Council, and the Gardening Club officially took over the Gardening Committee’s jobs— and that continued up till now. The reason that caused Kaoruko-chan to want to change the rules would probably be because of the budget, she thinks that letting the fees that were forcibly listed into the budget continue till now is very unreasonable; of course, this might have some influence from her brother’s incident as well.”

			The Gardening Committee that caused her brother to die— and the Gardening Club. She probably hates us a lot.

			But if she only cares about the budget, she would only need to cancel the name of the club in the budget, and doesn’t really need to abolish the whole club.

			”But the members of the Gardening Committee and the Student Council had already graduated, so we can’t find any information no matter how hard we search in school.”

			”Why are you investigating these things? What do you want to know?”

			Hearing Alice’s inquiries, Kousaka-senpai stayed silent for awhile, and raised her head.

			”I want to know of the reason. If we just count the budget of the clubs, I don’t have a reason to object to the amendment of the case as a member of the Inspection if there’s no proper reason. Additionally, the case would probably be passed since the larger clubs agree about this. On the other hand, if there’s a proper reason, I would think of a way to stop Karuoko-chan, because……”

			Kousaka-senpai fixed her gaze on her knees.

			”Doing all this is just strange, Karuoko-chan must have some problems. If we changed the rules, more than half of the cultural clubs would disappear. Even if the structure of the club is small, it might be important to someone.”

			My hand fell on Alice’s thigh with a thwack.

			Even if the structure is small, it might be someone’s—

			”…… Narumi?”

			Alice turned over, facing my chest, then stared at me with her large round eyes.

			”…… Mnn, sorry. It’s nothing.”

			Alice rammed my chest away with her forehead, then turned over to look at Kousaka-senpai again.

			”That’s your request? You only wish to get information?”

			”…… Eh?”

			Kousaka-senpai raised her head, her eyes looking somewhat moist. Or maybe it’s just because my own eyes were moist…...

			”I am a NEET detective, the messenger of the dead. If only you would make a request, I would find out the truth even if I need to plunge into the Cocytus<ref>The river of wailing/ lamentation in the underworld in Greek mythology.</ref> in the deepest depths of the underworld, but the only thing that we would gain in the end would only be the words of the dead. That might be able to console the living, but that’s the most that it can do. However……”

			Alice’s cold hands grasped my wrist on her thighs.

			”Narumi is here. He’s my assistant detective.”

			I choked, unable to say anything, and could only look at Alice’s luscious long hair silently. What…... did she say about me just now?

			”His ears aren’t good, eyesight is bad, he’s dumb and insensitive, and also helplessly slow. But he has something that I cannot achieve.”

			It seemed that senpai was already dazed by Alice’s words, completely clueless about what she said; I’m the same about that. The things that Alice cannot do, but I can?

			”The ability to crystallize truth in words from the core— that’s different from a detective’s ability to understand words from reality, or you can say that it’s completely opposite to it. Those are not even words that have faded— but ‘stories’. The crystallization of happiness and despair in reality.”

			”Alice, what are you talking ab—“

			”Only you are able to change Hayano Karuoko’s decision of changing the rules ‘in a practical level’. That was what I meant.”

			Alice did not turn back, continuing forcefully.

			Only me…...

			”Kousaka Yukari, no matter how you request it, the results will not change. Narumi will fight to guard his kingdom. But I still have to ask you again, is information the only thing that you wish to gain?”

			Only the sounds of the cooling fans in the machines and the sounds of the air conditioning functioning remained in the room for a long time. Finally, Senpai raised her head.

			”Please help me. I want to stop Karuoko-chan.”

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Zephyrus: Finished editing. （Chapter is not yet complete though)

2012-01-15T03:15:17Z

Finished editing. （Chapter is not yet complete though)

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	As I finished picking up my ruby-colored salary and climbed down the roof, Alice stared at the bowl.		As I finished picking up my ruby-colored salary and climbed down the roof, Alice stared at the bowl.

	“Just thinking that these are your salary makes people feel like eating them.How I should eat them this year? Anyways, just pluck off the stems first!”		“Just thinking that these are your salary makes people feel like eating them. How I should eat them this year? Anyways, just pluck off the stems first!”

	“Hey, hold on! You’re gonna eat them?”		“Hey, hold on! You’re gonna eat them?”
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	“Yeah, and she also gets angry if you don’t address her respectfully like ‘Kaoruko-sama!’”		“Yeah, and she also gets angry if you don’t address her respectfully like ‘Kaoruko-sama!’”

	“And her ~~weakpoint~~ is the mole below her lips, so if things get dangerous attack her there.”		“And her weak point is the mole below her lips, so if things get dangerous attack her there.”

	After my classmates finished telling me a bunch of lies about that student council president whose face I didn’t remember, they pushed me out to the corridor. What on earth is going on? What business does the student council have with me?		After my classmates finished telling me a bunch of lies about that student council president whose face I didn’t remember, they pushed me out to the corridor. What on earth is going on? What business does the student council have with me?
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	“I also heard about that during the staff meeting... It's such a pity......”		“I also heard about that during the staff meeting... It's such a pity......”

	Ayaka ~~clinged~~ to Sayuri-sensei, saying:		Ayaka clung to Sayuri-sensei, saying:

	“Isn't there anything we can do? If the club disappears, who will take care of the flowerbeds and the greenhouse?”		“Isn't there anything we can do? If the club disappears, who will take care of the flowerbeds and the greenhouse?”
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	“So you'll see it when you arrive home and take off your uniform, then you'll think 'Oh, I had to do this!' I used to do it too when I was in high school.”		“So you'll see it when you arrive home and take off your uniform, then you'll think 'Oh, I had to do this!' I used to do it too when I was in high school.”

	That's incredibly ~~embarrasing~~. Going to Hanamaru with this...		That's incredibly embarrassing. Going to Hanamaru with this...
	But I didn't have the heart to protest, seeing Sayuri-sensei smiling with such sweetness and enthusiasm.		But I didn't have the heart to protest, seeing Sayuri-sensei smiling with such sweetness and enthusiasm.

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	“Take her outside as many times as possible, okay?”		“Take her outside as many times as possible, okay?”

	As many times as possible, huh... But Ayaka just wanted to see Min-san and Alice, it wasn't like she ~~particulary~~ wanted to go with me.		As many times as possible, huh... But Ayaka just wanted to see Min-san and Alice, it wasn't like she particularly wanted to go with me.

	But if the Ayaka from before returned, if she regained her memories...		But if the Ayaka from before returned, if she regained her memories...
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	Min-san had asked Ayaka to take Alice her meal, to which Ayaka responded by taking the tray and exiting the kitchen looking extremely happy, not returning though it's already half an hour. I saw Min-san say something to her before she got out, perhaps asking her to feed Alice or wash her clothes?		Min-san had asked Ayaka to take Alice her meal, to which Ayaka responded by taking the tray and exiting the kitchen looking extremely happy, not returning though it's already half an hour. I saw Min-san say something to her before she got out, perhaps asking her to feed Alice or wash her clothes?

	While I was chopping some ~~cabagge~~, I looked at Min-san who had her eyes glued to her soup from the corner of my eye. It might be that she cared for Ayaka, so she gave Ayaka work to do so that she could recover her memories earlier.		While I was chopping some cabbage, I looked at Min-san who had her eyes glued to her soup from the corner of my eye. It might be that she cared for Ayaka, so she gave Ayaka work to do so that she could recover her memories earlier.

	“I wonder if she’ll return to work here soon… She’s 100 times more useful than you, Narumi.”		“I wonder if she’ll return to work here soon… She’s 100 times more useful than you, Narumi.”