Kamisama no Memochou:Volume 3 Chapter 2 - Revision history

128.120.116.94 at 20:41, 2 April 2012

2012-04-02T20:41:51Z

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	“Narumi, don’t just stand there and discuss meaningless topics. Dr. Pepper and the report! Hurry up!”		“Narumi, don’t just stand there and discuss meaningless topics. Dr. Pepper and the report! Hurry up!”

	Okay, okay. I took out a can from the fridge, handing the note with the news by Miyabe-senpai to Alice. There are still some things that I couldn’t understand just by looking at the information. Though I wanted to tidy up the contents first, I still chose to tell Alice about all ~~about~~ it first ~~in the end~~.		Okay, okay. I took out a can from the fridge, handing the note with the news by Miyabe-senpai to Alice. There are still some things that I couldn’t understand just by looking at the information. Though I had wanted to tidy up the contents first, in the end I still chose to tell Alice about all of it first.

	“…… Mnn, I get it.”		“…… Mnn, I get it.”
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	Ayaka who was behind Alice stopped combing, and her face fell. Though she didn’t really understand what we were discussing about, Ayaka was rather sensitive about the words Gardening Club that kept appearing in the conversation, so she couldn’t just ignore it.		Ayaka who was behind Alice stopped combing, and her face fell. Though she didn’t really understand what we were discussing about, Ayaka was rather sensitive about the words Gardening Club that kept appearing in the conversation, so she couldn’t just ignore it.

	“The club that you and Narumi is shrouded in mysteries.” Alice used the back of her head to lightly bump Ayaka’s chest while saying: “Do you remember a third year senpai when you first joined the Gardening Club in first year? Did you hear anything from him? There must be some students who joined the club at the same time as the Head Inspector, right?”		“The club that you and Narumi are in is shrouded in mysteries.” Alice used the back of her head to lightly bump Ayaka’s chest while saying: “Do you remember a third year senpai when you first joined the Gardening Club in first year? Did you hear anything from him? There must be some students who joined the club at the same time as the Head Inspector, right?”

	Being asked a whole lot of questions, Ayaka looked at Alice and shook her head after closing her eyes looking rather forlorn. Even if she heard anything— she probably doesn’t remember it.		Being asked a whole lot of questions, Ayaka looked at Alice and shook her head after closing her eyes looking rather forlorn. Even if she heard anything— she probably doesn’t remember it.
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	“Why?”		“Why?”

	I approached the back of the bed, looking at the monitor that Alice was staring at. Quite a few windows ~~was~~ on the screen, and one of them had a photo of a man with small eyes, a square jaw, and a pale face that was about twenty, and the information about him.		I approached the back of the bed, looking at the monitor that Alice was staring at. Quite a few windows were on the screen, and one of them had a photo of a man with small eyes, a square jaw, and a pale face that was about twenty, and the information about him.

	“He’s dead. What a joke.”		“He’s dead. What a joke.”
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	Alice’s words hammered Ayaka’s head.		Alice’s words hammered Ayaka’s head.

	Among the words in one of the windows, two words were so clear to me as though ~~the~~ popped out of the screen. Choked breathing surged from the depths of my throat.		Among the words in one of the windows, two words were so clear to me as though they popped out of the screen. Choked breathing surged from the depths of my throat.

	“Angel Fix.”		“Angel Fix.”
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	Why? Why? Why is this name here?		Why? Why? Why is this name here?

	Since the group that made and dealt the drugs was closed down, the number of people who died because of the drug shot up. Apparently, they hurt themselves because of the withdrawal of the drug. There were already thirty people in this city ~~only~~. Their names weren’t in God’s notebook, so the sorrowful people attempted to add it in with their own blood. Most of those people did not continue their studies or work, drifting meaninglessly in the night city— NEETs.		Since the group that made and dealt the drugs was closed down, the number of people who died because of the drug shot up. Apparently, they hurt themselves because of the withdrawal of the drug. There were already thirty people in this city alone. Their names weren’t in God’s notebook, so the sorrowful people attempted to add it in with their own blood. Most of those people did not continue their studies or work, drifting meaninglessly in the night city— NEETs.

	Minagawa Kengo’s name was among them.		Minagawa Kengo’s name was among them.
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	“Ah, no, no……. Noooo…….!”		“Ah, no, no……. Noooo…….!”

	A terrifying sound was emitted from Ayaka’s half-open mouth, her eyes that lost ~~its~~ radiance were staring at the words ‘Angel Fix’ that caught my attention just now. I pounced on Ayaka, shaking her shoulders frantically, trying to pull her away from Alice.		A terrifying sound was emitted from Ayaka’s half-open mouth, her eyes that had lost their radiance were staring at the words ‘Angel Fix’ that caught my attention just now. I pounced on Ayaka, shaking her shoulders frantically, trying to pull her away from Alice.

	“Ayaka, calm down! Please calm down!”		“Ayaka, calm down! Please calm down!”
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	But they’ve linked now in this way.		But they’ve linked now in this way.

	I caught hold of Ayaka’s hands forcibly on the carpet. If I didn’t do that, I’m afraid that I would have problems as well. I couldn’t even differentiate ~~that~~ the moans that resounded in the room ~~was~~ mine or Ayaka’s. Standing below the air vent of the air conditioner, I waited while biting my lips forcefully.		I caught hold of Ayaka’s hands forcibly on the carpet. If I didn’t do that, I’m afraid that I would have problems as well. I couldn’t even differentiate whether the moans that resounded in the room were mine or Ayaka’s. Standing below the air vent of the air conditioner, I waited while biting my lips forcefully.

	Suddenly, I felt someone beside me. If not because of the stream of heat, I might have hugged my own ~~heat~~, collapsing on the bed with my eyes closed.		Suddenly, I felt someone beside me. If not because of the stream of heat, I might have hugged my own head, collapsing on the bed with my eyes closed.

	After raising my head, I saw Alice standing by my side, tightly holding the sleeve of my shirt, gazing at Ayaka’s face with her eyes that were as dark as the deep sea.		After raising my head, I saw Alice standing by my side, tightly holding the sleeve of my shirt, gazing at Ayaka’s face with her eyes that were as dark as the deep sea.

79.151.101.128: minor corrections

2012-02-06T21:47:20Z

minor corrections

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	Of course, Alice knew of this long ago.		Of course, Alice knew of this long ago.

	“Four students dropped out of their own accord after the incident, all of them were students who had contact with Hayano Tomohiko; this is the namelist. The only person who was confirmed to have contact with the victim that day was the ~~forth~~ person.”		“Four students dropped out of their own accord after the incident, all of them were students who had contact with Hayano Tomohiko; this is the namelist. The only person who was confirmed to have contact with the victim that day was the fourth person.”

	Under the air outlet in the office, Alice spoke of that in a chillingly businesslike tone and handed me a photocopied paper. The names and classes of four guys were listed on the paper, while the ~~forth~~ name was Ichinomiya Tetsuo. I stared at the name.		Under the air outlet in the office, Alice spoke of that in a chillingly businesslike tone and handed me a photocopied paper. The names and classes of four guys were listed on the paper, while the fourth name was Ichinomiya Tetsuo. I stared at the name.

	“Tetsu-senpai is—”		“Tetsu-senpai is—”
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	The road extended from the large station like a vein, after climbing the slope that was connected to a TV station at the leftmost spot and turning left into a small alley, a broken down building could be seen. The third and ~~forth~~ floor of the building would be the office of Hirasaka-gumi.		The road extended from the large station like a vein, after climbing the slope that was connected to a TV station at the leftmost spot and turning left into a small alley, a broken down building could be seen. The third and fourth floor of the building would be the office of Hirasaka-gumi.

	As the sworn brother that underwent the sake ceremony with their leader Yondaime, I had some understanding about how the young yakuza gang was founded.		As the sworn brother that underwent the sake ceremony with their leader Yondaime, I had some understanding about how the young yakuza gang was founded.
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	“So you’re investigating the Gardening Committee, right? That girl is really has a life of hard work.”		“So you’re investigating the Gardening Committee, right? That girl is really has a life of hard work.”

	I was rather uneasy about Miyabe-senpai’s casual attitude. After climbing to the ~~forth~~ floor, I walked into the rather eerie room.		I was rather uneasy about Miyabe-senpai’s casual attitude. After climbing to the fourth floor, I walked into the rather eerie room.

	“Good morning, everyone!” Senpai casually said.		“Good morning, everyone!” Senpai casually said.

Zephyrus at 04:10, 18 January 2012

2012-01-18T04:10:35Z

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	Yondaime stepped closer to me, pressing a finger forcefully on my chest. It felt just like a sharp ice pillar.		Yondaime stepped closer to me, pressing a finger forcefully on my chest. It felt just like a sharp ice pillar.

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	thumb\|'' Yondaime stepped closer to me, pressing a finger forcefully on my chest. It felt just like a sharp ice pillar.		thumb\|'' Yondaime stepped closer to me, pressing a finger forcefully on my chest. It felt just like a sharp ice pillar.
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Angelanime: some spelling repairs

2012-01-17T09:17:59Z

some spelling repairs

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	“— Wh- what is it, Fujishima-kun?”		“— Wh- what is it, Fujishima-kun?”

	“I- Ichinomiya? Does that mean Ichinomiya ~~Testuo~~-senpai?”		“I- Ichinomiya? Does that mean Ichinomiya Tetsuo-senpai?”

	A middle-aged teacher with streaks of white hair among his otherwise black hair had a rather awkward expression on his face, it seems that he’s the one who spoke to ~~Hibayashi~~-sensei just now. Perhaps he thought that letting other people hear what he said just now isn’t that good, he tried to smooth things over.		A middle-aged teacher with streaks of white hair among his otherwise black hair had a rather awkward expression on his face, it seems that he’s the one who spoke to Hirabayashi-sensei just now. Perhaps he thought that letting other people hear what he said just now isn’t that good, he tried to smooth things over.

	“So you know him? Mnn, it seems that he’s rather well known. He was like a mad dog, lashing out first before anything else whenever he does anything. His grades were terrible as well, and I’ve heard that he’s a rogue up till now.”		“So you know him? Mnn, it seems that he’s rather well known. He was like a mad dog, lashing out first before anything else whenever he does anything. His grades were terrible as well, and I’ve heard that he’s a rogue up till now.”
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	“It was said that he wasn’t caught because there were no evidence. Since he chose to drop out himself, it shows that he’s really in the wrong. That means Hayano was killed by these people.”		“It was said that he wasn’t caught because there were no evidence. Since he chose to drop out himself, it shows that he’s really in the wrong. That means Hayano was killed by these people.”

	~~“Tetsu~~ senpai…… Bu—”		“Tetsu… senpai…… Bu—”

	I nearly blurted something out in agitation, but immediately swallowed it back again. ~~Hibayashi~~-sensei and the other teacher looked rather shocked. I immediately turned around and left, escaping the staff’s office.		I nearly blurted something out in agitation, but immediately swallowed it back again. Hirabayashi-sensei and the other teacher looked rather shocked. I immediately turned around and left, escaping the staff’s office.

	The person who killed Kaoruko-senpai’s brother was actually Tetsu-senpai?		The person who killed Kaoruko-senpai’s brother was actually Tetsu-senpai?
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	“There’s nothing that you can help with now. That point is the same as usual.”		“There’s nothing that you can help with now. That point is the same as usual.”

	Alice turned over to the monitor in a huff. I ~~kneeled~~ on the cold floor, and had no other choice but to retract my arm that I extended towards Alice.		Alice turned over to the monitor in a huff. I knelt on the cold floor, and had no other choice but to retract my arm that I extended towards Alice.

	Isn’t it at these times— an assistant detective has to help from the side?		Isn’t it at these times— an assistant detective has to help from the side?
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	But I couldn’t just say that directly. What should I say first? I finally said after pondering for some time:		But I couldn’t just say that directly. What should I say first? I finally said after pondering for some time:

	“…… Do you know about the ~~Guardening~~ Committee?”		“…… Do you know about the Gardening Committee?”

	Ayaka shook her head. She doesn’t know? Or was the memory just sunk in her swamp of memories?		Ayaka shook her head. She doesn’t know? Or was the memory just sunk in her swamp of memories?
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	But…...		But…...

	I raised my head, and coincidentally met ~~Akaya’s~~ uneasy gaze as she was tightly holding onto the kitchen backdoor.		I raised my head, and coincidentally met Ayaka’s uneasy gaze as she was tightly holding onto the kitchen backdoor.

	To me, there’s something that I have to protect as well. Even if Ayaka had long forgotten how important those things are, even if it’s only a mirage that exists only in my heart.		To me, there’s something that I have to protect as well. Even if Ayaka had long forgotten how important those things are, even if it’s only a mirage that exists only in my heart.
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	‘That isn’t wrong. I feel rather happy about this. Okay, relax. Though Ayaka is a hundred million times more considerate about small details than you, she doesn’t have the talent to do a manzai, so she can’t have the job of an assistant.’		‘That isn’t wrong. I feel rather happy about this. Okay, relax. Though Ayaka is a hundred million times more considerate about small details than you, she doesn’t have the talent to do a manzai, so she can’t have the job of an assistant.’

	“So an assistant’s job is to do ~~tsukomis~~ with the boss……?”		“So an assistant’s job is to do tsukkomis with the boss……?”

	‘Don’t you think so?’		‘Don’t you think so?’
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	The other man who once set the base for the gang, who was also Yondaime’s inseparable friend— disappeared not long after that. The reason for that wasn’t clear, and only his name was left on the signboard of the gang.		The other man who once set the base for the gang, who was also Yondaime’s inseparable friend— disappeared not long after that. The reason for that wasn’t clear, and only his name was left on the signboard of the gang.

	The nameplate on the letterbox of the first floor had ‘Hirasaka’ written on it. I closely observed Hirasaka-gumi’s emblem that was exactly the same as the family emblem of the ~~prestiged~~ family during the olden times of Japan, ‘Heishi’, which was a swallowtail butterfly as well…… The reason that I’m thinking about these is just because the elevator still hadn’t come down. Did it break down again?		The nameplate on the letterbox of the first floor had ‘Hirasaka’ written on it. I closely observed Hirasaka-gumi’s emblem that was exactly the same as the family emblem of the prestigious family during the olden times of Japan, ‘Heishi’, which was a swallowtail butterfly as well…… The reason that I’m thinking about these is just because the elevator still hadn’t come down. Did it break down again?

	It really can’t be helped, I think it’s better if I just use the emergency stairs. As I was about to walk out, I met a man in a black T-shirt on the streets.		It really can’t be helped, I think it’s better if I just use the emergency stairs. As I was about to walk out, I met a man in a black T-shirt on the streets.
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	“How would Tetsu-ojiki do such a thing!?”		“How would Tetsu-ojiki do such a thing!?”

	The tip of ~~Hayabe~~-senpai’s feet were raised about two centimeters from the floor. Seeing senpai suffocating because of his neck being throttled, legs flailing non-stop, I hurriedly went forward to halt him.		The tip of Miyabe-senpai’s feet were raised about two centimeters from the floor. Seeing senpai suffocating because of his neck being throttled, legs flailing non-stop, I hurriedly went forward to halt him.

	“P- please don’t do that!”		“P- please don’t do that!”
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	“I recall that I’ve seen the name of the Head Inspector before this.”		“I recall that I’ve seen the name of the Head Inspector before this.”

	Alice remembers this person? Would that be because Tetsu-senpai told her that? As Ayaka was still combing Alice’s hair, Alice pulled the moveable table by her computer ~~dest~~ to her side, then typed on the computer to bring out a the window of a search engine on one of her monitors. Sounds of typing that were like machine guns rang in the room.		Alice remembers this person? Would that be because Tetsu-senpai told her that? As Ayaka was still combing Alice’s hair, Alice pulled the moveable table by her computer desk to her side, then typed on the computer to bring out a the window of a search engine on one of her monitors. Sounds of typing that were like machine guns rang in the room.

	“According to the student handbook of your school, opening a new club must pass the Inspector’s trials. As for the rude and puzzling process of the opening of the Gardening Club, the involvement of the Head Inspector is quite probable. It’s like he’s looking at a club that he’s already decided to open. If this happens nowadays, it would be a huge joke.”		“According to the student handbook of your school, opening a new club must pass the Inspector’s trials. As for the rude and puzzling process of the opening of the Gardening Club, the involvement of the Head Inspector is quite probable. It’s like he’s looking at a club that he’s already decided to open. If this happens nowadays, it would be a huge joke.”

Zephyrus at 05:24, 17 January 2012

2012-01-17T05:24:42Z

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	I didn’t say anything to Ayaka or Sayuri-sensei, but immediately rushed out of the school, riding to Hanamaru Ramen on my bike.		I didn’t say anything to Ayaka or Sayuri-sensei, but immediately rushed out of the school, riding to Hanamaru Ramen on my bike.

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	Of course, Alice knew of this long ago.		Of course, Alice knew of this long ago.
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	To me, there’s something that I have to protect as well. Even if Ayaka had long forgotten how important those things are, even if it’s only a mirage that exists only in my heart.		To me, there’s something that I have to protect as well. Even if Ayaka had long forgotten how important those things are, even if it’s only a mirage that exists only in my heart.

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	From the following day onwards, I would ask Ayaka to work in my stead at Hanamaru Ramen when I’m busy with my work as an assistant detective.		From the following day onwards, I would ask Ayaka to work in my stead at Hanamaru Ramen when I’m busy with my work as an assistant detective.
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	Troubled, I tilted my head while stuffing my phone back into my pockets, riding my bike away.		Troubled, I tilted my head while stuffing my phone back into my pockets, riding my bike away.

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	The road extended from the large station like a vein, after climbing the slope that was connected to a TV station at the leftmost spot and turning left into a small alley, a broken down building could be seen. The third and forth floor of the building would be the office of Hirasaka-gumi.		The road extended from the large station like a vein, after climbing the slope that was connected to a TV station at the leftmost spot and turning left into a small alley, a broken down building could be seen. The third and forth floor of the building would be the office of Hirasaka-gumi.
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	Did he really spend the night finishing that so that he could make fun of me? I’m so touched because of this…		Did he really spend the night finishing that so that he could make fun of me? I’m so touched because of this…

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	It was almost time for the ramen shop to open by the time I arrived. Min-san’s silhouette could be seen at the other side of the half-open iron sliding door. She was wiping the counters with her ponytail swaying around.		It was almost time for the ramen shop to open by the time I arrived. Min-san’s silhouette could be seen at the other side of the half-open iron sliding door. She was wiping the counters with her ponytail swaying around.

Zephyrus: Chapter 2 complete.

2012-01-17T05:23:54Z

Chapter 2 complete.

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