Kamisu Reina:Volume 1 Atsushi Kogure - Revision history

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	"...I suppose so."		"...I suppose so."

	"Fine. I think that my dream is the result of my wish to 'escape."		"Fine. I think that my dream is the result of my wish to 'escape'."

	"..." He remains silent.		"..." He remains silent.
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	"—may I read his suicide note?"		"—may I read his suicide note?"



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	While munching at my burger, I start thinking about Reina Kamisu.		While munching at my burger, I start thinking about Reina Kamisu.

	Reina Kamisu. Back when the incident happened, she was 16 years old (meaning that she was only one year older than I am now), so her present age should be 21. Did she get a job? Maybe she's enrolled in an university. She probably couldn't graduate from high school because of everything she did, but she should be smart enough to make it through the entrance exams of an university. Even though she killed my entire family, she was hardly punished at all because her completely incomprehensible motive got her diagnosed "mentally unstable". I bet now she's worshiped like an idol at her workplace or at university. The murderous idol. Haha, what a catchphrase!		Reina Kamisu. Back when the incident happened, she was 16 years old (meaning that she was only one year older than I am now), so her present age should be 21. Did she get a job? Maybe she's enrolled in a university. She probably couldn't graduate from high school because of everything she did, but she should be smart enough to make it through the entrance exams of an university. Even though she killed my entire family, she was hardly punished at all because her completely incomprehensible motive got her diagnosed "mentally unstable". I bet now she's worshiped like an idol at her workplace or at university. The murderous idol. Haha, what a catchphrase!

	"Tch...!"		"Tch...!"

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	"What? But that was, like, last week, no? Did we learn something new about Saito's suicide?" I ask as I toss my bag onto my desk.		"What? But that was, like, last week, no? Did we learn something new about Saito's suicide?" I ask as I toss my bag onto my desk.

	Since she was a person who we would see every day at school, Saito's death came quite as a shock for us. While she didn't have any friends—she was even suspected to have stolen from a classmate—there were still students who mourned for her. Surprisingly though, it wasn't until she died that a few guys came our of their shells and confessed with teary eyes that they had actually been fond of her because she had an "modest" personality unlike most girls nowadays. Saito must have quite mixed feelings up there in heaven, since that personality of hers is what drove her to suicide.		Since she was a person who we would see every day at school, Saito's death came quite as a shock for us. While she didn't have any friends—she was even suspected to have stolen from a classmate—there were still students who mourned for her. Surprisingly though, it wasn't until she died that a few guys came our of their shells and confessed with teary eyes that they had actually been fond of her because she had a "modest" personality unlike most girls nowadays. Saito must have quite mixed feelings up there in heaven, since that personality of hers is what drove her to suicide.

	"Are you still making a fuss about that story? Why don't you leave her alone already? I'm sure that she... wouldn't like being the center of attention," I mention to him.		"Are you still making a fuss about that story? Why don't you leave her alone already? I'm sure that she... wouldn't like being the center of attention," I mention to him.
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	And it still hurts.		And it still hurts.




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Simon at 22:29, 18 May 2014

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			==Chapter 2: Atsushi Kogure==
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	Right—I am already dead.		Right—I am already dead.

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	I mustn't worry my aunt. And yet...I have been skipping school for the past few days, unable to move a muscle.		I mustn't worry my aunt. And yet...I have been skipping school for the past few days, unable to move a muscle.

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	I started to wander around aimlessly after I had left Kimura's home.		I started to wander around aimlessly after I had left Kimura's home.

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	I had since been recalling that discussion with Mizuhara several times, trying to draw my own conclusions.		I had since been recalling that discussion with Mizuhara several times, trying to draw my own conclusions.

	I have no means of knowing what that ''whatever'' she was calling a "ghost" is, but granted that that "phenomenon" is capable of communication, it can get into contact with others and thus ~~effect~~ their lives to a certain degree.		I have no means of knowing what that ''whatever'' she was calling a "ghost" is, but granted that that "phenomenon" is capable of communication, it can get into contact with others and thus affect their lives to a certain degree.

	That effect killed those two?		That effect killed those two?
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	However, I shake my head.		However, I shake my head.

	I'm losing touch with reality; I should think it through more ~~rational~~.		I'm losing touch with reality; I should think it through more rationally.

	Rational thinking. R-a-t-i-o-n-a-l. Got that down? ...Yeah.		Rational thinking. R-a-t-i-o-n-a-l. Got that down? ...Yeah.
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	"I was looking for ''you'', Reina Kamisu, for you!"		"I was looking for ''you'', Reina Kamisu, for you!"

	I scowl at Reina Kamisu. The more I sharpen my ~~glance~~, the weaker the pain in my chest gets.		I scowl at Reina Kamisu. The more I sharpen my gaze, the weaker the pain in my chest gets.

	"Oh really?" she smiles at me with a smile so beautiful that it looks fake. "And what are you going to do now? Take revenge?"		"Oh really?" she smiles at me with a smile so beautiful that it looks fake. "And what are you going to do now? Take revenge?"
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	"Maybe you think that incident is just water under the bridge. But not for me. I'm still suffering the consequences everyday. You're still messing with my life!"		"Maybe you think that incident is just water under the bridge. But not for me. I'm still suffering the consequences everyday. You're still messing with my life!"

	"Well, I suppose nobody who fell victim to such an incident could come to terms with it so easily," Reina Kamisu says in a indifferent voice, giving me the urge to charge at her and ~~struggle~~ her to death. However, I must keep from doing so; without her I will never get the answer I seek.		"Well, I suppose nobody who fell victim to such an incident could come to terms with it so easily," Reina Kamisu says in an indifferent voice, giving me the urge to charge at her and strangle her to death. However, I must keep from doing so; without her I will never get the answer I seek.

	"And? What do you want from me?"		"And? What do you want from me?"
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	"Hm..."		"Hm..."

	"Believe it or not, I do understand that you have an entirely different way of thinking than me. It can't be helped if your reason doesn't make sense to me. I don't care. ~~Everything~~'s better than knowing nothing."		"Believe it or not, I do understand that you have an entirely different way of thinking than me. It can't be helped if your reason doesn't make sense to me. I don't care. Anything's better than knowing nothing."

	For the first time, Reina Kamisu listened closely to my words.		For the first time, Reina Kamisu listened closely to my words.
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	Right—I am already dead.		Right—I am already dead.



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EusthEnoptEron: Who the fuck is Kyousuke?

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Who the fuck is Kyousuke?

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	"Yes?" someone says after a few moments.		"Yes?" someone says after a few moments.

	"Urm... my name is Atsushi Kogure. Ah, yes... I'm a classmate of ~~Kyousuke~~-kun's." As I explain who I am, I look at the nameplate besides the chime.		"Urm... my name is Atsushi Kogure. Ah, yes... I'm a classmate of Kyouhei-kun's." As I explain who I am, I look at the nameplate besides the chime.

	The plate reads <i>Kimura</i>.		The plate reads <i>Kimura</i>.

EusthEnoptEron at 16:40, 24 September 2013

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	<i>"A ghost cursed them to death."</i>		<i>"A ghost cursed them to death."</i>

	And then I finally recall <u>whose name Saito called for help</u>		And then I finally recall <u>whose name Saito called for help</u>.

EusthEnoptEron at 16:39, 24 September 2013

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	I reread these words over and over, but they didn't ~~changed~~ no matter how many times and from what angle I read them.		I reread these words over and over, but they didn't change no matter how many times and from what angle I read them.

Agar9691 at 12:51, 3 September 2013

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	In other words... my attempt to understand Reina Kamisu and her reasons for killing my family can't possibly succeed—<u>because she doesn't understand herself, either</u>.		In other words... my attempt to understand Reina Kamisu and her reasons for killing my family can't possibly succeed—<u>because she doesn't understand herself, either</u>.

	I'm not going find the answer I'm looking for anywhere in the world.		I'm not going to find the answer I'm looking for anywhere in the world.

	"It breaks my heart to say this, but as I said earlier..."		"It breaks my heart to say this, but as I said earlier..."
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	"Do you want to cancel this week's appointment with your doctor? I can contact him if you want."		"Do you want to cancel this week's appointment with your doctor? I can contact him if you want."

	Normally, it's these times when one should look for mental counseling, but since I'm pretending to be ill, I mustn't ~~got~~.		Normally, it's these times when one should look for mental counseling, but since I'm pretending to be ill, I mustn't get caught.

	"Yes, please. Can I ask you to contact him, mom?"		"Yes, please. Can I ask you to contact him, mom?"
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	"—I don't care. The fact that my family was killed won't change, no matter who was the culprit. <u>After all, it's impossible to pacify the feelings of someone whose family was murdered, and my wound will never heal up.</u> Right?"		"—I don't care. The fact that my family was killed won't change, no matter who was the culprit. <u>After all, it's impossible to pacify the feelings of someone whose family was murdered, and my wound will never heal up.</u> Right?"

	Reina ~~Kamsu~~ gazes closely at me.		Reina Kamisu gazes closely at me.

	"Perhaps," she finally answers.		"Perhaps," she finally answers.

EusthEnoptEron at 14:15, 26 August 2013

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	"...I suppose so."		"...I suppose so."

	"Fine. I think that my dream ~~represents an~~ 'escape.'"		"Fine. I think that my dream is the result of my wish to 'escape."

	"..." He remains silent.		"..." He remains silent.
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	"Sure."		"Sure."

	"Earlier, you mentioned that you see an escape in that dream, right?"		"Earlier, you mentioned that you see your wish to escape in that dream, right?"

	"Right."		"Right."