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Ayame: /* Chapter 1 - Ayano-chan's Misfortune */

2015-05-04T18:38:18Z

Chapter 1 - Ayano-chan's Misfortune

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	Suddenly, the metallic ~~grey~~ bucket covering Ayano glowed with a red brilliance. The red metal melted off in an instant, flowing down along Ayano’s body onto the ground.		Suddenly, the metallic gray bucket covering Ayano glowed with a red brilliance. The red metal melted off in an instant, flowing down along Ayano’s body onto the ground.

	After shaking off the metal piece that was stuck on her hair forcefully, Ayano stared up into the sky peacefully.		After shaking off the metal piece that was stuck on her hair forcefully, Ayano stared up into the sky peacefully.

Black Ice Prince at 08:04, 12 October 2013

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	At this moment, she thought to herself, this should be an attack by the enemy.		At this moment, she thought to herself, this should be an attack by the enemy.

	“------~~Whose~~ it!?”		“------Who is it!?”

	Ayano hurriedly faced the direction at which the ball of light came from, raising the Enraiha in her hand. But there was no one there.		Ayano hurriedly faced the direction at which the ball of light came from, raising the Enraiha in her hand. But there was no one there.
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	“Fine, I won’t hold you responsible for this. Tell me everything!		“Fine, I won’t hold you responsible for this. Tell me everything!

	~~------~~ Why did you stop me just now?”		Why did you stop me just now?”

	A tone that allowed no room for error. Those eyes seemed to be telling the other party that if he doesn’t reply honestly, he would suffer.		A tone that allowed no room for error. Those eyes seemed to be telling the other party that if he doesn’t reply honestly, he would suffer.

Black Ice Prince at 08:01, 12 October 2013

2013-10-12T08:01:19Z

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	~~Kaze no Stigma Ignition~~ 1		==Chapter 1 - Ayano-chan's Misfortune==
	Ayano-~~chan’s~~ Misfortune

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	An instant before releasing her flames, Kazuma knocked Ayano’s hand away. The palm that changed its direction released golden flames right below it.		An instant before releasing her flames, Kazuma knocked Ayano’s hand away. The palm that changed its direction released golden flames right below it.

	~~------~~ The floor caught fire instantly.		The floor caught fire instantly.

	“You…… What are you doing!?”		“You…… What are you doing!?”
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	<nowiki>------</nowiki>Badunk!		<nowiki>------</nowiki>Badunk!
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	With a loud sound, Ayano’s eyes turned to darkness instantly. The rest on the other hand, looked at this scene with an unbelievable look on their face.		With a loud sound, Ayano’s eyes turned to darkness instantly. The rest on the other hand, looked at this scene with an unbelievable look on their face.

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	“Wh……What------Woah!?”		“Wh……What------Woah!?”

	It dropped down.		It dropped down.

	Ayano looked at the ball of light. She seemed to have forgotten her anger from just now, and asked:		Ayano looked at the ball of light. She seemed to have forgotten her anger from just now, and asked:
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	The angry roar echoed pointlessly within the dark school.		The angry roar echoed pointlessly within the dark school.

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2011-08-07T20:21:13Z

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2011-08-07T19:52:08Z

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	Ayano slanted her eyes to stare at Kazuma, trying to see what she could tell from his expression, but gave up instantly. Ayano is very certain that with such a simple personality, it is impossible for her to tell what Kazuma, a guy that was hard to deal with, was thinking.		Ayano slanted her eyes to stare at Kazuma, trying to see what she could tell from his expression, but gave up instantly. Ayano is very certain that with such a simple personality, it is impossible for her to tell what Kazuma, a guy that was hard to deal with, was thinking.

	In the end, Ayano ~~decideed~~ to take an action that suited her personality the most, that is to ask Kazuma straightforwardly:		In the end, Ayano decided to take an action that suited her personality the most, that is to ask Kazuma straightforwardly:

	“Kazuma, you are hiding something from me right?”		“Kazuma, you are hiding something from me right?”
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	“You…… You…… What are you doing……”		“You…… You…… What are you doing……”

	“Its nothing. I just felt that you ~~will~~ probably let go this way. Just like the story of “The northern winds and the sun”.”		“Its nothing. I just felt that you would probably let go this way. Just like the story of “The northern winds and the sun”.”

	Pachunk, nerves gathered at Ayano’s temple instantly.		Pachunk, nerves gathered at Ayano’s temple instantly.
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	“You……. You are really a……”		“You……. You are really a……”

	Her furious anger turned to power, emerging from Ayano’s body. She had ~~gone~~ serious about it entirely, preparing to gather her powers for a full fledge strike.		Her furious anger turned to power, emerging from Ayano’s body. She had gottene serious about it entirely, preparing to gather her powers for a full fledge strike.

	At this moment, Kazuma used his usual tone, opening his mouth to say slowly:		At this moment, Kazuma used his usual tone, opening his mouth to say slowly:
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	“Wah!”		“Wah!”

	Ayano screamed out, and fell backwards entirely. Kazuma looked coldly at the girl lying with her ~~limps~~ spread wide on the ground, and grumbled in his mouth:		Ayano screamed out, and fell backwards entirely. Kazuma looked coldly at the girl lying with her limbs spread wide on the ground, and grumbled in his mouth:

	“Be it the scream or the pose when she fell onto the ground, why isn’t there any sign of femininity in them?”		“Be it the scream or the pose when she fell onto the ground, why isn’t there any sign of femininity in them?”

	“Because ~~its~~ Ayano.”		“Because it's Ayano.”

	Yukari answered instantly. Kazuma nodded in agreement.		Yukari answered instantly. Kazuma nodded in agreement.

Sreeml5thira: Tense changed to past, sentences repaired

2010-11-05T18:02:52Z

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ShadowZeroHeart at 07:42, 29 December 2009

2009-12-29T07:42:27Z

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	“You guys have to obey my instructions, don’t act on your own.”		“You guys have to obey my instructions, don’t act on your own.”

	“Okay, don’t worry♥”		“Okay, don’t worry♥”

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