Kaze no Stigma:Volume2 Chapter 2 - Revision history

Black Ice Prince at 10:38, 12 October 2013

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	== Chapter Two - Assault – Determination After Removing All Doubts ==		== Chapter Two - Assault – Determination After Removing All Doubts ==

	=== 1 ===		=== Part 1 ===

	The boy’s arm was wreathed in red flame.		The boy’s arm was wreathed in red flame.
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	“Looks like it’s gonna be a busy day.”		“Looks like it’s gonna be a busy day.”

	=== 2 ===		=== Part 2 ===

	While she was walking home after school, Ayano’s eyes caught a small shadow about ten meters away from her.		While she was walking home after school, Ayano’s eyes caught a small shadow about ten meters away from her.
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	With his back to the shop assistant, who showed a professional smile, Ren swiftly ran toward the restroom.		With his back to the shop assistant, who showed a professional smile, Ren swiftly ran toward the restroom.

	=== 3 ===		=== Part 3 ===

	After waiting a minute or so, Ren ran to catch up to Ayano.		After waiting a minute or so, Ren ran to catch up to Ayano.

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	His quiet words passed unheard and disappeared into the wind.		His quiet words passed unheard and disappeared into the wind.

	=== 4 ===		=== Part 4 ===

	“Gunfire broke out at 4pm today in an incident in Chiyoda Ward, Kudankita District, and claimed more than 30 lives.”		“Gunfire broke out at 4pm today in an incident in Chiyoda Ward, Kudankita District, and claimed more than 30 lives.”

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	~~\| Back to [[Kaze_no_Stigma:Volume2_Chapter_1\|Chapter 1]]~~
	\| Forward to [[Kaze_no_Stigma:Volume2_Chapter_3\|Chapter 3]]		\| Forward to [[Kaze_no_Stigma:Volume2_Chapter_3\|Chapter 3]]
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Yozora no Amante: /* 4 */

2010-08-22T20:00:47Z

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	“Indeed.”		“Indeed.”

	~~Jugo~~ gave a bitter smile. He felt uneasy precisely because he understood that it was due to Kazuma’s mistrust of the Kannagis.		Juugo gave a bitter smile. He felt uneasy precisely because he understood that it was due to Kazuma’s mistrust of the Kannagis.

	“Somehow, we must find a way...”		“Somehow, we must find a way...”

Dyne: /* 3 */

2009-10-08T19:01:44Z

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	(Wh–Wh–Wha?!)		(Wh–Wh–Wha?!)

	This smile that was not a smile caught Ren like a deer caught in headlights, unable to run or even look away.		This smile, that was not a smile, caught Ren like a deer caught in headlights, unable to run or even look away.

	“Ah... Ah...”		“Ah... Ah...”
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	On the other hand, Misao wore a smile, watching as Kazuma was blown away. She slowly retreated without ever looking away.		On the other hand, Misao wore a smile, watching as Kazuma was blown away. She slowly retreated without ever looking away.

	As if swapping positions, as Misao retreated, ten men appeared from the shadows of the surrounding buildings. They wore Western suits, seemingly businessmen at first glance, but though their ~~ethnicities~~ and ages were all different, their teamwork was at a very high level.		As if swapping positions, as Misao retreated, ten men appeared from the shadows of the surrounding buildings. They wore Western suits, seemingly businessmen at first glance, but though their ethnicity and ages were all different, their teamwork was at a very high level.

	They spread out in a fan-shaped formation and surrounded Kazuma – who now lay on the ground – extracting the contents of their cases in swift, practiced motions.		They spread out in a fan-shaped formation and surrounded Kazuma – who now lay on the ground – extracting the contents of their cases in swift, practiced motions.
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	“Fi–Fire!”		“Fi–Fire!”

	It was a command shouted in a voice that no longer radiated calm. Driven by fear, and the voice, the men reflexively pulled the trigger.		It was a command shouted in a voice that no longer radiated calm. Driven by fear and the voice, the men reflexively pulled the trigger.

	The erupting gunfire, loud enough to cause deafness, echoed through the alley. After being hit by several hundred more bullets, the black shadow fell once more.		The erupting gunfire, loud enough to cause deafness, echoed through the alley. After being hit by several hundred more bullets, the black shadow fell once more.
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	In addition to the first sniper, over one kilometer away, Misao had prepared a second sniper as a trump card. They had been placed across from each other, two kilometers apart, with Kazuma in the center.		In addition to the first sniper, over one kilometer away, Misao had prepared a second sniper as a trump card. They had been placed across from each other, two kilometers apart, with Kazuma in the center.

	~~And yet~~ Kazuma had killed them. This meant that while defending against such a savage attack, he had calmly been scanning an area with a radius of at least one kilometer without missing a beat.		Despite this, Kazuma had killed them. This meant that while defending against such a savage attack, he had calmly been scanning an area with a radius of at least one kilometer without missing a beat.

	Though what he said was unbelievable, the radio had yet to respond. Misao offered a bitter smile and discarded her radio.		Though what he said was unbelievable, the radio had yet to respond. Misao offered a bitter smile and discarded her radio.

Vaelis at 11:04, 13 June 2009

2009-06-13T11:04:15Z

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Kalessin: /* 4 */ Fixed tenses and improved wording and flow of text.

2009-06-13T09:15:48Z

4: Fixed tenses and improved wording and flow of text.

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Kalessin: /* 3 */ Fixed tenses and improved wording and flow of text.

2009-06-12T06:36:49Z

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Kalessin: /* 2 */ Fixed tenses and improved wording and flow of text.

2009-06-11T03:51:42Z

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Kalessin: It makes more sense for this to be outside. It happened outside in the anime, and ground and floor have been mixed up in other places in this translation, so I'm assuming it's actually ground.

2009-06-11T01:13:36Z

It makes more sense for this to be outside. It happened outside in the anime, and ground and floor have been mixed up in other places in this translation, so I'm assuming it's actually ground.

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	So hot – there was no room in his mind for anything but the heat, all thought being stolen by the crimson flame.		So hot – there was no room in his mind for anything but the heat, all thought being stolen by the crimson flame.

	He continuously rolled on the ~~floor~~, attempting to extinguish the flame. Nearby, some children observed his pitiable state.		He continuously rolled on the ground, attempting to extinguish the flame. Nearby, some children observed his pitiable state.

	I say children, but that belies the range of their ages. The smallest were young children of only four or five while the oldest were full-grown teenagers of fifteen or sixteen.		I say children, but that belies the range of their ages. The smallest were young children of only four or five while the oldest were full-grown teenagers of fifteen or sixteen.
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	“You... You foolish idiot!”		“You... You foolish idiot!”

	The head that Toru had forcefully stepped on was now slowly lifting itself upward. The youth used his hands as support against the ~~floor~~ and stared intently at Toru from below.		The head that Toru had forcefully stepped on was now slowly lifting itself upward. The youth used his hands as support against the ground and stared intently at Toru from below.

	“You... What are you trying to do...?”		“You... What are you trying to do...?”

Kalessin: /* 1 */ Fixed tenses and improved wording and flow of text.

2009-06-11T01:03:47Z

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Zeferion: /* 3 */

2008-11-18T14:06:58Z

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	As a beautiful girl hiding behind an electric pole, sneakily surveying her prey, she stands out more than if she were doing nothing at all.		As a beautiful girl hiding behind an electric pole, sneakily surveying her prey, she stands out more than if she were doing nothing at all.

	For a moment, he strongly considers pretending he does not know Ayano and returning home, but he entertains the thought ~~only~~, unwilling to do such a thing.		For a moment, he strongly considers pretending he does not know Ayano and returning home, but he only entertains the thought, unwilling to do such a thing.

	Ren bravely steps forward, and walks up to Ayano, who can now be considered an exemplary suspicious character.		Ren bravely steps forward, and walks up to Ayano, who can now be considered an exemplary suspicious character.