Kaze no Stigma:Volume2 Chapter 3 - Revision history

Ginja04: Added missing image based on raw location

2013-10-22T11:33:11Z

Added missing image based on raw location

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	“After receiving such treatment, normally speaking he will not want to have any interactions with you people. But if it is for revenge, that would be a different case.”		“After receiving such treatment, normally speaking he will not want to have any interactions with you people. But if it is for revenge, that would be a different case.”
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	Nanase follows on to say:		Nanase follows on to say:

Black Ice Prince at 10:43, 12 October 2013

2013-10-12T10:43:53Z

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	== Chapter Three - Friendship –Contributions and Mistakes-==		== Chapter Three - Friendship –Contributions and Mistakes-==

	=== 1 ===		=== Part 1 ===

	Late night....		Late night....
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	Before the teenager gradually withering away, two hands filled with personal desires and hypocrisy were tightly clasped.		Before the teenager gradually withering away, two hands filled with personal desires and hypocrisy were tightly clasped.

	=== 2 ===		=== Part 2 ===

	Next day at the Kannagi residence:		Next day at the Kannagi residence:
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	Kazuma muttered with his greatest sincerity—and then suavely sped off.		Kazuma muttered with his greatest sincerity—and then suavely sped off.

	=== 3 ===		=== Part 3 ===

	“Hey you girls, wanna—”		“Hey you girls, wanna—”
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	The raging wind broke the dimensional gap.		The raging wind broke the dimensional gap.

	=== 4 ===		=== Part 4 ===

	“I thought that it was the descent of God.”		“I thought that it was the descent of God.”
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			\| Back to [[Kaze_no_Stigma:Volume2_Chapter_2\|Chapter 2]]
	\| Return to [[Kaze_no_Stigma\|Main Page]]		\| Return to [[Kaze_no_Stigma\|Main Page]]
	~~\| Back to [[Kaze_no_Stigma:Volume2_Chapter_2\|Chapter 2]]~~
	\| Forward to [[Kaze_no_Stigma:Volume2_Chapter_4\|Chapter 4]]		\| Forward to [[Kaze_no_Stigma:Volume2_Chapter_4\|Chapter 4]]
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Ardyvee: An extra quote where it wasn't supposed to go. Hope you don't mind~~~~

2012-01-01T02:45:30Z

An extra quote where it wasn't supposed to go. Hope you don't mind~~~~

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	“Hey!”		“Hey!”

	Nanase knocks lightly on Yukari’s head, who has been rattling on and on.”		Nanase knocks lightly on Yukari’s head, who has been rattling on and on.

	“Ouch, that hurts, Nanase~”		“Ouch, that hurts, Nanase~”

66.76.112.228: /* 1 */

2009-10-08T21:59:13Z

Dyne: /* fixed a tense error */

2009-10-04T20:04:31Z

fixed a tense error

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	''What was that!? What was that!? Sorry I'll only be a nuisance! Too bad I'm weaker than you! Gee, I'm so sorry—!''		''What was that!? What was that!? Sorry I'll only be a nuisance! Too bad I'm weaker than you! Gee, I'm so sorry—!''

	In her heart, Ayano ~~was~~ used her ''Enraiha'' to stab that flippant detestable face.		In her heart, Ayano used her ''Enraiha'' to stab that flippant detestable face.

	Yet, no matter how she mashed or beat up that face, the fury in her showed no signs of abating.		Yet, no matter how she mashed or beat up that face, the fury in her showed no signs of abating.

166.205.4.182: /* fixed a double negative error */

2009-10-04T19:58:38Z

fixed a double negative error

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	''Bang!''		''Bang!''

	The poor guy didn't ~~not~~ know how to look at the situation. Before he even completed his first sentence, he was sent flying into the air by the schoolbag that flew in from the side.		The poor guy didn't know how to look at the situation. Before he even completed his first sentence, he was sent flying into the air by the schoolbag that flew in from the side.

	''“Scram!”''		''“Scram!”''

Kalessin: I don't _think_ that I changed the meaning of the phrase, but it was worded rather confusingly. The new phrasing makes sense in context, but it's possible that I've gotten the directions mixed up.

2009-06-14T01:46:21Z

I don't _think_ that I changed the meaning of the phrase, but it was worded rather confusingly. The new phrasing makes sense in context, but it's possible that I've gotten the directions mixed up.

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	“—!”		“—!”

	He changed his direction once more~~. Back from~~ the ~~way~~ he ~~was heading in earlier, the~~ scene reflected in his eyes made Shuuji stare, his eyes wide open.		He changed his direction once more and continued in the direction in which he had first been going. The scene reflected in his eyes made Shuuji stare, his eyes wide open.

	The same as the way behind him—there was only one tunnel that stretched until it vanished as far as he can see. Of course, there were no stairs nor crossroads there either.		The same as the way behind him—there was only one tunnel that stretched until it vanished as far as he can see. Of course, there were no stairs nor crossroads there either.

Zyzzyva165: sorry, undid too much

2009-06-06T08:45:05Z

sorry, undid too much

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Zyzzyva165: Please explain yourself, Kalessin

2009-06-06T08:39:27Z

Please explain yourself, Kalessin

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Kalessin: Some improvements to the wording and flow so that they flow more naturally in English.

2009-06-06T06:34:02Z

Some improvements to the wording and flow so that they flow more naturally in English.

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	“Dammit! I'm not sure if I'll make it in time.”		“Dammit! I'm not sure if I'll make it in time.”

	A teenager rushed towards the station in order to catch the last train,		A teenager rushed towards the station in order to catch the last train.

	Takahashi Shuuji~~. A~~ 20 year-old university student.		Takahashi Shuuji was a 20 year-old university student.

	As a formal participant of the Kendo club, his slender-seeming body was actually very well trained—there was no fat on it at all.		As a formal participant of the Kendo club, his slender-seeming body was actually very well trained—there was no fat on it at all.
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	He changed his direction once more and continued in the direction in which he had first been going. The scene reflected in his eyes made Shuuji stare, his eyes wide open.		He changed his direction once more and continued in the direction in which he had first been going. The scene reflected in his eyes made Shuuji stare, his eyes wide open.

	The same as the way behind him—there was only one tunnel that stretched until it vanished as far as he can see. Of course, there were no stairs ~~nor~~ crossroads there either.		The same as the way behind him—there was only one tunnel that stretched until it vanished as far as he can see. Of course, there were no stairs or crossroads there either.

	Shuuji was stranded in the middle of a tunnel that stretched endlessly—alone.		Shuuji was stranded in the middle of a tunnel that stretched endlessly—alone.
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	It was a semi-transparent substance with a glue-like texture. It was originally the size of a ping-pong ball, then, it grew to the size of a baseball in a moment, and, after not too long, it was the size of a soccer ball.		It was a semi-transparent substance with a glue-like texture. It was originally the size of a ping-pong ball, then, it grew to the size of a baseball in a moment, and, after not too long, it was the size of a soccer ball.

	The glue-like substance shone with a rainbow-~~coloured~~ glow. If this thing was seen in a photo, maybe it would give a clear, lustrous, and refreshing feeling.		The glue-like substance shone with a rainbow-colored glow. If this thing was seen in a photo, maybe it would give a clear, lustrous, and refreshing feeling.

	But, the actual substance floating before his eyes could only be described as ugly. It was just like a ~~tumour~~, vomit, or a filthy gooey piece of the two condensed to the maximum limit.		But, the actual substance floating before his eyes could only be described as ugly. It was just like a tumor, vomit, or a filthy gooey piece of the two condensed to the maximum limit.

	Instinctively, Shuuji hurriedly jumped backwards, reacting to his disgust. He jumped with force, landing two meters behind where he was, and the sound of his steps spreads across the entire underground passage.		Instinctively, Shuuji hurriedly jumped backwards, reacting to his disgust. He jumped with force, landing two meters behind where he was, and the sound of his steps spreads across the entire underground passage.
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	Unable to withstand such a chilling experience, sending shivers down his spine, Shuuji's consciousness was consumed by darkness.		Unable to withstand such a chilling experience, sending shivers down his spine, Shuuji's consciousness was consumed by darkness.

	And— He never woke up ~~ever~~ again.		And— He never woke up again.

	“The way you manipulated them left me speechless, but—“		“The way you manipulated them left me speechless, but—“