Kaze no Stigma:Volume3 Chapter 1 - Revision history

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2013-11-09T18:32:09Z

Part 4

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	“Ugh.........are you sure?”		“Ugh.........are you sure?”

	“The moment work ended we separated immediately. That is correct, without ~~delay”~~		“The moment work ended we separated immediately. That is correct, without delay.”

	“.................is that so?”		“.................is that so?”

Ginja04: Added missing image based on raw location.

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	“So, let’s go, Ren-kun.”		“So, let’s go, Ren-kun.”
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	The atmosphere of violence from several days minutes ago left no traces. A glittery smiling face was there. Kannon gently took Ren’s arm, in fact with a vigor that doesn’t allow resistance – and forcibly dragged him along. A reckless enough person to obstruct it was already nowhere to be found.		The atmosphere of violence from several days minutes ago left no traces. A glittery smiling face was there. Kannon gently took Ren’s arm, in fact with a vigor that doesn’t allow resistance – and forcibly dragged him along. A reckless enough person to obstruct it was already nowhere to be found.

Bilagaana: missing word

2013-10-22T20:49:06Z

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	“It would have been better to melt somewhat closer to the center.”		“It would have been better to melt somewhat closer to the center.”

	What would have happened if the flame melted the special steel heated the gun powder, there is no longer any need to explain it.		What would have happened if the flame that melted the special steel heated the gun powder, there is no longer any need to explain it.

	“I’m not particularly well acquainted with weapons but what would have happened to the hand holding that particular spontaneously discharged gun, huh? Only the hand would be blown off? Or.....would the head blow up as well, I wonder?”		“I’m not particularly well acquainted with weapons but what would have happened to the hand holding that particular spontaneously discharged gun, huh? Only the hand would be blown off? Or.....would the head blow up as well, I wonder?”

Bilagaana: typo

2013-10-22T20:46:52Z

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	“Hello? Hello!? What happened? Are you all right?” sensing an incident in the telephone’s silence the operator spoke with a serious tone.		“Hello? Hello!? What happened? Are you all right?” sensing an incident in the telephone’s silence the operator spoke with a serious tone.

	“Well then...what are ~~doing~~ to do?”		“Well then...what are you going to do?”

	At Ren’s question or maybe provocation, the leader took action. Inserting his hand in his breast pocket he took something out. The object that came out as a result of such spontaneous, breathing-like action was a boorish, black handgun. Aiming the gun point at a dumbfounded Ren, he pulled the gunlock without delay. The gunshot resounded over the silencer. The bullet shot at subsonic speed smashed the telephone.		At Ren’s question or maybe provocation, the leader took action. Inserting his hand in his breast pocket he took something out. The object that came out as a result of such spontaneous, breathing-like action was a boorish, black handgun. Aiming the gun point at a dumbfounded Ren, he pulled the gunlock without delay. The gunshot resounded over the silencer. The bullet shot at subsonic speed smashed the telephone.
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	“Maybe you will think I am shameless but....can I request of you just one more thing............?”		“Maybe you will think I am shameless but....can I request of you just one more thing............?”

	Apologetic but at the same time including seriousness in her wish the girl looked hard at Ren. To be able to refuse that gaze, it was impossible for him.		Apologetic but at the same time including seriousness in her wish the girl looked hard at Ren. To be able to refuse that gaze, it was impossible for him.




	===Part 4===		===Part 4===

Bilagaana: typo

2013-10-22T20:44:03Z

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	“Yes, yes. As the young lady commands.”		“Yes, yes. As the young lady commands.”

	Joining hands cordially both of them ran up to the seesaw. Forgetting about the passing time they continued playing together. They rode in the seesaw, glided in the slide, played with sand in the sand-pit. Although it was clear Ayumi had burning aspirations of “completing” all the park’s playground equipment, Ren stubbornly didn’t gave permission for the horizontal bar. A beginner with a skirt shouldn’t be allowed to pull herself o the bar.		Joining hands cordially both of them ran up to the seesaw. Forgetting about the passing time they continued playing together. They rode in the seesaw, glided in the slide, played with sand in the sand-pit. Although it was clear Ayumi had burning aspirations of “completing” all the park’s playground equipment, Ren stubbornly didn’t gave permission for the horizontal bar. A beginner with a skirt shouldn’t be allowed to pull herself onto the bar.

Denormative: h2-ing top level headers like previous volumes.

2013-07-19T00:43:06Z

h2-ing top level headers like previous volumes.

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	===Chapter 1 – Meeting underneath the moonlight===		==Chapter 1 – Meeting underneath the moonlight==

Blackie at 14:37, 24 March 2013

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			===Part 3===
	And now –		And now –

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			===Part 4===

	“You still haven’t found ''that'', Yuuji?”		“You still haven’t found ''that'', Yuuji?”

Blackie at 14:33, 24 March 2013

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	==Chapter 1 – Meeting underneath the moonlight==		===Chapter 1 – Meeting underneath the moonlight===


	===1===		===Part 1===

	In the beginning of the New Year, a few days after the start of the new semester...		In the beginning of the New Year, a few days after the start of the new semester...
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	===2===		===Part 2===

Drowzycow: skimmed through some of this, difficult to read with narrative in present tense tho

2013-03-22T12:07:33Z

skimmed through some of this, difficult to read with narrative in present tense tho

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	~~'''~~Chapter 1 – Meeting underneath the moonlight~~'''~~		==Chapter 1 – Meeting underneath the moonlight==


	1		===1===


	In the beginning of the New Year, a few days after the start of the new semester...		In the beginning of the New Year, a few days after the start of the new semester...
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	“Ren!”		“Ren!”

	A short girl and a boy with an outstanding build each grab a hand of a boy so cute, you could mistake him for a girl. The girl and the large built boy exchange a sublime threatening glance for a second and right away avert their eyes, as if to say: “I saw something dirty.”		A short girl and a boy with an outstanding build each grab a hand of a boy, so cute you could mistake him for a girl. The girl and the large built boy exchange a sublime threatening glance for a second and right away avert their eyes, as if to say: “I saw something dirty.”

	“Ren-kun, let’s go have tea on the way home.”		“Ren-kun, let’s go have tea on the way home.”
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	“No, anytime now, Serisawa is going to get angry for real, don’t you think? Up until now, he was going easy on her, right?”		“No, anytime now, Serisawa is going to get angry for real, don’t you think? Up until now, he was going easy on her, right?”

	Although abnormal, their struggle is extreme. The boy and the girl trying to gain Kannagi Ren’s favor and his heart ~~either can’t~~ be called a standard primary school student.		Although abnormal, their struggle is extreme. The boy and the girl trying to gain Kannagi Ren’s favor and his heart, neither can be called a standard primary school student.

	Serisawa Tatsuya – 180 centimeters tall and a physique matching that height, the boy is endowed with physical strength.		Serisawa Tatsuya – 180 centimeters tall and a physique matching that height, the boy is endowed with physical strength.
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	2		===2===


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	Lately, he frequently compares himself with his big brother.		Lately, he frequently compares himself with his big brother.

	Yagami Kazuma		Yagami Kazuma.

	A well trained body. A shaped mind. Owning the unshakeable title of the absolute strongest man – Ren is considerably glorifying him. Nevertheless, the brother he met after four years, he seemed exactly like the ideal embodiment of the boy.		A well trained body. A shaped<!--sharp?--> mind. Owning the unshakeable title of the absolute strongest man – Ren is considerably glorifying him. Nevertheless, the brother he met after four years, he seemed exactly like the ideal embodiment of the boy.

	Someday, I want to become like big brother...		Someday, I want to become like big brother...
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	“...................a singing voice?”		“...................a singing voice?”

	It was a children’s park, established in a quiet, residential area. The place had a clandestine character because of a few people with a rude conduct and after dark the place was completely empty.		It was a children’s park, established in a quiet, residential area. The place had a clandestine character because of a few people with rude conduct and after dark the place was completely empty.
	However, it seems there is an exception tonight. The singing audible voice coming from inside the shade of the trees was unmistakably human and, in addition to that, belonged to a young girl.		However, it seems there is an exception tonight. The singing audible voice coming from inside the shade of the trees was unmistakably human and, in addition to that, belonged to a young girl.

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	From Ren’s awareness, the entire world lost its meaning. Reflected in his eyes are the sparkling moon and the maiden’s shape blessed by the moon.		From Ren’s awareness, the entire world lost its meaning. Reflected in his eyes are the sparkling moon and the maiden’s shape blessed by the moon.

	Throb		Throb.

	The heart starts beating very loudly. A conspicuously great pulsation. Even without proof, Ren firmly believes he heard that sound. He can sense the blood running through the blood vessels.		The heart starts beating very loudly. A conspicuously great pulsation. Even without proof, Ren firmly believes he heard that sound. He can sense the blood running through the blood vessels.

	Throb, throb		Throb, throb.

	The all too excited blood flow makes his limbs vibrate. The heartbeats resound deafeningly in his ears. And yet the girl’s voice naturally penetrates into his hearing.		The all too excited blood flow makes his limbs vibrate. The heartbeats resound deafeningly in his ears. And yet the girl’s voice naturally penetrates into his hearing.
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	For a second time, from Ren’s consciousness everything except the girl disappeared. He wanted wings – he strongly thought so. If he could fly into the sky, he would take her beyond the stars.		For a second time, from Ren’s consciousness everything except the girl disappeared. He wanted wings – he strongly thought so. If he could fly into the sky, he would take her beyond the stars.

	~~“Hey”~~		“Hey.”
	Abruptly she shifted her attention to Ren.		Abruptly she shifted her attention to Ren.

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	“A-ha-ha – somehow I have a feeling I don’t live up to my name.”		“A-ha-ha – somehow I have a feeling I don’t live up to my name.”

	“That’s not true. It suits ~~you”~~		“That’s not true. It suits you.”

	“Is that so?”		“Is that so?”
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	“Kyaa –”		“Kyaa –”

	“ – ~~uh”~~		“ – uh.”

	Faster than thinking, Ren’s body moved. Kicking the swing’s board with all his strength, he jumps at an angle close to horizontal. He seized Ayumi in the air just before she crashed into the ground. Without change, making sure that he embraced that small body, he landed on his back. Although he rolled on the ground to disperse the shock, because wanting to protect Ayumi was more important, he practically didn’t make any defense.		Faster than thinking, Ren’s body moved. Kicking the swing’s board with all his strength, he jumps at an angle close to horizontal. He seized Ayumi in the air just before she crashed into the ground. Without change, making sure that he embraced that small body, he landed on his back. Although he rolled on the ground to disperse the shock, because wanting to protect Ayumi was more important, he practically didn’t make any defense.
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	In front of the shouting Ren, the black suits’s hands seized Ayumi. Without changing the force of the rush, they dragged and knocked down the girl with no mercy.		In front of the shouting Ren, the black suits’s hands seized Ayumi. Without changing the force of the rush, they dragged and knocked down the girl with no mercy.

	“.................~~kuu”~~		“.................kuu.”

	Because two people roughly applied torsion on her arms, Ayumi let out a small cry of pain. But even so, the black suits didn’t slow down.		Because two people roughly applied torsion on her arms, Ayumi let out a small cry of pain. But even so, the black suits didn’t slow down.

Drowzycow: navbar

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	The vanishing whisper reached nobody’s ears.		The vanishing whisper reached nobody’s ears.

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