Kaze no Stigma:Volume3 Chapter 3 - Revision history

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2013-11-10T16:24:17Z

Part 4

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	With no place for misunderstanding, Mayumi's expression was provocative. Even so, looking puzzled at the girl not showing any indication of battle, Ren retaliated in a low voice:		With no place for misunderstanding, Mayumi's expression was provocative. Even so, looking puzzled at the girl not showing any indication of battle, Ren retaliated in a low voice:

	"-If you want to run away I won't pursue you"		"-If you want to run away I won't pursue you."

	"Well, thank you"		"Well, thank you."

	Replying to the lenient laugh with a scornful laugh Mayumi shed a fleeting glance.		Replying to the lenient laugh with a scornful laugh Mayumi shed a fleeting glance.
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	Which was correct, Ren was not able to judge. On the other hand, Yuuji did not hesitate.		Which was correct, Ren was not able to judge. On the other hand, Yuuji did not hesitate.

	"For the sake of protecting my lady, I will kill Ayumi.Those that will get in the way, I will kill them all! I will remove all obstacles even at the cost of my life and protect my lady!"		"For the sake of protecting my lady, I will kill Ayumi. Those that will get in the way, I will kill them all! I will remove all obstacles even at the cost of my life and protect my lady!"

	DETERMINATION		DETERMINATION
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	But, right now Ren had no will to go through with it to that extent. No, even if he had that determination, he lost sight to whom it should be pointed to.		But, right now Ren had no will to go through with it to that extent. No, even if he had that determination, he lost sight to whom it should be pointed to.

	''What should be do? -What should I do?''		''What should be done? -What should I do?''

	Ren was perplexed.		Ren was perplexed.
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	[[Image:Kaze no Stigma vol 03 147.jpg\|thumb]]		[[Image:Kaze no Stigma vol 03 147.jpg\|thumb]]

	In front of Ren's eyes,turning around with a changed expression, were reflected the figures of Ayumi and Mayumi, standing behind her. Embraced ~~her~~ closely from behind, Ayumi's pale complexion became stiff.		In front of Ren's eyes,turning around with a changed expression, were reflected the figures of Ayumi and Mayumi, standing behind her. Embraced closely from behind, Ayumi's pale complexion became stiff.

	Although not being strangled or press against a dangerous weapon, panic grabbed hold of her heart.		Although not being strangled or press against a dangerous weapon, panic grabbed hold of her heart.
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	If it was just as Mayumi said, if Ayumi was not human and was created for the sake of dying as a sacrifice, doesn't everything makes sense?		If it was just as Mayumi said, if Ayumi was not human and was created for the sake of dying as a sacrifice, doesn't everything makes sense?

	''"A lie.......It's a lie"''		''"A lie.......It's a lie."''

	Aiming a smile full of spite at the dumbfounded Ren, Mayumi continued.		Aiming a smile full of spite at the dumbfounded Ren, Mayumi continued.

	"Her appearance may seem that of a twelve years old girl but in reality only a month passed since its creation. Even her planted memories have been suitably edited from my own. That kind of crude doll, you tried to protect with your knight affectation. ''That was fun ♥''"		"Her appearance may seem that of a twelve years old girl but in reality only a month passed since its creation. Even her planted memories have been suitably edited from my own. That kind of crude doll, you tried to protect with your knight affectation. ''That was fun ♥.''"

	"It.......It's a lie......"		"It.......It's a lie......"

	"Let me tell you one more thing. Even if she doesn't become the sacrifice, just a month from now on, ~~fer~~ life span will be cut from inside. Made with no intention to use for an extended period of time, just instant makeshift goods."		"Let me tell you one more thing. Even if she doesn't become the sacrifice, just a month from now on, her life span will be cut from inside. Made with no intention to use for an extended period of time, just instant makeshift goods."

	"That's, a lie...."		"That's, a lie...."
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	Thus, at last Ayumi - Ayumi told the truth.		Thus, at last Ayumi - Ayumi told the truth.

	"........It's true. I am the katashiro doll[http://eos.kokugakuin.ac.jp/modules/xwords/entry.php?entryID=308] made for the sake of keeping Mayumi-sama alive. Mayumi-sama's impostor"		"........It's true. I am the katashiro doll[http://eos.kokugakuin.ac.jp/modules/xwords/entry.php?entryID=308] made for the sake of keeping Mayumi-sama alive. Mayumi-sama's impostor."

	Where is the genuine '''Ayumi'''?		Where is the genuine '''Ayumi'''?
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	"''This is also...''" with a monotonous voice Mayumi repeated Yuuji's words.		"''This is also...''" with a monotonous voice Mayumi repeated Yuuji's words.

	"What is the meaning of ''This is also...'' Yuuji ?"		"What is the meaning of ''This is also...'' Yuuji?"

	"Ah, no, that is..."		"Ah, no, that is..."
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	"Good evening. It's been a long time, Police Superintendent Tachibana."		"Good evening. It's been a long time, Police Superintendent Tachibana."

	"We haven't talked in a long time, Mayumi-san"		"We haven't talked in a long time, Mayumi-san."

	That perfectly ordinary greeting, the detective in charge of Tokyo MPD's Special Investigation Unit, Police Superintended Tachibana returned with an absolutely tranquil tone.		That perfectly ordinary greeting, the detective in charge of Tokyo MPD's Special Investigation Unit, Police Superintended Tachibana returned with an absolutely tranquil tone.
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	"Because you didn't appear together with the that young woman, can we assume you have no intention of opposing the Tsuwabuki regarding the Kannagi matter?"		"Because you didn't appear together with the that young woman, can we assume you have no intention of opposing the Tsuwabuki regarding the Kannagi matter?"

	"Of course. We have no intention of interfering in any kind of dispute. Naturally, if you would accept our mediation, we ~~woul feel~~ that position with pleasure."		"Of course. We have no intention of interfering in any kind of dispute. Naturally, if you would accept our mediation, we would fill that position with pleasure."

	"That won't be necessary."		"That won't be necessary."
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	"Everything has been already settled. We have regained the object Kannagi Ren stole and because it's something a child did, we have no intention of blaming the Kannagi Clan for that error. If you would be so good as to pass it along to Ayano-san."		"Everything has been already settled. We have regained the object Kannagi Ren stole and because it's something a child did, we have no intention of blaming the Kannagi Clan for that error. If you would be so good as to pass it along to Ayano-san."

	"......I will comply"		"......I will comply."

	"Thank you"		"Thank you."

	Bowing her head to Kirika, Mayumi left accompanied by her attendant and the spoils of war.		Bowing her head to Kirika, Mayumi left accompanied by her attendant and the spoils of war.

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2013-11-10T15:53:39Z

Part 3

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	One man, like a servant, followed her, leaving between them several steps.		One man, like a servant, followed her, leaving between them several steps.

	Because of the back lighting he ~~sees~~ only outlines but even from those shadows it was impossible not to recognize the proud atmosphere drifting around the woman. The glance overlooking them was more suited for stray dogs than humans.		Because of the back lighting he saw only outlines but even from those shadows it was impossible not to recognize the proud atmosphere drifting around the woman. The glance overlooking them was more suited for stray dogs than humans.

	Leaving a distance of five meters between them, the woman faced Ren and Ayumi.		Leaving a distance of five meters between them, the woman faced Ren and Ayumi.
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	Glaring at Ren as if he was her archenemy, she squeezed out a stifled to death voice from the gap between her clenched teeth. Her well regulated, elegant features, changed into the face of a demonic warrior.		Glaring at Ren as if he was her archenemy, she squeezed out a stifled to death voice from the gap between her clenched teeth. Her well regulated, elegant features, changed into the face of a demonic warrior.

	"Don't mess around with me"		"Don't mess around with me."

	Mayumi's angry roar shrunk Ayumi's body with a start. After staring with much discord at the frightened girl, she turned an identical glance at Ren.		Mayumi's angry roar shrunk Ayumi's body with a start. After staring with much discord at the frightened girl, she turned an identical glance at Ren.
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	"................."		"................."

	Without even using words, Mayumi carelessly beckoned her. as if calling her pet dog or something.		Without even using words, Mayumi carelessly beckoned her as if calling her pet dog or something.

	Ayumi started walking obediently.		Ayumi started walking obediently.
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	"I had...no intention...."		"I had...no intention...."

	Staring at Ayumi, protesting in a trembling voice, ~~wit~~ the look a carnivorous animal has before its feed, Mayumi let go of her jaw.		Staring at Ayumi, protesting in a trembling voice, with the look a carnivorous animal has before its feed, Mayumi let go of her jaw.

	And then - she pulled her hand backwards and swung with all her strength.		And then - she pulled her hand backwards and swung with all her strength.
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	"What have you done?"		"What have you done?"

	But Mayumi didn't even ~~looked~~ at Ren. As she already stated "your turn is already over" she disregarded his existence itself.		But Mayumi didn't even look at Ren. As she already stated "your turn is already over" she disregarded his existence itself.

	Instead, the man who followed behind her moved. With body movement that had no openings he stepped forward and got on his knee before Ayumi.		Instead, the man who followed behind her moved. With body movement that had no openings he stepped forward and got on his knee before Ayumi.
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	''Inside the sea?''		''Inside the sea?''

	It was out of the question. Ren being an Enjutsushi water was nothing more but a thing to be avoided. There was no point for Ren's power to weakened beyond what Yuuji could accomplish.		It was out of the question. Ren being an Enjutsushi water was nothing more but a thing to be avoided. There was no point for Ren's power to be weakened beyond what Yuuji could accomplish.

	To Ren, stuck in a defensive battle, Yuuji turned words of ridicule.		To Ren, stuck in a defensive battle, Yuuji turned words of ridicule.
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	"Kuu- "		"Kuu- "

	Because of Yuuji's carelessness, recognizing he became long separated from Ayumi, Ren grinds his teeth. if it goes like this, Ayumi will really be taken away.		Because of Yuuji's carelessness, recognizing he became long separated from Ayumi, Ren grinds his teeth. If it goes like this, Ayumi will really be taken away.

	''What should I do? ~~what~~ should I -''		''What should I do? What should I -''

	The problem was that he had no technique to defend against the blows. He can use flames to cover the surroundings but the bottom of his feet are perfectly defenseless. When fighting against Chijutsushi, that became a lethal weakness. A foothold was necessary. Separated from Yuuji's control, a scaffold made of <Earth> he cannot control.		The problem was that he had no technique to defend against the blows. He can use flames to cover the surroundings but the bottom of his feet are perfectly defenseless. When fighting against Chijutsushi, that became a lethal weakness. A foothold was necessary. Separated from Yuuji's control, a scaffold made of <Earth> he cannot control.
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	"You brat - you changed the burning sand to magma!"		"You brat - you changed the burning sand to magma!"

	"I gave it a try"		"I gave it a try."

	Receiving Yuuji's angry roar, Ren laughed triumphantly. It does not mean he had a positive proof. If a Suijutsushi can stand atop water he tried to stand atop magma, that could also be called fluid flame. He simply tried out that idea.		Receiving Yuuji's angry roar, Ren laughed triumphantly. It does not mean he had a positive proof. If a Suijutsushi can stand atop water he tried to stand atop magma, that could also be called fluid flame. He simply tried out that idea.
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	In the space between the two bedrocks Yuuji was in anguish. And there, the last blow came.		In the space between the two bedrocks Yuuji was in anguish. And there, the last blow came.

	"Next is up"		"Next is up."

	" -!?"		" -!?"

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2013-11-10T15:32:42Z

Part 2

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	Because his own cellphone broke, he can't wait for Kazuma to get in touch with him. In the end, leaving the message "I'll call again" Ren hanged the receiver.		Because his own cellphone broke, he can't wait for Kazuma to get in touch with him. In the end, leaving the message "I'll call again" Ren hanged the receiver.

	"I'm beaten"		"I'm beaten."

	As soon as he complained, Ayumi's hand, holding his left arm, tightly hugged him. Flustered, Ren showed a bright smile meant to give her peace of mind.		As soon as he complained, Ayumi's hand, holding his left arm, tightly hugged him. Flustered, Ren showed a bright smile meant to give her peace of mind.
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	At the magnificent view at last reflected in her eyes Ayumi raised her voice in delight. Ren looked in the came direction. It was the sea. The great deep stretching endlessly. The utmost blue sea surface sparkling in the downpour of sunshine - naturally, it wasn't.		At the magnificent view at last reflected in her eyes Ayumi raised her voice in delight. Ren looked in the came direction. It was the sea. The great deep stretching endlessly. The utmost blue sea surface sparkling in the downpour of sunshine - naturally, it wasn't.

	The winter sea is cold and hollow. it doesn't have a particle of the heat and energy the summer sea is full of, instead it's pushing out a cold surface, almost like rejecting humans. Staring at the utmost black sea, the same color as the night sky, Ayumi muttered:		The winter sea is cold and hollow. It doesn't have a particle of the heat and energy the summer sea is full of, instead it's pushing out a cold surface, almost like rejecting humans. Staring at the utmost black sea, the same color as the night sky, Ayumi muttered:

	"Is this... The sea...........?"		"Is this... The sea...........?"
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	To make Ayumi happy - right now, for Ren it was all that mattered. Seeing Ayumi's wet eyes, Ren asked her casually, as if inquiring about the dinner's menu.		To make Ayumi happy - right now, for Ren it was all that mattered. Seeing Ayumi's wet eyes, Ren asked her casually, as if inquiring about the dinner's menu.

	"Do you want to keep it up just a little bit more? Before long it could cause trouble but if they get in the way I'll drive them away"		"Do you want to keep it up just a little bit more? Before long it could cause trouble but if they get in the way I'll drive them away."

	"....No, it's enough."		"....No, it's enough."

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Part 1

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	''What to do.....''		''What to do.....''

	The warm sense of touch transmitted by his left arm thoroughly snatched Ren's presence of mind. After that, when, how did ~~hey~~ get into the train, he didn't remember any of it.		The warm sense of touch transmitted by his left arm thoroughly snatched Ren's presence of mind. After that, when, how did they get into the train, he didn't remember any of it.



	"I'm sorry"		"I'm sorry."

	"-Eh?"		"-Eh?"
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	Ren replied while laughing.		Ren replied while laughing.

	"It's not a big deal, this much"		"It's not a big deal, this much."

	Actually the girl's wish was simple. What it required were traveling expenses and a little bit of time. Just those will suffice.		Actually the girl's wish was simple. What it required were traveling expenses and a little bit of time. Just those will suffice.

	''Take me to the sea''		''Take me to the sea.''

	That's what Ayumi spoke in the park. It was just one wish. Naturally, Ren had no objection.		That's what Ayumi spoke in the park. It was just one wish. Naturally, Ren had no objection.
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	Investigating those contents for a while, he asked only one thing.		Investigating those contents for a while, he asked only one thing.

	"Is a harbor-like place acceptable? Or a sandy beach?"		"Is a harbor-like place acceptable? Or a sandy beach?"

	Without wavering, Ayumi chose the latter. Therefore, together they boarded the Tokaido Line. That route was aimed at Chigasaki.		Without wavering, Ayumi chose the latter. Therefore, together they boarded the Tokaido Line. That route was aimed at Chigasaki.
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	"I have no family name, nor a family register, naming myself is not permitted, but-"		"I have no family name, nor a family register, naming myself is not permitted, but-"

	''No way''		''No way.''

	''I don't want to hear''		''I don't want to hear.''

	Despite this - the body doesn't move. Even blocking his ears, he can't do it. Without waiting for agreement or disagreement, pouring into his ears, that tone calm as the surface of the lake. Admitting everything, allowing it, accepting it.		Despite this - the body doesn't move. Even blocking his ears, he can't do it. Without waiting for agreement or disagreement, pouring into his ears, that tone calm as the surface of the lake. Admitting everything, allowing it, accepting it.
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	"I am called Tsuwabuki. According to the lineage, something like a direct descendant."		"I am called Tsuwabuki. According to the lineage, something like a direct descendant."

	''I don't want to hear it''		''I don't want to hear it.''

	"The ceremony is tomorrow night. Therefore, I must get back until then. Because I- because I am the priest of the ritual"		"The ceremony is tomorrow night. Therefore, I must get back until then. Because I- because I am the priest of the ritual."

	''Because I am the priest of the ceremony''		''Because I am the priest of the ceremony.''

	From Ren's body, with a water-like sound, blood flew backwards.		From Ren's body, with a water-like sound, blood flew backwards.
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	The year is 1707 - during the Houei era was the last volcanic eruption of Mt. Fuji and the greatest since the dawn of history. The violent eruption reaching 15 days, it was said that the volcanic ash fell as far as the distant town of Edo. It was not only Kantō but a life or death crisis for Japan itself. No matter how many times Mt. Fuji erupted, it didn't show any signs of quieting down.		The year is 1707 - during the Houei era was the last volcanic eruption of Mt. Fuji and the greatest since the dawn of history. The violent eruption reaching 15 days, it was said that the volcanic ash fell as far as the distant town of Edo. It was not only Kantō but a life or death crisis for Japan itself. No matter how many times Mt. Fuji erupted, it didn't show any signs of quieting down.

	That raging <Ki> finally resulted in the embodiment of one demon beast. The impersonation of Fuji's <ki>. it is certain that was the largest, strongest devilishness that materialized in this country. If one tried to rank it among other demon beasts, the only reference it had would be the legendary monsters, like the eight tail serpent that couldn't be defeated without the help of god's power.		That raging <Ki> finally resulted in the embodiment of one demon beast. The impersonation of Fuji's <ki>. It is certain that was the largest, strongest devilishness that materialized in this country. If one tried to rank it among other demon beasts, the only reference it had would be the legendary monsters, like the eight tail serpent that couldn't be defeated without the help of god's power.

	The beast's roar beckoned eruptions and its stepping feet invoked eruptions. Mowing down everything it touched, it exhausted the limits if tyranny. The ones who sealed it were the yet unknown Tsuwabuki family. A young girl leading the family offered prayers to the King of the Earth Spirits for seven days and seven nights and finally attained that divine protection.		The beast's roar beckoned eruptions and its stepping feet invoked eruptions. Mowing down everything it touched, it exhausted the limits of tyranny. The ones who sealed it were the yet unknown Tsuwabuki family. A young girl leading the family offered prayers to the King of the Earth Spirits for seven days and seven nights and finally attained that divine protection.

	And then, by that divine protection, the girl managed to seal that demon beast. Thus Mt. Fuji calmed down and Japan's peace was protected. And they all lived happily ever after.		And then, by that divine protection, the girl managed to seal that demon beast. Thus Mt. Fuji calmed down and Japan's peace was protected. And they all lived happily ever after.
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	After examining for a short while Ren's expression, Ayumi replied:		After examining for a short while Ren's expression, Ayumi replied:

	"Because someone has to do it"		"Because someone has to do it."

	'''''"But it doesn't have to be you-"'''''		'''''"But it doesn't have to be you-"'''''
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	Ayumi softly touched Ren's lips with her fingers. The boy who unintentionally couldn't keep his mouth shut, she rebuked him gently.		Ayumi softly touched Ren's lips with her fingers. The boy who unintentionally couldn't keep his mouth shut, she rebuked him gently.

	"It's not good saying these kind of things. If you speak filthy words your heart will become filthy too"		"It's not good saying these kind of things. If you speak filthy words your heart will become filthy too."

	"........I'm sorry.........."		"........I'm sorry.........."
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	But, as feared, Ayumi shook her head.		But, as feared, Ayumi shook her head.

	"In my head there are transcripts of another's memories. I don't know how it's been done, though"		"In my head there are transcripts of another's memories. I don't know how it's been done, though."

	Almost like it was somebody else's problem, Ayumi indifferently recited those grand circumstances. Ren finally had the feeling he understood the reason why Ayumi had no attachment to her life. She had nothing to be particular about.		Almost like it was somebody else's problem, Ayumi indifferently recited those grand circumstances. Ren finally had the feeling he understood the reason why Ayumi had no attachment to her life. She had nothing to be particular about.
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	Like telling an unfulfilled dream, Ayumi whispered with a distant look. Toward the ordinary everyone was given as a natural privilege - no, the privilege they took for granted she felt endless longing and envy.		Like telling an unfulfilled dream, Ayumi whispered with a distant look. Toward the ordinary everyone was given as a natural privilege - no, the privilege they took for granted she felt endless longing and envy.

	"The moment I saw the sky when I first ~~felt~~ the residence, I was very surprised. How vast was the sky windows don't limit, Mt. Fuji was so big..."		"The moment I saw the sky when I first left the residence, I was very surprised. How vast was the sky windows don't limit, Mt. Fuji was so big..."

	"Ayumi-chan......"		"Ayumi-chan......"
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	What sort of feelings did she include when she said those words? The words of a girl dreaming, escaping from reality, now that he knew everything, they were unbelievably heavy.		What sort of feelings did she include when she said those words? The words of a girl dreaming, escaping from reality, now that he knew everything, they were unbelievably heavy.

	"-This is hopeless"		"-This is hopeless."

	With a strong determination, Ren muttered in his heart.		With a strong determination, Ren muttered in his heart.
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	His immature sense of justice aroused, Red declared strongly.		His immature sense of justice aroused, Red declared strongly.

	"I will protect Ayumi-chan"		"I will protect Ayumi-chan."

	" - Ren?"		" - Ren?"
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	Embarrassed and blushing Ren invited the girl screwing up his courage.		Embarrassed and blushing Ren invited the girl screwing up his courage.

	"Because - I'll take you no matter where"		"Because - I'll take you no matter where."

	".............."		".............."

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Part 1

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	"Are you cold?"		"Are you cold?"

	"No, I'm fine"		"No, I'm fine."

	Ren showed a smile meant to give her a piece of mind but the next moment that smile became frozen.		Ren showed a smile meant to give her a piece of mind but the next moment that smile became frozen.

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	"I... I am glad that I am alive. Meeting Ren.... Seeing something so beautiful, I...I...from the bottom of my heart...."		"I... I am glad that I am alive. Meeting Ren.... Seeing something so beautiful, I...I...from the bottom of my heart...."
			[[Image:Kaze no Stigma vol 03 121.jpg\|thumb]]

	Unable to bear it in the end, her tears escaped. Shed for the first time in her life, tears of happiness.		Unable to bear it in the end, her tears escaped. Shed for the first time in her life, tears of happiness.
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	"Ayumi-chan!?"		"Ayumi-chan!?"
			[[Image:Kaze no Stigma vol 03 147.jpg\|thumb]]

	In front of Ren's eyes,turning around with a changed expression, were reflected the figures of Ayumi and Mayumi, standing behind her. Embraced her closely from behind, Ayumi's pale complexion became stiff.		In front of Ren's eyes,turning around with a changed expression, were reflected the figures of Ayumi and Mayumi, standing behind her. Embraced her closely from behind, Ayumi's pale complexion became stiff.

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	Underground, and in addition to that, directly under his footprints a spear covered in sand was pushed up.		Underground, and in addition to that, directly under his footprints a spear covered in sand was pushed up.

	If his evasion would have been delayed by one second the spear would have stopped his foot by sewing it. it may be true he avoided the first attack but he had no room for relief. Visibly lying in wait at the spot Ren would come down, several spears sprung up.		If his evasion would have been delayed by one second the spear would have stopped his foot by sewing it. It may be true he avoided the first attack but he had no room for relief. Visibly lying in wait at the spot Ren would come down, several spears sprung up.

	"Kuu- "		"Kuu- "
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	''What to do?''		''What to do?''

	Starting to see gaps one way or another, running in zig-zag to dodge the underground attacks, Ren looked for a breach. At any rate, as long as he is staying on the ground,his disadvantage can't be overcome.		Starting to see gaps one way or another, running in zig-zag to dodge the underground attacks, Ren looked for a breach. At any rate, as long as he is staying on the ground, his disadvantage can't be overcome.

	Continuing to receive one-sided attacks without grasping a counter-attack clue, sooner or later he will receive a fatal blow.		Continuing to receive one-sided attacks without grasping a counter-attack clue, sooner or later he will receive a fatal blow.

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	He thought he himself endured it really well. Surely, big brother would praise him for it. Or - he'll get angry for letting it get that far.		He thought he himself endured it really well. Surely, big brother would praise him for it. Or - he'll get angry for letting it get that far.

	Quietly he held out his right hand and pointed his index finger at Yuuji. And then - without a moment of hesitation he released hs power.		Quietly he held out his right hand and pointed his index finger at Yuuji. And then - without a moment of hesitation he released his power.

	The thin, refined heat ray grazed Yuuji's cheek sticking into the concrete wall. The red hot concrete melted and the wall followed it, crashing.		The thin, refined heat ray grazed Yuuji's cheek sticking into the concrete wall. The red hot concrete melted and the wall followed it, crashing.

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	"W-what to do......."		"W-what to do......."

	Thinking now about it, it was a problem he should have noticed earlier. The winter sea - at night. Seen by girl his age it can't be a pleasing spectacle.Anyway, there was definitely not enough light. But there are at least seven, eight hours until dawn breaks.		Thinking now about it, it was a problem he should have noticed earlier. The winter sea - at night. Seen by girl his age it can't be a pleasing spectacle. Anyway, there was definitely not enough light. But there are at least seven, eight hours until dawn breaks.

	''If I had light....light -?''		''If I had light....light -?''

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	But, as feared, Ayumi shook her head.		But, as feared, Ayumi shook her head.

	"In my head there are transcripts of another's memories.I don't know how it's been done, though"		"In my head there are transcripts of another's memories. I don't know how it's been done, though"

	Almost like it was somebody else's problem, Ayumi indifferently recited those grand circumstances. Ren finally had the feeling he understood the reason why Ayumi had no attachment to her life. She had nothing to be particular about.		Almost like it was somebody else's problem, Ayumi indifferently recited those grand circumstances. Ren finally had the feeling he understood the reason why Ayumi had no attachment to her life. She had nothing to be particular about.
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	-She wanted to see beautiful things-		-She wanted to see beautiful things-

	What sort of feelings did she include when she said those words? The words of a girl dreaming, escaping from reality, no that he knew everything, they were unbelievably heavy.		What sort of feelings did she include when she said those words? The words of a girl dreaming, escaping from reality, now that he knew everything, they were unbelievably heavy.

	"-This is hopeless"		"-This is hopeless"