Kaze no Stigma:Volume3 Chapter 6 - Revision history

86.20.14.91: /* Chapter 6 - Confession underneath the moonlight */

2013-12-26T15:20:18Z

Chapter 6 - Confession underneath the moonlight

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	Ayano and Ren let out fireballs simultaneously aiming at Kureha. Even though it was far inferior to their real power, the people who could oppose it were a very select category.		Ayano and Ren let out fireballs simultaneously aiming at Kureha. Even though it was far inferior to their real power, the people who could oppose it were a very select category.

	But even when faced with such a calorific value, Kureha didn't ~~loose~~ her smile.		But even when faced with such a calorific value, Kureha didn't lose her smile.

	"Fu fu........"		"Fu fu........"
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	With a quiet self-confidence, Ren declared so.		With a quiet self-confidence, Ren declared so.

	"For me alone it would be impossible to do but Nii-sama and Nee-sama are lending me their power. If it's those two, no matter what they deal with, they won't ~~loose~~. They will surely win."		"For me alone it would be impossible to do but Nii-sama and Nee-sama are lending me their power. If it's those two, no matter what they deal with, they won't lose. They will surely win."

	"But - but - !!"		"But - but - !!"
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	For some reason having the attitude of a cornered person, Ayumi searched for words of rejection.		For some reason having the attitude of a cornered person, Ayumi searched for words of rejection.

	"What will it happen if you ~~loose~~? Mt. Fuji will erupt, you know! I would rather die than see that! Because you see, from the beginning I was made for that purpose!"		"What will it happen if you lose? Mt. Fuji will erupt, you know! I would rather die than see that! Because you see, from the beginning I was made for that purpose!"

	"That sort of thing is not worth worrying about."		"That sort of thing is not worth worrying about."
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	"I wonder about that."		"I wonder about that."

	At the same time, Kazuma and Kureha said the exact opposite words. All looks converged on the Kureha that even now still didn't ~~loose~~ her composure.		At the same time, Kazuma and Kureha said the exact opposite words. All looks converged on the Kureha that even now still didn't lose her composure.

	"Surely I don't have enough confidence to defeat all three of you and to take back the sacrifices. But, I'm pretty confident I can escape."		"Surely I don't have enough confidence to defeat all three of you and to take back the sacrifices. But, I'm pretty confident I can escape."
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	Mayumi's words had the opposite effect - that exact phrase made Ayumi decide. Including force, she shook off Mayumi's hand.		Mayumi's words had the opposite effect - that exact phrase made Ayumi decide. Including force, she shook off Mayumi's hand.

	"It's not yet decided that they are going to ~~loose~~!"		"It's not yet decided that they are going to lose!"

	"They can't possibly win!"		"They can't possibly win!"

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2013-12-26T15:18:51Z

Part 5

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	Folding her arms arrogantly, Mayumi sneered at the foolish doll.		Folding her arms arrogantly, Mayumi sneered at the foolish doll.

	"Though you're my imperfect clone I don't want you to ~~loose~~ from such a thing."		"Though you're my imperfect clone I don't want you to lose from such a thing."

	"..........."		"..........."

86.20.14.91: /* Part 1 */

2013-12-26T14:17:49Z

Part 1

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	Together with a heavy sigh Kazuma asked them.		Together with a heavy sigh Kazuma asked them.

	"...........you two, what the heck you ~~came~~ here for?"		"...........you two, what the heck did you come here for?"

	"Well you see, we came here on the spur of the moment. We didn't have time to investigate."		"Well you see, we came here on the spur of the moment. We didn't have time to investigate."

89.77.6.77: /* Part 5 */

2013-11-11T16:15:03Z

Part 5

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	As if she was turned off, she suddenly lost all her senses. The consciousness that sunk into the darkness, no matter how much she called out to it, her body already doesn't have enough force to respond to it. She slowly collapsed forward -		As if she was turned off, she suddenly lost all her senses. The consciousness that sunk into the darkness, no matter how much she called out to it, her body already doesn't have enough force to respond to it. She slowly collapsed forward -

	"What are you doing."		"What are you doing?"

	On the verge of collapsing front-faced on the ground a stretched out hand from the back sized the nape of her neck and pulled back Ayumi's body. Her awaken consciousness recognized the silhouette of her savior.		On the verge of collapsing front-faced on the ground a stretched out hand from the back sized the nape of her neck and pulled back Ayumi's body. Her awaken consciousness recognized the silhouette of her savior.
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	The wind blade released by Kazuma cut all four of Zenon's legs. Not letting the moment it was disconected from the earth escape, he pushed up the limbless body into the sky.		The wind blade released by Kazuma cut all four of Zenon's legs. Not letting the moment it was disconected from the earth escape, he pushed up the limbless body into the sky.

	As long as Zenon comes in contact with the ground it has an infinite amount of power. So, in order to defeat it, all its links with the earth must be severed, attack it with the greatest amount of power while in that state, and before it can regenerate destroy is so that not even a fragment of its existence is left behind.		As long as Zenon comes in contact with the ground it has an infinite amount of power. So, in order to defeat it, all its links with the earth must be severed, attack it with the greatest amount of power while in that state, and before it can regenerate destroy it so that not even a fragment of its existence is left behind.

	That chance, doesn't appear very often. There was only this moment.		That chance, doesn't appear very often. There was only this moment.
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	In accordance with Kazuma's instruction, Ayano slipped right under Zenon. While in the Hassō-no-kamae stance, she put all her remaining power on the single stroke and swung it with all her strength.		In accordance with Kazuma's instruction, Ayano slipped right under Zenon. While in the Hassō-no-kamae stance, she put all her remaining power on the single stroke and swung it with all her strength.

	The plasma whose caloric value rivaled that of the sun ~~sunk~~ inside Zenon's shell. And then, from overhead, the descending Ren released all his power.		The plasma whose caloric value rivaled that of the sun sank inside Zenon's shell. And then, from overhead, the descending Ren released all his power.

	"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHH!!!"		"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHH!!!"

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2013-11-11T15:50:51Z

Part 4

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	"As if I know. Maybe it teleported."		"As if I know. Maybe it teleported."

	Kazuma casually answered Ayano's question. It seems that ~~this~~ even by using his power of perception this man couldn't capture its movement process. The question on how it really crossed over the space was recurrent.		Kazuma casually answered Ayano's question. It seems that even by using his power of perception this man couldn't capture its movement process. The question on how it really crossed over the space was recurrent.

	"Please stop it.......making that stupid appearance....."		"Please stop it.......making that stupid appearance....."
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	Obeying Kazuma's direction, Ayano speedily retreated. There was no pursuit.		Obeying Kazuma's direction, Ayano speedily retreated. There was no pursuit.

	"Wait a second, that's absurdly hard! How did you ~~managed~~ to smash its head?"		"Wait a second, that's absurdly hard! How did you manage to smash its head?"

	"No, it would turn bad if I would attempt it a second time."		"No, it would turn bad if I would attempt it a second time."
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	Ayano looked up at Kazuma with a pale complexion.		Ayano looked up at Kazuma with a pale complexion.

	"Does that ~~means~~ it's evolving?"		"Does that mean it's evolving?"

	"Instead of evolving maybe adapting oneself would be more appropriate - well, it's the same no matter what we call it....this is bad."		"Instead of evolving maybe adapting oneself would be more appropriate - well, it's the same no matter what we call it....this is bad."
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	Coincident with the shout, Kazuma grabbed Ren and jumped with all his strength. Ayano too, left that place with all her energy.		Coincident with the shout, Kazuma grabbed Ren and jumped with all his strength. Ayano too, left that place with all her energy.

	Immediately following that, something invisible ~~run~~ through the place the trio stood. That something drilled the thick sea of trees opening a straight road in it.		Immediately following that, something invisible ran through the place the trio stood. That something drilled the thick sea of trees opening a straight road in it.

	The Tsuwabuki mansion placed up ahead in a straight line was annihilated without trace. Without using an explosion or blaze - literally annihilated.		The Tsuwabuki mansion placed up ahead in a straight line was annihilated without trace. Without using an explosion or blaze - literally annihilated.
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	Ayumi drew near, completely overturning the power relationship.		Ayumi drew near, completely overturning the power relationship.

	"If you were to go now and gather the remaining Chijutsushi do you that this newly set free Zenon will let you do it? If yo want to do it, now is the time! If there's the two of us surely - "		"If you were to go now and gather the remaining Chijutsushi do you think that this newly set free Zenon will let you do it? If you want to do it, now is the time! If there's the two of us surely - "

	"No! I don't want to die!"		"No! I don't want to die!"
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	They were not done yet. Chopping down rock snakes, they even managed to injure Zenon. But that was immediately healed.		They were not done yet. Chopping down rock snakes, they even managed to injure Zenon. But that was immediately healed.

	It was as if swinging their fists at the ground.Because the opponent was too large, there wasn't a meaning in attacking it. Even with a meaning there was result from attacking it.		It was as if swinging their fists at the ground. Because the opponent was too large, there wasn't a meaning in attacking it. Even with a meaning there was no result from attacking it.

	They didn't even had a match. The current status doesn't allow for a competition. One-sidedly scraping off their physical strength, ~~its~~ only waiting for a chance to annihilate them - they were in the midst of such a hopeless situation. When Ayumi started participating in the war.		They didn't even had a match. The current status doesn't allow for a competition. One-sidedly scraping off their physical strength, it's only waiting for a chance to annihilate them - they were in the midst of such a hopeless situation. When Ayumi started participating in the war.

	"Ayumi-chan?"		"Ayumi-chan?"
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	"Ok."		"Ok."

	Nodding deeply, Kazuma closed his eyes. Several seconds after - the pair of eyes that showed a second time were ~~dyeied~~ in a transparent blue. That was the carved seal engraved by the spirit Lord of the Wind. The wind spirits playing in the sky ~~was~~ the evidence that he was allowed to control everything.		Nodding deeply, Kazuma closed his eyes. Several seconds after - the pair of eyes that showed a second time were dyed in a transparent blue. That was the carved seal engraved by the spirit Lord of the Wind. The wind spirits playing in the sky were the evidence that he was allowed to control everything.

	Holding a power that tremendously magnified in his hands, the supreme ruler of the sky fearlessly laughed.		Holding a power that tremendously magnified in his hands, the supreme ruler of the sky fearlessly laughed.

	"So, let's go - the spirit of reincarnation from just one mountain, smash it to pieces until there's nothing left!"		"So, let's go - the spirit of reincarnation from just one mountain, smash it to pieces until there's nothing left!"


	=== Part 5 ===		=== Part 5 ===

89.77.6.77: /* Part 3 */

2013-11-11T13:35:02Z

Part 3

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	At Kazuma's weird speaking style, Ayano asked from the back.		At Kazuma's weird speaking style, Ayano asked from the back.

	"Hey, you ~~find~~ something out while pursuing Ren, right? If you did, just say it already!"		"Hey, you found something out while pursuing Ren, right? If you did, just say it already!"

	"Oh, is that true?"		"Oh, is that true?"

	Ren thought he didn't simply ~~came to~~ just to spy on him. Kureha too waited with great interest Kazuma's reply.		Ren thought he didn't simply come just to spy on him. Kureha too waited with great interest for Kazuma's reply.

	"There's nothing to be found out."		"There's nothing to be found out."
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	"Source of supply?"		"Source of supply?"

	"That's right. From where did she ~~got~~ her hands on it, how did she ~~handed~~ it out to Yuuji. The existence that is the origin of the unusual talent improper for a Chijutsushi- "		"That's right. From where did she get her hands on it, how did she hand it out to Yuuji. The existence that is the origin of the unusual talent improper for a Chijutsushi- "

	At those last words Kureha visibly frowned.		At those last words Kureha visibly frowned.

	"I believe I told I ~~have~~ this power since I ~~was~~ born."		"I believe I told I had this power since I had been born."

	"Since you were born?"		"Since you were born?"

	At Kureha's words,Kazuma laughed scornfully.		At Kureha's words, Kazuma laughed scornfully.

	"And you didn't try to explain it? What can alter a Chijutsushi so that she is able to control gravity? You're not a Chijutsushi. On the contrary, I think you're not human!"		"And you didn't try to explain it? What can alter a Chijutsushi so that she is able to control gravity? You're not a Chijutsushi. On the contrary, I think you're not human!"
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	"Ma- Mayumi-sama....?", Ayumi murmured in a daze, without understanding the situation.		"Ma- Mayumi-sama....?", Ayumi murmured in a daze, without understanding the situation.

	Did she just become ~~they~~ ally?		Did she just become their ally?

	"Look, Ayumi is right there. Catch her quickly and resume the ceremony."		"Look, Ayumi is right there. Catch her quickly and resume the ceremony."
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	"Is protecting that information valuable enough for me to step on your head and break your skull?"		"Is protecting that information valuable enough for me to step on your head and break your skull?"

	Now that he said it, ~~the're~~ no merit to hold on the information. Her rejection was nothing more but her disposition.		Now that he said it, there was no merit to hold on the information. Her rejection was nothing more but her disposition.

	"Kureha's purpose is- ", she said in a sulky tone, already without calling her sister.		"Kureha's purpose is- ", she said in a sulky tone, already without calling her sister.

	"To make all of the Demon ~~Beasts~~ power her own."		"To make all of the Demon Beast's power her own."

	" -!!"		" -!!"
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	"The Demon Beast is the embodying of Mt. Fuji's life energy right? That's not something compatible with a human container. Instead of taking the power isn't it true that the power would take her?"		"The Demon Beast is the embodying of Mt. Fuji's life energy right? That's not something compatible with a human container. Instead of taking the power isn't it true that the power would take her?"

	"Well, while I certainly do believe ~~this~~ it's reckless, it's not something really unusual, right? People that tried to get their hands on godly powers, demon beasts et cetera you can find a dime at a dozen."		"Well, while I certainly do believe that it's reckless, it's not something really unusual, right? People that tried to get their hands on godly powers, demon beasts et cetera you can find a dime at a dozen."

	Even if it seems Ayano doesn't understand, Kazuma continues only in his mind. Just like Kureha said, for a magician it was only natural to wish for an even bigger power. The only ones who didn't think like that were those like the Kannagis and that was because they were already possessing a mighty power.		Even if it seems Ayano doesn't understand, Kazuma continues only in his mind. Just like Kureha said, for a magician it was only natural to wish for an even bigger power. The only ones who didn't think like that were those like the Kannagis and that was because they were already possessing a mighty power.
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	She understood the theory but even so it's impossible for Kureha to win.		She understood the theory but even so it's impossible for Kureha to win.

	"Of course, at the present time its real form it's extremely big. Even Kureha and Yuuji put together probably doesn't even reach 1% of the main body.But that's where the sealing ceremony comes in."		"Of course, at the present time its real form it's extremely big. Even Kureha and Yuuji put together probably doesn't even reach 1% of the main body. But that's where the sealing ceremony comes in."

	All present turned their eyes on Ayumi. And then, on Mayumi.		All present turned their eyes on Ayumi. And then, on Mayumi.
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	All the people present, except for Kureha looked at Kazuma with the same intent. But, Kazuma shrugged his shoulders as if he didn't feel all the pressure gathered around him and showed a somewhat bitter smile.		All the people present, except for Kureha looked at Kazuma with the same intent. But, Kazuma shrugged his shoulders as if he didn't feel all the pressure gathered around him and showed a somewhat bitter smile.

	"No, if you were to stop the ceremony I think the seal ~~will~~ be broken immediately. That's why I have a better timing. Kureha, you're the one to blame. You should have said such a thing sooner!"		"No, if you were to stop the ceremony I think the seal would be broken immediately. That's why I have a better timing. Kureha, you're the one to blame. You should have said such a thing sooner!"

	All of a sudden his tone became overly familiar. But of course, just by that it's impossible to deceive them.		All of a sudden his tone became overly familiar. But of course, just by that it's impossible to deceive them.
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	"Onee-sama...."		"Onee-sama...."

	"Aren't you fine? Loved by all, protected by all. Then, if no one loved me, if no one protected me, I had no choice but to become stronger. To become stronger than anyone else! Is that what you call a sin? Are you, the one that stole ''everything'' ~~for~~ me trying to blame me!?"		"Aren't you fine? Loved by all, protected by all. Then, if no one loved me, if no one protected me, I had no choice but to become stronger. To become stronger than anyone else! Is that what you call a sin? Are you, the one that stole ''everything'' from me trying to blame me!?"

	Kureha screaming in bitterness - without being able to look at her, Mayumi cast her eyes down.		Kureha screaming in bitterness - without being able to look at her, Mayumi cast her eyes down.
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	High in the sky, there was Kureha's body divided cross-wise. As expected, holding herself together was difficult - she was shaking unsteady.		High in the sky, there was Kureha's body divided cross-wise. As expected, holding herself together was difficult - she was shaking unsteady.

	"Don't make it someone else's fault. It was all your decision. Closing yourself in because you were too afraid to deal with other people, choosing isolation once and again, wasn't it all ~~you~~?", Kazuma shouted unable to control his words.		"Don't make it someone else's fault. It was all your decision. Closing yourself in because you were too afraid to deal with other people, choosing isolation once and again, wasn't it all your choice?", Kazuma shouted unable to control his words.

	Does he himself realize? That Kureha is nothing else but his own twisted mirror?		Does he himself realize? That Kureha is nothing else but his own twisted mirror?
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	"No, that wasn't random bullshit but I have no proof. Just pilling up one hypothesis after another, a reasoning that can't be verified by proof is the same as trash. If you gulp it down so easily you'll be seen as an idiot."		"No, that wasn't random bullshit but I have no proof. Just pilling up one hypothesis after another, a reasoning that can't be verified by proof is the same as trash. If you gulp it down so easily you'll be seen as an idiot."

	"Then, why did you ~~said~~ all those things?"		"Then, why did you say all those things?"

	To Ren's timid questioning Kazuma answered exasperated holding his head.		To Ren's timid questioning Kazuma answered exasperated holding his head.
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	Of course, Kazuma didn't pay attention to their reaction.		Of course, Kazuma didn't pay attention to their reaction.



	=== Part 4 ===		=== Part 4 ===

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Part 2

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	".........................."		".........................."

	Maybe because she didn't really have time to think about it, Ayumi didn't instantly ~~took~~ Ren's hand.		Maybe because she didn't really have time to think about it, Ayumi didn't instantly take Ren's hand.

	"Why?"		"Why?"
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	Kazuma nodded, turned his eyes on one the Chijutsushi standing there petrified and arrogantly commanded him.		Kazuma nodded, turned his eyes on one the Chijutsushi standing there petrified and arrogantly commanded him.

	"Do it. If you obey I won't 80% kill you, I'll drop it to 50% ~~percent~~."		"Do it. If you obey I won't 80% kill you, I'll drop it to 50%."

	"Do- don't screw arou- kyaa!"		"Do- don't screw arou- kyaa!"

	The man could't finish those courageous words of resistance. The atmosphere turned rigid ~~hit~~ the man's face and his nose sunk ten centimeters into his cranium.		The man could't finish those courageous words of resistance. The atmosphere turned rigid as the man's face was hit and his nose sunk ten centimeters into his cranium.

	"........is this an 80% kill?"		"........is this an 80% kill?"
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	The crystal mass slipped off in accordance with the diagonal cross-section. Furthermore, Kazuma cut that too.		The crystal mass slipped off in accordance with the diagonal cross-section. Furthermore, Kazuma cut that too.

	Without injuring the body inside, the wind blades scrapped off only the crystal. By the time she fell to the ground, there wasn't even a fragment of crystal sticking to ~~Ayumi~~'s body.		Without injuring the body inside, the wind blades scrapped off only the crystal. By the time she fell to the ground, there wasn't even a fragment of crystal sticking to Mayumi's body.

	"As expected of Nii-sama! This was amazing, righ- "		"As expected of Nii-sama! This was amazing, righ- "
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	"......was there a need to go so far?"		"......was there a need to go so far?"

	"I wonder. First of all, this was the quickest and ~~easier~~ way.", Kazuma stated calmly without showing a particle of introspection.		"I wonder. First of all, this was the quickest and easiest way.", Kazuma stated calmly without showing a particle of introspection.

	"Let's get out already. There's no more fun to be ~~had~~ here."		"Let's get out already. There's no more fun to be here."

	"......that so?"		"......that so?"

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2013-11-11T12:25:28Z

Part 1

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	Last night he confirmed Ayumi's silhouette. It wasn't difficult to follow that presence.		Last night he confirmed Ayumi's silhouette. It wasn't difficult to follow that presence.

	After walking a few minutes, guided by the voice of the wind, the trio came to the deepest part of the mansion, in ~~font~~ of the cave shrine.		After walking a few minutes, guided by the voice of the wind, the trio came to the deepest part of the mansion, in front of the cave shrine.

	"Welcome to our family's greatest sanctuary."		"Welcome to our family's greatest sanctuary."
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	From Ayano's back, feeling disturbed, a voice that kept it's cool reached. Always calm and steady in all respects, a low voice that she grew accustomed to hear.		From Ayano's back, feeling disturbed, a voice that kept it's cool reached. Always calm and steady in all respects, a low voice that she grew accustomed to hear.

	"Kazuma!? What did just ~~happened~~?"		"Kazuma!? What did just happen?"

	Casually controlling Ayano's question, Kazuma started walking.		Casually controlling Ayano's question, Kazuma started walking.
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	"...........I think that depends on the power."		"...........I think that depends on the power."

	Ayano was unable to follow those two's indifferent exchange. She couldn't understand the omitted parts from their own self-evident truth.		Ayano was unable to follow those two's indifferent exchange. She couldn't understand the omitted parts from their own self-evident truth.

	"Hey!"		"Hey!"
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	"We don't have time to carefully work over the battle plan, you know right? Because the other side is trying to waste time."		"We don't have time to carefully work over the battle plan, you know right? Because the other side is trying to waste time."

	Ayano too observed Kureha. In all this time they were conversing, no matter how much opportunities she had for attacking she didn't and only stood in front of the shrine. As if she doesn't proactively ~~wants~~ to fight.		Ayano too observed Kureha. In all this time they were conversing, no matter how much opportunities she had for attacking she didn't and only stood in front of the shrine. As if she doesn't proactively want to fight.

	Is she buying time? For the Tsuwabuki people to do so, there can only be one reason.		Is she buying time? For the Tsuwabuki people to do so, there can only be one reason.
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	"Where is the part I ''may feel fainttttttttttt''...................?"		"Where is the part I ''may feel fainttttttttttt''...................?"



	=== Part 2 ===		=== Part 2 ===

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	"I see - that's like saying there's no more room for discussion - well then - let's start shall we?"		"I see - that's like saying there's no more room for discussion - well then - let's start shall we?"
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	As if encouraged by Kureha's composure, the Chijutsushi started to prepare for battle. In response to it, so did Kazuma's side.		As if encouraged by Kureha's composure, the Chijutsushi started to prepare for battle. In response to it, so did Kazuma's side.
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	"No! Definitely no!", screamed Mayumi blocking her ears. Closing her eyes firmly as if to shut away reality, she shook her head and crouched down like a helpless child.		"No! Definitely no!", screamed Mayumi blocking her ears. Closing her eyes firmly as if to shut away reality, she shook her head and crouched down like a helpless child.
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	Overlooking Mayumi refusing to listen to anything, Ayumi let out a sigh.		Overlooking Mayumi refusing to listen to anything, Ayumi let out a sigh.

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	That chance, doesn't appear very often. There was only this moment.		That chance, doesn't appear very often. There was only this moment.

	"We finish it off right ~~not~~!", Kazuma shouted, while forcibly throwing away Ren body, found near-by.		"We finish it off right now!", Kazuma shouted, while forcibly throwing away Ren body, found near-by.

	Surprised for just one moment he quickly understood Kazuma's plan and he converged all his power at one point.		Surprised for just one moment he quickly understood Kazuma's plan and he converged all his power at one point.
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	A hard wind exceeding the speed of sound - no, the intent to kill carried by the wind annihilated the countless fragments until none remained.		A hard wind exceeding the speed of sound - no, the intent to kill carried by the wind annihilated the countless fragments until none remained.

	Literally annihilated. Without ~~not~~ even leaving dust, all traces of Zenon's existence disappeared.		Literally annihilated. Without even leaving dust, all traces of Zenon's existence disappeared.

	"Aahh - shit!", spit out Kazuma, tired.		"Aahh - shit!", spit out Kazuma, tired.
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	''But.....I can't do that.''		''But.....I can't do that.''

	He had the obligation to see the end with his own eyes. Because although he knew everything he didn't stop it.		He had the obligation to see the end with his own eyes. Because although he knew he did everything he could he didn't stop it.

	''We can't save can we? Me and you too....''		''We can't save can we? Me and you too....''
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	"Ayumi-chan! Ayumi-chan! ~~Get~~ yourself together!"		"Ayumi-chan! Ayumi-chan! Pull yourself together!"

	Holding Ayumi's completely limp body, Ren called out to her with a frantic expression.		Holding Ayumi's completely limp body, Ren called out to her with a frantic expression.
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	"I'm sorry.....I....I wanted more......"		"I'm sorry.....I....I wanted more......"

	~~Mayumi~~ slowly shook her head. As if saying ''it's not Ren's fault''.		Ayumi slowly shook her head. As if saying ''it's not Ren's fault''.

	"Listen, Ren......in the end, I have only one wish........"		"Listen, Ren......in the end, I have only one wish........"
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	Different from the same way she was when he first met her, she doesn't think it's fine to die because she has no reason to live. Having finished what she had to do, dying with that satisfaction, her eyes were full of that pride.		Different from the same way she was when he first met her, she doesn't think it's fine to die because she has no reason to live. Having finished what she had to do, dying with that satisfaction, her eyes were full of that pride.

	"I....don't regret it.....you see, I decided it by myself. Just like Ren said, by my own will, I chose what to do. That's why.....that's why.....understand. I'm not a ''pitiable child''. I can stick out by chest against anyone, I lived, that kind of life...."		"I....don't regret it.....you see, I decided it by myself. Just like Ren said, by my own will, I chose what to do. That's why.....that's why.....understand. I'm not a ''pitiable child''. I can stick out my chest against anyone, I lived, that kind of life...."

	"Yes....yes."		"Yes....yes."