Kaze no Stigma:Volume4 Chapter 1 - Revision history

86.20.14.91: /* Chapter 1 - A certain cameraman's day */

2013-12-26T23:31:41Z

Chapter 1 - A certain cameraman's day

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	"It doesn't concern me. Well, as for the obligation I have as a citizen, shall I inform the police?"		"It doesn't concern me. Well, as for the obligation I have as a citizen, shall I inform the police?"

	Taking out his cellphone, he pressed the buttons. But, contrary to his words he didn't press ~~911~~.		Taking out his cellphone, he pressed the buttons. But, contrary to his words he didn't press 119.

	"Kirika? There is knocked down half naked suspicious person at the south entrance of Shinjuku. If you catch it, you may hear something interesting. Bye."		"Kirika? There is knocked down half naked suspicious person at the south entrance of Shinjuku. If you catch it, you may hear something interesting. Bye."

74.100.62.225: /* Part 3 */

2013-11-16T08:53:12Z

Part 3

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	Even if someone were to deny it, for him that was the absolute truth and he found no reason to hesitate to respond to the ''undeserved'' persecution with ''rightful'' retribution.		Even if someone were to deny it, for him that was the absolute truth and he found no reason to hesitate to respond to the ''undeserved'' persecution with ''rightful'' retribution.

	"Yes, it got ~~trough~~!"		"Yes, it got through!"

	Utsumi, standing on top of the desks, reached the ventilation fan's frame. His body trembling in dark joy, he raised a small sound of joy.		Utsumi, standing on top of the desks, reached the ventilation fan's frame. His body trembling in dark joy, he raised a small sound of joy.

Ayame: /* Part 3 */

2013-09-25T22:58:20Z

Part 3

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	He stretched his neck to the limit, trying to peek behind the mystery veil but -		He stretched his neck to the limit, trying to peek behind the mystery veil but -




	[[File:Kaze no Stigma vol 04 045.jpg\|thumb\|]]		[[File:Kaze no Stigma vol 04 045.jpg\|thumb\|]]




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	"Yeah, see you tomorrow."		"Yeah, see you tomorrow."

	A commonplace greeting. Smiling at each other. Without foundation, both believed that the tomorrow that will come will be the same as today. At that hour, they still thought so.		A commonplace greeting. Smiling at each other. Without foundation, both believed that the tomorrow that will come will be the same as today. At that hour, they still thought so.




	=== Part 4 ===		=== Part 4 ===

Ayame at 22:57, 25 September 2013

2013-09-25T22:57:48Z

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	He stretched his neck to the limit, trying to peek behind the mystery veil but -		He stretched his neck to the limit, trying to peek behind the mystery veil but -




			[[File:Kaze no Stigma vol 04 045.jpg\|thumb\|]]




	Together with a crash resounding all around his cranium, his field of vision was plunged into darkness.		Together with a crash resounding all around his cranium, his field of vision was plunged into darkness.

Ayame at 22:55, 25 September 2013

2013-09-25T22:55:13Z

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	Cross-examined by Kazuma, Ayano's cheeks lightly colored and smiled while showing her tongue.		Cross-examined by Kazuma, Ayano's cheeks lightly colored and smiled while showing her tongue.

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	"I drank it."		"I drank it."

Tortex: I replaced Kakei with Hapki from Korean since there is no sign of Kakei being related to martial arts, the Chinese term being Aiki as well. + other editing

2013-09-17T21:08:36Z

I replaced Kakei with Hapki from Korean since there is no sign of Kakei being related to martial arts, the Chinese term being Aiki as well. + other editing

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	"You, don't behave selfishly with the social standing of a rich woman! Return my Oolong tea!"		"You, don't behave selfishly with the social standing of a rich woman! Return my Oolong tea!"

	".....Still, I don't you think it's ~~that~~ unsightly......" Ayano murmured, dejected by the excessive cheapness.		".....Still, don't you think that it's unsightly......" Ayano murmured, dejected by the excessive cheapness.

	Rare nowadays, she was full of disappointment.		Rare nowadays, she was full of disappointment.
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	As for Ayano, she was conceited about the fact that Kazuma was her partner. More than Kirika, she was far more helpful. She fought for the sake of Kazuma.		As for Ayano, she was conceited about the fact that Kazuma was her partner. More than Kirika, she was far more helpful. She fought for the sake of Kazuma.

	''"It's fine because it's Ayano"''		''"It's fine because it's Ayano."''

	He never told her such words, not even once.		He never told her such words, not even once.
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	With a red face and clouded eyes, as if fever made her delirious, the girl slowly shook her head.		With a red face and clouded eyes, as if fever made her delirious, the girl slowly shook her head.

	"I see. Then, take ~~car~~.e"		"I see. Then, take care."

	Not really thinking about it, Nanase started walking - aiming at the tennis court.		Not really thinking about it, Nanase started walking - aiming at the tennis court.
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	"Hey, he's still coming?"		"Hey, he's still coming?"

	A second year in the tennis club, Sughino Mie murmured so, ~~not pleased~~ from the bottom of her heart. Before her eyes, sticking to the tennis court's fence, a short and fat shadow was peeking.		A second year in the tennis club, Sughino Mie murmured so, displeased from the bottom of her heart. Before her eyes, sticking to the tennis court's fence, a short and fat shadow was peeking.

	Just by looking, he was a suspicious man.		Just by looking, he was a suspicious man.
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	Weirdly stared at by Utsumi, pressing his shutter as if possessed, the girls were murmuring between themselves.		Weirdly stared at by Utsumi, pressing his shutter as if possessed, the girls were murmuring between themselves.

	As if hiding behind her back the first years that have just joined the club, revealed their thought when looking for the ~~firs~~ time at the ominous living creature.		As if hiding behind her back the first years that have just joined the club, revealed their thought when looking for the first time at the ominous living creature.

	"Se- senpai......what is ''that''? "		"Se- senpai......what is ''that''?"

	"That's a pervert"		"That's a pervert."

	Mie immediately replied with no hesitation. That answer was something the first years, who didn't know the circumstance, could't comprehend but just because of that, their disgust and dread didn't soften.		Mie immediately replied with no hesitation. That answer was something the first years, who didn't know the circumstance, could't comprehend but just because of that, their disgust and dread didn't soften.
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	And then -		And then -

	~~GASyAN~~!		GASYAN!

	An ominous sound interrupted Utsumi's triumphant speech. His camera, rolling on the ground, was trampled upon with all her strength by Nanase.		An ominous sound interrupted Utsumi's triumphant speech. His camera, rolling on the ground, was trampled upon with all her strength by Nanase.
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	With a pose similar to Munch's Scream, Utsumi shouted.		With a pose similar to Munch's Scream, Utsumi shouted.

	"Ah, ah, a"		"Ah, ah, a..."

	Leaking out as murmurs, as if his soul escaped his body, he looked up at Nanase in blank amazement.		Leaking out as murmurs, as if his soul escaped his body, he looked up at Nanase in blank amazement.
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	Ten seconds after, the club's door was opened for a second time and all the girls in the club rushed out with rough steps. They speedily encircled Utsumi and glared at him with eyes burning in anger.		Ten seconds after, the club's door was opened for a second time and all the girls in the club rushed out with rough steps. They speedily encircled Utsumi and glared at him with eyes burning in anger.

	A bit later the first years came out of the club-room. The reason they were late could be clearly seen. They collected the lynching tools. As expected they avoided the rackets, the emphasis was on the mop. But one person was holding a ~~bettered~~ metal bat taken from somewhere.		A bit later the first years came out of the club-room. The reason they were late could be clearly seen. They collected the lynching tools. As expected they avoided the rackets, the emphasis was on the mop. But one person was holding a battered metal bat taken from somewhere.

	".....Thank you, Nanase-san. That's enough," Mie said in a restrained voice.		".....Thank you, Nanase-san. That's enough." Mie said in a restrained voice.

	"Yeah."		"Yeah."
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	''"Should I stop it?"''		''"Should I stop it?"''

	"It's fine"		"It's fine."

	As if reading Nanase's thoughts, a smiling voice could be heard from her side. Turning her face around, before she knew, the one that commanded the punishment, Mie stood beside her.		As if reading Nanase's thoughts, a smiling voice could be heard from her side. Turning her face around, before she knew, the one that commanded the punishment, Mie stood beside her.
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	"Na - na - se."		"Na - na - se."

	Being spoken to in such a harsh voice, Nanase didn't show any sign of being perturbed. While steadily chewing her ~~the~~ fries she just put in her mouth, she declared as a matter of course.		Being spoken to in such a harsh voice, Nanase didn't show any sign of being perturbed. While steadily chewing her fries she just put in her mouth, she declared as a matter of course.

	"I told you I'm in the middle of eating. You were raising dust."		"I told you I'm in the middle of eating. You were raising dust."
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	"Yu - ka - ri...."		"Yu - ka - ri...."

	"Wh - a - t?"		"Wh ~ a ~ t?"

	Contrary to Ayano's dark tone, Yukari's reply didn't have an atom of darkness. The song-like tone felt like the elegance of a bright spring.		Contrary to Ayano's dark tone, Yukari's reply didn't have an atom of darkness. The song-like tone felt like the elegance of a bright spring.
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	Ayano let out a low, small whisper. It seems it was lost in wind but it was the kind of sentence that would definitely reach the other party.		Ayano let out a low, small whisper. It seems it was lost in wind but it was the kind of sentence that would definitely reach the other party.

	The tiptoes of Ayano's ~~fingers~~ placed on the floor, lightly scratched the concrete.		The tiptoes of Ayano's feet placed on the floor, lightly scratched the concrete.

	When the few moments before the strife began expanding over and over - at that time -		When the few moments before the strife began expanding over and over - at that time -
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	"Oh, it's open!"		"Oh, it's open!"

	Several ~~boy~~ came to the rooftop with a basket ball. It seems they wanted to exercise some after eating.		Several boys came to the rooftop with a basket ball. It seems they wanted to exercise some after eating.

	The minute that the door was opened Ayano and Yukari returned to their former positions so fast it didn't even leave an afterimage.		The minute that the door was opened Ayano and Yukari returned to their former positions so fast it didn't even leave an afterimage.
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	The boy in the front - apparently a first year - finally perceived Ayano's group. His eyes opened wide in surprise.		The boy in the front - apparently a first year - finally perceived Ayano's group. His eyes opened wide in surprise.

	"Shi- ~~shinomiya~~-san? Kudo-san and- and even Kannagi-san?"		"Shi- Shinomiya-san? Kudo-san and- and even Kannagi-san?"

	The good fortune of being able to see the Academy's top three beautiful girls in the same place made the boy's face become loose. On the faces of the boys following him, an expression of supreme bliss floated.		The good fortune of being able to see the Academy's top three beautiful girls in the same place made the boy's face become loose. On the faces of the boys following him, an expression of supreme bliss floated.
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	"How to put this - both of you have a tremendous skill in hiding your true selves."		"How to put this - both of you have a tremendous skill in hiding your true selves."

	"Isn't it fine? There're all happy," Yukari replied with a nonchalant face.		"Isn't it fine? There're all happy.", Yukari replied with a nonchalant face.

	Ayano didn't reply, on account of resuming her lunch.		Ayano didn't reply, on account of resuming her lunch.
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	"Were they?"		"Were they?"

	"Yes," Yukari declared with no doubt.		"Yes.", Yukari declared with no doubt.

	That was an information unavailable to a simple student but neither Ayano nor Nanase were suspicious about it. Frankly this girl, without changing her gentle exterior appearance, or maybe in accordance with her image was randomly well connected.		That was an information unavailable to a simple student but neither Ayano nor Nanase were suspicious about it. Frankly this girl, without changing her gentle exterior appearance, or maybe in accordance with her image was randomly well connected.

Tortex: I replaced Kakei with Hapki from Korean since there is no sign of Kakei being related to martial arts, the Chinese term being Aiki as well. + other editing

2013-09-17T20:29:04Z

I replaced Kakei with Hapki from Korean since there is no sign of Kakei being related to martial arts, the Chinese term being Aiki as well. + other editing

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	=== Part 1 ===		=== Part 1 ===

	"~~Uugh~~, why are you always like that?"		"Ugh, why are you always like that?"

	"Don't say vague words such as ''like that''. Was there a problem?"		"Don't say vague words such as ''like that''. Was there a problem?"
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	"Ah."		"Ah."

	Belatedly realizing ~~the~~ became the target of attention, the girl's face became colored with shame.		Belatedly realizing she became the target of attention, the girl's face became colored with shame.

	"You're the center of attention."		"You're the center of attention."
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	Being too serious and having pride towards herself as a practitioner, Ayano couldn't forgive Kazuma's attitude.		Being too serious and having pride towards herself as a practitioner, Ayano couldn't forgive Kazuma's attitude.

	"J- just stop it already ~~you~~ you low-life scoundrel!!!"		"J- just stop it already you low-life scoundrel!!!"

	Which means her anger exploded ~~in the~~ in the already familiar way.		Which means her anger exploded in the already familiar way.

	What happened until now can be called an ordinary scene. But -		What happened until now can be called an ordinary scene. But -
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	Called out from an unexpected direction, Ayano frowned with a twitch. Turning her face around, a strange man before his twenties, with a sloppy smile, approached grinning.		Called out from an unexpected direction, Ayano frowned with a twitch. Turning her face around, a strange man before his twenties, with a sloppy smile, approached grinning.

	"~~ForgeT~~ about that useless man and come with me. I'll make you happy."		"Forget about that useless man and come with me. I'll make you happy."

	''.....What, a flirt.....''		''.....What, a flirt.....''
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	Watching around even more, the ''useless man'' was putting a coin into a vending machine.		Watching around even more, the ''useless man'' was putting a coin into a vending machine.

	"Hey", said Ayano in a crushed to death tone.		"Hey.", said Ayano in a crushed to death tone.

	But even so, without changing his facial expression Kazuma took a sip of the Oolong tea, enjoyed the cold liquid reaching his neck, sampled its flavor in full and finally answered.		But even so, without changing his facial expression Kazuma took a sip of the Oolong tea, enjoyed the cold liquid reaching his neck, sampled its flavor in full and finally answered.
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	"Don't say that. The job is already finished, so I don't think I have any obligation to protect you."		"Don't say that. The job is already finished, so I don't think I have any obligation to protect you."

	In spite on absolutely not protecting her during the job, Kazuma said so, shamelessly.		In spite of absolutely not protecting her during the job, Kazuma said so, shamelessly.

	Of course, Ayano can't be deceived with those words.		Of course, Ayano can't be deceived with those words.
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	Completely made fun of, the man's face flushed bright red. Of course, not being ashamed because he doesn't know his standing.		Completely made fun of, the man's face flushed bright red. Of course, not being ashamed because he doesn't know his standing.

	Gripping his fists, the man drew closer with a rough gait. No matter ~~who~~ you look at it, he wasn't in the disposition to flirt with Ayano anymore.		Gripping his fists, the man drew closer with a rough gait. No matter how you look at it, he wasn't in the disposition to flirt with Ayano anymore.

	"Really......"		"Really......"
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	The man's fist and then his body slipped through the space between those two.		The man's fist and then his body slipped through the space between those two.

	First his fist and then his upper body and then ~~his~~ lower half of ~~the~~ body went through.		First his fist and then his upper body and then the lower half of his body went through.

	Nonchalantly, with his foot left in place, Kazuma swiped the man's feet.		Nonchalantly, with his foot left in place, Kazuma swiped the man's feet.
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	"Ah, yeah," nodding obediently Ayano took the can.		"Ah, yeah," nodding obediently Ayano took the can.

	Fleetingly looking t the can in her hand, for some reason her cheeks were dyed red.		Fleetingly looking at the can in her hand, for some reason her cheeks were dyed red.

	"Y- You....u...."		"Y- You....u...."
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	Only by that movement, the man's body flew in mid-air. And then, with no sign of effort put into it, he was blown off with extreme force.		Only by that movement, the man's body flew in mid-air. And then, with no sign of effort put into it, he was blown off with extreme force.

	By seizing a linear motion thrust with a circular one ~~it's~~ swallowed up and the center of gravity crumbles.		By seizing a linear motion thrust with a circular one is swallowed up and the center of gravity crumbles.

	This is a technique that is called Aiki in Japan and ~~Kakei(???)~~ in ~~China~~.		This is a technique that is called Aiki in Japan and China or Hapki in Korea.

	By utilizing the opponent's power, a larger amount of power can be controlled with a smaller one - that is the advantage of this power but -		By utilizing the opponent's power, a larger amount of power can be controlled with a smaller one - that is the advantage of this power but -
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	<nowiki> - bekiii! -</nowiki>		<nowiki> - bekiii! -</nowiki>

	But even so how much power did that man's attack have, to be flung away with enough force to break the roadside trees he crashed into.		But even so, how much power did that man's attack have, to be flung away with enough force to break the roadside trees he crashed into.

	Kazuma looked down in silence at the man that tumbled from the nearby crashed trees. There is no negligence in those eyes. It was an expression convinced that he will definitely get up.		Kazuma looked down in silence at the man that tumbled from the nearby crashed trees. There is no negligence in those eyes. It was an expression convinced that he will definitely get up.
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	It was torn off when its limit crossed-over.		It was torn off when its limit crossed-over.

	".....Is this what you call ''pump up''?," asked Ayano, lacking a sense of reality.		".....Is this what you call ''pump up''?" asked Ayano, lacking a sense of reality.

	By repeating muscle contraction, by means of pumping large quantities of blood containing oxygen, the muscles will dramatically expand - there certainly is such a technique. But still -		By repeating muscle contraction, by means of pumping large quantities of blood containing oxygen, the muscles will dramatically expand - there certainly is such a technique. But still -
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	The fist pushed out a second time and Kazuma dealt with it using the same circular motion.		The fist pushed out a second time and Kazuma dealt with it using the same circular motion.

	But, whether Aiki or ~~Kakei~~, although it appears like a supernatural movement for the untrained eyes, the principle is still the same.		But, whether Aiki or Hapki, although it appears like a supernatural movement for the untrained eyes, the principle is still the same.

	Even using the principle of leverage, if the opponent's power is bigger, there won't be any effect.		Even using the principle of leverage, if the opponent's power is bigger, there won't be any effect.

90.60.49.74: /* Part 2 */

2013-09-07T22:03:25Z

Part 2

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	"That's a pervert"		"That's a pervert"

	Mie immediately replied with no hesitation. That answer was something the ~~firs~~ years, who didn't know the circumstance, could't comprehend but just because of that, their disgust and dread didn't soften.		Mie immediately replied with no hesitation. That answer was something the first years, who didn't know the circumstance, could't comprehend but just because of that, their disgust and dread didn't soften.

	"Can't you do something? Maybe calling the teacher..."		"Can't you do something? Maybe calling the teacher..."
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	"Ah, yes.....he won't come...."		"Ah, yes.....he won't come...."

	Staring at her ~~couhais~~, supplication clearly in their eyes, Mie's gaze wandered around, her face troubled.		Staring at her kouhais, supplication clearly in their eyes, Mie's gaze wandered around, her face troubled.

	No matter how suspicious he was, Utsumi was a pupil of this school. Moreover he had the pretext of being a member of the photography club.		No matter how suspicious he was, Utsumi was a pupil of this school. Moreover he had the pretext of being a member of the photography club.
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	Nanase stared at that retreating figure thoroughly indifferent.		Nanase stared at that retreating figure thoroughly indifferent.


	=== Part 3 ===		=== Part 3 ===

Nwms8: /* Part 4 */ Grammar and word flow edits. I understand the context but still changed "Yukari, half a semicircle later, crashed into her back." to "Yukari crashed into her back half a second later."

2013-08-14T16:57:33Z

Part 4: Grammar and word flow edits. I understand the context but still changed "Yukari, half a semicircle later, crashed into her back." to "Yukari crashed into her back half a second later."

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76.14.186.119: /* Part 1 */

2013-08-09T07:50:40Z

Part 1

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	It happened during the evening, in front of the Shinjuku Station. The lovely girl's scream, became the focal point for the people passing through.		It happened during the evening, in front of the Shinjuku Station. The lovely girl's scream, became the focal point for the people passing through.

	"Ah"		"Ah."

	Belatedly realizing the became the target of attention, the girl's face became colored with shame.		Belatedly realizing the became the target of attention, the girl's face became colored with shame.

	"You're the center of attention"		"You're the center of attention."

	The man who seemed to accompany her, nonchalantly informed her. For a second time the girl frowned but being careful of the surroundings this time, she said in a whisper.		The man who seemed to accompany her, nonchalantly informed her. For a second time the girl frowned but being careful of the surroundings this time, she said in a whisper.
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	Their occupation is to exorcise evil and protect the world from harm.		Their occupation is to exorcise evil and protect the world from harm.

	As the man's motto was ''earn money with ease'', for people that possess first class battle abilities like Ayano whom he met during work he doesn't hesitate to bear the stigma of a salary thief.		As the man's motto was ''earn money with ease'', for people that possess first class battle abilities like Ayano, whom he met during work, he doesn't hesitate to bear the stigma of a salary thief.

	That's what happened this time. Without literally raising a finger Kazuma watched over Ayano like a sightseer frivolously ridiculing the seriously fighting Ayano.		That's what happened this time. Without literally raising a finger Kazuma watched over Ayano like a sightseer frivolously ridiculing the seriously fighting Ayano.