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Chapter 2 - How to defeat a magician

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	== Chapter 1 - How to defeat a magician ==		== Chapter 2 - How to defeat a magician ==

	=== Part 1 ===		=== Part 1 ===

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	"Yukari......"		"Yukari......"

	It's not like Ayano was hanging out with Yukari for so long just for show. She understood that at such times Yukari ~~could~~'t be persuaded.		It's not like Ayano was hanging out with Yukari for so long just for show. She understood that at such times Yukari couldn't be persuaded.

	However -		However -

	"Yukari, did your danger screw became loose or something? It's the same for the discussions we were having, ~~should~~'t you think a little more before hanging out with people like me?"		"Yukari, did your danger screw became loose or something? It's the same for the discussions we were having, shouldn't you think a little more before hanging out with people like me?"

	"I think I told Ayano-chan before that there's nothing to be nervous about."		"I think I told Ayano-chan before that there's nothing to be nervous about."
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	"The weight of Ayano-chan's power, even if it's a little, I understand it. You have a strong heart that holds your power in check. That's why I love Ayano-chan."		"The weight of Ayano-chan's power, even if it's a little, I understand it. You have a strong heart that holds your power in check. That's why I love Ayano-chan."

	Yukari clearly ~~remembers~~ even now the first time she saw Ayano's power.		Yukari clearly remembered even now the first time she saw Ayano's power.

	She was scared.		She was scared.

	Thoroughly burning to nothing a monster without even touching ~~him~~, taking out a sword made of flames from an empty space and just by waving it once changing the surroundings in a sea of flames.		Thoroughly burning to nothing a monster without even touching it, taking out a sword made of flames from an empty space and just by waving it once changing the surroundings in a sea of flames.

	Even calling it overwhelming seems stupid, an immense power. When she found herself in front of that power, she had no choice but to see herself as a helpless petty existence.		Even calling it overwhelming seems stupid, an immense power. When she found herself in front of that power, she had no choice but to see herself as a helpless petty existence.
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	But - Ayano protected her.		But - Ayano protected her.

	Although hurt by her inconsiderate attitude, Ayano protected her. Although understanding their relationship ~~will~~ never be the same, that she was hated, Ayano still protected her.		Although hurt by her inconsiderate attitude, Ayano protected her. Although understanding their relationship would never be the same, that she was hated, Ayano still protected her.

	She ~~won~~'t forget her determined eyes.		She wouldn't forget her determined eyes.

	She ~~won~~'t forget her determined appearance from behind, her iron will.		She wouldn't forget her determined appearance from behind, her iron will.

	"No matter what people like Utsumi-kun who only think about themselves do, there's no need to be afraid of Ayano-chan. It doesn't matter if all magicians except Ayano-chan are like Utsumi-kun. Because I believe in Ayano-chan."		"No matter what people like Utsumi-kun who only think about themselves do, there's no need to be afraid of Ayano-chan. It doesn't matter if all magicians except Ayano-chan are like Utsumi-kun. Because I believe in Ayano-chan."
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	The moment Ayano, reluctantly, extremely reluctantly agreed, Kirika settled it.		The moment Ayano, reluctantly, extremely reluctantly agreed, Kirika settled it.

	Even though she feigned ignorance until now - Ayano ~~glaring~~ at her with eyes full of resentment, Kirika was unconcerned.		Even though she feigned ignorance until now - Ayano glared at her with eyes full of resentment, Kirika was unconcerned.

	"I'll be relying on you two. Because Kazuma is also on this so please get in touch if necessary."		"I'll be relying on you two. Because Kazuma is also on this so please get in touch if necessary."

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	But this was not the place to grieve over her personal misfortune.		But this was not the place to grieve over her personal misfortune.

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	"So, Ayano-chan please start."		"So, Ayano-chan please start."
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	This time, Kirika became completely speechless.		This time, Kirika became completely speechless.




	=== Part 4 ===		=== Part 4 ===

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	"....Wait......"		"....Wait......"


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	Losing his mind, Kazuma chased after her. Without a moment of indecision.		Losing his mind, Kazuma chased after her. Without a moment of indecision.
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	===References===		===References===
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Ayame: /* Chapter 1 - How to defeat a magician */

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Chapter 1 - How to defeat a magician

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	"Tomorrow, if Utsumi comes to school I'll talk to him."		"Tomorrow, if Utsumi comes to school I'll talk to him."


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	"T- talk?"		"T- talk?"

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	''"Well, dreaming is free..."''		''"Well, dreaming is free..."''

	The reality was that Kirika, after having her eyes on him, would never accept his application to change assignments. Same for ~~the~~ letter of resignation.		The reality was that Kirika, after having set her eyes on him, would never accept his application to change assignments. Same for a letter of resignation.

	Even if he was an individual or a public figure, Kirika had that amount of power.		Even if he was an individual or a public figure, Kirika had that amount of power.

	The Special Investigation Unit - it can be said it was already decided that Daiki ~~will~~ die in that place.		The Special Investigation Unit - it can be said it was already decided that Daiki would die in that place.




	Isurugi Daiki was not a person born out of what is called a Jutsu-sha family lineage.		Isurugi Daiki was not a person born out of what was called a Jutsu-sha family lineage.

	His father was an ordinary office worker. His mother was a housewife. He had an older brother but he too, was a normal salary man.		His father was an ordinary office worker. His mother was a housewife. He had an older brother but he too, was a normal salary man.
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	The result that miraculous response gave was that he had the ability to sense the supernatural, to put it simply.		The result that miraculous response gave was that he had the ability to sense the supernatural, to put it simply.

	Without being asked about his opinion, he was assigned to the Special Investigation Unit, where he spent all days as a human experiment, an activity called training.		Without being asked about his opinion, he was assigned to the Special Investigation Unit, where he spent all his days as a human experiment, an activity called training.

	And finally they found the manifestation of his special power.		And finally they found the manifestation of his special power.
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	The way he expelled Garum, its fangs about to tear his throat, to a different dimension without doing so to the unlucky ringleader. That was perfect.		The way he expelled Garum, its fangs about to tear his throat, to a different dimension without doing so to the unlucky ringleader. That was perfect.

	Although unstable, his power is as rare as a jewel. Regardless of what he thought, Kirika would never let such a talented man escape.		Although unstable, his power was as rare as a jewel. Regardless of what he thought, Kirika would never let such a talented man escape.

	"Waaaa....how long will I continue to do this.....?"		"Waaaa....how long will I continue to do this.....?"

	It seemed he ~~continues~~ to cry. His words mingled with tears made Kazuma the tiniest bit aware.		It seemed he continued to cry. His words mingled with tears made Kazuma the tiniest bit aware.

	''"Isn't it until you die?"''		''"Isn't it until you die?"''
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	It was still evening. As for the time, it seemed the real action will start from now on but Daiki was pretty shaken.		It was still evening. As for the time, it seemed the real action will start from now on but Daiki was pretty shaken.

	This was a power suited for extreme situations but if his mind were to close itself we won't be able to progress. Kirika is trying to cultivate that angle.		This was a power suited for extreme situations but if his mind were to close itself we won't be able to progress. Kirika was trying to cultivate that angle.

	"Kid, drag that with you."		"Kid, drag that with you."
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	"Wh- what happened, Yagami-san?"		"Wh- what happened, Yagami-san?"

	From the back he could hear someone's voice but he ignored before the brain had the chance to recognize it.		From the back he could hear someone's voice but he ignored it before the brain had the chance to recognize it.

	For him right now, nothing was more important than searching for Tsoi Rin.		For him right now, nothing was more important than searching for Tsoi Rin.
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	But, the wind didn't answer. No matter how he he extended his search range, there is no response for Tsoi Rin.		But, the wind didn't answer. No matter how he he extended his search range, there is no response for Tsoi Rin.

	"Did I ~~saw~~ it wrong......?", he squeezed out the words like groaning.		"Did I see it wrong......?", he squeezed out the words like groaning.

	Riiiiiiiiiiiiiiiing!		Riiiiiiiiiiiiiiiing!