Kaze no Stigma:Volume4 Chapter 3 - Revision history

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2013-12-27T06:53:15Z

Chapter 3 - Shinjuku RPG

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	Having forty eight floors above ground, from the thirty third floor upward tho neighbouring towers reached the heaven.		Having forty eight floors above ground, from the thirty third floor upward tho neighbouring towers reached the heaven.

	Between the south and north tower there was a huge ~~emplty~~ space. If they were to stand there they would definitely see the scenery Kyoshi described.		Between the south and north tower there was a huge empty space. If they were to stand there they would definitely see the scenery Kyoshi described.

	"But, there's nothing there...."		"But, there's nothing there...."

2013-12-27T06:51:46Z

Chapter 3 - Shinjuku RPG

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	What's more, Kanon had no way to resist to Ren's ''request''.		What's more, Kanon had no way to resist to Ren's ''request''.

	"If you were to at least call me Kanon, I'll give yu both my body and my heart."		"If you were to at least call me Kanon, I'll give you both my body and my heart."

	"Aah......ahahahahahahahaha....maybe at a different time. All right?"		"Aah......ahahahahahahahaha....maybe at a different time. All right?"

2013-12-27T06:41:22Z

Chapter 3 - Shinjuku RPG

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	It was big. Its wing length exceeds three meters.		It was big. Its wing length exceeds three meters.

	The phoenix moulded with delicate details like a living thing - and the heat loaded inside - Ren immediately saw through the fact that in was capable of perfectly burning three people to nothing.		The phoenix moulded with delicate details like a living thing - and the heat loaded inside - Ren immediately saw through the fact that it was capable of perfectly burning three people to nothing.

	"Get down!"		"Get down!"

2013-12-27T06:38:04Z

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	Serisawa sunk the boot in him even more.		Serisawa sunk the boot in him even more.

	"Which means, these guys are your brother's henchmen? I didn't really think you would call your Aniki. You’re such a ~~looser~~, it's kind of cool."		"Which means, these guys are your brother's henchmen? I didn't really think you would call your Aniki. You’re such a loser, it's kind of cool."

	"Sh - shut up! It's too late to apologize now! For the likes of you, in one shot, Aniki will -"		"Sh - shut up! It's too late to apologize now! For the likes of you, in one shot, Aniki will -"

2013-12-27T06:18:55Z

Chapter 3 - Shinjuku RPG

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	That was the first time Ayano realized she had another visitor.		That was the first time Ayano realized she had another visitor.

	If this man came together with Kazuma, it means it must be the ''promising newcomer''. From what she ~~heart~~, he was definitely twenty three years old. But he seemed at least five years younger.		If this man came together with Kazuma, it means it must be the ''promising newcomer''. From what she heard, he was definitely twenty three years old. But he seemed at least five years younger.

	He had an extreme child-face. Because he came here while running, his cheeks were red. He stood stand still outside the room until he was permitted to come in.		He had an extreme child-face. Because he came here while running, his cheeks were red. He stood stand still outside the room until he was permitted to come in.

2013-10-26T03:39:03Z

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	"Th - this is nothing. Don't worry about it."		"Th - this is nothing. Don't worry about it."

	Sending away the elevator girl by waving is hand, Ren looked at his ~~wto~~ friends, that were supposedly prohibited from coming.		Sending away the elevator girl by waving is hand, Ren looked at his two friends, that were supposedly prohibited from coming.

	"Why are you here?"		"Why are you here?"

2013-10-26T03:32:54Z

typo

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	As if sorting his memory, Kyoshi cast his eyes down in silence. Patiently Ren waited until the man opened his mouth.		As if sorting his memory, Kyoshi cast his eyes down in silence. Patiently Ren waited until the man opened his mouth.

	""He was a ~~posing~~ son of a bitch. All his speech and gestures were theatrical."		""He was a imposing son of a bitch. All his speech and gestures were theatrical."

	And then Kyoshi started narrating. In more detail than Ren expected.		And then Kyoshi started narrating. In more detail than Ren expected.

2013-10-26T03:29:49Z

typo

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	'''Do you want power?'''		'''Do you want power?'''

	The moment he answered that question with '''Yes''' Kyoshi made the ~~past~~ to hand over his soul.		The moment he answered that question with '''Yes''' Kyoshi made the pact to hand over his soul.

	Of course, it was a defective contract. Using this coercive method, even the soul of a normal person without any kind of protection from the spirits cannot be taken immediately.		Of course, it was a defective contract. Using this coercive method, even the soul of a normal person without any kind of protection from the spirits cannot be taken immediately.

2013-10-25T06:37:07Z

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	His right hand was already loaded with the next eraser.		His right hand was already loaded with the next eraser.
	~~'''(!<!-- Not sure how to edit this line, "His right hand was already loaded with the next load." I think you mean that Serisawa put another eraser in his hand? -->)''~~

	"Se - Serisawa! You'll do it, too? My Aniki will - "		"Se - Serisawa! You'll do it, too? My Aniki will - "

2013-10-25T06:33:24Z

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	''"I'll be killed!"''		''"I'll be killed!"''

	He felt ''death'' closer than ever before. The fear of having a knife ~~trusted~~ at him seemed insignificant when compared to this.		He felt ''death'' closer than ever before. The fear of having a knife thrust at him seemed insignificant when compared to this.

	It was the first time in his life his body was basking in the real thirst for blood. A precise, definite ''intent to slaughter''.		It was the first time in his life his body was basking in the real thirst for blood. A precise, definite ''intent to slaughter''.