Kaze no Stigma:Volume5 Chapter 1 - Revision history

Tortex: /* Chapter 1 - Signs of rematch */

2013-10-29T20:45:26Z

Chapter 1 - Signs of rematch

Bilagaana: typos

2013-10-26T04:26:11Z

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	Expecting that, Kirika continued the explanation without pause.		Expecting that, Kirika continued the explanation without pause.

	"Pandemonium is reducing Youma to digital data and ~~let~~ them possess through the Internet. So Kazuma said that if a Youma can be turned to data, isn't it possible to make more copies of ?"		"Pandemonium is reducing Youma to digital data and letting them possess through the Internet. So Kazuma said that if a Youma can be turned to data, isn't it possible to make more copies of it?"

	".........."		".........."

	Ayano silently petrified. If that was true, the number of enemies won't be limited. It means they can mass produce those annoying people with abilities without limit.		Ayano was silently petrified. If that was true, the number of enemies won't be limited. It means they can mass produce those annoying people with abilities without limit.

	"B -But if it's like that, would the ability differ from one person to another ?"		"B -But if it's like that, would the ability differ from one person to another ?"

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2013-10-26T04:18:15Z

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	He was loosing himself in anger but apparently one composed portion still remained.		He was loosing himself in anger but apparently one composed portion still remained.

	~~just~~ before they were crushed by the downpour of debris, Kazuma spread a wind barrier and set the trio free.		Just before they were crushed by the downpour of debris, Kazuma spread a wind barrier and set the trio free.

	Perfectly controlling the barrier until they landed, he delivered them on the above ground without any scratch. Especially smart, he raised an optical camouflage to remain invisible, denoting perfect composure.		Perfectly controlling the barrier until they landed, he delivered them on the above ground without any scratch. Especially smart, he raised an optical camouflage to remain invisible, denoting perfect composure.

Bilagaana: typo

2013-10-26T04:15:00Z

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	The way of obtaining XP is not just defeating one's enemy or in Utsumi's case fulfilling curses. Utilizing the power granted by Pandemonium, you're adding experience one by one.		The way of obtaining XP is not just defeating one's enemy or in Utsumi's case fulfilling curses. Utilizing the power granted by Pandemonium, you're adding experience one by one.

	Of ~~curse~~, when comparing it with killing one's enemy, the quantity is infinity smaller.		Of course, when comparing it with killing one's enemy, the quantity is infinity smaller.

	Utsumi's recent results, is the amount he used on Nanase and his classmates. With just that it would have been impossible to level up, supposedly.		Utsumi's recent results, is the amount he used on Nanase and his classmates. With just that it would have been impossible to level up, supposedly.

Antanaru: /* Part 3 */

2013-10-17T21:13:32Z

Part 3

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	" Wha -"		" Wha -"

	"It must be fun. If your opponent is only a human being even you can display your might. But, do you think you can live a long life in this manner? You are not one of those ''<<chosen people>>''after all"		"It must be fun. If your opponent is only a human being even you can display your might. But, do you think you can live a long life in this manner? You are not one of those ''<<chosen people>>'' after all"

	Huang's words were hinting at knowing Kazuma's lineage and his past.		Huang's words were hinting at knowing Kazuma's lineage and his past.

Antanaru: /* Part 3 */ Spelling and inconsistent spacing

2013-10-17T21:12:06Z

Part 3: Spelling and inconsistent spacing

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Antanaru: /* Part 2 */

2013-10-17T20:43:56Z

Part 2

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	".........."		".........."

	The moment ~~she~~ noticed Kirika's gaze, the boy looked away uncomfortably.		The moment he noticed Kirika's gaze, the boy looked away uncomfortably.

	To sum it up, it seemed he found Kirika's distress unfortunate but didn't have the nerve to hold Ayano back.		To sum it up, it seemed he found Kirika's distress unfortunate but didn't have the nerve to hold Ayano back.

Antanaru: /* Part 2 */

2013-10-17T14:10:23Z

Part 2

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	"What do you mean?"		"What do you mean?"

	Finding fault with Kirika's words, Ayano retorted sharply. Kirika's eyebrows frowned instantly cursing her verbal slip and tried to ~~dogge~~ the question with a forced smile.		Finding fault with Kirika's words, Ayano retorted sharply. Kirika's eyebrows frowned instantly cursing her verbal slip and tried to dodge the question with a forced smile.

	"Don't worry about it"		"Don't worry about it"
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	"It starts four years ago when Kazuma crossed over to Hong Kong running away from Kannagi and met a girl - "		"It starts four years ago when Kazuma crossed over to Hong Kong running away from Kannagi and met a girl - "



	=== Part 3 ===		=== Part 3 ===

Antanaru: /* Part 1 */

2013-10-17T13:53:42Z

Part 1

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	Clean and simple, in that space resembling a hotel single room the boy grieved over his circumstance.		Clean and simple, in that space resembling a hotel single room the boy grieved over his circumstance.

	"Why~~, did~~ did something like that ~~happened~~......"		"Why did something like that happen......"

	He was supposed to have obtained power.		He was supposed to have obtained power.
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	With a loud shout, Utsumi '''clicked''' on the '''Yes''' end of the message.		With a loud shout, Utsumi '''clicked''' on the '''Yes''' end of the message.


	=== Part 2 ===		=== Part 2 ===

80.223.220.209: change all "loose" to "lose" (opposite of "win" is "lose", "loose" means not tightly fastened)

2013-10-14T23:14:52Z

change all "loose" to "lose" (opposite of "win" is "lose", "loose" means not tightly fastened)

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	Including a bitter smile, Kirika agreed.		Including a bitter smile, Kirika agreed.

	"Please give us that much credit. The Jutsushi from Special Investigation Unit are not weak enough to ~~loose~~ to an amateur. Because even if Utsumi escaped, that wasn't his doing"		"Please give us that much credit. The Jutsushi from Special Investigation Unit are not weak enough to lose to an amateur. Because even if Utsumi escaped, that wasn't his doing"

	" - ? Did someone guide him?"		" - ? Did someone guide him?"
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	"Yes, but I cannot back it up"		"Yes, but I cannot back it up"

	"But, if they were to release so much power, won't they ~~loose~~ their human awareness?"		"But, if they were to release so much power, won't they lose their human awareness?"

	"What of it?"		"What of it?"
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	"Keep it short."		"Keep it short."

	"Humph, then I'll finish with one sentence - Don't ~~loose~~ your head, brat"		"Humph, then I'll finish with one sentence - Don't lose your head, brat"

	In that instant, the atmosphere around Huang completely changed.		In that instant, the atmosphere around Huang completely changed.
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	".......what, are you trying to say?"		".......what, are you trying to say?"

	"I alredy did. It was ''Don't ~~loose~~ your head, brat''. You're not a Jutsushi, you're not a soldier, you are nothing but a brat whose strong point is being good at fighting. Don't you ever try to look cool in front of someone holding a gun. For me it doesn't matter but if you die Tsoi Rin will be sad. "		"I alredy did. It was ''Don't lose your head, brat''. You're not a Jutsushi, you're not a soldier, you are nothing but a brat whose strong point is being good at fighting. Don't you ever try to look cool in front of someone holding a gun. For me it doesn't matter but if you die Tsoi Rin will be sad. "

	Kazuma was caving in so much abuse but the moment he heard the last few words, he stood up straight.		Kazuma was caving in so much abuse but the moment he heard the last few words, he stood up straight.