Kaze no Stigma:Volume5 Chapter 6 - Revision history

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	As Kazuma was thinking nothing else but killing the enemy, Ayano groaned as if she endured a headache.		As Kazuma was thinking nothing else but killing the enemy, Ayano groaned as if she endured a headache.

	"It's possible that Nanase ~~ans~~ Yukari are inside, you know!? we can't take such a violent action. "		"It's possible that Nanase and Yukari are inside, you know!? we can't take such a violent action. "

	"Nanase and Yukari?"		"Nanase and Yukari?"

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	=== Part 1 ===		=== Part 1 ===

	"Aaaaaaaaaa, by the way!! ",shouted Ren suddenly remembering something important.		"Aaaaaaaaaa, by the way!! ", shouted Ren suddenly remembering something important.

	"Wh- What's going on? "		"Wh- What's going on? "
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	"I - I apologize! "		"I - I apologize! "

	While talking so casually while walking, a solid door appeared before the group.		While talking so casually while walking, a solid door appeared before the group.



	=== Part 2 ===		=== Part 2 ===

Bilagaana: tense, grammar and typos

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	"Is that Bernhard's true objective? ", asked Kazuma quickly pulling himself together.		"Is that Bernhard's true objective?", asked Kazuma quickly pulling himself together.

	But Lapis clearly denied it.		But Lapis clearly denied it.
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	"Actually, when we met at Tokyo Government Office, the experiment was pretty much completed. We could have gone back home just like that but Master stated that would be boring.		"Actually, when we met at Tokyo Government Office, the experiment was pretty much completed. We could have gone back home just like that but Master stated that would be boring.

	Therefore, it came to carry out the summoning of Belial as a side show. Does it amuse you? "		Therefore, it came to carry out the summoning of Belial as a side show. Does it amuse you?"

	An elegant speech. But after hearing that, it was not something that could be endured.		An elegant speech. But after hearing that, it was not something that could be endured.
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	As if she read Kazuma's thoughts, Lapis declared detached.		As if she read Kazuma's thoughts, Lapis declared detached.

	"I won't stop you but disposing of it is meaningless. Utsumi's soul was already consecrated to Belial, so his body cannot be the object to summon Belial with. "		"I won't stop you but disposing of it is meaningless. Utsumi's soul was already consecrated to Belial, so his body cannot be the object to summon Belial with."

	"Aah, I see, then - "		"Aah, I see, then - "
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	Looking at Kazuma with lonely eyes, she murmured.		Looking at Kazuma with lonely eyes, she murmured.

	"Will you kill me again, Kazuma? "		"Will you kill me again, Kazuma?"

	"------!!"		"------!!"
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	"That's handy. Because my weapon is a bit over-sized, carrying it is inconvenient - "		"That's handy. Because my weapon is a bit over-sized, carrying it is inconvenient - "

	"Who cares! "		"Who cares!"

	Pressing down the sword and letting anger take its natural course, she fired another blow.		Pressing down the sword and letting anger take its natural course, she fired another blow.
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	With force enough to slice the crystal edge, the flame sword was swung.		With force enough to slice the crystal edge, the flame sword was swung.

	"What on earth are you thinking!? Do you want to destroy the world for your entertainment? "		"What on earth are you thinking!? Do you want to destroy the world for your entertainment?"

	"Of course we don't want that. "		"Of course we don't want that."

	Lapis freely manipulated the crystal sword and sidestepped that slashing attack including tremendous force.		Lapis freely manipulated the crystal sword and sidestepped that slashing attack including tremendous force.
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	"Belial can't be perfectly summoned with only a hundred sacrifices. The time he will move will be a few seconds and his power greatly restricted. The world won't get destroyed - perhaps"		"Belial can't be perfectly summoned with only a hundred sacrifices. The time he will move will be a few seconds and his power greatly restricted. The world won't get destroyed - perhaps"

	"What the fuck is ''perhaps''!? "		"What the fuck is ''perhaps''!?"

	"The world is full of mistakes. "		"The world is full of mistakes."

	"Don't speak so irresponsibly! "		"Don't speak so irresponsibly!"

	Although Ayano was resolutely attacking her, Lapis defended, not showing any gaps.		Although Ayano was resolutely attacking her, Lapis defended, not showing any gaps.
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	Coincidentally the hand holding Enraiha was seized and Ayano was restrained from behind.		Coincidentally the hand holding Enraiha was seized and Ayano was restrained from behind.

	"Wh- wait you, whose ally are you? "		"Wh- wait you, whose ally are you?"

	"Just shut up"		"Just shut up"
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	"Calm down. It's coming"		"Calm down. It's coming"

	"Eeh? "		"Eeh?"

	"From below"		"From below"
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	Slowly but steady.		Slowly but steady.

	"No way - Why? "		"No way - Why?"

	"It means the summoning formula had been set up long ago. It would be automatically invoked if the sacrifice were to be complete. Killing her now would have no effect. "		"It means the summoning formula had been set up long ago. It would be automatically invoked if the sacrifice were to be complete. Killing her now would have no effect. "
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	"Before long the summoning of Belial will be achieved. And just like the ''''worthlessness'''' name suggests he will bring nothingness to the surface.		"Before long the summoning of Belial will be achieved. And just like the ''''worthlessness'''' name suggests he will bring nothingness to the surface.

	This is just a rough estimate but I believe the entire Tokyo region will, without a doubt, return to nothing. "		This is just a rough estimate but I believe the entire Tokyo region will, without a doubt, return to nothing."

	"For a side show, that's extremely flashy. "		"For a side show, that's extremely flashy."

	"Master told me to put all my effort in this exactly because it's a side show. "		"Master told me to put all my effort in this exactly because it's a side show."

	"...........I see"		"...........I see"
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	"Certain? "		"Certain? "

	"To say it frankly even in this situation, when you're cornered to this extent, I think you are terrifying. I'm not confident of winning. Especially after such an unreasonable ability. "		"To say it frankly even in this situation, when you're cornered to this extent, I think you are terrifying. I'm not confident of winning. Especially after seeing such an unreasonable ability. "

	Was he serious or was he hiding something - she couldn't read the real intentions behind Bernhardt's words.		Was he serious or was he hiding something - she couldn't read the real intentions behind Bernhardt's words.

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2013-10-29T23:27:23Z

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	"I think Utsumi proudly said so before but there are a few grave errors in his exposition. First, it's about the origin of the copied Youma that infected those people - the existence Utsumi called <<Original Youma>>.		"I think Utsumi proudly said so before but there are a few grave errors in his exposition. First, it's about the origin of the copied Youma that infected those people - the existence Utsumi called <<Original Youma>>.

	Actually the summoning of the <<Original Youma>> ~~hes~~ yet to achieved. The one that possessed Utsumi was nothing but a replica, just like the other <<Seeds>>. "		Actually the summoning of the <<Original Youma>> has yet to achieved. The one that possessed Utsumi was nothing but a replica, just like the other <<Seeds>>. "

	"Wh- what!?"		"Wh- what!?"

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2013-10-29T23:17:57Z

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	Feeling a loss for words at the excessive selfish words, Ayano remembered the words Kazuma said about them.		Feeling a loss for words at the excessive selfish words, Ayano remembered the words Kazuma said about them.

	''"They're definitely the worst, ~~there~~ guys......."''		''"They're definitely the worst, these guys......."''

	Even Bernhardt,the maker of that doll, filling her head with worthless ideas, even Lapis faithfully adhering to her master's teachings, both of them were the worst.		Even Bernhardt, the maker of that doll, filling her head with worthless ideas, even Lapis faithfully adhering to her master's teachings, both of them were the worst.

	"So, should I start my explanation? "		"So, should I start my explanation? "

Bilagaana: typo

2013-10-29T23:17:06Z

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	Unable to bear the gap between that smiling face full of cuteness and these crafty remarks, Ayano shouted.		Unable to bear the gap between that smiling face full of cuteness and these crafty remarks, Ayano shouted.

	"Hey you, ~~thing~~ of others' troubles before thinking of your own enjoyment! "		"Hey you, think of others' troubles before thinking of your own enjoyment! "

	"But, Master said, if you think about others troubles you won't benefit from free will."		"But, Master said, if you think about others troubles you won't benefit from free will."

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	Fireballs, lightning, water bullets stormed inside the hall spreading a confused destruction.		Fireballs, lightning, water bullets stormed inside the hall spreading a confused destruction.

	Exceedingly calm, Kazuma only warded off the attack headed towards them and took ~~tho~~ opportunity to take Utsumi's head.		Exceedingly calm, Kazuma only warded off the attack headed towards them and took the opportunity to take Utsumi's head.

	Like it was a joke, the severed head flew high in the air and tumbled lightly.		Like it was a joke, the severed head flew high in the air and tumbled lightly.

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	"------------What are you trying to say? ", asked Kazuma without turning back.		"------------What are you trying to say? ", asked Kazuma without turning back.

	"Well, Lapis is your former right? Will you fight - "		"Well, Lapis is your former lover right? Will you fight - "

	''''Dan!''''		''''Dan!''''

Black Ice Prince at 03:03, 12 October 2013

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	=== Chapter 6 - The end of the feast ===		== Chapter 6 - The end of the feast ==

	=== Part 1 ===		=== Part 1 ===


	"Aaaaaaaaaa, by the way!! ",shouted Ren suddenly remembering something important.		"Aaaaaaaaaa, by the way!! ",shouted Ren suddenly remembering something important.

Ninjask at 22:16, 11 October 2013

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	Really not conscious about it, Ayano continuously fired rapid questions with an off the point face.		Really not conscious about it, Ayano continuously fired rapid questions with an off the point face.

	That unreliable attitude made Ren ~~loose~~ his confidence, instinctively asking his brother for help.		That unreliable attitude made Ren lose his confidence, instinctively asking his brother for help.

	"Nii-sama, you saw it.......right? "		"Nii-sama, you saw it.......right? "