Kaze no Stigma:Volume6 Chapter 3 - Revision history

Nwms8 at 07:14, 29 December 2013

2013-12-29T07:14:44Z

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	"No, I don't. But, no matter how much your father joked around, he wouldn't name you Xiaolei - you should have a girl's name, right?"		"No, I don't. But, no matter how much your father joked around, he wouldn't name you Xiaolei - you should have a girl's name, right?"
	'''(!<!-- Note: Xiolei is a boy's name, so I think the translation needs a small change to make sense. Original: But, no matter how much your father joked around, he wouldn't name you Xiaolei - a girl's name, right? -->)'''		'''(!<!-- Note: Xiolei is a boy's name, so I think the translation needs a small change to make sense. Original: But, no matter how much your father joked around, he wouldn't name you Xiaolei - a girl's name, right? -->)'''

	"Haa..."		"Haa..."

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	It was a reaction similar to a resolute affirmation.		It was a reaction similar to a resolute affirmation.

	Ayano and, as expected ~~Juugo~~, looked at Xiaolei with plain shock and shouted with force?		Ayano and Juugo, as expected, looked at Xiaolei with plain shock and shouted with force:

	"A - A girl!?"		"A - A girl!?"
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	"I don't really object against you using a fake name. It's fine even if you don't want to say the reason. Your name here is Fuan Xiaolei ----- is that all right?"		"I don't really object against you using a fake name. It's fine even if you don't want to say the reason. Your name here is Fuan Xiaolei ----- is that all right?"

	"Yeah. I am Fuan Xiaolei. I gave up being a woman. Because to kill them and take revenge for my family I don't need to be a woman! "~~, declared~~ the girl with a voice carrying a determined will.		"Yeah. I am Fuan Xiaolei. I gave up being a woman. Because to kill them and take revenge for my family I don't need to be a woman!" Declared the girl with a voice carrying a determined will.

	Aroused by the dark, powerful sentiment called ''revenge'', she naturally decided to overlook her own body.		Aroused by the dark, powerful sentiment called ''revenge'', she naturally decided to overlook her own body.
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	The spirit that brought that about was probably enough to make ordinary humans overwhelmed. But ---		The spirit that brought that about was probably enough to make ordinary humans overwhelmed. But ---

	"-----Haa"		"-----Haa."

	Kazuma snorted at that.		Kazuma snorted at that.
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	"Certainly, it's not unusual for someone to be stronger than me. But, didn't you control the mist much more than that Suijutsushi? Something like mist is in the water domain with a roughly seven or eight ratio at least. To have a stronger control that a Suijutsushi holding a sacred weapon, something like that cannot be achieved by an ordinary Fujutsushi. How do you explain that?"		"Certainly, it's not unusual for someone to be stronger than me. But, didn't you control the mist much more than that Suijutsushi? Something like mist is in the water domain with a roughly seven or eight ratio at least. To have a stronger control that a Suijutsushi holding a sacred weapon, something like that cannot be achieved by an ordinary Fujutsushi. How do you explain that?"

	"How, you ask? "		"How, you ask?"

	Even faced with Xiaolei's identification confident she touched a vital point, Kazuma didn't lost his composure for a moment.		Even faced with Xiaolei's identification confident she touched a vital point, Kazuma didn't lost his composure for a moment.

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2013-11-19T03:28:03Z

Part 2

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	"...........I am called Fuan Xiaolei."		"...........I am called Fuan Xiaolei."

	And then, after showing a small hesitation, ~~she~~ bowed and gave ~~her~~ name.		And then, after showing a small hesitation, he bowed and gave his name.

	As for Juugo, he returned the nod.		As for Juugo, he returned the nod.
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	"Therefore, even if they have the same purpose, the optimum way ~~for a man~~ for a man to accomplish that is definitely different from the way a woman would do it. I will not comment on your views of looking on women as ''weaklings'' but even if you want to throw away the ''weak'' woman and pretend to be a ''strong'' man, that is after all nothing but imitating a man. "		"Therefore, even if they have the same purpose, the optimum way for a man to accomplish that is definitely different from the way a woman would do it. I will not comment on your views of looking on women as ''weaklings'' but even if you want to throw away the ''weak'' woman and pretend to be a ''strong'' man, that is after all nothing but imitating a man. "

	Xiaolei cast down her eyes, tightly grasping her fists placed on top of her knees.		Xiaolei cast down her eyes, tightly grasping her fists placed on top of her knees.

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2013-11-18T03:56:27Z

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	"The head of the Yuuki Family. Remember at least that much."		"The head of the Yuuki Family. Remember at least that much."

	"Don't be absurd. That ~~king~~ of guy ~~playing~~ such a minor role, it's impossible to remain in my memory," said Kazuma calmly over his shoulder, looking around as if searching for something.		"Don't be absurd. That kind of guy played such a minor role, it's impossible to remain in my memory," said Kazuma calmly over his shoulder, looking around as if searching for something.

	And then -		And then -

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Black Ice Prince at 02:52, 25 October 2013

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	=== Chapter 3 - At the Kannagi residence ===		== Chapter 3 - At the Kannagi residence ==

Ayame at 08:24, 22 October 2013

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	"Therefore, even if they have the same purpose, the optimum way for a man for a man to accomplish that is definitely different from the way a woman would do it.		"Therefore, even if they have the same purpose, the optimum way for a man for a man to accomplish that is definitely different from the way a woman would do it.

	I will not comment on your views of looking on women as ''<<weaklings>>'' but even if you want to throw away the ''<<weak>>'' woman and pretend to be a ''<<strong>>'' man, that is after all nothing but imitating a man. "		I will not comment on your views of looking on women as ''weaklings'' but even if you want to throw away the ''weak'' woman and pretend to be a ''strong'' man, that is after all nothing but imitating a man. "

	Xiaolei cast down her eyes, tightly grasping her fists placed on top of her knees.		Xiaolei cast down her eyes, tightly grasping her fists placed on top of her knees.
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	In truth, even in the prior battle when she discarded the woman, she was defeated easily by Gaia.		In truth, even in the prior battle when she discarded the woman, she was defeated easily by Gaia.

	"Not limited to battle technique, every single path starts from accepting yourself as you are. The way you are right now, a <<strong>> man, that cannot win against an accomplished woman. "		"Not limited to battle technique, every single path starts from accepting yourself as you are. The way you are right now, a ''strong'' man, that cannot win against an accomplished woman. "

	"--------For example, someone like your daughter? "		"--------For example, someone like your daughter? "

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