Kenkoku no Jungfrau:Volume 1 Chapter 1 - Revision history

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	But even with that, Gillette took off the gloves on his left hand and shouted out		But even with that, Gillette took off the gloves on his left hand and shouted out

	“Come forth, <~~Steinbokh~~>!”		“Come forth, <Steinbock>!”

	After he shouted out, particles of light purple colour formed in the knight’s hand.		After he shouted out, particles of light purple colour formed in the knight’s hand.

Tenzai: /* Part 7 */

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Part 7

Tenzai: /* Part 6 */

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Tenzai: /* Part 5 */

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Tenzai: /* Part 4 */

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Tenzai: /* Part 3 */

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Part 3

Bilagaana: grammar, spacing

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grammar, spacing

Bilagaana: grammar

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grammar

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therefore doesn't seem correct

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	Beyond the stage that was enclosed by a low wall a circular auditorium had been prepared. The seats had already been filled so much that the aisle could not be seen but everyone had been listening attentively without opening their mouths.		Beyond the stage that was enclosed by a low wall a circular auditorium had been prepared. The seats had already been filled so much that the aisle could not be seen but everyone had been listening attentively without opening their mouths.

	“Then the many kings went to battle ~~therefore~~, a certain king lost his territory and nation to the demon. For a certain king, it was to acquire the territory trampled by the demon. Again, for a certain king it was just to gain more prestige with bravery and valour."		“Then the many kings went to battle for diverse reasons, a certain king lost his territory and nation to the demon. For a certain king, it was to acquire the territory trampled by the demon. Again, for a certain king it was just to gain more prestige with bravery and valour."

	To be able to make one’s voice echo here, an extraordinary speaking volume and technique should be necessary. However, the girl’s singing voice could not pile up that impossible amount of vibration. The one singing while playing the harp was a girl with light purple eyes.		To be able to make one’s voice echo here, an extraordinary speaking volume and technique should be necessary. However, the girl’s singing voice could not pile up that impossible amount of vibration. The one singing while playing the harp was a girl with light purple eyes.

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	That place was an arena which had been built on a grand scale.		That place was an arena which had been built on a grand scale.

	In the central area, there was a stone stage that had been cut in a square shape and in its surroundings, a maintained area was planted. The low wall had been wonderfully decorated with candlesticks, and a small ~~flag was~~ stabbed below that. Even from a distant view it could be realised from their varied designs that, there were 12 kinds of flags in total.		In the central area, there was a stone stage that had been cut in a square shape and in its surroundings, a maintained area was planted. The low wall had been wonderfully decorated with candlesticks, and small flags were stabbed below that. Even from a distant view it could be realised from their varied designs that, there were 12 kinds of flags in total.

	Beyond the stage that was enclosed by a low wall a circular auditorium had been prepared. The seats had already been filled so much that the aisle could not be seen but everyone had been listening attentively without opening their mouths.		Beyond the stage that was enclosed by a low wall a circular auditorium had been prepared. The seats had already been filled so much that the aisle could not be seen but everyone had been listening attentively without opening their mouths.

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	===Part 7===		===Part 7===

	Fortunately or not, since school time had already started, there weren’t a single person around. If there were students around, it would definitely become a huge fuss and reach the school in ~~now~~ time, which would definitely cause some troubles.		Fortunately or not, since school time had already started, there weren’t a single person around. If there were students around, it would definitely become a huge fuss and reach the school in due time, which would definitely cause some troubles.

	Passing through the gate, and approaching the building with the medical office, people who were probably male and female teachers came out with confused expressions.		Passing through the gate, and approaching the building with the medical office, people who were probably male and female teachers came out with confused expressions.
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	–By the way, you’re a face I haven’t seen before. A newcomer?		–By the way, you’re a face I haven’t seen before. A newcomer?

	It was the blood of the gatekeeper who frankly spoke that ~~like~~. But he had suddenly attacked Gillette as if he was a different person.		It was the blood of the gatekeeper who frankly spoke that line. But he had suddenly attacked Gillette as if he was a different person.

	Was it sympathy towards the dead gatekeeper? Or perhaps mortifications towards the traitor? Or was it just because it was a scary experience? Even he himself could not tell.		Was it sympathy towards the dead gatekeeper? Or perhaps mortifications towards the traitor? Or was it just because it was a scary experience? Even he himself could not tell.
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	Heath had been completely stupefied.		Heath had been completely stupefied.

	If one would say the name of Gillette of the Knights of the Round Table, they would ~~thing~~ of a person with the title of <Kazakiri>, having a slim stature but wielding a long sword unfit for him, he was an owner of the anecdote that was able to be called by many heroic episodes.		If one would say the name of Gillette of the Knights of the Round Table, they would think of a person with the title of <Kazakiri>, having a slim stature but wielding a long sword unfit for him, he was an owner of the anecdote that was able to be called by many heroic episodes.

	Even though he had received a surprise attack and poison, was he really the type to be defeated like that?		Even though he had received a surprise attack and poison, was he really the type to be defeated like that?
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	Saying that, the living head started laughing weirdly.		Saying that, the living head started laughing weirdly.

	“Well, if you are so reluctant about waiting that why not hand it over to someone else? Someone who wants it tries to get it even if the other party is killed…Now then, it’s about time we end ~~out~~ talk.”		“Well, if you are so reluctant about waiting that why not hand it over to someone else? Someone who wants it tries to get it even if the other party is killed…Now then, it’s about time we end our talk.”

	As he said that, footsteps could be heard from the corridor.		As he said that, footsteps could be heard from the corridor.

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	After the tension from encountering the Saika had passed, Heath remembered the conversation from this morning.		After the tension from encountering the Saika had passed, Heath remembered the conversation from this morning.

	Another knight, on top of that, a possessor of an <Engraved Blade> ~~has~~ been killed.		Another knight, on top of that, a possessor of an <Engraved Blade> had been killed.

	<Engraved Blade of the Round Table> –– it was a certain crest that had appeared on the bodies of 12 of the knights among the Estrelia Order of Knights. The ones who obtained it were given a power that surpassed that of an <Omen>, furthermore, the one to collect all of those <Engraved Blades> would be ~~give~~ the <Seal of the Sage> which had the power to grant any wish.		<Engraved Blade of the Round Table> –– it was a certain crest that had appeared on the bodies of 12 of the knights among the Estrelia Order of Knights. The ones who obtained it were given a power that surpassed that of an <Omen>, furthermore, the one to collect all of those <Engraved Blades> would be given the <Seal of the Sage> which had the power to grant any wish.

	It was said that almost half on the <Knights of the Round Table> were killed only in the first week. At the same time, a few <Engraved Blades> were stolen.		It was said that almost half on the <Knights of the Round Table> were killed only in the first week. At the same time, a few <Engraved Blades> were stolen.
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	There were various people who were deprived of it.		There were various people who were deprived of it.

	But It there were people who wanted the <Seal of the Sage>, there were also people who plotted rebellion because of their animosity towards the young king. If there were people who were present at the place of the scramble, there were also beggars who were suffering from hunger and poverty too.		But if there were people who wanted the <Seal of the Sage>, there were also people who plotted rebellion because of their animosity towards the young king. If there were people who were present at the place of the scramble, there were also beggars who were suffering from hunger and poverty too.

	Like that, in the moment one screamed in joy because he was able to snatch away an <Engraved Blade>, his life was also snatched away by someone who was aiming for it too. Therefore, the possessors of the <Engraved Blade> all alike hid them by all means.		Like that, in the moment one screamed in joy because he was able to snatch away an <Engraved Blade>, his life was also snatched away by someone who was aiming for it too. Therefore, the possessors of the <Engraved Blade> all alike hid them by all means.
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	The people who wanted the <Engraved Blades> attacked anyone who looked suspicious.		The people who wanted the <Engraved Blades> attacked anyone who looked suspicious.

	~~Thought~~ there was the Knights Order for suppressing such disturbances, most of the people who were at the core of the order were <Engraved Blade> possessors, and they were the ones who were targeted and killed first of all.		Though there was the Knights Order for suppressing such disturbances, most of the people who were at the core of the order were <Engraved Blade> possessors, and they were the ones who were targeted and killed first of all.

	To make matters worse, the king who had come to acquire one of those dangerous <Engraved Blades> had become more introvert than before and shut himself up in his room. He hadn’t adopted even one plan to restore public order.		To make matters worse, the king who had come to acquire one of those dangerous <Engraved Blades> had become more introvert than before and shut himself up in his room. He hadn’t adopted even one plan to restore public order.
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	– So even the Knights of the Round Table can lose their lives huh…		– So even the Knights of the Round Table can lose their lives huh…

	Heath’s senior disciple who was accepted as a Knight of the Round Table was such an expert that someone like Heath ~~could~~ even compare to his feet. The other knights should possess strength ~~similar~~ or perhaps greater than that.		Heath’s senior disciple who was accepted as a Knight of the Round Table was such an expert that someone like Heath couldn't even compare to his feet. The other knights should possess similar strength or perhaps greater than that.

	With strength without any room for dissatisfaction, even if it wasn’t Heath, they were figures filled with aspiration for anyone.		With strength without any room for dissatisfaction, even if it wasn’t Heath, they were figures filled with aspiration for anyone.
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	–And now, there aren’t even half of them left…		–And now, there aren’t even half of them left…

	The ones ~~the~~ first receive the <Engraved Blades> were, knights who were bestowed with a title. Associated only with legends, they were only bestowed upon the 12 who possessed the greatest strength even amongst the knights. They were the ‘Knights of the Round Table’.		The ones to first receive the <Engraved Blades> were, knights who were bestowed with a title. Associated only with legends, they were only bestowed upon the 12 who possessed the greatest strength even amongst the knights. They were the ‘Knights of the Round Table’.

	But even those strongest knights, who were always targeting the <Engraved Blades>; one by one they lost their lives. In the mere 3 months since the Engraved Blade Wars out~~-broke~~, I seems only a few of them were left alive.		But even those strongest knights, who were always targeting the <Engraved Blades>; one by one they lost their lives. In the mere 3 months since the Engraved Blade Wars broke out, It seems only a few of them were left alive.

	“Good morning.”		“Good morning.”
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	The young man nodded with consent.		The young man nodded with consent.

	“Come to think of it, this here ~~academy~~ also accepted commoners. Then why not for yourself but your sis?”		“Come to think of it, this academy here also accepted commoners. Then why not for yourself but your sis?”

	“Well that’s cause I’m already past that age. And besides, my sister has a talent that I don’t have.”		“Well that’s cause I’m already past that age. And besides, my sister has a talent that I don’t have.”
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	Heath would turn 17 this year.		Heath would turn 17 this year.

	He hadn’t done any type of studies other ~~that~~ training as a guard and spear practices till then. He was a person, who had only received education from his parents. He can read and write without any sense of discomfort but it could not be called his strong point either.		He hadn’t done any type of studies other than training as a guard and spear practices till then. He was a person, who had only received education from his parents. He can read and write without any sense of discomfort but it could not be called his strong point either.

	His education was just about that amount.		His education was just about that amount.
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	“You…rather, good job remaining human like that…”		“You…rather, good job remaining human like that…”

	Heath, who was being ~~stare~~ at by a delicate ~~seeming~~ eye filled it either sympathy or friendliness stirred a little worriedly.		Heath, who was being stared at by a delicate eye seemingly filled with either sympathy or friendliness stirred a little worriedly.

	And then he muttered as if he was talking to himself.		And then he muttered as if he was talking to himself.
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	Heath turned his neck with a troubled expression.		Heath turned his neck with a troubled expression.

	“Eh?Umm… As i said before, I want ~~get~~ my sister in school, something like that?”		“Eh?Umm… As i said before, I want my sister to get in to school, something like that?”

	“You…to go that far. Isn’t that what they call being a siscon?”		“You…to go that far. Isn’t that what they call being a siscon?”
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	The young man began to laugh.		The young man began to laugh.

	“Think about it. Even the king should want to put the <Engraved Blades> in his sack right? Then if I vow to work for ~~his~~ as a knight then most demands would be accepted.”		“Think about it. Even the king should want to put the <Engraved Blades> in his sack right? Then if I vow to work for him as a knight then most demands would be accepted.”

	Though in reality, the ones who attacked the knights at first were probably people with purposes along those lines.		Though in reality, the ones who attacked the knights at first were probably people with purposes along those lines.
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	Heath nodded in admiration at the gatekeeper who was behaving very brightly.		Heath nodded in admiration at the gatekeeper who was behaving very brightly.

	“A hero huh?... When that time comes, please let me ~~here~~ your heroic saga too.”		“A hero huh?... When that time comes, please let me hear your heroic saga too.”

	When he said that, the young man widened his eyes.		When he said that, the young man widened his eyes.
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	“Heath? It’s been a while.”		“Heath? It’s been a while.”

	Saying that, He and held the shoulder in a friendly fashion.		Saying that, He and Heath held the shoulder in a friendly fashion.

	“Heath, you were stationed here?”		“Heath, you were stationed here?”
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	“Well… If master saw this, he’d definitely be shocked. You have perseverance, and your muscles aren’t bad either. So why are you doing something like being a gatekeeper…?”		“Well… If master saw this, he’d definitely be shocked. You have perseverance, and your muscles aren’t bad either. So why are you doing something like being a gatekeeper…?”

	“Err, the master told me that I definitely wouldn’t become strong. And I don’t have talent for the spear either, so I think being a gatekeeper is plenty accomplishment.”		“Err, the master told me that I definitely wouldn’t become strong. And I don’t have talent for the spear either, so I think being a gatekeeper is plenty of accomplishment.”

	As he replied with confidence, his senior apprentice covered his forehead as if it was hurting.		As he replied with confidence, his senior apprentice covered his forehead as if it was hurting.
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	The voice, as if it was conversing with the corpse continued speaking.		The voice, as if it was conversing with the corpse continued speaking.

	“Hihihi–, do you not care being just a corpse? Do you not care about being the dead that inferior to even a beast?”		“Hihihi–, do you not care being just a corpse? Do you not care about being the dead that's inferior to even a beast?”

	The voiced raised a really happy laughter.		The voiced raised a really happy laughter.

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	–Scary…		–Scary…

	Usually, she had spent a daily life in town completely unrelated to the likes of a Saika. And for it to actually appear so near, there was no way she could remain calm.		Usually, she had spent daily life in town completely unrelated to the likes of a Saika. And for it to actually appear so near, there was no way she could remain calm.

	That’s why Mana clenched her fists tightly.		That’s why Mana clenched her fists tightly.
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	There were many varieties of magic that were said to exist in the world, but in the end about all of them were powers used by making use of the <Omen>. Though generally, there were people who were called ‘Magicians’ but people following that path would without a doubt claim themselves to be an <Omen Talker> .		There were many varieties of magic that were said to exist in the world, but in the end about all of them were powers used by making use of the <Omen>. Though generally, there were people who were called ‘Magicians’ but people following that path would without a doubt claim themselves to be an <Omen Talker> .

	And that why, the techniques of an <Omen User> could after all, only be learnt from an <Omen User>. A suitable amount of expenses were necessary in order to study it and Heath was working precisely to earn those expenses.		And that's why, the techniques of an <Omen User> could after all, only be learnt from an <Omen User>. A suitable amount of expenses were necessary in order to study it and Heath was working precisely to earn those expenses.

	Mana too, wasn’t just staying at home reading her textbooks but rather, she was helping the works of an <Omen Meister> / <Tenkoku Technician> like this and was at the same time, receiving the trainings of the <Omen>/<Tenkoku>.		Mana too, wasn’t just staying at home reading her textbooks but rather, she was helping the works of an <Omen Meister> / <Tenkoku Technician> like this and was at the same time, receiving the trainings of the <Omen>/<Tenkoku>.

	The items Mana was lining up on the ~~self~~ by the order of the shopkeeper were mostly ornaments. But ~~they~~ weren’t only rings or hair ornaments for women also a number Cuff links and Belt Buckles targeted at men. There were also Sword handles and decorated scabbards too.		The items Mana was lining up on the shelf by the order of the shopkeeper were mostly ornaments. But there weren’t only rings or hair ornaments for women but also a number Cuff links and Belt Buckles targeted at men. There were also Sword handles and decorated scabbards too.

	But the most common one was the item with small alphabetical character-like engraved patterns.		But the most common one was the item with small alphabetical character-like engraved patterns.
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	Every existing thing has something like its own blueprint, which had established the path something or someone would take from birth till the time of its destruction.		Every existing thing has something like its own blueprint, which had established the path something or someone would take from birth till the time of its destruction.

	The <Omen> was something like an artificially produced blueprint similar to that one. It was something ~~what~~ would decide how much a flame would spread, or how it would disappear when it ~~burnt~~.		The <Omen> was something like an artificially produced blueprint similar to that one. It was something that would decide how much a flame would spread, or how it would disappear when it burned out.

	And the <Omen Talkers> who could freely manipulate that were something like ~~a prophet~~.		And the <Omen Talkers> who could freely manipulate that were something like prophets.

	“The flame burns like this” chanting a verdict like that, they distort the laws of the world in accordance to it. Only those who possessed violet coloured eyes could foresee the <Omen> which was also the blueprint and at the same time, destiny.		“The flame burns like this” chanting a verdict like that, they distort the laws of the world in accordance to it. Only those who possessed violet coloured eyes could foresee the <Omen> which was also the blueprint and at the same time, destiny.
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	The girl had an odd appearance.		The girl had an odd appearance.

	Her exposure was ~~quiet~~ high, even her navel and arms ~~with free~~ exposed.		Her exposure was quite high, even her navel and arms was freely exposed.

	–Eh? This person, she’s really beautiful…?		–Eh? This person, she’s really beautiful…?
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	“Are you going to do your performance in front of the shop?”		“Are you going to do your performance in front of the shop?”

	“That’s right. The plaza was already suppressed you see. Luckily if it’s around here then it’s quite big and there are a lot of people too.”		“That’s right. The plaza was already suppressed you see. Luckily if it’s around here then it’s fine since it's quite big and there are a lot of people too.”

	“Why in front of our shop?”		“Why in front of our shop?”

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	For the last half year, the attacks from the Saika have intensified, and the tension of battle had even made its way to the king’s capital, which was a long distance from the front lines. The king’s capital being directly attacked was something unthinkable but just a few moments ago, even that protection had been broken. If it wasn’t for that girl who called herself Luna, there would certainly have been one casualty today.		For the last half year, the attacks from the Saika have intensified, and the tension of battle had even made its way to the king’s capital, which was a long distance from the front lines. The king’s capital being directly attacked was something unthinkable but just a few moments ago, even that protection had been broken. If it wasn’t for that girl who called herself Luna, there would certainly have been one casualty today.

	The animals of the forest should have also felt the sighs of wars, and incidents of stray Saika attacking people ~~have~~ also ~~increase~~. That Saika appearing in a place which was just beside human residence just a while ago was most likely also because of that.		The animals of the forest should have also felt the sighs of wars, and incidents of stray Saika attacking people had also increased. That Saika appearing in a place which was just beside human residence just a while ago was most likely also because of that.

	And then, there was also this internal discord.		And then, there was also this internal discord.
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	Cladding himself in armour, and taking up a spear was to protect the citizen from an enemy like that, in other words, to fight as a soldier.		Cladding himself in armour, and taking up a spear was to protect the citizen from an enemy like that, in other words, to fight as a soldier.

	“Hey newbie, it the maintenances are done then hurry up and go to your post!”		“Hey newbie, if the maintenances are done then hurry up and go to your post!”

	“Roger!”		“Roger!”

	After being yelled at by a senior soldier, Heath replied with a shout and hastened towards post he was appointed to. The barracks was built just inside the outer wall gate, and the Main Street that continued from the gate ran along almost all the main facilities in town including the royal castle.		After being yelled at by a senior soldier, Heath replied with a shout and hastened towards the post he was appointed to. The barracks was built just inside the outer wall gate, and the Main Street that continued from the gate ran along almost all the main facilities in town including the royal castle.
	–A heroic tale doesn’t only belong to the hero.		–A heroic tale doesn’t only belong to the hero.

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	Someone who should be protected?		Someone who should be protected?

	Indeed, someone to protect was certainly necessary. It could be the people of a country. Or it could be a beautiful princess. Saving ~~then~~, certainly that was necessary to earn the title of a hero.		Indeed, someone to protect was certainly necessary. It could be the people of a country. Or it could be a beautiful princess. Saving either, certainly that was necessary to earn the title of a hero.

	But, a hero apart from them exists too. A hero who can accomplish anything without needing help from anyone. So it isn’t always an absolutely necessary thing.		But, a hero apart from them exists too. A hero who can accomplish anything without needing help from anyone. So it isn’t always an absolutely necessary thing.
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	After Heath nodded in agreement, the young man returned a ferocious looking smile.		After Heath nodded in agreement, the young man returned a ferocious looking smile.

	The glint of his eyes were so full of fighting spirit that it made Heath unconsciously thank ~~that~~ fact that he was not a Saika.		The glint in his eyes were so full of fighting spirit that it made Heath unconsciously thank the fact that he was not a Saika.

	And when Heath took an upright posture at his allocated position, the young man thrust the end of his spear on the ground.		And when Heath took an upright posture at his allocated position, the young man thrust the end of his spear on the ground.
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	Heath occupation, it was ‘Gatekeeper’.		Heath occupation, it was ‘Gatekeeper’.

	In all ~~heroin~~ tales, the one to call the hero after noticing an abnormal event before everyone else, and receiving the hero who had come from a long ~~distant~~, then unfolding a life or death battle for not letting that hero pass was always the gatekeeper!		In all heroic tales, the one to call the hero after noticing an abnormal event before everyone else, and receiving the hero who had come from a long distance, then unfolding a life or death battle for not letting that hero pass was always the gatekeeper!

	At the same time, the one to lose his life first of all in all heroic tales was generally the gatekeeper. But Heath was satisfied with his job.		At the same time, the one to lose his life first of all in all heroic tales was generally the gatekeeper. But Heath was satisfied with his job.

	Rather, because Heath who had no talents excelled in this, it gave him a good sense of fulfilment.		Rather, because Heath who had no talents excelled in this, it gave him a good sense of fulfilment.

	===Part 5===		===Part 5===

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	“Onii-chaaan, you forgot your lunchbox.”		“Onii-chaaan, you forgot your lunchbox.”

	She might have chased after him when she noticed the lunchbox. Mana ~~washad~~ come running.		She might have chased after him when she noticed the lunchbox. Mana had come running.

	She had come near enough to be able of see the Saika. Mana ~~also~~ turned pale and stiffened.		She had come near enough to be able of see the Saika. Mana turned pale and stiffened.

	---If it’s both of us, then I can’t run away.		---If it’s both of us, then I can’t run away.

	~~His~~ resolved himself fast.		He resolved himself fast.

	Unexpectedly, the spear set up straight did not tremble.		Unexpectedly, the spear set up straight did not tremble.
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	Behind him was his sister.		Behind him was his sister.

	Even if it wasn’t so, it was still this early in the morning. The number if residents who were sleeping weren’t small. Even though it numbered only one, if they were attacked by the likes of a Saika, then there is no telling how many casualties there would be.		Even if it wasn’t so, it was still this early in the morning. The number of residents who were sleeping weren’t small. Even though it numbered only one, if they were attacked by the likes of a Saika, then there is no telling how many casualties there would be.

	He was a soldier; in his hands was a weapon. And he had also learned how to use it.		He was a soldier; in his hands was a weapon. And he had also learned how to use it.
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	What Heath was looking at was the Saika’s red eyeballs.		What Heath was looking at was the Saika’s red eyeballs.

	If he could seize the core of its body, then he could deal some damage with absolute certainty. But even if he could quietly pull it off, it wasn’t enough to bring it down. Heath’s spear was nothing but a low priced mass produced item that even a normal people could get their hands on. It would be quite difficult to pierce through the Saika’s strong skin and pry into its flesh.		If he could seize the core of its body, then he could deal some damage with absolute certainty. But even if he could quietly pull it off, it wasn’t enough to bring it down. Heath’s spear was nothing but a low priced mass produced item that even normal people could get their hands on. It would be quite difficult to pierce through the Saika’s strong skin and pry into its flesh.

	But if he could pierce its eyeballs then that would take away a big part of its freedom. To sum it up, it would divert its hatred towards Heath, and Mana won’t be targeted anymore.		But if he could pierce its eyeballs then that would take away a big part of its freedom. To sum it up, it would divert its hatred towards Heath, and Mana won’t be targeted anymore.

	The shaking head that was attached on the tip of the neck was like a snake. It would be very difficult to pierce its eyeballs point on with the spear by normal means. It was throbbing with a more lively motion ~~than~~ that of humans. And besides, it might even be an impossible feat to accomplish from the start.		The shaking head that was attached on the tip of the neck was like a snake. It would be very difficult to pierce its eyeballs point on with the spear by normal means. It was throbbing with a more lively motion then that of humans. And besides, it might even be an impossible feat to accomplish from the start.

	--- It will not hit the mark even if I aim spot on. Aim straight. The target is that one dot in the distance.		--- It will not hit the mark even if I aim spot on. Aim straight. The target is that one dot in the distance.
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	It aimed, and did not miss. Fresh blood sprayed out from the Saika’s red pupil.		It aimed, and did not miss. Fresh blood sprayed out from the Saika’s red pupil.

	The spouted blood instantaneously hardened, ~~they~~ turned into a subtle gemstone like crystal, and fell to the ground.		The spouted blood instantaneously hardened, it turned into a subtle gemstone like crystal, and fell to the ground.

	This was a Saika’s blood. The reason behind it was not known but for some reason, when their blood came in contact with the atmosphere, it crystalized.		This was a Saika’s blood. The reason behind it was not known but for some reason, when their blood came in contact with the atmosphere, it crystalized.
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	---Still, I have to hold out till Mana manages to get away.		---Still, I have to hold out till Mana manages to get away.

	Even though he was about to be killed, he try to buy more time until he would die.		Even though he was about to be killed, he would try to buy more time until he would die.

	But it was when he finally resolved himself to death.		But it was when he finally resolved himself to death.

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	(No, don’t mind it. Even if you stand ready, you will receive a proper explanation from the king.)		(No, don’t mind it. Even if you stand ready, you will receive a proper explanation from the king.)

	This stage had become the location for the succession rite of the {{furigana\|<Engraved Blade of the Round Table>\|Entaku no Kenkoku}}. Though there were opinions that it should have been performed at the royal castle in order to show respect to the king, the king himself wanted to lengthily ~~explain~~ it to the subjects too. That’s how the stage came to be in a place like this. Perhaps, it was meant to wipe out the recent distrusts, too.		This stage had become the location for the succession rite of the {{furigana\|<Engraved Blade of the Round Table>\|Entaku no Kenkoku}}. Though there were opinions that it should have been performed at the royal castle in order to show respect to the king, the king himself wanted to give lengthily explanation it to the subjects too. That’s how the stage came to be in a place like this. Perhaps, it was meant to wipe out the recent distrusts, too.

	The king, huh...		The king, huh...
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	It was necessary to peacefully subdue the ingenuity of various feudal lords, though a noteworthy degeneration of the public order was not perceived.		It was necessary to peacefully subdue the ingenuity of various feudal lords, though a noteworthy degeneration of the public order was not perceived.

	Because the person in question was also concerned about it, recently he ~~has~~ showing himself in front of the public too.		Because the person in question was also concerned about it, recently he was showing himself in front of the public too.

	In regards of such a king, rather than feeling discontent, Lutile’s feeling of sympathy was stronger.		In regards of such a king, rather than feeling discontent, Lutile’s feeling of sympathy was stronger.
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	“Thirdly, the <Seal of the Sage> which can grant any wish will be given to the one who will gather all the {{furigana\|Engraved Blade of the Round Table\|Entaku no Kenkoku}}.”		“Thirdly, the <Seal of the Sage> which can grant any wish will be given to the one who will gather all the {{furigana\|Engraved Blade of the Round Table\|Entaku no Kenkoku}}.”

	~~「Kuhihi」After~~ saying that, the king raised a strange laughing voice.		「Kuhihi」 After saying that, the king raised a strange laughing voice.

	“What in the world is he talking about...?”		“What in the world is he talking about...?”
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	The commander might have felt a similarly abnormal feeling. He was walking towards the king.		The commander might have felt a similarly abnormal feeling. He was walking towards the king.

	“With all due respect, my king. What are we supposed to do with these {{furigana\|Engraved Blade of the Round Table\|Entaku no Kenkoku}}?”		“With all due respect, my king. What are we supposed to do with these {{furigana\|Engraved Blade of the Round Table\|Entaku no Kenkoku}}?”
	The king tilted his shoulders at the words of the commander		The king tilted his shoulders at the words of the commander

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	Bound up by the swords pierced in his body, adding the many swords thrust before him, the clown couldn’t even lift a finger.		Bound up by the swords pierced in his body, adding the many swords thrust before him, the clown couldn’t even lift a finger.

	“Tha-that was not what you promised, Clown!!Why did you kill Greisch!”		“Tha-that was not what you promised, Clown!! Why did you kill Greisch!”

	The clown leaked a mysterious voice towards the king who was screaming.		The clown leaked a mysterious voice towards the king who was screaming.
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	On the venue grounds, other than the knights who were entrusted with the {{furigana\|Engraved Blade of the Round Table\|Entaku no Kenkoku}}>, there were also many spectators.		On the venue grounds, other than the knights who were entrusted with the {{furigana\|Engraved Blade of the Round Table\|Entaku no Kenkoku}}>, there were also many spectators.

	Or possibly, there were knights who weren’t chosen by the {{furigana\|Engraved Blade of the Round Table\|Entaku no Kenkoku}} regardless of having more power.		Or possibly, there were knights who weren’t chosen by the {{furigana\|Engraved Blade of the Round Table\|Entaku no Kenkoku}} regardless of having more power.

	Or possibly, there were feudal lords who’s dominions were being plunged into poverty because of the young king’s inexperience.		Or possibly, there were feudal lords who’s dominions were being plunged into poverty because of the young king’s inexperience.
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	All of them were fixedly looking at the incident that had just occurred in front of their eyes.		All of them were fixedly looking at the incident that had just occurred in front of their eyes.

	---oh... so even I can get my hands on that {{furigana\|Engraved Blade of the Round Table\|Entaku no Kenkoku}} too.		---oh... so even I can get my hands on that {{furigana\|Engraved Blade of the Round Table\|Entaku no Kenkoku}} too.

	Envy, Jealousy, Longing, Lutile saw all of these converge into just one emotion.		Envy, Jealousy, Longing, Lutile saw all of these converge into just one emotion.

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	That place was an arena which had been built on a grand scale.		That place was an arena which had been built on a grand scale.

	In the central area, there was a stone stage that had been cut in a square shape and in its surroundings, a maintained area was planted. The low wall had been wonderfully decorated with candlesticks, and small flags were stabbed below that. Even from a distant view it could be realised from their varied designs that, there were 12 kinds of flags in total.		In the central area, there was a stone stage that had been cut in a square shape and in its surroundings, a maintained area was planted. The low wall had been wonderfully decorated with candlesticks, and small flags were stabbed below that. Even from a distant view it could be realised from their varied designs that there were 12 kinds of flags in total.

	Beyond the stage that was enclosed by a low wall a circular auditorium had been prepared. The seats had already been filled so much that the aisle could not be seen but everyone had been listening attentively without opening their mouths.		Beyond the stage that was enclosed by a low wall a circular auditorium had been prepared. The seats had already been filled so much that the aisle could not be seen but everyone had been listening attentively without opening their mouths.
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	“And thus, the many kingdoms began to decrease. Even possessing any kind of sword, or casting any kind of magic, or using any kind of knowledge, could not harm the body of the demon, the legend begins from here.”		“And thus, the many kingdoms began to decrease. Even possessing any kind of sword, or casting any kind of magic, or using any kind of knowledge, could not harm the body of the demon, the legend begins from here.”

	Her raven hair was tied in a bundled by the back of her head it extended to her waist forming a long ponytail, her closed eyes looked long and narrow, and her flower bud like lips ~~was~~ soaked in a beautiful pink colour.		Her raven hair was tied in a bundled by the back of her head where it extended to her waist forming a long ponytail, her closed eyes looked long and narrow, and her flower bud like lips were soaked in a beautiful pink colour.

	The ~~cloths~~ that she wore were not a dress but a uniform that a schoolgirl usually wears. Compared to a dress it had fewer decorations but her long and slender legs which were covered by tights helped her undulated rich body figure. As a woman, her glamour was definitely not at a disadvantage.		The clothes that she wore were not a dress but a uniform that a schoolgirl usually wears. Compared to a dress it had fewer decorations but her long and slender legs which were covered by tights helped her undulated rich body figure. As a woman, her glamour was definitely not at a disadvantage.

	Though it was a fine weather, for her to be able to wear such lightweight clothing in a season where the snow had yet to melt, was all thanks to the magic flames that warmed that place up.		Though it was a fine weather, for her to be able to wear such lightweight clothing in a season where the snow had yet to melt, was all thanks to the magic flames that warmed that place up.
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	She had long silver coloured hair and vivid crimson pupils with a strikingly good body figure, she should’ve attracted a lot of attention.		She had long silver coloured hair and vivid crimson pupils with a strikingly good body figure, she should’ve attracted a lot of attention.

	The general visitors were seated on a further row she was curious about how the girl slipped in with the soldiers but she couldn’t stand still there for too long. She quietly got down from the stage.		The general visitors were seated on a further row so she was curious about how the girl slipped in with the soldiers but she couldn’t stand still there for too long. She quietly got down from the stage.

	On both sides of the stage, several knights were standing in a row ~~amongst them after~~ she joined the East side, she heard a sociable voice calling out next to her.		On both sides of the stage, several knights were standing in a row. After she joined the East side, she heard a sociable voice calling out next to her.

	“Did you see something that caught your interest, Lutile”		“Did you see something that caught your interest, Lutile”

	The girl, Lutile’s name was called by ~~Youth~~ who had a fearless physique and face. He had long blonde hair tied behind his back, and was wearing a frock coat. It was a little bit exaggerated thing to wear at the place of a ceremony.		The girl, Lutile’s name was called by a youth who had a fearless physique and face. He had long blonde hair tied behind his back, and was wearing a frock coat. It was a little bit exaggerated thing to wear at the place of a ceremony.

	After being asked, the girl searched for the clown's appearance again but was not able to find it.		After being asked, the girl searched for the clown's appearance again but was not able to find it.
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	Even though she had deliberately lowered her voice, she accidentally called him by his old nickname. When she realised this, her face became red. At this the youth made a nostalgic gentle face and shrugged his shoulders.		Even though she had deliberately lowered her voice, she accidentally called him by his old nickname. When she realised this, her face became red. At this the youth made a nostalgic gentle face and shrugged his shoulders.

	The young man was Lutile’s older male cousin. She used to play with the young man a lot in her childhood and ~~in those times,~~ in those times, reciprocally not by Knight or anything else; he used to be called “Onii-sama” innocently while smiling.		The young man was Lutile’s older male cousin. She used to play with the young man a lot in her childhood and in those times, reciprocally not by Knight or anything else; he used to be called “Onii-sama” innocently while smiling.

	Following the girls verse, two knights got up on the stage their respective swords were mutually pulled out and the tips were piled up on each other exchanging an expression of gratitude. After that, they mutually put some distance between each other and started to exchange blows with their ~~sword~~.		Following the girls verse, two knights got up on the stage, their respective swords were mutually pulled out and the tips were piled up on each other exchanging an expression of gratitude. After that, they mutually put some distance between each other and started to exchange blows with their swords.

	But even though they were on an arena, it was unlikely that they would actually cut each other on an exhibition. It was the sword dance of courtesy.		But even though they were on an arena, it was unlikely that they would actually cut each other in an exhibition. It was the sword dance of courtesy.

	(Well, let us not speak so stiffly. And if you really think so, then please put on a more interesting expression.)		(Well, let us not speak so stiffly. And if you really think so, then please put on a more interesting expression.)
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	{{furigana\|<Engraved Blade of the Round Table>\|Entaku no Kenkoku}}ーーーIn the past, the swords of the 12 who entombed the Demon perished along with the demon. It is said that the sage turned them into at that time and stopped the destruction, for the day when the one to succeed the demon would appear. One thing or another, it was an incident that happened one thousand years ago. The legend stopped there, and in the history thereafter, the name of <Kenkoku> did not appear.		{{furigana\|<Engraved Blade of the Round Table>\|Entaku no Kenkoku}}ーーーIn the past, the swords of the 12 who entombed the Demon perished along with the demon. It is said that the sage turned them into at that time and stopped the destruction, for the day when the one to succeed the demon would appear. One thing or another, it was an incident that happened one thousand years ago. The legend stopped there, and in the history thereafter, the name of <Kenkoku> did not appear.

	And as for why it appeared now of all times		And as for why it appeared now of all times:

	“Should I say that the “Saika” are starting something?”		“Should I say that the “Saika” are starting something?”
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	It is plausible that the number of those individuals isn’t much; they are able to cross the great valley by themselves.		It is plausible that the number of those individuals isn’t much; they are able to cross the great valley by themselves.

	Including the Oukas, there are various kinds of Saika out there with various appearances. It is said that they live in the opposite side of the great valley which cuts across the continent and is said to be the mark of the battle between the demon and the Knights of the Round Table .The Saikas invade into the human countries by jumping over the valley.		Including the Oukas, there are various kinds of Saika out there with various appearances. It is said that they live in the opposite side of the great valley which cuts across the continent and is said to be the mark of the battle between the demon and the Knights of the Round Table. The Saikas invade into the human countries by jumping over the valley.

	Especially in the last few months, it felt as if the number of ferocious natured Saikas had grown.		Especially in the last few months, it felt as if the number of ferocious natured Saikas had grown.
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	The young man was also looking at his <Kenkoku> doubtfully.		The young man was also looking at his <Kenkoku> doubtfully.

	(I don’t ~~relly~~ feel like I was given some kind of special power. I see, It might be that this <Kenkoku> expects us to do something.)		(I don’t really feel like I was given some kind of special power. I see, It might be that this <Kenkoku> expects us to do something.)

	While the young man faintly muttered that, a large shadow was suddenly cast overhead of the two.		While the young man faintly muttered that, a large shadow was suddenly cast overhead of the two.
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	(Commander Greisch)		(Commander Greisch)

	Lutile and the young man quickly fixed ~~there posture~~.		Lutile and the young man quickly fixed their postures.

	He was the man who worked as the first division commander of the Estrelia Knight’s Order the young man belonged to. From a third seat position, the commander became a person who would be in charge of the military other then the king. It was when the salutations were over and returned.		He was the man who worked as the first division commander of the Estrelia Knight’s Order the young man belonged to. From a third seat position, the commander became a person who would be in charge of the military other then the king. It was when the salutations were over and returned.