Kenkoku no Jungfrau:Volume 1 Prologue - Revision history

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	——What a failure		——What a failure

	By Teifue, she probably meant the dragon.		By 'Teifue', she probably meant the dragon.

	Learning that she was troubled after being seen, Heath felt a cold chill run down his back.		Learning that she was troubled after being seen, Heath felt a cold chill run down his back.
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	“I think it should be okay to overlook you.”		“I think it should be okay to overlook you.”

	The lamp of hope returned to Heath’s pupils after the possibility of living ~~that~~ had been ~~given~~ to him.		The lamp of hope returned to Heath’s pupils after the possibility of living had been shown to him.

	“But, you will have to follow what I am about to tell you.”		“But, you will have to follow what I am about to tell you.”
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	“You didn’t meet me here, and you didn't see any flying dragons either.”		“You didn’t meet me here, and you didn't see any flying dragons either.”

	“Yes! I didn't see nor hear any dragons.”		“Yes! I didn't see, nor hear any dragons.”

	“That’s strange. Then doesn't that mean ~~that~~ that there wasn't any promise to ~~listen to/obey me~~?”		“That’s strange. Then, doesn't that mean that there wasn't any promise to keep in the first place?”

	“E-eh? Well, ~~That’s~~...~~Erm~~...”		“E-eh? Well, that’s...erm...”

	When Heath kept going in circles in front of her eyes, the girl again started laughing while embracing her stomach.		When Heath kept going in circles in front of her eyes, the girl again started laughing while embracing her stomach.
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	After the girl muttered that, the dragon suddenly released Heath.		After the girl muttered that, the dragon suddenly released Heath.

	With a loud splash, Heath fell down in the ~~water~~ while splashing up a grand spray of water. The depth of the ~~water~~ wasn't much, so he hit his face with the bottom of the lake. Bringing his head up after struggling for some time, the dragon's figure had disappeared before he was even aware of it.		With a loud splash, Heath fell down into the lake while splashing up a grand spray of water. The depth of the lake wasn't much, so he hit his face with the bottom of the lake. Bringing his head up after struggling for some time, the dragon's figure had disappeared before he was even aware of it.

	On the other hand, the girl was looking down at Heath with the same crimson eyes as the dragon. The girl quietly placed her foot on the water while smiling.		On the other hand, the girl was looking down at Heath with the same crimson eyes as the dragon. The girl quietly placed her foot on the water while smiling.
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	When she shook her argent hair, the girl interrupted greatly.		When she shook her argent hair, the girl interrupted greatly.

	”My name is Estelle Norn Schutern. A ~~Joker/Clown~~.”		”My name is Estelle Norn Schutern. A clown.”

	“A ~~Joker~~...?”		“A clown...?”

	Now that he thought about it, certainly the girl’s mysterious clothing didn't look anything but that of a ~~Joker’s~~.		Now that he thought about it, certainly the girl’s mysterious clothing didn't look anything but that of a clown’s.

	“To be able to make a ~~Joker~~ laugh, I’ll at least spare your life~”		“To be able to make a clown laugh, I’ll at least spare your life~”

	And then, pointing at Heath with a snap		And then, pointing at Heath with a snap,

	“But, if you tell someone about me, next time I really will eat you okay?”		“But, if you tell someone about me, next time I really will eat you, okay?”
	[[Image:Kenkoku no YungFrau V1 p15.jpg\|thumb]]		[[Image:Kenkoku no YungFrau V1 p15.jpg\|thumb]]

	After giving a bright nod, Heath nervously said in an inquiring voice.		After giving a bright nod, Heath nervously said in an inquiring voice,

	“Err, one thing, is it okay for me to ask about one thing?”		“Err, one thing, is it okay for me to ask about one thing?”
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	“What is it?”		“What is it?”

	“That dragon just now, what in the world was that? Was it magic? Surely it wasn't real dragon, right?”		“That dragon just now, what in the world was that? Was it magic? Surely it wasn't a real dragon, right?”

	The girl’s pupils were not of a light purple colour. Thus she surely couldn't be one of the {{furigana\|<Omen Talker>\|Tenkoku Tsukai}}.		The girl’s pupils were not of a light purple colour. Thus, she surely couldn't be one of the {{furigana\|<Omen Talker>\|Tenkoku Tsukai}}.

	To the Heath who revealed a voice filled with bewilderment, ~~the~~ narrowed her scarlet coloured eyes.		To the Heath who revealed a voice filled with bewilderment, she narrowed her scarlet-coloured eyes.

	~~“Jokers~~ antics you see, that was just a simple magic trick.”		“Clown's antics you see, that was just a simple magic trick.”

	Apparently, even the miracle of her standing on top of water was about to be ~~solved~~ off as a simple magic trick. The girl ~~seems~~ to be happily fluttering the palms of her hands.		Apparently, even the miracle of her standing on top of water was about to be written off as a simple magic trick. The girl seemed to be happily fluttering the palms of her hands.

	“See you then, ~~Bye Bye”~~		“See you then, bye bye.”

	After leaving those last words, her body began to disappear as if dissolving into the night wind.		After leaving those last words, her body began to disappear as if dissolving into the night wind.
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	“Ah, Wait!”		“Ah, Wait!”

	By the time Heath shouted that, the ~~girls~~ figure was ~~no-where~~ to be seen.		By the time Heath shouted that, the girl's figure was nowhere to be seen.

	ーShe disappeared...?		ーShe disappeared...?

	The black dragon, and the ~~Silver~~ haired girl too disappeared as if they weren't there from the beginning. Even saying that he saw a strange dream would have a lot of persuasive power.		The black dragon, and the silver-haired girl too disappeared as if they weren't there from the beginning. Even saying that he saw a strange dream would have a lot of persuasive power.

	Only the silver moon alone did not change. It seemed to be floating in the sky and nodding as if saying that it was not a dream.		Only the silver moon alone did not change. It seemed to be floating in the sky and nodding as if saying that it was not a dream.
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	For a while, after staring off blankly in a daze, and shivering in the cold, Heath crawled up from the lake to ashore.		For a while, after staring off blankly in a daze, and shivering in the cold, Heath crawled up from the lake to ashore.

	That was in fact, Heath and ~~her, Estelle’s first~~ meeting.		That was in fact, Heath and her—Estelle’s—first meeting.

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	”My name is Estelle Norn Schutern. A Joker/Clown.”		”My name is Estelle Norn Schutern. A Joker/Clown.”

	“A Joker.....?”		“A Joker...?”

	Now that he thought about it, certainly the girl’s mysterious clothing didn't look anything but that of a Joker’s.		Now that he thought about it, certainly the girl’s mysterious clothing didn't look anything but that of a Joker’s.
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	By the time Heath shouted that, the girls figure was no-where to be seen.		By the time Heath shouted that, the girls figure was no-where to be seen.

	ーShe disappeared.....?		ーShe disappeared...?

	The black dragon, and the Silver haired girl too disappeared as if they weren't there from the beginning. Even saying that he saw a strange dream would have a lot of persuasive power.		The black dragon, and the Silver haired girl too disappeared as if they weren't there from the beginning. Even saying that he saw a strange dream would have a lot of persuasive power.

Rohan123: Changed "JungFrau" to "Jungfrau".

2013-09-17T18:41:23Z

Changed "JungFrau" to "Jungfrau".

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	\| Return to [[Kenkoku no Jungfrau\|Main Page]]		\| Return to [[Kenkoku no Jungfrau\|Main Page]]
	\| Forward to [[Kenkoku no ~~JungFrau~~:Volume 1_Chapter 1\|Chapter 1]]		\| Forward to [[Kenkoku no Jungfrau:Volume 1_Chapter 1\|Chapter 1]]
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Rohan123: Rohan123 moved page Kenkoku no JungFrau:Volume 1 Prologue to Kenkoku no Jungfrau:Volume 1 Prologue: Name changed from "JungFrau" to "Jungfrau" as per discussion on forum.

2013-09-17T18:36:54Z

Rohan123 moved page Kenkoku no JungFrau:Volume 1 Prologue to Kenkoku no Jungfrau:Volume 1 Prologue: Name changed from "JungFrau" to "Jungfrau" as per discussion on forum.

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Rohan123: Changed "JungFrau" to "Jungfrau".

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Rohan123: Changed "JungFrau" to "Jungfrau".

2013-09-17T18:11:21Z

Changed "JungFrau" to "Jungfrau".

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	\| Return to [[Kenkoku no ~~JungFrau~~\|Main Page]]		\| Return to [[Kenkoku no Jungfrau\|Main Page]]
	\| Forward to [[Kenkoku no JungFrau:Volume 1_Chapter 1\|Chapter 1]]		\| Forward to [[Kenkoku no JungFrau:Volume 1_Chapter 1\|Chapter 1]]
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Ways at 15:56, 17 September 2013

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	“That dragon just now, what in the world was that? Was it magic? Surely it wasn't real dragon, right?”		“That dragon just now, what in the world was that? Was it magic? Surely it wasn't real dragon, right?”

	The girl’s pupils were not of a light purple colour. Thus she surely couldn't be one of the <~~Knights of the Round Table~~>.		The girl’s pupils were not of a light purple colour. Thus she surely couldn't be one of the {{furigana\|<Omen Talker>\|Tenkoku Tsukai}}.

	To the Heath who revealed a voice filled with bewilderment, the narrowed her scarlet coloured eyes.		To the Heath who revealed a voice filled with bewilderment, the narrowed her scarlet coloured eyes.

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Mytsy at 21:28, 14 September 2013

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Mytsy at 21:20, 14 September 2013

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