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	"...—?!"		"...—?!"

	"What with that look of betrayal on your face? I'll say it again, we're not here on a vacation."		"What's with that look of betrayal on your face? I'll say it again, we're not here on a vacation."

	The girl's face clouded over, heartbreak written all over her trembling black pupils.		The girl's face clouded over, heartbreak written all over her trembling black pupils.
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	"Why didn't it stop?" "This was supposed to be the terminal station!"		"Why didn't it stop?" "This was supposed to be the terminal station!"

	The passengers were stirring, doubt ~~and~~ and dissatisfaction lining their voices.		The passengers were stirring, doubt and dissatisfaction lining their voices.

	The train conductor burst through a door, a dire look on his face.		The train conductor burst through a door, a dire look on his face.

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	After confirming the train had come to a complete halt, the youth leapt down onto the tracks.		After confirming the train had come to a complete halt, the youth leapt down onto the tracks.

	"Well done Yaya. You sure as hell didn't hold back anything, ~~didn't~~ you?"		"Well done Yaya. You sure as hell didn't hold back anything, did you?"

	The girl was delighted from the praise. She stuck her head out expectantly, fidgeting while waiting for him to pet her head. However, the youth abruptly turned on his heels.		The girl was delighted from the praise. She stuck her head out expectantly, fidgeting while waiting for him to pet her head. However, the youth abruptly turned on his heels.

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	==~~Prologue-~~ The Puppeteer from the Far East==		==Prologue— The Puppeteer from the Far East==

	"Yaya is cute, Yaya is super cute. Yaya is the cutest in the world."		"Yaya is cute, Yaya is super cute. Yaya is the cutest in the world."
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	Their oddity did not extend to their appearance alone. Inexplicably, the girl was leaning over the seat opposite her, as though trying to cover the youth with her body, while whispering strange words to him.		Their oddity did not extend to their appearance alone. Inexplicably, the girl was leaning over the seat opposite her, as though trying to cover the youth with her body, while whispering strange words to him.

	"Yaya is so cute I love Yaya Yaya is so bewitching Yaya is my ~~wife-~~"		"Yaya is so cute I love Yaya Yaya is so bewitching Yaya is my wife—"

	Abruptly, the whispering stopped.		Abruptly, the whispering stopped.
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	"Actually, I'll be sleeping. If you try anything funny though, I'll kick you out of the room."		"Actually, I'll be sleeping. If you try anything funny though, I'll kick you out of the room."

	"...-?!"		"...—?!"

	"What with that look of betrayal on your face? I'll say it again, we're not here on a vacation."		"What with that look of betrayal on your face? I'll say it again, we're not here on a vacation."
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	It was simple physics. Anything on a downward slope would never naturally come to a stop.		It was simple physics. Anything on a downward slope would never naturally come to a stop.

	Like an omen of the catastrophe to come, the train literally began to shudder. At that ~~moment-~~		Like an omen of the catastrophe to come, the train literally began to shudder. At that moment—

	"Everybody, return to your seats!"		"Everybody, return to your seats!"
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	On doing so, the girl opened her palm towards him. In a flash, (something akin to) a bluish-white flame gushed forth, forming something like a chain that linked the girl and the youth together.		On doing so, the girl opened her palm towards him. In a flash, (something akin to) a bluish-white flame gushed forth, forming something like a chain that linked the girl and the youth together.

	The girl was now right in front of the train. The train with a weight of at least a few hundred tonnes was now bearing down on ~~her-~~		The girl was now right in front of the train. The train with a weight of at least a few hundred tonnes was now bearing down on her—

	And then, a crash.		And then, a crash.
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	When they returned to their carriage, a scene of carnage lay before them. Luggage was strewn about all over the place, and the moans and groans of the injured could be heard. Still, there were no serious casualties. Giving them a quick, unsympathetic glance, he began to search for his own trunk.		When they returned to their carriage, a scene of carnage lay before them. Luggage was strewn about all over the place, and the moans and groans of the injured could be heard. Still, there were no serious casualties. Giving them a quick, unsympathetic glance, he began to search for his own trunk.

	"~~-Excuse~~ me!"		"—Excuse me!"

	Just as he found his trunk, a voice called out to him from behind.		Just as he found his trunk, a voice called out to him from behind.
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	The female form automaton, much like a real girl would, gave a gentle smile.		The female form automaton, much like a real girl would, gave a gentle smile.

	"Yes, Yaya is Raishin's 'personal doll'. ~~-Even~~ in bed"		"Yes, Yaya is Raishin's 'personal doll'. —Even in bed"

	That last part was an unnecessary remark.		That last part was an unnecessary remark.
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	On that day, the solitary youth, alongside his peerless automaton, passed through the gates into the academy.		On that day, the solitary youth, alongside his peerless automaton, passed through the gates into the academy.

	With that, what awaited him was that banquet of ~~strife-~~		With that, what awaited him was that banquet of strife—