Kino no Tabi:Volume2 Chapter1 - Revision history

Napen123: Changed some wording

2019-02-15T01:06:18Z

Changed some wording

Napen123: Grammatical changes (comma changes, add/fix particles, and changed flied to flew).

2017-06-08T17:23:05Z

Grammatical changes (comma changes, add/fix particles, and changed flied to flew).

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127.0.0.1: /* “A Tale of Feeding Off Others”Story covered in anime episode 2. —I Want to Live.— */

2016-08-20T04:12:59Z

“A Tale of Feeding Off Others”Story covered in anime episode 2. —I Want to Live.—

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Ella.servantes at 11:59, 10 March 2013

2013-03-10T11:59:34Z

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	Kino straddled Hermes. She covered her face with her hat and goggles.		Kino straddled Hermes. She covered her face with her hat and goggles.
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	The motorrad ran off. It passed through the truck, the tent, and what remained of the four corpses, and soon disappeared.		The motorrad ran off. It passed through the truck, the tent, and what remained of the four corpses, and soon disappeared.
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Ella.servantes: proofread for pdf

2013-02-24T15:53:45Z

proofread for pdf

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Ella.servantes at 07:22, 19 August 2012

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NorbJunior at 18:10, 19 July 2009

2009-07-19T18:10:34Z

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2009-07-19T05:30:45Z

New page: Chapter Status (by NorbJunior): Date: 7/19/09 :: 7% complete

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	The snow that accumulated in one winter crushed all of the grass underneath. Only the tall trees with long and narrow leaves grew out of the white surface.		The snow that accumulated in one winter crushed all of the grass underneath. Only the tall trees with long and narrow leaves grew out of the white surface.

	Even now, snow ~~was still falling~~ from the sky ~~visible from~~ gaps in the branches. ~~Dull low~~ clouds were spread out and the sun's light was weak.		Even now, snow continued to fall from the sky through gaps in the branches. Low, dull clouds were spread out, and the sun's light was weak.

	It was a quiet place. Nothing could be heard other than the sound of the occasional snow pattering from the branches. The wind was not blowing either.		It was a quiet place. Nothing could be heard other than the sound of the occasional snow pattering from the branches. The wind was not blowing either.
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	In such a place, there was a wild rabbit. Its fur was pure white except for the tips of its ears.		In such a place, there was a wild rabbit. Its fur was pure white except for the tips of its ears.

	The rabbit advanced a little, leaving shallow footprints on the snow. It stopped and moved its ears and head bit by bit. Then it ~~leaped~~ forward again.		The rabbit advanced a little, leaving shallow footprints in the snow. It stopped and moved its ears and head bit by bit. Then, it leapt forward again.

	The rabbit repeated this for a while, then stopped. Its ears moved. A red dot appeared on its white head — a red light.		The rabbit repeated this for a while, then stopped. Its ears moved. A red dot appeared on its white head — a red light.
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	This person was clad in a hooded snowsuit and overpants that covered up to the tip of her shoes. She wore a furred hat and yellow single-lens goggles. A face warmer extended from her neck up, covering her face.		This person was clad in a hooded snowsuit and overpants that covered up to the tip of her shoes. She wore a furred hat and yellow single-lens goggles. A face warmer extended from her neck up, covering her face.

	She was leaning against the trunk of a tree, sitting with legs bent and knees forward. With both hands, she was balancing a hand persuader (Note: A gun. In this case, a pistol) placed between her knees. The persuader was a slender automatic fitted with a harmonica-shaped silencer. A red light extended from the tiny hole under the barrel — a laser sight for alignment with the target. This light was aiming towards the head of the rabbit.		She was leaning against the trunk of a tree, sitting with her legs bent and knees forward. With both hands, she was balancing a hand persuader (Note: A gun. In this case, a pistol) placed between her knees. The persuader was a slender automatic fitted with a harmonica-shaped silencer. A red light extended from the tiny hole under the barrel — a laser sight for alignment with the target. This light was aiming towards the head of the rabbit.

	She breathed out a wisp of white air. She slowly pressed the trigger. A clink was heard from inside the persuader.		She breathed out a wisp of white air. She slowly pressed the trigger. A clink was heard from inside the persuader.
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	The next instant, blood spurted out from where the red point of light marked the rabbit’s head.		The next instant, blood spurted out from where the red point of light marked the rabbit’s head.

	The rabbit trembled for a moment~~, and~~ soon fell ~~down~~ and stopped moving. The blood from its head slightly stained its white fur, and the snow ~~underneath~~ it melted a little.		The rabbit trembled for a moment but soon fell and stopped moving. The blood from its head slightly stained its white fur, and the snow beneath it melted a little.