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2019-02-15T00:48:22Z

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	The sniper heard a sharp, determined voice speak behind him. Caught up in surprise, he slowly turned his head and came face to face with a woman.		The sniper heard a sharp, determined voice speak behind him. Caught up in surprise, he slowly turned his head and came face to face with a woman.

	She wore elegant clothing, and had dark glossy hair. A beautiful woman, without a doubt. With her right hand, she held a high-caliber revolver aimed squarely at the sniper’s head.		She wore elegant clothing and had dark, glossy hair. A beautiful woman, without a doubt. With her right hand, she held a high-caliber revolver aimed squarely at the sniper’s head.

	“Sorry to have frightened you, but please don’t move. If I miss, it would be a waste of bullets and powder.”		“Sorry to have frightened you, but please don’t move. If I miss, it would be a waste of bullets and powder.”
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	The woman nodded and the sniper continued, “Then what are you waiting for?”		The woman nodded and the sniper continued, “Then what are you waiting for?”

	A pained look appeared on the woman’s face. “Good question.” The woman ventured to explain. “Actually, after I accepted this assignment, I agreed to another contract from some people from the same country.		A pained look appeared on the woman’s face. “Good question.” The woman ventured to explain: “Actually, after I accepted this assignment, I agreed to another contract from some people from the same country.

	“They paid me equally to not kill you because they wished for everything to remain unchanged. There are many who hate you. But there are people who are grateful to you for removing their enemy, letting them receive their inheritance early, releasing those with incurable diseases, and allowing some to start anew. So there are just as many people who wish for you to remain alive. To them, you are like a god of good fortune.”		“They paid me equally to not kill you because they wished for everything to remain unchanged. There are many who hate you. But there are also people who are grateful to you for removing their enemy, letting them receive their inheritance early, releasing those with incurable diseases, and allowing some to start anew. So there are just as many people who wish for you to remain alive. To them, you are like a god of good fortune.”

	“Really.”		“Really.”
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	“I see.”		“I see.”
	[[File:Kino_no_Tabi_v2_004.jpg\|x200px\|thumb\|right\|...the man was still swimming naked in the water...]]		[[File:Kino_no_Tabi_v2_004.jpg\|x200px\|thumb\|right\|...the man was still swimming naked in the water...]]
	The woman gave the sniper a number then left him on the hill and returned to the forest. Since it was a complex number that required very difficult calculations, it will not be written here.		The woman gave the sniper a number, then left him on the hill and returned to the forest. Since it was a complex number that required very difficult calculations, it will not be written here.

	At the lake, the man was still swimming naked in the water. Upon seeing the woman, he ran towards her with a look as if he was about to cry.		At the lake, the man was still swimming naked in the water. Upon seeing the woman, he ran towards her with a look as if he was about to cry.
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	As the man pulled on his pants, he turned to face the woman.		As the man pulled on his pants, he turned to face the woman.

	“We are still alive. That means you killed him right?”		“We are still alive. That means you killed him, right?”

	“Nope.”		“Nope.”

	The man ~~leaped~~ when he heard this, accidentally putting both legs into the same leg of his long pants, causing him to trip and fall.		The man leapt when he heard this, accidentally putting both legs into the same leg of his long pants, causing him to trip and fall.

	The woman explained the deal.		The woman explained the deal.
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	The woman barely gave the matter any thought and walked towards their car, a run-down little vehicle on the verge of falling apart. The man hastily followed her.		The woman barely gave the matter any thought and walked towards their car, a run-down little vehicle on the verge of falling apart. The man hastily followed her.

	Once inside the car, he asked, “What now? We can’t return because we didn’t kill the sniper and yet we didn’t let him continue killing unchecked. We can’t receive ~~any~~ reward from either side.”		Once inside the car, he asked, “What now? We can’t return because we didn’t kill the sniper and yet we didn’t let him continue killing unchecked. We can’t receive a reward from either side.”

	“I know.”		“I know.”

Napen123: Minor grammar fix (comma)

2019-02-15T00:28:40Z

Minor grammar fix (comma)

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	[[File:Kino_no_Tabi_v2_005.jpg\|x200px\|thumb\|right\|"Please don't do that."]]		[[File:Kino_no_Tabi_v2_005.jpg\|x200px\|thumb\|right\|"Please don't do that."]]

	The sniper heard a sharp, determined voice speak behind him. Caught up in surprise, he slowly turned his head, and came face to face with a woman.		The sniper heard a sharp, determined voice speak behind him. Caught up in surprise, he slowly turned his head and came face to face with a woman.

	She wore elegant clothing, and had dark glossy hair. A beautiful woman, without a doubt. With her right hand, she held a high-caliber revolver aimed squarely at the sniper’s head.		She wore elegant clothing, and had dark glossy hair. A beautiful woman, without a doubt. With her right hand, she held a high-caliber revolver aimed squarely at the sniper’s head.

Napen123: Wording change

2019-02-15T00:24:09Z

Wording change

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	There was a dense forest. And there was a tall hill, from which one could observe the forest in its entirety.		There was a dense forest. And there was a tall hill, from which one could observe the forest in its entirety.

	~~On top of that~~ hill, a sniper lay in wait. Armed with a powerful long-range persuader (Note: A gun) built for sniping, he kept a watchful eye over every corner of the forest.		Atop the hill, a sniper lay in wait. Armed with a powerful long-range persuader (Note: A gun) built for sniping, he kept a watchful eye over every corner of the forest.

	Something moved beside a serene lake. The sniper shifted his attention in that direction.		Something moved beside a serene lake. The sniper shifted his attention in that direction.

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	The sniper hesitated for a while, then brought his rifle to bear down on the short, but rather good-looking man. Once he pulled the trigger, and the bullet flew at an amazing speed, the man would probably be dead, and the lake would probably be tainted with a bloody red.		The sniper hesitated for a while, then brought his rifle to bear down on the short, but rather good-looking man. Once he pulled the trigger, and the bullet flew at an amazing speed, the man would probably be dead, and the lake would probably be tainted with a bloody red.

	The sniper slowed his breathing to reduce any shaking in his hand. When he was ready, his finger reached for the trigger. .		The sniper slowed his breathing to reduce any shaking in his hand. When he was ready, his finger reached for the trigger.

	“Please don’t do that.”		“Please don’t do that.”

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2016-05-14T22:12:37Z

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	The sniper hesitated for a while, then brought his rifle to bear down on the short, but rather good-looking man. Once he pulled the trigger, and the bullet flew at an amazing speed, the man would probably be dead, and the lake would probably be tainted with a bloody red.		The sniper hesitated for a while, then brought his rifle to bear down on the short, but rather good-looking man. Once he pulled the trigger, and the bullet flew at an amazing speed, the man would probably be dead, and the lake would probably be tainted with a bloody red.

	The sniper slowed his breathing to reduce any shaking in his hand. When he was ready, his finger reached for the trigger.		The sniper slowed his breathing to reduce any shaking in his hand. When he was ready, his finger reached for the trigger. .

	“Please don’t do that.”		“Please don’t do that.”

BloodyKitty: Undo revision 295395 by BloodyKitty (talk)

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	The man was about to say something, but the woman ignored him and stepped hard on the gas.		The man was about to say something, but the woman ignored him and stepped hard on the gas.

	~~[[File:Kino_no_Tabi_v2_006-007.jpg\|x200px\|thumb\|left\|...a bullet came flying, splitting a tree where the car had been just seconds ago.]]~~

	The moment the car jerked forward, a bullet came flying toward them, splitting a tree where the car had been just seconds ago.		The moment the car jerked forward, a bullet came flying toward them, splitting a tree where the car had been just seconds ago.
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	To this day, the forest still remains and the sniper still waits on the hilltop.		To this day, the forest still remains and the sniper still waits on the hilltop.

			[[File:Kino_no_Tabi_v2_006-007.jpg\|x200px\|thumb\|left\|...a bullet came flying, splitting a tree where the car had been just seconds ago.]]
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2013-10-18T14:02:04Z

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	The man was about to say something, but the woman ignored him and stepped hard on the gas.		The man was about to say something, but the woman ignored him and stepped hard on the gas.

			[[File:Kino_no_Tabi_v2_006-007.jpg\|x200px\|thumb\|left\|...a bullet came flying, splitting a tree where the car had been just seconds ago.]]

	The moment the car jerked forward, a bullet came flying toward them, splitting a tree where the car had been just seconds ago.		The moment the car jerked forward, a bullet came flying toward them, splitting a tree where the car had been just seconds ago.
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	To this day, the forest still remains and the sniper still waits on the hilltop.		To this day, the forest still remains and the sniper still waits on the hilltop.

	~~[[File:Kino_no_Tabi_v2_006-007.jpg\|x200px\|thumb\|left\|...a bullet came flying, splitting a tree where the car had been just seconds ago.]]~~
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	“I see.”		“I see.”
			[[File:Kino_no_Tabi_v2_004.jpg\|x200px\|thumb\|right\|...the man was still swimming naked in the water...]]
	The woman gave the sniper a number then left him on the hill and returned to the forest. Since it was a complex number that required very difficult calculations, it will not be written here.		The woman gave the sniper a number then left him on the hill and returned to the forest. Since it was a complex number that required very difficult calculations, it will not be written here.

	~~[[File:Kino_no_Tabi_v2_004.jpg\|x200px\|thumb\|right\|...the man was still swimming naked in the water...]]~~

	At the lake, the man was still swimming naked in the water. Upon seeing the woman, he ran towards her with a look as if he was about to cry.		At the lake, the man was still swimming naked in the water. Upon seeing the woman, he ran towards her with a look as if he was about to cry.

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	To this day, the forest still remains and the sniper still waits on the hilltop.		To this day, the forest still remains and the sniper still waits on the hilltop.

	[[File:Kino_no_Tabi_v2_006-007.jpg\|x200px\|thumb\|~~right~~\|...a bullet came flying, splitting a tree where the car had been just seconds ago.]]		[[File:Kino_no_Tabi_v2_006-007.jpg\|x200px\|thumb\|left\|...a bullet came flying, splitting a tree where the car had been just seconds ago.]]
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Ella.servantes: proofread for pdf

2013-02-24T16:03:41Z

proofread for pdf

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		==“A Tale of a Sniper” —Fatalism—==

		[[File:Kino_no_Tabi_v2_002-003.jpg\|x200px\|thumb\|left]]

		There was a dense forest. And there was a tall hill, from which one could observe the forest in its entirety.

		On top of that hill, a sniper lay in wait. Armed with a powerful long-range persuader (Note: A gun) built for sniping, he kept a watchful eye over every corner of the forest.

		Something moved beside a serene lake. The sniper shifted his attention in that direction.

		The image of a joyful looking man, stark naked, was reflected on the sniper’s eyes.

		The sniper hesitated for a while, then brought his rifle to bear down on the short, but rather good-looking man. Once he pulled the trigger, and the bullet flew at an amazing speed, the man would probably be dead, and the lake would probably be tainted with a bloody red.

		The sniper slowed his breathing to reduce any shaking in his hand. When he was ready, his finger reached for the trigger.

		“Please don’t do that.”

		[[File:Kino_no_Tabi_v2_005.jpg\|x200px\|thumb\|right\|"Please don't do that."]]

		The sniper heard a sharp, determined voice speak behind him. Caught up in surprise, he slowly turned his head, and came face to face with a woman.

		She wore elegant clothing, and had dark glossy hair. A beautiful woman, without a doubt. With her right hand she held a high-caliber revolver, aimed squarely at the sniper’s head.

		“Sorry to have frightened you, but please don’t move. If I miss, it would be a waste of bullet and powder.”

		“Why do you want to kill me?” the sniper asked guardedly.

		The woman smiled, her persuader never moving an inch.

		“Because you have killed those who entered the forest. The friends and families of the victims wanted you dead.”

		The sniper replied tensely now, “So you are here to kill me.”

		The woman nodded and the sniper continued, “What are you waiting for, then?”

		A pained look appeared on the woman’s face. “Good question.” The woman ventured to explain. “Actually, after I accepted this assignment, I had agreed to another contract from some people from the same country.

		“They paid me equally to not kill you because they wished for everything to remain unchanged. There are many who hate you. But there are people who are grateful to you for removing their enemy, letting them receive their inheritance early, releasing those with incurable diseases and allowing some to start anew. So there are just as many people who wish for you to remain alive. To them, you are like a god of good fortune.”

		“Really.”

		“I was indecisive on what to do as I came here to scout you out. I still can’t make up my mind right now.”

		“If that’s the case…”

		“If that’s the case?”

		“If that’s the case, then please give me an order. Before now, I would kill all who I found, but from now on I will only kill a person upon a certain count. That way, the number of deaths would drop yet there will still be victims. As for this count, it is up to you to provide.”

		“I see.”

		The woman gave the sniper a number then left him on the hill and returned to the forest. Since it was a complex number that required very difficult calculations, it will not be written here.

		[[File:Kino_no_Tabi_v2_004.jpg\|x200px\|thumb\|right\|...the man was still swimming naked in the water...]]

		At the lake, the man was still swimming naked in the water. Upon seeing the woman, he ran towards her with a look as if he was about to cry.

		“Master! What took you so long! I thought we were done for.”

		The woman stood rooted to her spot and told him to shut up and put on his pants.

		As the man pulled on his pants, he turned to face the woman.

		“We are still alive. That means you killed him right?”

		“Nope.”

		The man leaped when he heard this, accidentally putting both legs into the same leg of his long pants, causing him to trip and fall.

		The woman explained the deal.

		“B-but with that number, the possibility of getting shot at any moment is…”

		The woman barely gave the matter any thought and walked towards their car, a run-down little vehicle on the verge of falling apart. The man hastily followed her.

		Once inside the car, he asked, “What now? We can’t return because we didn’t kill the sniper and yet we didn’t let him continue killing unchecked. We can’t receive any reward from either side.”

		“I know.”

		The woman smiled gracefully and started the engine.

		“Since we already have the down payment from both parties, let’s just disappear with it.”

		“……”

		The man was about to say something, but the woman ignored him and stepped hard on the gas.

		The moment the car jerked forward, a bullet came flying toward them, splitting a tree where the car had been just seconds ago.

		To this day, the forest still remains and the sniper still waits on the hilltop.

		[[File:Kino_no_Tabi_v2_006-007.jpg\|x200px\|thumb\|right\|...a bullet came flying, splitting a tree where the car had been just seconds ago.]]

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		\| Kino no Tabi
		\| [[Kino_no_Tabi:Volume2_Illustrations\|Illustrations]]
		\| [[Kino_no_Tabi:Volume2_Prologue\|Prologue]]
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	Something moved beside a serene lake. The sniper shifted his attention in that direction.		Something moved beside a serene lake. The sniper shifted his attention in that direction.

	The image of a joyful looking man, stark naked, ~~was~~ reflected on the sniper’s eyes.		The image of a joyful looking man, stark naked, reflected on the sniper’s eyes.

	The sniper hesitated for a while, then brought his rifle to bear down on the short, but rather good-looking man. Once he pulled the trigger, and the bullet flew at an amazing speed, the man would probably be dead, and the lake would probably be tainted with a bloody red.		The sniper hesitated for a while, then brought his rifle to bear down on the short but rather good-looking man. Once he pulled the trigger, and the bullet flew at an amazing speed, the man would probably be dead, and the lake would probably be tainted with bloody red.

	The sniper slowed his breathing to reduce any shaking in his hand. When he was ready, his finger reached for the trigger.		The sniper slowed his breathing to reduce any shaking in his hand. When he was ready, his finger reached for the trigger.
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	The sniper heard a sharp, determined voice speak behind him. Caught up in surprise, he slowly turned his head, and came face to face with a woman.		The sniper heard a sharp, determined voice speak behind him. Caught up in surprise, he slowly turned his head, and came face to face with a woman.

	She wore elegant clothing, and had dark glossy hair. A beautiful woman, without a doubt. With her right hand she held a high-caliber revolver, aimed squarely at the sniper’s head.		She wore elegant clothing, and had dark glossy hair. A beautiful woman, without a doubt. With her right hand, she held a high-caliber revolver aimed squarely at the sniper’s head.

	“Sorry to have frightened you, but please don’t move. If I miss, it would be a waste of ~~bullet~~ and powder.”		“Sorry to have frightened you, but please don’t move. If I miss, it would be a waste of bullets and powder.”

	“Why do you want to kill me?” the sniper asked guardedly.		“Why do you want to kill me?” the sniper asked guardedly.
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	The sniper replied tensely now, “So you are here to kill me.”		The sniper replied tensely now, “So you are here to kill me.”

	The woman nodded and the sniper continued, ~~“What~~ are you waiting for~~, then~~?”		The woman nodded and the sniper continued, “Then what are you waiting for?”

	A pained look appeared on the woman’s face. “Good question.” The woman ventured to explain. “Actually, after I accepted this assignment, I ~~had~~ agreed to another contract from some people from the same country.		A pained look appeared on the woman’s face. “Good question.” The woman ventured to explain. “Actually, after I accepted this assignment, I agreed to another contract from some people from the same country.

	“They paid me equally to not kill you because they wished for everything to remain unchanged. There are many who hate you. But there are people who are grateful to you for removing their enemy, letting them receive their inheritance early, releasing those with incurable diseases and allowing some to start anew. So there are just as many people who wish for you to remain alive. To them, you are like a god of good fortune.”		“They paid me equally to not kill you because they wished for everything to remain unchanged. There are many who hate you. But there are people who are grateful to you for removing their enemy, letting them receive their inheritance early, releasing those with incurable diseases, and allowing some to start anew. So there are just as many people who wish for you to remain alive. To them, you are like a god of good fortune.”

	“Really.”		“Really.”