Kino no Tabi:Volume2 Prologue - Revision history

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	It was raining. Water pounded the earth without pause. Nothing could be seen in the landscape except for the raindrops and mist created by the rain. The fierce sound of water pouring onto the earth never seemed to cease. Although it was daytime, the sky had a dark, gloomy hue.		It was raining. Water pounded the earth without pause. Nothing could be seen in the landscape except for the raindrops and mist created by the rain. The fierce sound of water pouring onto the earth never seemed to cease. Although it was daytime, the sky had a dark, gloomy hue.

	There was, amidst this downpour, a solitary standing figure. The person was young — around fifteen. Her long brown coat sheltered only her body from the rain. Her short black hair was completely soaked; bangs plastered her forehead. From there, water ran down her face. Her tongue caught the drops that reached her mouth.		There was, amidst this downpour, a solitary standing figure. The person was young — around fifteen. Her long brown coat sheltered only her body from the rain. Her short black hair was completely soaked; bangs plastered to her forehead. From there, water ran down her face. Her tongue caught the drops that reached her mouth.

	“It is so unlikely for such heavy rain to fall in a place like this. How strange…” someone spoke to her. The voice sounded like a young boy's, but its owner was nowhere to be seen.		“It is so unlikely for such heavy rain to fall in a place like this. How strange…” someone spoke to her. The voice sounded like a young boy's, but its owner was nowhere to be seen.
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	After the girl named Kino replied, she began to laugh once more.		After the girl named Kino replied, she began to laugh once more.

	This rainstorm, perhaps, ~~will~~ continue for a while.		This rainstorm, perhaps, would continue for a while.

127.0.0.1: /* “In the Middle of the Desert · b” — Beginner’s Luck · b — */

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“In the Middle of the Desert · b” — Beginner’s Luck · b —

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	==“In the Middle of the Desert · b” — Beginner’s Luck · b —==		==“In the Middle of the Desert · b” — Beginner’s Luck · b —==

	It was raining. Water pounded the earth without pause. Nothing could be seen in the landscape except for the raindrops and ~~the~~ mist created by the rain. The fierce sound of water pouring onto the earth never ~~seems~~ to cease. Although it was daytime, the sky had a dark, gloomy hue.		It was raining. Water pounded the earth without pause. Nothing could be seen in the landscape except for the raindrops and mist created by the rain. The fierce sound of water pouring onto the earth never seemed to cease. Although it was daytime, the sky had a dark, gloomy hue.

	There was, amidst this downpour, a solitary standing figure. The person was young — around fifteen. Her long brown coat sheltered only her body from the rain. Her short black hair was completely soaked; bangs plastered to her forehead. From there, water ran down ~~and trickled to~~ her face. Her tongue caught the drops that reached her mouth.		There was, amidst this downpour, a solitary standing figure. The person was young — around fifteen. Her long brown coat sheltered only her body from the rain. Her short black hair was completely soaked; bangs plastered her forehead. From there, water ran down her face. Her tongue caught the drops that reached her mouth.

	“It is so unlikely for such heavy rain to fall in a place like this. How ~~strange…,”~~ someone spoke to her. The voice sounded like ~~that of~~ a young boy, but its owner was nowhere to be seen.		“It is so unlikely for such heavy rain to fall in a place like this. How strange…” someone spoke to her. The voice sounded like a young boy's, but its owner was nowhere to be seen.

	The brown-clad figure casually raised her head to stare at the sky. Rain beat down ~~mercilessly~~ upon the girl’s face and fell from her eyes like tears.		The brown-clad figure casually raised her head to stare at the sky. Rain mercilessly beat down upon the girl’s face and fell from her eyes like tears.

	“Aha ha ha! Aha ha ha ha!”		“Aha ha ha! Aha ha ha ha!”

	Then all of a sudden, she laughed. Head still raised, she opened her mouth wide and reached out to the sky with both arms.		Then, all of a sudden, she laughed. Head still raised, she opened her mouth wide and reached out to the sky with both arms.

	“Aha ha ha! Aha ha ha ha!”		“Aha ha ha! Aha ha ha ha!”
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	“I don’t know. What to do? Why bother worrying?”		“I don’t know. What to do? Why bother worrying?”

	After the girl named Kino ~~had~~ replied, she began to laugh once more.		After the girl named Kino replied, she began to laugh once more.

	This rainstorm, perhaps, will continue for a while.		This rainstorm, perhaps, will continue for a while.

Ella.servantes at 11:09, 3 March 2013

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	==~~“Amidst~~ the Desert · b” — Beginner’s Luck · b —==		==“In the Middle of the Desert · b” — Beginner’s Luck · b —==

	It was raining. Water pounded the earth without pause. Nothing could be seen in the landscape except for the raindrops and the mist created by the rain. The fierce sound of water pouring onto the earth never seems to cease. Although it was daytime, the sky had a dark, gloomy hue.		It was raining. Water pounded the earth without pause. Nothing could be seen in the landscape except for the raindrops and the mist created by the rain. The fierce sound of water pouring onto the earth never seems to cease. Although it was daytime, the sky had a dark, gloomy hue.

Ella.servantes: proofread for pdf

2013-02-24T15:54:28Z

proofread for pdf

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	==~~"Amidst~~ the ~~Desert・b" -Beginner's Luck・b-~~==		==“Amidst the Desert · b” — Beginner’s Luck · b —==

	~~Rain continued to fall~~. It pounded the earth ~~endlessly~~. ~~The~~ landscape ~~is shrouded in mist as far as~~ the ~~eye can see,~~ and the fierce sound of water pouring onto the earth never seems to cease. Although it was daytime, the sky ~~remained~~ a dark gloomy ~~grey~~.		It was raining. Water pounded the earth without pause. Nothing could be seen in the landscape except for the raindrops and the mist created by the rain. The fierce sound of water pouring onto the earth never seems to cease. Although it was daytime, the sky had a dark, gloomy hue.

	There was, in this ~~great storm~~, a solitary standing figure. The person was young ~~- about 15 years old~~. Her brown ~~overcoat~~ sheltered only her body from the rain. Her short black hair was ~~already~~ soaked; bangs plastered to her forehead.		There was, amidst this downpour, a solitary standing figure. The person was young — around fifteen. Her long brown coat sheltered only her body from the rain. Her short black hair was completely soaked; bangs plastered to her forehead. From there, water ran down and trickled to her face. Her tongue caught the drops that reached her mouth.
	~~Rain~~ ran down and ~~dripped off of~~ her face. ~~The~~ drops that ~~reach~~ her mouth ~~are caught by her tongue~~.

	~~“It’s~~ so ~~rare~~ for it to ~~rain like this~~ in ~~such~~ a place. How ~~unusual……~~,” someone ~~said~~ to her.		“It is so unlikely for such heavy rain to fall in a place like this. How strange…,” someone spoke to her. The voice sounded like that of a young boy, but its owner was nowhere to be seen.

	~~The voice sounded like that of a young boy, but the owner of the voice was nowhere to be seen.~~ The brown-clad figure ~~suddenly~~ raised her head to stare at the sky.		The brown-clad figure casually raised her head to stare at the sky. Rain beat down mercilessly upon the girl’s face and fell from her eyes like tears.

	Rain ~~fell~~ mercilessly upon the girl’s face and ~~ran~~ from her eyes like tears.

	“Aha ha ha! Aha ha ha ha!”		“Aha ha ha! Aha ha ha ha!”

	~~A smile suddenly appeared on her face~~, still ~~looking up at the sky with~~ her mouth ~~open~~ wide and arms ~~outstretched, laughing incessantly~~.		Then all of a sudden, she laughed. Head still raised, she opened her mouth wide and reached out to the sky with both arms.

	“Aha ha ha! Aha ha ha ha!”		“Aha ha ha! Aha ha ha ha!”

	She continued to laugh ~~happily~~, skipping ~~merrily in a circle with the~~ hem of her ~~overcoat twirling~~ in the air like a gown.		She continued to laugh gleefully, skipping and twirling her body around. The hem of her coat fluttered in the air like a gown.

	“Aha ha! Aha ha ha ha! Aha ha ha ha! Aha ha ha ha ha!”		“Aha ha! Aha ha ha ha! Aha ha ha ha! Aha ha ha ha ha!”

	She danced and laughed maniacally for a while, then ~~called out into the rain,~~		She danced and laughed maniacally for a while, then turned to a particular spot shrouded in mist.

	“So what do you think?”		“So what do you think?”

	~~The~~ question ~~seems~~ unacknowledged, so she asked ~~again~~.		As the question went unacknowledged, she asked once more.

	“What do you think, Hermes?”		“What do you think, Hermes?”

	“There’s nothing all that great about it…”		This time there was a reply. “There’s nothing all that great about it…”

	“Nothing?”		“Nothing?”

	After hearing the previous words repeated, there came an unenthusiastic response,		After hearing the previous words repeated, there came an unenthusiastic response, “I don’t find this amusing at all, but right now I’m having mixed emotions.”

	~~“Maybe it's no fun to me~~ at all, but ~~currently my feelings are very complex!”~~

	~~“Aha ha ha! Aha ha ha ha ha ha---~~”

	~~The girl started to raise her head again in unrestrained laughter.~~		“Aha ha ha! Aha ha ha ha ha ha——”

	The ~~voice asked,~~		The girl raised her head again in unrestrained laughter.

	“Kino, what do you plan to do next?”		The voice asked, “Kino, what do you plan to do next?”

	“I don’t know. What to do? Why bother worrying?”		“I don’t know. What to do? Why bother worrying?”

	After the girl named Kino had replied, she began to laugh once ~~again~~.		After the girl named Kino had replied, she began to laugh once more.

	This rainstorm, perhaps, will continue for a while.		This rainstorm, perhaps, will continue for a while.


	<noinclude>		<noinclude>
	{{Navigation		{{Navigation
	\| Kino no Tabi		\| Kino no Tabi
	\| [[Kino_no_Tabi:Volume2_Frontispiece\|Frontispiece]]		\| [[Kino_no_Tabi:Volume2_Frontispiece\|Frontispiece]]
	\| [[Kino_no_Tabi:Volume2_Chapter1\|Chapter 1]]		\| [[Kino_no_Tabi:Volume2_Chapter1\|Chapter 1]]
	}}		}}
	</noinclude>		</noinclude>

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	This rainstorm, perhaps, will continue for a while.		This rainstorm, perhaps, will continue for a while.

			<noinclude>
			{{Navigation
			\| Kino no Tabi
			\| [[Kino_no_Tabi:Volume2_Frontispiece\|Frontispiece]]
			\| [[Kino_no_Tabi:Volume2_Chapter1\|Chapter 1]]
			}}
			</noinclude>

Ella.servantes: added title, minor spell check

2012-07-04T07:53:50Z

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	~~Rain continued to fall.~~		=="Amidst the Desert・b" -Beginner's Luck・b-==
	~~It pounded~~ the ~~earth endlessly.~~
	~~The landscape is shrouded in mist as far as the eye can see, and the fierce sound of water pouring onto the earth never seems to cease.~~
	~~Although it was daytime, the sky remained a dark gloomy grey.~~

	~~There was, in this great storm, a solitary standing figure~~.		Rain continued to fall. It pounded the earth endlessly. The landscape is shrouded in mist as far as the eye can see, and the fierce sound of water pouring onto the earth never seems to cease. Although it was daytime, the sky remained a dark gloomy grey.
	The ~~person was young; about 15 years old.~~
	~~Her brown overcoat sheltered only her body from~~ the ~~rain.~~
	~~Her short black hair was already soaked; bangs plastered to her forehead.~~
	~~Rain ran down~~ and ~~dripped off~~ of ~~her face~~.
	~~The drops that reach her mouth are caught by her tongue~~.

	~~“It’s so rare for it to rain like~~ this ~~in such~~ a ~~place~~. ~~How unusual……” someone said~~ to her.		There was, in this great storm, a solitary standing figure. The person was young - about 15 years old. Her brown overcoat sheltered only her body from the rain. Her short black hair was already soaked; bangs plastered to her forehead.
			Rain ran down and dripped off of her face. The drops that reach her mouth are caught by her tongue.

	The voice sounded like that of a young boy, but the owner of the voice was nowhere to be seen.		“It’s so rare for it to rain like this in such a place. How unusual……,” someone said to her.
	The brown-clad figure suddenly raised her head to stare at the sky.
			The voice sounded like that of a young boy, but the owner of the voice was nowhere to be seen. The brown-clad figure suddenly raised her head to stare at the sky.

	Rain fell mercilessly upon the girl’s face and ran from her eyes like tears.		Rain fell mercilessly upon the girl’s face and ran from her eyes like tears.
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	“Aha ha ha! Aha ha ha ha!”		“Aha ha ha! Aha ha ha ha!”

	She continued to ~~smile~~ happily, skipping merrily in a circle with the hem of her overcoat twirling in the air like a gown.		She continued to laugh happily, skipping merrily in a circle with the hem of her overcoat twirling in the air like a gown.

	“Aha ha! Aha ha ha ha! Aha ha ha ha! Aha ha ha ha ha!”		“Aha ha! Aha ha ha ha! Aha ha ha ha! Aha ha ha ha ha!”

	She danced and laughed maniacally for a while, then called out into the rain:		She danced and laughed maniacally for a while, then called out into the rain,

	“So what do you think?”		“So what do you think?”
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	“Nothing?”		“Nothing?”

	After hearing the previous words repeated, there came an unenthusiastic response:		After hearing the previous words repeated, there came an unenthusiastic response,

	“Maybe it's no fun to me at all, but currently my feelings are very complex!”		“Maybe it's no fun to me at all, but currently my feelings are very complex!”
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	The girl started to raise her head again in unrestrained laughter.		The girl started to raise her head again in unrestrained laughter.

	The voice asked:		The voice asked,

	“Kino, what do you plan to do ~~next~~ next?”		“Kino, what do you plan to do next?”

	“I don’t know. What to do? Why bother worrying?”		“I don’t know. What to do? Why bother worrying?”

Jasou at 19:38, 10 June 2012

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	Rain continued to fall.		Rain continued to fall.
	It pounded the earth endlessly.		It pounded the earth endlessly.
	The landscape is shrouded in mist as far as eye can see, and the fierce sound of water pouring on the earth never seems to cease.		The landscape is shrouded in mist as far as the eye can see, and the fierce sound of water pouring onto the earth never seems to cease.
	Although it was daytime, the sky remained a dark gloomy grey.		Although it was daytime, the sky remained a dark gloomy grey.

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	“It’s so rare for it to rain like this in such a place. How unusual……” someone said to her.		“It’s so rare for it to rain like this in such a place. How unusual……” someone said to her.

	The voice sounded like that of a young boy, but ~~no one appeared~~ to be ~~there~~.		The voice sounded like that of a young boy, but the owner of the voice was nowhere to be seen.
	The brown-clad figure suddenly raised her head to stare at the sky.		The brown-clad figure suddenly raised her head to stare at the sky.

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	“Aha ha ha! Aha ha ha ha!”		“Aha ha ha! Aha ha ha ha!”

	A smile suddenly appeared on her face, still looking at the sky with mouth open wide and arms outstretched, laughing incessantly.		A smile suddenly appeared on her face, still looking up at the sky with her mouth open wide and arms outstretched, laughing incessantly.

	“Aha ha ha! Aha ha ha ha!”		“Aha ha ha! Aha ha ha ha!”
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	“Aha ha! Aha ha ha ha! Aha ha ha ha! Aha ha ha ha ha!”		“Aha ha! Aha ha ha ha! Aha ha ha ha! Aha ha ha ha ha!”

	She danced and laughed ~~insanely~~ for a while, then ~~said~~ out into the rain:		She danced and laughed maniacally for a while, then called out into the rain:

	“So what do you think?”		“So what do you think?”
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	“I don’t know. What to do? Why bother worrying?”		“I don’t know. What to do? Why bother worrying?”

	~~When~~ the girl named Kino had replied, she began once again ~~to laugh~~.		After the girl named Kino had replied, she began to laugh once again.

	This rainstorm, perhaps, will continue for a while.		This rainstorm, perhaps, will continue for a while.

Hariseldon at 11:41, 14 December 2009

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	It pounded the earth endlessly.		It pounded the earth endlessly.
	The landscape is shrouded in mist as far as eye can see, and the fierce sound of water pouring on the earth never seems to cease.		The landscape is shrouded in mist as far as eye can see, and the fierce sound of water pouring on the earth never seems to cease.
	Although daytime, the sky remained a dark gloomy grey.		Although it was daytime, the sky remained a dark gloomy grey.

	There was, in this great storm, a solitary standing figure.		There was, in this great storm, a solitary standing figure.

198.111.152.212 at 12:43, 26 November 2008

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	Rain ~~continues~~ to fall.		Rain continued to fall.
	It ~~pounds~~ the earth endlessly.		It pounded the earth endlessly.
	The landscape is shrouded in mist as far as eye can see, and the fierce sound of water pouring on the earth never seems to cease.		The landscape is shrouded in mist as far as eye can see, and the fierce sound of water pouring on the earth never seems to cease.
	Although ~~it is~~ daytime, the sky ~~remains~~ a dark gloomy grey.		Although daytime, the sky remained a dark gloomy grey.

	There is, in this great storm, a solitary standing figure.		There was, in this great storm, a solitary standing figure.
	The person is young; about 15 years old.		The person was young; about 15 years old.
	Her brown overcoat ~~shelters~~ only her body from the rain.		Her brown overcoat sheltered only her body from the rain.
	Her short black hair is already soaked; bangs plastered to her forehead.		Her short black hair was already soaked; bangs plastered to her forehead.
	Rain ~~runs~~ down and ~~drips~~ off of her face.		Rain ran down and dripped off of her face.
	The drops that reach her mouth are caught by her tongue.		The drops that reach her mouth are caught by her tongue.

198.111.152.212 at 15:46, 25 November 2008

2008-11-25T15:46:58Z

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		Rain continues to fall.
		It pounds the earth endlessly.
		The landscape is shrouded in mist as far as eye can see, and the fierce sound of water pouring on the earth never seems to cease.
		Although it is daytime, the sky remains a dark gloomy grey.

		There is, in this great storm, a solitary standing figure.
		The person is young; about 15 years old.
		Her brown overcoat shelters only her body from the rain.
		Her short black hair is already soaked; bangs plastered to her forehead.
		Rain runs down and drips off of her face.
		The drops that reach her mouth are caught by her tongue.

		“It’s so rare for it to rain like this in such a place. How unusual……” someone said to her.

		The voice sounded like that of a young boy, but no one appeared to be there.
		The brown-clad figure suddenly raised her head to stare at the sky.

		Rain fell mercilessly upon the girl’s face and ran from her eyes like tears.

		“Aha ha ha! Aha ha ha ha!”

		A smile suddenly appeared on her face, still looking at the sky with mouth open wide and arms outstretched, laughing incessantly.

		“Aha ha ha! Aha ha ha ha!”

		She continued to smile happily, skipping merrily in a circle with the hem of her overcoat twirling in the air like a gown.

		“Aha ha! Aha ha ha ha! Aha ha ha ha! Aha ha ha ha ha!”

		She danced and laughed insanely for a while, then said out into the rain:

		“So what do you think?”

		The question seems unacknowledged, so she asked again.

		“What do you think, Hermes?”

		“There’s nothing all that great about it…”

		“Nothing?”

		After hearing the previous words repeated, there came an unenthusiastic response:

		“Maybe it's no fun to me at all, but currently my feelings are very complex!”

		“Aha ha ha! Aha ha ha ha ha ha---”

		The girl started to raise her head again in unrestrained laughter.

		The voice asked:

		“Kino, what do you plan to do next next?”

		“I don’t know. What to do? Why bother worrying?”

		When the girl named Kino had replied, she began once again to laugh.

		This rainstorm, perhaps, will continue for a while.