Kino no Tabi:Volume4 Chapter1 - Revision history

Napen123 at 02:14, 29 June 2017

2017-06-29T02:14:32Z

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	The resident answered with a smile.		The resident answered with a smile.

	“This is the statue of an angel which descended from the sky a long time ago to save the country. With his club, he quickly exterminated twenty-two demons that tormented the people, and restored peace in this country. And then he went back to the sky.”		“This is the statue of an angel which descended from the sky a long time ago to save the country. With his club, he quickly exterminated twenty-two demons that tormented the people and restored peace in this country. And then he went back to the sky.”

	“Angel? Descended from the sky? What’s that?” the motorrad asked.		“Angel? Descended from the sky? What’s that?” the motorrad asked.

Kamina: "came back to the Sky" is slightly wrong, "went back" makes a whole lot more sense.

2015-01-17T10:46:49Z

"came back to the Sky" is slightly wrong, "went back" makes a whole lot more sense.

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	The resident answered with a smile.		The resident answered with a smile.

	“This is the statue of an angel which descended from the sky a long time ago to save the country. With his club, he quickly exterminated twenty-two demons that tormented the people, and restored peace in this country. And then he ~~came~~ back to the sky.”		“This is the statue of an angel which descended from the sky a long time ago to save the country. With his club, he quickly exterminated twenty-two demons that tormented the people, and restored peace in this country. And then he went back to the sky.”

	“Angel? Descended from the sky? What’s that?” the motorrad asked.		“Angel? Descended from the sky? What’s that?” the motorrad asked.

BloodyKitty at 15:54, 26 May 2013

2013-05-26T15:54:53Z

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	==“A Land with a Statue” ―Angel?―==		==“A Land with a Statue” ―Angel?―==

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	Once upon a time, a traveler came to a small country in a valley.		Once upon a time, a traveler came to a small country in a valley.

Ella.servantes: proofreading

2012-08-27T01:56:23Z

proofreading

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	Once upon a time, a traveler came to a small country in a valley.		Once upon a time, a traveler came to a small country in a valley.

	The traveler who came riding a motorrad (Note: A ~~motorcycle~~. Only to note that it cannot fly ~~in the sky~~) was looking around leisurely at the rich and beautiful farmlands and at the old and historical ~~narrow~~ town ~~road~~. They stopped ~~in a plaza~~ in front of a statue.		The traveler who came riding a motorrad (Note: A two-wheeled vehicle. Only to note that it cannot fly) was looking around leisurely at the rich and beautiful farmlands and at the old and narrow historical town roads. They stopped in front of a wooden statue in the plaza.

	The statue simply had the appearance of a human, and it was holding a long stick in its hand. At its feet, there was a creature which can’t be identified ~~clearly~~.		The statue simply had the appearance of a human, and it was holding a long stick in its hand. At its feet, there was a creature which can’t be clearly identified.

	The young traveler asked a resident, “What is this?”		The young traveler asked a resident, “What is this?”
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	The resident answered with a smile.		The resident answered with a smile.

	~~"This~~ is the statue of an angel which descended from the sky a long time ago to save the country. With his club, he quickly exterminated twenty-two demons that tormented the people, and restored peace in this country. And then he came back to the sky.”		“This is the statue of an angel which descended from the sky a long time ago to save the country. With his club, he quickly exterminated twenty-two demons that tormented the people, and restored peace in this country. And then he came back to the sky.”

	“Angel? Descended from the sky? What’s that?” ~~The~~ motorrad asked.		“Angel? Descended from the sky? What’s that?” the motorrad asked.

	The resident narrowed his eyes, and answered ~~this.~~		The resident narrowed his eyes, and answered,

	“It’s a fairy tale. It has been handed down in this country up to now――”		“It’s a fairy tale. It has been handed down in this country up to now――”

	<noinclude>		<noinclude>

	{{Navigation		{{Navigation
	\| Kino no Tabi
	\| [[Kino_no_Tabi:Volume4_Prologue\|Prologue]]		\| Kino no Tabi
	\| [[Kino_no_Tabi:Volume4_Chapter2\|Chapter 2]]
			\| [[Kino_no_Tabi:Volume4_Prologue\|Prologue]]

			\| [[Kino_no_Tabi:Volume4_Chapter2\|Chapter 2]]

	}}		}}

	</noinclude>		</noinclude>

Ella.servantes: minor spell check

2012-07-27T03:25:53Z

minor spell check

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	==“A Land with a Statue” ~~~Angel~~?~==		==“A Land with a Statue” ―Angel?―==

	Once upon a time, a traveler came to a small country in a valley.		Once upon a time, a traveler came to a small country in a valley.

	The traveler who came riding a ~~motorad~~ (Note: A motorcycle. Only to note that it cannot fly in the sky) was looking around leisurely at the rich and beautiful farmlands and at the old and historical narrow town road. They stopped in a plaza in front of a statue.		The traveler who came riding a motorrad (Note: A motorcycle. Only to note that it cannot fly in the sky) was looking around leisurely at the rich and beautiful farmlands and at the old and historical narrow town road. They stopped in a plaza in front of a statue.

	The statue simply had the appearance of a human, and it was holding a long stick in its hand. At its feet, there was a creature which can’t be identified clearly.		The statue simply had the appearance of a human, and it was holding a long stick in its hand. At its feet, there was a creature which can’t be identified clearly.
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	The resident answered with a smile.		The resident answered with a smile.

	"This is the ~~statute~~ of an angel which descended from the sky a long time ago to save the country. With his club, he quickly exterminated twenty-two demons that tormented the people, and restored peace in this country. And then he came back to the sky.”		"This is the statue of an angel which descended from the sky a long time ago to save the country. With his club, he quickly exterminated twenty-two demons that tormented the people, and restored peace in this country. And then he came back to the sky.”

	“Angel? Descended from the sky? What’s that?” The ~~motorad~~ asked.		“Angel? Descended from the sky? What’s that?” The motorrad asked.

	The resident narrowed his eyes, and answered this.		The resident narrowed his eyes, and answered this.

	“It’s a fairy tale. It has been handed down in this country up to ~~now--”~~		“It’s a fairy tale. It has been handed down in this country up to now――”

	<noinclude>		<noinclude>

Dammitt: added footer

2012-07-04T18:16:48Z

added footer

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	“It’s a fairy tale. It has been handed down in this country up to now--”		“It’s a fairy tale. It has been handed down in this country up to now--”

			<noinclude>
			{{Navigation
			\| Kino no Tabi
			\| [[Kino_no_Tabi:Volume4_Prologue\|Prologue]]
			\| [[Kino_no_Tabi:Volume4_Chapter2\|Chapter 2]]
			}}
			</noinclude>

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==“A Land with a Statue” ~Angel?~==

Once upon a time, a traveler came to a small country in a valley.

The traveler who came riding a motorad (Note: A motorcycle. Only to note that it cannot fly in the sky) was looking around leisurely at the rich and beautiful farmlands and at the old and historical narrow town road. They stopped in a plaza in front of a statue.

The statue simply had the appearance of a human, and it was holding a long stick in its hand. At its feet, there was a creature which can’t be identified clearly.

The young traveler asked a resident, “What is this?”

The resident answered with a smile.

"This is the statute of an angel which descended from the sky a long time ago to save the country. With his club, he quickly exterminated twenty-two demons that tormented the people, and restored peace in this country. And then he came back to the sky.”

“Angel? Descended from the sky? What’s that?” The motorad asked.

The resident narrowed his eyes, and answered this.

“It’s a fairy tale. It has been handed down in this country up to now--”