Kino no Tabi:Volume4 Chapter2 - Revision history

BloodyKitty at 15:58, 26 May 2013

2013-05-26T15:58:09Z

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	There was a beautiful grassland. The grass carpeting the ground, as well as the wild flowers, danced as a gentle breeze swept across the field.		There was a beautiful grassland. The grass carpeting the ground, as well as the wild flowers, danced as a gentle breeze swept across the field.
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	The motorrad stopped. The child spoke,		The motorrad stopped. The child spoke,

	“Please take me with you.”~~<!--Insert close-up picture of child~~ right ~~after the page containing this sentence-->~~		“Please take me with you.”[[File:Kino_no_Tabi_V04C02_2_notext.jpg\|x200px\|thumb\|right]]

	“No way! There is no more room,” the motorrad immediately said.		“No way! There is no more room,” the motorrad immediately said.
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	There, a small child has been left behind.		There, a small child has been left behind.

	There, a small child has been left behind forever.<~~!--Insert picture of child left behind on the road after this--~~>		There, a small child has been left behind forever.

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Ella.servantes: proofreading and image placement comments

2012-08-27T01:56:48Z

proofreading and image placement comments

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	==~~"×××××"~~ —Solo—==		==“×××××” —Solo—==

	There was a beautiful grassland. The grass carpeting the ground, as well as the wild flowers, danced as a gentle breeze swept across the field.		There was a beautiful grassland. The grass carpeting the ground, as well as the wild flowers, danced as a gentle breeze swept across the field.

	On this field was a perfectly straight road. The white road stretched out on and on and on. As to where ~~it continues on~~, it is not known.		On this field was a perfectly straight road. The white road stretched out on and on and on. As to where this road leads to, it was not known.

	A motorrad was running on it. It was heavily loaded with luggage.		A motorrad was running on it. It was heavily loaded with luggage.
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	The motorrad stopped. The child spoke,		The motorrad stopped. The child spoke,

	“Please take me with you.”		“Please take me with you.”<!--Insert close-up picture of child right after the page containing this sentence-->

	“No way! There is no more room,” the motorrad immediately said.		“No way! There is no more room,” the motorrad immediately said.

	The driver asked.		The driver asked,

	“Where did you come from?"		“Where did you come from?”

	The child did not answer.		The child did not answer.

	~~"Where~~ are you going?"		“Where are you going?”

	The child did not answer.		The child did not answer.
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	The child replied and said the same thing once more.		The child replied and said the same thing once more.

	~~"Please~~ take me with you."		“Please take me with you.”

	“No way! There is no more room," the motorrad immediately said.		“No way! There is no more room,” the motorrad immediately said.

	The traveler spoke, almost in a grunt,		The traveler spoke, almost in a grunt,

	“I cannot be in charge of ~~somebody's~~ life. I already have my hands full looking after myself. So I cannot bring you along, you should stop your notion about it. I am ~~selfish...~~ I am very selfish.”		“I cannot be in charge of somebody’s life. I already have my hands full looking after myself. And so, I cannot bring you along, you should stop your notion about it. I am selfish… I am very selfish.”

	“It is not possible to travel with two people on anyway,” the motorrad chirped in.		“It is not possible to travel with two people on anyway,” the motorrad chirped in.

	The traveler approached the child, squatted down, and while looking at the ~~child's~~ face,		The traveler approached the child, squatted down, and while looking at the child’s face,

	“Goodbye, ×××××.”		“Goodbye, ×××××.”
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	There was a beautiful grassland. The grass carpeting the ground, as well as the wild flowers, danced as a gentle breeze swept across the field.		There was a beautiful grassland. The grass carpeting the ground, as well as the wild flowers, danced as a gentle breeze swept across the field.

	On this field was a perfectly straight road. The white road stretched out on and on and on. As to where ~~it continues on~~, it is not known.		On this field was a perfectly straight road. The white road stretched out on and on and on. As to where this road leads to, it was not known.

	There, a small child has been left behind.		There, a small child has been left behind.

	There, a small child has been left behind forever.		There, a small child has been left behind forever.<!--Insert picture of child left behind on the road after this-->

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Ella.servantes: added title, translation check

2012-07-27T05:02:00Z

added title, translation check

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	~~There was a beautiful grassland. A gentle breeze swept across the field, making the wild flowers dance.~~		=="×××××" —Solo—==

	~~On this field there is~~ a ~~long narrow road~~. The ~~narrow white road of pebble cuts~~ across the field ~~into the unending horizon~~.		There was a beautiful grassland. The grass carpeting the ground, as well as the wild flowers, danced as a gentle breeze swept across the field.

	~~A Motoroid~~ was ~~moving~~ on ~~the narrow road~~.		On this field was a perfectly straight road. The white road stretched out on and on and on. As to where it continues on, it is not known.

	~~The rider noticed something by the road not much further away, and began to slow down~~. It ~~turned out to be a Child waving at the rider~~.		A motorrad was running on it. It was heavily loaded with luggage.

			The riding traveler noticed something and slowed down. It was a small child by the wayside, raising his hands.

			The motorrad stopped. The child spoke,

	“Please take me with you.”		“Please take me with you.”

	“No way! There is no more room.” The ~~Motoroide answered~~.		“No way! There is no more room,” the motorrad immediately said.

			The driver asked.

			“Where did you come from?"

			The child did not answer.

	~~The rider asked “Where do~~ you ~~want to go~~?”		"Where are you going?"

	~~But the Child could~~ not answer.		The child did not answer.

	“What is your name?”		“What is your name?”

	~~“xxx~~.”		“×××××”

			The child replied and said the same thing once more.

			"Please take me with you."

	~~The Child replies and begged again to travel with~~ the ~~rider~~.		“No way! There is no more room," the motorrad immediately said.

	~~“No way! There is no more room.”~~ The ~~Motoroide repeats again.~~		The traveler spoke, almost in a grunt,

	“I cannot ~~guarantee other’s safety,~~ I already have my hands full looking after myself. So I cannot bring you along, you should		“I cannot be in charge of somebody's life. I already have my hands full looking after myself. So I cannot bring you along, you should stop your notion about it. I am selfish... I am very selfish.”
	stop your notion about it. I am ~~selfish…~~ I am very selfish.”

	“It is not possible to travel with two people on anyway.” the ~~Motoroide~~ chirped in.		“It is not possible to travel with two people on anyway,” the motorrad chirped in.

	The ~~Traveler dismounted and walked toward~~ the ~~Child~~, ~~squatting~~ down ~~to be~~ at ~~eye level.~~		The traveler approached the child, squatted down, and while looking at the child's face,

	“Goodbye, ~~xxx~~.”		“Goodbye, ×××××.”

	With ~~that~~, the ~~Traveler returned to~~ the ~~Motoroide~~ and left.		With this, the traveler rode the motorrad and left.

			There was a beautiful grassland. The grass carpeting the ground, as well as the wild flowers, danced as a gentle breeze swept across the field.

	~~There~~ was a ~~beautiful grassland~~. ~~A gentle breeze swept across the field~~, ~~making the wild flowers dance~~.		On this field was a perfectly straight road. The white road stretched out on and on and on. As to where it continues on, it is not known.

	~~On this grass filed there is~~ a ~~long narrow road. The narrow white road of pebble cuts across the field into the unending horizon~~.		There, a small child has been left behind.

	~~A Child~~ has been left ~~there and the Child continues to wait~~.		There, a small child has been left behind forever.

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	{{Navigation		{{Navigation
	\| Kino no Tabi
	\| [[Kino_no_Tabi:Volume4_Chapter1\|Chapter 1]]		\| Kino no Tabi
	\| [[Kino_no_Tabi:Volume4_Chapter3\|Chapter 3]]
			\| [[Kino_no_Tabi:Volume4_Chapter1\|Chapter 1]]

			\| [[Kino_no_Tabi:Volume4_Chapter3\|Chapter 3]]

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Dammitt at 18:18, 4 July 2012

2012-07-04T18:18:26Z

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	{{Navigation		{{Navigation
	\| Kino no Tabi		\| Kino no Tabi
	\| [[Kino_no_Tabi:~~Volume2_Chapter1~~\|Chapter 1]]		\| [[Kino_no_Tabi:Volume4_Chapter1\|Chapter 1]]
	\| [[Kino_no_Tabi:~~Volume2_Chapter3~~\|Chapter 3]]		\| [[Kino_no_Tabi:Volume4_Chapter3\|Chapter 3]]
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Dammitt: added footer

2012-07-04T18:16:52Z

added footer

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	A Child has been left there and the Child continues to wait.		A Child has been left there and the Child continues to wait.

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			{{Navigation
			\| Kino no Tabi
			\| [[Kino_no_Tabi:Volume2_Chapter1\|Chapter 1]]
			\| [[Kino_no_Tabi:Volume2_Chapter3\|Chapter 3]]
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Denverdrage at 19:00, 17 March 2009

2009-03-17T19:00:43Z

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	“Goodbye, xxx.”		“Goodbye, xxx.”

	With that, the ~~Travel~~ returned to the Motoroide and left.		With that, the Traveler returned to the Motoroide and left.

Matt122004 at 02:58, 6 June 2008

2008-06-06T02:58:13Z

Matt122004: New page: There was a beautiful grassland. A gentle breeze swept across the field, making the wild flowers dance. On this field there is a long narrow road. The narrow white road of pebble cuts acro...

2008-06-06T02:57:29Z

New page: There was a beautiful grassland. A gentle breeze swept across the field, making the wild flowers dance. On this field there is a long narrow road. The narrow white road of pebble cuts acro...

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There was a beautiful grassland. A gentle breeze swept across the field, making the wild flowers dance.
On this field there is a long narrow road. The narrow white road of pebble cuts across the field into the unending horizon.
A Motoroid was moving on the narrow road.
The rider noticed something by the road not much further away, and began to slow down. It turned out to be a Child waving at the rider.

“Please take me with you.”
“No way! There is no more room.” The Motoroide answered.
The rider asked “Where do you want to go?”
But the Child could not answer.
“What is your name?”
“xxx.”
The Child replies and begged again to travel with the rider.
“No way! There is no more room.” The Motoroide repeats again.
“I cannot guarantee other’s safety, I already have my hands full looking after myself. So I cannot bring you along, you should stop your notion about it. I am selfish… I am very selfish.”
“It is not possible to travel with two people on anyway.” the Motoroide chirped in.
The Traveler dismounted and walked toward the Child, squatting down to be at eye level.
“Goodbye, xxx.”
With that, the Travel returned to the Motoroide and left.

There was a beautiful grassland. A gentle breeze swept across the field, making the wild flowers dance.
On this grass filed there is a long narrow road. The narrow white road of pebble cuts across the field into the unending horizon.
A Child has been left there and the Child continues to wait.

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	There was a beautiful grassland. A gentle breeze swept across the field, making the wild flowers dance.		There was a beautiful grassland. A gentle breeze swept across the field, making the wild flowers dance.

	On this field there is a long narrow road. The narrow white road of pebble cuts across the field into the unending horizon.		On this field there is a long narrow road. The narrow white road of pebble cuts across the field into the unending horizon.

	A Motoroid was moving on the narrow road.		A Motoroid was moving on the narrow road.

	The rider noticed something by the road not much further away, and began to slow down. It turned out to be a Child waving at the rider.		The rider noticed something by the road not much further away, and began to slow down. It turned out to be a Child waving at the rider.


	“Please take me with you.”		“Please take me with you.”

	“No way! There is no more room.” The Motoroide answered.		“No way! There is no more room.” The Motoroide answered.

	The rider asked “Where do you want to go?”		The rider asked “Where do you want to go?”

	But the Child could not answer.		But the Child could not answer.

	“What is your name?”		“What is your name?”

	“xxx.”		“xxx.”

	The Child replies and begged again to travel with the rider.		The Child replies and begged again to travel with the rider.

	“No way! There is no more room.” The Motoroide repeats again.		“No way! There is no more room.” The Motoroide repeats again.
	“I cannot guarantee other’s safety, I already have my hands full looking after myself. So I cannot bring you along, you should stop your notion about it. I am selfish… I am very selfish.”
			“I cannot guarantee other’s safety, I already have my hands full looking after myself. So I cannot bring you along, you should
			stop your notion about it. I am selfish… I am very selfish.”

	“It is not possible to travel with two people on anyway.” the Motoroide chirped in.		“It is not possible to travel with two people on anyway.” the Motoroide chirped in.

	The Traveler dismounted and walked toward the Child, squatting down to be at eye level.		The Traveler dismounted and walked toward the Child, squatting down to be at eye level.

	“Goodbye, xxx.”		“Goodbye, xxx.”

	With that, the Travel returned to the Motoroide and left.		With that, the Travel returned to the Motoroide and left.


	There was a beautiful grassland. A gentle breeze swept across the field, making the wild flowers dance.		There was a beautiful grassland. A gentle breeze swept across the field, making the wild flowers dance.

	On this grass filed there is a long narrow road. The narrow white road of pebble cuts across the field into the unending horizon.		On this grass filed there is a long narrow road. The narrow white road of pebble cuts across the field into the unending horizon.

	A Child has been left there and the Child continues to wait.		A Child has been left there and the Child continues to wait.