Kino no Tabi:Volume7 Epilogue - Revision history

BloodyKitty at 17:14, 26 May 2013

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 ==“To Do Something ･ a” —life goes on. ･ a—==
 There was a forest and a road.
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 The morning haze cleared and the blue sky spread as far as the eyes could see.
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Ella.servantes: proofread for pdf

2012-11-04T10:39:44Z

proofread for pdf

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BloodyKitty at 14:13, 31 August 2012

2012-08-31T14:13:45Z

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BloodyKitty at 10:07, 28 August 2012

2012-08-28T10:07:01Z

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	There were a forest and a road.		There were a forest and a road.

	The forest was spreading over totally flat ground as far as the ~~eye~~ can see. The trees of different sorts were growing luxuriantly and harmoniously blended with each other.		The forest was spreading over totally flat ground as far as the eyes can see. The trees of different sorts were growing luxuriantly and harmoniously blended with each other.

	The straight road was going through the forest, as if dividing it in two parts. A single brown line among many shades of green. It was a pretty narrow, earthy road – a car and a carriage could barely pass each other.		The straight road was going through the forest, as if dividing it in two parts. A single brown line among many shades of green. It was a pretty narrow, earthy road – a car and a carriage could barely pass each other.
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	"Have you told this to her?"		"Have you told this to her?"

	"No, and even if I tell, no one would completely understand that. On the contrary, at ordinary times a person would ask himself? what does this means, and at a critical moment this thought will just plague you.——So I keep this ~~though~~ to myself."		"No, and even if I tell, no one would completely understand that. On the contrary, at ordinary times a person would ask himself 'what does this means?', and at a critical moment this thought will just plague you.——So I keep this thought to myself."

	When the old woman stopped talking, the girl returned back to the terrace with quick steps.		When the old woman stopped talking, the girl returned back to the terrace with quick steps.

Dammitt at 11:52, 20 August 2012

2012-08-20T11:52:43Z

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	The woman slowly talk combined with twittering of the birds outside.		The woman slowly talk combined with twittering of the birds outside.

	"There are many ~~good-natured~~ people in this country.—— But there're young people who don't like it, so they leave the country~~, intending to~~ travel. Well, it seems that they ~~didn~~'t ~~manage to~~ escape it after all." ~~<!-- I'm unsure about the last sentence :/ \|User753:Probably the woman meant that the young people that leave the country were actually good-natured as well? -->~~		"There are many softhearted people in this country.—— But there're young people who don't like it, so they leave the country and travel. Well, it seems that they can't escape their nature after all."

	"......"		"......"

User753 at 09:52, 20 August 2012

2012-08-20T09:52:41Z

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	"Yeah, probably," the woman said seriously.		"Yeah, probably," the woman said seriously.

	The girl slightly ~~added~~ Hermes's ~~acceleration~~<!--I don't know how to say this correctly-->.		The girl slightly opened Hermes's throttle<!--I don't know how to say this correctly-->.

	"Is it enough, Hermes?"		"Is it enough, Hermes?"
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	"The weather is getting better. Seems that we won't get wet."		"The weather is getting better. Seems that we won't get wet."

	The girl didn't answer. She just kept ~~pushing acceleration~~<!-- uhm, what's the right term?--> with her right hand.		The girl didn't answer. She just kept turning up the throttle<!-- uhm, what's the right term?--> with her right hand.


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	"It's quite long," said the old man.		"It's quite long," said the old man.

	"~~Aha <!--User753:Perhaps changed to "uh~~-huh~~,"?-->~~," said Kino.		"Uh-huh ," said Kino.

User753: Some replace/rewording, and the like...Please revert if I'm wrong. And some question/opinion inside

2012-08-20T08:36:10Z

Some replace/rewording, and the like...Please revert if I'm wrong. And some question/opinion inside

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2012-08-19T17:29:56Z

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