Konpeki no Kantai::Volume1 Chapter2 - Revision history

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2018-12-30T10:34:27Z

Added link to next chapter.

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	\| Back to [[Konpeki no Kantai::Volume1_Chapter1\|Chapter 1]]		\| Back to [[Konpeki no Kantai::Volume1_Chapter1\|Chapter 1]]
	\| Return to [[Konpeki no Kantai#Volume 1 - ''The Destined Outbreak of War''\|Main Page]]		\| Return to [[Konpeki no Kantai#Volume 1 - ''The Destined Outbreak of War''\|Main Page]]
			\| Forward to [[Konpeki no Kantai::Volume1_Chapter3\|Chapter 3]]
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2018-12-30T10:30:40Z

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	===Chapter Two: December 8th – The Destined Outbreak of War===		===Chapter Two: December 8th – The Destined Outbreak of War===

2018-12-17T13:37:11Z

Pages 82 & 83 done. Chapter two done.

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 War is also business.  Speaking of companies, they were at the moment oozing with sloppy management.  Already, the Japanese economy itself was entering a perilous state.  Military spending was the same as investment, or in other words nothing new came out.  The facilities of the domestic defense contractors were wearing out, and the populace was being driven into poverty.  This being the reality, trying to spread the slogan "We want nothing until the victory" had no meaning.
-He wondered if within the military there was even one expert in economics.  Even if it was only for the moment, those holding positions in the army upper echelons were simple minded soldier fools.
+He wondered if within the military there was even one expert in economics.  Even if it was only for the moment, those holding positions in the army upper echelons were simple minded soldier fools.  Far from having ears to listen, they didn't even have an understanding of the basics of economics.
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	The President was not in a good mood at all.		The President was not in a good mood at all.

	How would the justice-loving American people, who played the part of self-appointed police to the world, respond to be struck like this by Ootaka Yasaburou?		How would the justice-loving American people, who played the part of self-appointed police to the world, respond to being struck like this by Ootaka Yasaburou?

	Indeed, wasn't catching your opponent by surprise the very heart of the game?		Indeed, wasn't catching your opponent by surprise the very heart of the game?

2018-11-25T11:53:24Z

Pages 80 & 81 done.

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 "I think this is indeed a clever strategy.  Confused and at a loss, we are to be sucked under by a whirlpool of tribal independence movements around the world."
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+"At any rate, look at it.  Isn't this a statement to make one cry?" murmured the President.
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2018-11-04T23:51:47Z

Pages 78 & 79 done.

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+The evening of the seventh, Japan time, a telegram was received from the ambassador saying that there had been no response from the American government.
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2018-10-21T23:09:07Z

Pages 76 && 77 done.

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 "So it is."
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2018-10-01T12:11:25Z

Pages 74 & 75 done.

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 Japan's policies were at this point perfectly understood.  This because the Japanese codes were largely deciphered already.
-"All things considered, you are a pretty good actor, Secretary."
+"All things considered, you are a pretty good actor, Mr. Secretary."
 "The Japanese delegation are pretty good actors too, Mr. President."
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 "Rather than saying that they will choose profit over empty reputation, they care about honor, and not losing face.  We are different from them.   We study our opponents well, but among Japanese researchers, the spirit of the Samurai lives on.  They say it rules that country.  That is, they have a thing they call 'the aesthetics of death.'  They have a custom of glorifying death."
-"Secretary, that is something I know too.  They say that Bushido is where one discovers death."
+"Mr. Secretary, that is something I know too.  They say that Bushido is where one discovers death."
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+"Hmm, I don't understand."
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2018-09-04T14:26:37Z

Suggestion from a native speaker.

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	"Oh?"		"Oh?"

	"~~It isn't~~ about ~~winning or~~ losing~~, it's all about '~~face'. We are different from them. We study our opponents well, but among Japanese researchers, the spirit of the Samurai lives on. They say it rules that country. That is, they have a thing they call 'the aesthetics of death.' They have a custom of glorifying death."		"Rather than saying that they will choose profit over empty reputation, they care about honor, and not losing face. We are different from them. We study our opponents well, but among Japanese researchers, the spirit of the Samurai lives on. They say it rules that country. That is, they have a thing they call 'the aesthetics of death.' They have a custom of glorifying death."

	"Secretary, that is something I know too. They say that Bushido is where one discovers death."		"Secretary, that is something I know too. They say that Bushido is where one discovers death."

2018-09-02T22:24:51Z

Pages 72 & 73 done.

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 "Yes.  Because once the Asia plan was accomplished, we had plans to sweep European influence out of the Pacific.  We even had plans for the decline of British power there."
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+"Yes.  It was quite unexpected.  Because from our so-called tactics in high level diplomacy over the past ten years, everything was going to plan up to this point."
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