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	"The current Tokyo is nothing more than a regional city. I believe it has fallen into a deep recession, so having large numbers of staff stationed there is pointless," said Hal indifferently.		"The current Tokyo is nothing more than a regional city. I believe it has fallen into a deep recession, so having large numbers of staff stationed there is pointless," said Hal indifferently.

	After the "Dragons' Return" and First Strike event over twenty years ago, the humans were forced into an unequal treaty, resulting in the establishment of over two hundred "concession" territories ceded to ~~dragon kind~~.		After the "Dragons' Return" and First Strike event over twenty years ago, the humans were forced into an unequal treaty, resulting in the establishment of over two hundred "concession" territories ceded to dragonkind.

	The Tokyo Concession was one of them.		The Tokyo Concession was one of them.

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	"The current Tokyo is nothing more than a regional city. I believe it has fallen into a deep recession, so having large numbers of staff stationed there is pointless," said Hal indifferently.		"The current Tokyo is nothing more than a regional city. I believe it has fallen into a deep recession, so having large numbers of staff stationed there is pointless," said Hal indifferently.

	After the "Dragons' Return" and First Strike event over twenty years ago, the humans were forced into an unequal treaty, resulting in the establishment of over two hundred "concession" territories ceded to ~~dragonkind~~.		After the "Dragons' Return" and First Strike event over twenty years ago, the humans were forced into an unequal treaty, resulting in the establishment of over two hundred "concession" territories ceded to dragon kind.

	The Tokyo Concession was one of them.		The Tokyo Concession was one of them.
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	Currently, all the capital functions had been moved to central Japan.		Currently, all the capital functions had been moved to central Japan.

	'However, it would make a huge difference just by having one trustworthy companion by me side... Haruomi, you were born there, am I right? I also seem to remember you mentioning that you have a home there. So I wanted to discuss—'		'However, it would make a huge difference just by having one trustworthy companion by my side... Haruomi, you were born there, am I right? I also seem to remember you mentioning that you have a home there. So I wanted to discuss—'

	"I haven't gone back for three years already. Neither do I have any intention to do so now," Hal swiftly rejected Asya before she could finish.		"I haven't gone back for three years already. Neither do I have any intention to do so now," Hal swiftly rejected Asya before she could finish.

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	Furthermore, these attacks were mostly conducted collectively...		Furthermore, these attacks were mostly conducted collectively...

	Humanity had protested against these vicious "~~Dragons~~ Strikes" with extreme anger.		Humanity had protested against these vicious "Dragon Strikes" with extreme anger.

	These grievances were aired at the giant red dragon who had called himself the representative of dragonkind and customarily established an "embassy" at New York.		These grievances were aired at the giant red dragon who had called himself the representative of dragonkind and customarily established an "embassy" at New York.

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	While the train carried them along the New Town Loop Line, they were instantly presented with the striking scenery. This was because the Sumida River was visible from the elevated railway where the train was traveling.		While the train carried them along the New Town Loop Line, they were instantly presented with the striking scenery. This was because the Sumida River was visible from the elevated railway where the train was traveling.

	"Oh right, it’s possible to see that side from these parts," mumbled Hal softly while holding onto the train’s ring-shaped ~~handgrip~~.		"Oh right, it’s possible to see that side from these parts," mumbled Hal softly while holding onto the train’s ring-shaped hand-grip.

	Stretched out on the opposite shore of the Sumida River was the scenery formerly known as the Asakusa district.		Stretched out on the opposite shore of the Sumida River was the scenery formerly known as the Asakusa district.
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	Hal and Asya sighed together after remarking quietly.		Hal and Asya sighed together after remarking quietly.

	Concession territories ceded to ~~dragonkind~~ were scattered all over the world, numbering more than two hundred. Erected at each of these locations was the same type of ominous black pillar—the Monolith.		Concession territories ceded to dragon-kind were scattered all over the world, numbering more than two hundred. Erected at each of these locations was the same type of ominous black pillar—the Monolith.

	"Old Tokyo" consisted of what used to be Tokyo's hub area back when the city was still Japan's capital.		"Old Tokyo" consisted of what used to be Tokyo's hub area back when the city was still Japan's capital.

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	"Nothing much, Asya-san, I was just thinking you'd have finished the food during the time you were waiting for my return if the packed lunch were only meant for yourself. It happened to be noontime too."		"Nothing much, Asya-san, I was just thinking you'd have finished the food during the time you were waiting for my return if the packed lunch were only meant for yourself. It happened to be noontime too."

	Young Mr. Kenjou had gone out during 12:~~30 pm~~ to ~~2 pm~~.		Young Mr. Kenjou had gone out during 12:30pm to 2pm.

	Asya's stomach had subtly growled dozens of times already to express her hunger. Ever time her stomach rumbled, she kept staring intently at the basket she had brought.		Asya's stomach had subtly growled dozens of times already to express her hunger. Ever time her stomach rumbled, she kept staring intently at the basket she had brought.

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	Back when he first arrived here at the organization's referral, the southern hemisphere was still in winter.		Back when he first arrived here at the organization's referral, the southern hemisphere was still in winter.

	During this period before the arrival of summer, Hal rushed all over Australia like the world-famous archaeologist and grave robber, Indiana Jones, and finally completed his mission. Having handed the obtained Grave Goods to local big-shots, he was freed from his task.		During this period before the arrival of summer, Hal rushed all over Australia like the world-famous archaeologist and grave robber, Indiana Jones, and finally completed his mission. Having handed the obtained Grave Goods to local big shots, he was freed from his task.

	He did not know if the ladies selected as eligible candidates would succeed in becoming witches known as "magi."		He did not know if the ladies selected as eligible candidates would succeed in becoming witches known as "magi."
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	"The current Tokyo is nothing more than a regional city. I believe it has fallen into a deep recession, so having large numbers of staff stationed there is pointless," said Hal indifferently.		"The current Tokyo is nothing more than a regional city. I believe it has fallen into a deep recession, so having large numbers of staff stationed there is pointless," said Hal indifferently.

	After the "Dragons' Return" and First Strike event over twenty years ago, the humans were forced into an unequal treaty, resulting in the establishment of over two hundred "concession" territories ceded to ~~dragon-kind~~.		After the "Dragons' Return" and First Strike event over twenty years ago, the humans were forced into an unequal treaty, resulting in the establishment of over two hundred "concession" territories ceded to dragonkind.

	The Tokyo Concession was one of them.		The Tokyo Concession was one of them.
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	Hence, his vacation was cut short after lasting a mere three days. Hal started preparing for his return to Tokyo New Town.		Hence, his vacation was cut short after lasting a mere three days. Hal started preparing for his return to Tokyo New Town.


	===Part 2===		===Part 2===

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	"Nothing much, Asya-san, I was just thinking you'd have finished the food during the time you were waiting for my return if the packed lunch were only meant for yourself. It happened to be noontime too."		"Nothing much, Asya-san, I was just thinking you'd have finished the food during the time you were waiting for my return if the packed lunch were only meant for yourself. It happened to be noontime too."

	Young Mr. Kenjou had gone out during 12:~~30pm~~ to ~~2pm~~.		Young Mr. Kenjou had gone out during 12:30 pm to 2 pm.

	Asya's stomach had subtly growled dozens of times already to express her hunger. Ever time her stomach rumbled, she kept staring intently at the basket she had brought.		Asya's stomach had subtly growled dozens of times already to express her hunger. Ever time her stomach rumbled, she kept staring intently at the basket she had brought.

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	While the train carried them along the New Town Loop Line, they were instantly presented with the striking scenery. This was because the Sumida River was visible from the elevated railway where the train was traveling.		While the train carried them along the New Town Loop Line, they were instantly presented with the striking scenery. This was because the Sumida River was visible from the elevated railway where the train was traveling.

	"Oh right, it’s possible to see that side from these parts," mumbled Hal softly while holding onto the train’s ring-shaped ~~hand-grip~~.		"Oh right, it’s possible to see that side from these parts," mumbled Hal softly while holding onto the train’s ring-shaped handgrip.

	Stretched out on the opposite shore of the Sumida River was the scenery formerly known as the Asakusa district.		Stretched out on the opposite shore of the Sumida River was the scenery formerly known as the Asakusa district.
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	Hal and Asya sighed together after remarking quietly.		Hal and Asya sighed together after remarking quietly.

	Concession territories ceded to ~~dragon-kind~~ were scattered all over the world, numbering more than two hundred. Erected at each of these locations was the same type of ominous black pillar—the Monolith.		Concession territories ceded to dragonkind were scattered all over the world, numbering more than two hundred. Erected at each of these locations was the same type of ominous black pillar—the Monolith.

	"Old Tokyo" consisted of what used to be Tokyo's hub area back when the city was still Japan's capital.		"Old Tokyo" consisted of what used to be Tokyo's hub area back when the city was still Japan's capital.
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	Hal and Orihime immediately responded with the same action. They both nodded.		Hal and Orihime immediately responded with the same action. They both nodded.

	Twenty years prior, ~~dragon-kind~~ had "returned" to the planet Earth.		Twenty years prior, dragonkind had "returned" to the planet Earth.

	However, these super lifeforms did not choose to make Earth their place of residence.		However, these super lifeforms did not choose to make Earth their place of residence.
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	Crossing the atmosphere, they had colonized satellite orbits and the moon's surface.		Crossing the atmosphere, they had colonized satellite orbits and the moon's surface.

	The dragons all possessed flight capability and survivability enabling them to break through the atmosphere by their own power. Humans were no longer surprised even after learning of this fact. But after learning of ~~dragon-kind~~'s certain habits, people probably prayed to their worshiped gods or cursed their own fates.		The dragons all possessed flight capability and survivability enabling them to break through the atmosphere by their own power. Humans were no longer surprised even after learning of this fact. But after learning of dragonkind's certain habits, people probably prayed to their worshiped gods or cursed their own fates.

	Dragons frequently attacked, spurred by impromptu destructive impulses.		Dragons frequently attacked, spurred by impromptu destructive impulses.
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	Humanity had protested against these vicious "Dragons Strikes" with extreme anger.		Humanity had protested against these vicious "Dragons Strikes" with extreme anger.

	These grievances were aired at the giant red dragon who had called himself the representative of ~~dragon-kind~~ and customarily established an "embassy" at New York.		These grievances were aired at the giant red dragon who had called himself the representative of dragonkind and customarily established an "embassy" at New York.

	This resulted in that particular "king" appearing in front of CNN's cameras and generously declaring in an astounding tenor voice:		This resulted in that particular "king" appearing in front of CNN's cameras and generously declaring in an astounding tenor voice:

	"It is truly regrettable that such problems have arisen. Consequently, as the representative of ~~dragon-kind~~, I promise you all, humans, we shall refrain absolutely from interfering if you were to exercise your right to self-defense against berserk members of our kind. I hereby swear upon my title as king."		"It is truly regrettable that such problems have arisen. Consequently, as the representative of dragonkind, I promise you all, humans, we shall refrain absolutely from interfering if you were to exercise your right to self-defense against berserk members of our kind. I hereby swear upon my title as king."

	Despite the clearly solemn tone of voice, the words coming from his mouth were absolutely irresponsible.		Despite the clearly solemn tone of voice, the words coming from his mouth were absolutely irresponsible.
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	However, one saving grace could be considered a blessing mixed in the curse.		However, one saving grace could be considered a blessing mixed in the curse.

	Lesser dragons, forming the majority of ~~dragon-kind~~, were relatively easy to defeat.		Lesser dragons, forming the majority of dragonkind, were relatively easy to defeat.

	That being said, that assessment was based on expert perspectives and differed somewhat from common perceptions. In the process of evacuating from the library's fifth floor underground to the ground surface, Orihime murmured with worry, "Dragons... will reach New Town?"		That being said, that assessment was based on expert perspectives and differed somewhat from common perceptions. In the process of evacuating from the library's fifth floor underground to the ground surface, Orihime murmured with worry, "Dragons... will reach New Town?"
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	Coming from her, an experienced combatant, these words felt even more real.		Coming from her, an experienced combatant, these words felt even more real.

	"In addition, although it's quite rare, if instead of lesser dragons—Raptors—we have the ~~Elites~~ that are capable of human speech... in other words, elite dragons, then the danger level will immediately rise to Code Red."		"In addition, although it's quite rare, if instead of lesser dragons—Raptors—we have the Equites that are capable of human speech... in other words, elite dragons, then the danger level will immediately rise to Code Red."

	"Raptors? What are they?"		"Raptors? What are they?"
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	As expected, she was a layperson—At least currently still. Hal nodded secretly to himself before supplementing his explanation.		As expected, she was a layperson—At least currently still. Hal nodded secretly to himself before supplementing his explanation.

	"It's a shortened form of the scientific nomenclature used for ~~dragon-kind~~. You should be learning it in the near future... How's the situation on the surface now?"		"It's a shortened form of the scientific nomenclature used for dragonkind. You should be learning it in the near future... How's the situation on the surface now?"

	The trio had finally finished climbing stairs, arriving at the ground floor.		The trio had finally finished climbing stairs, arriving at the ground floor.
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	The serpent swallowed its own tail, forming a "∞" symbol in the air.		The serpent swallowed its own tail, forming a "∞" symbol in the air.

	The infinity symbol gradually materialized, turning from ~~mass-less~~ light into a corporeal creature. Then it transformed even further.		The infinity symbol gradually materialized, turning from massless light into a corporeal creature. Then it transformed even further.

	While Hal and the others watched, the light from the pentagram finished transforming into a "serpentine dragon."		While Hal and the others watched, the light from the pentagram finished transforming into a "serpentine dragon."

	This was a dragon whose form greatly differed from the ~~dragon-kind~~ who stood as mankind's enemies.		This was a dragon whose form greatly differed from the dragonkind who stood as mankind's enemies.

	Its body was long like a snake and had four extremely short limbs. There was a horn on its head that resembled a deer's antler in shape. Its entire body was covered with emerald scales. Overall, there was a kind of fish-like air to its appearance.		Its body was long like a snake and had four extremely short limbs. There was a horn on its head that resembled a deer's antler in shape. Its entire body was covered with emerald scales. Overall, there was a kind of fish-like air to its appearance.
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	Minadzuki. This was apparently the name of this leviathan shaped like a serpentine dragon.		Minadzuki. This was apparently the name of this leviathan shaped like a serpentine dragon.

	Leviathans were the artificial dragons born from occult and magic. Created for fighting ~~dragon-kind~~, these "serpents" possessed bodies similar to dragons and shared their lives with witches.		Leviathans were the artificial dragons born from occult and magic. Created for fighting dragonkind, these "serpents" possessed bodies similar to dragons and shared their lives with witches.

	SAURU, of which Hal and Asya were members, was the organization overseeing the birth of leviathans and their covenants.		SAURU, of which Hal and Asya were members, was the organization overseeing the birth of leviathans and their covenants.
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	Furthermore, the remains of dragons also became extremely fragile, making the tough resilience from when they were alive seem fictional. In actual fact, more than half of this Raptor's body shattered from the impact of the fall.		Furthermore, the remains of dragons also became extremely fragile, making the tough resilience from when they were alive seem fictional. In actual fact, more than half of this Raptor's body shattered from the impact of the fall.

	Watching the death state unique to ~~dragon-kind~~, Hal thought to himself.		Watching the death state unique to dragonkind, Hal thought to himself.

	Amidst the misfortune of a dragon attack, how lucky it was for all of them to survive unharmed.		Amidst the misfortune of a dragon attack, how lucky it was for all of them to survive unharmed.

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	Hal and Orihime immediately responded with the same action. They both nodded.		Hal and Orihime immediately responded with the same action. They both nodded.

	Twenty years prior, ~~dragonkind~~ had "returned" to the planet Earth.		Twenty years prior, dragon-kind had "returned" to the planet Earth.

	However, these super lifeforms did not choose to make Earth their place of residence.		However, these super lifeforms did not choose to make Earth their place of residence.
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	Crossing the atmosphere, they had colonized satellite orbits and the moon's surface.		Crossing the atmosphere, they had colonized satellite orbits and the moon's surface.

	The dragons all possessed flight capability and survivability enabling them to break through the atmosphere by their own power. Humans were no longer surprised even after learning of this fact. But after learning of ~~dragonkind~~'s certain habits, people probably prayed to their worshiped gods or cursed their own fates.		The dragons all possessed flight capability and survivability enabling them to break through the atmosphere by their own power. Humans were no longer surprised even after learning of this fact. But after learning of dragon-kind's certain habits, people probably prayed to their worshiped gods or cursed their own fates.

	Dragons frequently attacked, spurred by impromptu destructive impulses.		Dragons frequently attacked, spurred by impromptu destructive impulses.
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	Humanity had protested against these vicious "Dragons Strikes" with extreme anger.		Humanity had protested against these vicious "Dragons Strikes" with extreme anger.

	These grievances were aired at the giant red dragon who had called himself the representative of ~~dragonkind~~ and customarily established an "embassy" at New York.		These grievances were aired at the giant red dragon who had called himself the representative of dragon-kind and customarily established an "embassy" at New York.

	This resulted in that particular "king" appearing in front of CNN's cameras and generously declaring in an astounding tenor voice:		This resulted in that particular "king" appearing in front of CNN's cameras and generously declaring in an astounding tenor voice:

	"It is truly regrettable that such problems have arisen. Consequently, as the representative of ~~dragonkind~~, I promise you all, humans, we shall refrain absolutely from interfering if you were to exercise your right to self-defense against berserk members of our kind. I hereby swear upon my title as king."		"It is truly regrettable that such problems have arisen. Consequently, as the representative of dragon-kind, I promise you all, humans, we shall refrain absolutely from interfering if you were to exercise your right to self-defense against berserk members of our kind. I hereby swear upon my title as king."

	Despite the clearly solemn tone of voice, the words coming from his mouth were absolutely irresponsible.		Despite the clearly solemn tone of voice, the words coming from his mouth were absolutely irresponsible.
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	However, one saving grace could be considered a blessing mixed in the curse.		However, one saving grace could be considered a blessing mixed in the curse.

	Lesser dragons, forming the majority of ~~dragonkind~~, were relatively easy to defeat.		Lesser dragons, forming the majority of dragon-kind, were relatively easy to defeat.

	That being said, that assessment was based on expert perspectives and differed somewhat from common perceptions. In the process of evacuating from the library's fifth floor underground to the ground surface, Orihime murmured with worry, "Dragons... will reach New Town?"		That being said, that assessment was based on expert perspectives and differed somewhat from common perceptions. In the process of evacuating from the library's fifth floor underground to the ground surface, Orihime murmured with worry, "Dragons... will reach New Town?"
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	Coming from her, an experienced combatant, these words felt even more real.		Coming from her, an experienced combatant, these words felt even more real.

	"In addition, although it's quite rare, if instead of lesser dragons—Raptors—we have the ~~Equites~~ that are capable of human speech... in other words, elite dragons, then the danger level will immediately rise to Code Red."		"In addition, although it's quite rare, if instead of lesser dragons—Raptors—we have the Elites that are capable of human speech... in other words, elite dragons, then the danger level will immediately rise to Code Red."

	"Raptors? What are they?"		"Raptors? What are they?"
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	As expected, she was a layperson—At least currently still. Hal nodded secretly to himself before supplementing his explanation.		As expected, she was a layperson—At least currently still. Hal nodded secretly to himself before supplementing his explanation.

	"It's a shortened form of the scientific nomenclature used for ~~dragonkind~~. You should be learning it in the near future... How's the situation on the surface now?"		"It's a shortened form of the scientific nomenclature used for dragon-kind. You should be learning it in the near future... How's the situation on the surface now?"

	The trio had finally finished climbing stairs, arriving at the ground floor.		The trio had finally finished climbing stairs, arriving at the ground floor.
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	The serpent swallowed its own tail, forming a "∞" symbol in the air.		The serpent swallowed its own tail, forming a "∞" symbol in the air.

	The infinity symbol gradually materialized, turning from ~~massless~~ light into a corporeal creature. Then it transformed even further.		The infinity symbol gradually materialized, turning from mass-less light into a corporeal creature. Then it transformed even further.

	While Hal and the others watched, the light from the pentagram finished transforming into a "serpentine dragon."		While Hal and the others watched, the light from the pentagram finished transforming into a "serpentine dragon."

	This was a dragon whose form greatly differed from the ~~dragonkind~~ who stood as mankind's enemies.		This was a dragon whose form greatly differed from the dragon-kind who stood as mankind's enemies.

	Its body was long like a snake and had four extremely short limbs. There was a horn on its head that resembled a deer's antler in shape. Its entire body was covered with emerald scales. Overall, there was a kind of fish-like air to its appearance.		Its body was long like a snake and had four extremely short limbs. There was a horn on its head that resembled a deer's antler in shape. Its entire body was covered with emerald scales. Overall, there was a kind of fish-like air to its appearance.
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	Minadzuki. This was apparently the name of this leviathan shaped like a serpentine dragon.		Minadzuki. This was apparently the name of this leviathan shaped like a serpentine dragon.

	Leviathans were the artificial dragons born from occult and magic. Created for fighting ~~dragonkind~~, these "serpents" possessed bodies similar to dragons and shared their lives with witches.		Leviathans were the artificial dragons born from occult and magic. Created for fighting dragon-kind, these "serpents" possessed bodies similar to dragons and shared their lives with witches.

	SAURU, of which Hal and Asya were members, was the organization overseeing the birth of leviathans and their covenants.		SAURU, of which Hal and Asya were members, was the organization overseeing the birth of leviathans and their covenants.
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	Furthermore, the remains of dragons also became extremely fragile, making the tough resilience from when they were alive seem fictional. In actual fact, more than half of this Raptor's body shattered from the impact of the fall.		Furthermore, the remains of dragons also became extremely fragile, making the tough resilience from when they were alive seem fictional. In actual fact, more than half of this Raptor's body shattered from the impact of the fall.

	Watching the death state unique to ~~dragonkind~~, Hal thought to himself.		Watching the death state unique to dragon-kind, Hal thought to himself.

	Amidst the misfortune of a dragon attack, how lucky it was for all of them to survive unharmed.		Amidst the misfortune of a dragon attack, how lucky it was for all of them to survive unharmed.

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	'My acting skills were clearly perfect that time... But you still remained unmoved, Haruomi.'		'My acting skills were clearly perfect that time... But you still remained unmoved, Haruomi.'

	"Because the timing in the transition from your original subject of conversation to the ~~out-pour~~ of tears was a teeny bit unnatural."		"Because the timing in the transition from your original subject of conversation to the outpour of tears was a teeny bit unnatural."

	'Getting duped willingly is a show of manliness in times like those, you know♪ Oh right, before I forget it,' the crafty organization leader suddenly changed the subject.		'Getting duped willingly is a show of manliness in times like those, you know♪ Oh right, before I forget it,' the crafty organization leader suddenly changed the subject.
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	The sort-of magnificent bookshelves were fully occupied by the book collection of the Haruga family, a lineage said to have produced many a collector over the generations, although only few of them were from his father. Despite having read tens of thousands of volumes, he tended to digitize the majority of books after reading.		The sort-of magnificent bookshelves were fully occupied by the book collection of the Haruga family, a lineage said to have produced many a collector over the generations, although only few of them were from his father. Despite having read tens of thousands of volumes, he tended to digitize the majority of books after reading.

	This naturally arose from a lifestyle of frequent ~~relocation~~.		This naturally arose from a lifestyle of frequent relocations.

	"Oh, so that's where Pops kept it."		"Oh, so that's where Pops kept it."
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	"This thing is really good, just as I thought. And you clearly said you'd give it to me once you're done with it..."		"This thing is really good, just as I thought. And you clearly said you'd give it to me once you're done with it..."

	The silver watch was circular with a diameter of ~~10 cm~~.		The silver watch was circular with a diameter of 10cm.

	It was slightly too large as a pocket watch, but Hal still stuffed it into a pocket in his pants.		It was slightly too large as a pocket watch, but Hal still stuffed it into a pocket in his pants.
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	Hal only needed to think slightly before understanding immediately.		Hal only needed to think slightly before understanding immediately.

	The acronym UFO officially stood for "Unidentified Flying Object." It did not originally mean flying saucer but was a ~~code-name~~ for unknown flying entities. In that sense, just as Mutou-san pointed out, the dragons were currently the biggest and most numerous UFOs.		The acronym UFO officially stood for "Unidentified Flying Object." It did not originally mean flying saucer but was a codename for unknown flying entities. In that sense, just as Mutou-san pointed out, the dragons were currently the biggest and most numerous UFOs.

	"Then your club activities involve--"		"Then your club activities involve--"