Leviathan:Volume 2 Chapter 2 - Revision history

Zzhk: /* Chapter 2 - Shadow of the Uninvited Visitor */

2015-10-29T09:52:43Z

Chapter 2 - Shadow of the Uninvited Visitor

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	"But Asya-san, I'm surprised you know which direction to fly!"		"But Asya-san, I'm surprised you know which direction to fly!"

	"That's because I'm using Spatial Perception and Location Information magic. Like Enemy ~~Search~~, they are essential spells for long-distance combat. I'll teach them carefully to you later."		"That's because I'm using Spatial Perception and Location Information magic. Like Enemy Detection, they are essential spells for long-distance combat. I'll teach them carefully to you later."

	It looked like there was a mountain of things to learn in order to become a veteran witch.		It looked like there was a mountain of things to learn in order to become a veteran witch.

Cthaeh at 23:32, 14 August 2015

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	Excluding Hazumi and Asya, there were currently seven witches in Japan.		Excluding Hazumi and Asya, there were currently seven witches in Japan.

	Tokyo New Town in the Kantou region had Orihime. Apart from that, Hokkaido, Iwate, Gifu, Wakayama, Shimane, Kagawa ~~has~~ one witch each. Although the situation developed to the point that a majority of them had to be mobilized to intercept the dragons, in the end, there were no major repercussions apparently.		Tokyo New Town in the Kantou region had Orihime. Apart from that, Hokkaido, Iwate, Gifu, Wakayama, Shimane, Kagawa had one witch each. Although the situation developed to the point that a majority of them had to be mobilized to intercept the dragons, in the end, there were no major repercussions apparently.

	"Still, Orihime-san is doing so well that she doesn't seem like someone who had just become a witch."		"Still, Orihime-san is doing so well that she doesn't seem like someone who had just become a witch."
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	Then night finally fell.		Then night finally fell.

	The ~~the~~ SDF's air force and navy had respective bases on Miyaka Island of the Izu Islands.		The SDF's air force and navy had respective bases on Miyaka Island of the Izu Islands.

	Stationed here was also a large aircraft carrier fleet belonging to the Trans-Pacific Defense Organization along with patrol units, etc—		Stationed here was also a large aircraft carrier fleet belonging to the Trans-Pacific Defense Organization along with patrol units, etc—

Belatkuro: /* Part 2 */

2015-08-04T14:06:43Z

Part 2

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	"On a certain Sunday when I happened to be free from kendo competitions, we went out as a family. While our car was passing under a highway, we unfortunately encountered a collapse accident. I was told that a few years ago, Raptors had rampaged in the area, causing the road itself to deteriorate... Oh dear, even though dragons were not fully responsible, I was thinking I should still report to my family."		"On a certain Sunday when I happened to be free from kendo competitions, we went out as a family. While our car was passing under a highway, we unfortunately encountered a collapse accident. I was told that a few years ago, Raptors had rampaged in the area, causing the road itself to deteriorate... Oh dear, even though dragons were not fully responsible, I was thinking I should still report to my family."

	Hal was informed that ~~Orhime~~'s family consisted only of herself and the grandfather.		Hal was informed that Orihime's family consisted only of herself and the grandfather.

	Naturally, there must have been a reason for that. Hal, too, had been living alone for a long time now. Native to Georgia, Asya had no family apart from her mother who lived in Istanbul. Although this was not the reason, Hal still tried asking:		Naturally, there must have been a reason for that. Hal, too, had been living alone for a long time now. Native to Georgia, Asya had no family apart from her mother who lived in Istanbul. Although this was not the reason, Hal still tried asking:

Zzhk: "dragon scales" = scales of a dragon; just as you'd say "fish scales" rather than "fish's scales"

2015-08-01T23:34:34Z

"dragon scales" = scales of a dragon; just as you'd say "fish scales" rather than "fish's scales"

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	Orihime's attitude was the same as usual, without suppressing or adding extra emphasis in her voice.		Orihime's attitude was the same as usual, without suppressing or adding extra emphasis in her voice.

	"On a certain Sunday when I happened to be free from kendo competitions, we went out as a family. While our car was passing under a highway, we unfortunately encountered a collapse accident. I was told that a few years ago, Raptors had rampaged in the area, causing the road itself to deteriorate... Oh dear, even though dragons were not ~~completely~~ responsible, I was thinking I should still report to my family."		"On a certain Sunday when I happened to be free from kendo competitions, we went out as a family. While our car was passing under a highway, we unfortunately encountered a collapse accident. I was told that a few years ago, Raptors had rampaged in the area, causing the road itself to deteriorate... Oh dear, even though dragons were not fully responsible, I was thinking I should still report to my family."

	Hal was informed that Orhime's family consisted only of herself and the grandfather.		Hal was informed that Orhime's family consisted only of herself and the grandfather.
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	Then his voice, filled with masculinity and sense of honor, resounded clearly across the night sky of the Yokohama metropolis.		Then his voice, filled with masculinity and sense of honor, resounded clearly across the night sky of the Yokohama metropolis.

	The silver dragon's scales glittered amidst light from the night scenery. Towering next to the dragon hovering motionlessly in the air was the symbol of Yokohama city, the Yokohama Landmark Tower.		The silver dragon scales glittered amidst light from the night scenery. Towering next to the dragon hovering motionlessly in the air was the symbol of Yokohama city, the Yokohama Landmark Tower.

	"I shall bear the shame of admitting to my ignorance. Regarding these islands, the system governing your country and the political rulers in charge, I know very little. Perhaps even nothing at all."		"I shall bear the shame of admitting to my ignorance. Regarding these islands, the system governing your country and the political rulers in charge, I know very little. Perhaps even nothing at all."

Nick Halden at 15:10, 1 August 2015

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Zzhk at 14:33, 1 August 2015

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	That dragon had mentioned the term "Tyrannos" a number of times. It was an ancient word referring to usurpers, supplanters and tyrants.		That dragon had mentioned the term "Tyrannos" a number of times. It was an ancient word referring to usurpers, supplanters and tyrants.

	"Fufufu. Make no mistake, this nation shall be ruined if an usurper comes to rule it. After all, ~~sentient~~ dragons hate nothing more than false kings—usurpers aspiring to the position of dragon king. Even in the face of impossible odds, they will still attempt to invade a Tyrannos' domain to exterminate him."		"Fufufu. Make no mistake, this nation shall be ruined if an usurper comes to rule it. After all, sapient dragons hate nothing more than false kings—usurpers aspiring to the position of dragon king. Even in the face of impossible odds, they will still attempt to invade a Tyrannos' domain to exterminate him."

	"In other words, elite dragons will be attacking Japan one after another...?" Asya asked skeptically.		"In other words, elite dragons will be attacking Japan one after another...?" Asya asked skeptically.

Zzhk: /* Part 4 */

2015-08-01T03:58:21Z

Part 4

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Zzhk: /* Part 3 */

2015-08-01T02:28:46Z

Part 3

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	"Oh my, you came today?"		"Oh my, you came today?"

	"To ~~handle some random business~~, but I'm about to leave. I also have someone with me."		"To take care of sundry chores, but I'm about to leave. I also have someone with me."

	Hal glanced at Hazumi while he spoke.		Hal glanced at Hazumi while he spoke.

Zzhk: /* Part 3 */

2015-07-31T14:54:15Z

Part 3

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Zzhk: /* Part 2 */

2015-07-31T10:39:24Z

Part 2

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	Confronted with sudden frankness, Hazumi did not know how to react.		Confronted with sudden frankness, Hazumi did not know how to react.

	Hal had held the same opinion previously. He did not know if it was due to Hinokagutsuchi's involvement, but Orihime was exhibiting extraordinarily premature development of her powers. It was only ~~nature~~ for this to raise suspicions.		Hal had held the same opinion previously. He did not know if it was due to Hinokagutsuchi's involvement, but Orihime was exhibiting extraordinarily premature development of her powers. It was only natural for this to raise suspicions.

	However, since Hiiragi-san was currently observing Hal's reaction, he could not say this aloud...		However, since Hiiragi-san was currently observing Hal's reaction, he could not say this aloud...
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	Orihime's attitude was the same as usual, without suppressing or adding extra emphasis in her voice.		Orihime's attitude was the same as usual, without suppressing or adding extra emphasis in her voice.

	"On a certain Sunday when I happened to be free from kendo competitions, we went out as a family. While our car was passing under a highway, we unfortunately encountered a collapse accident. I was told that a few years ago, Raptors had rampaged in the area, causing the road itself to deteriorate... On dear, even though dragons were not ~~fully~~ responsible, I was thinking I should still report to my family."		"On a certain Sunday when I happened to be free from kendo competitions, we went out as a family. While our car was passing under a highway, we unfortunately encountered a collapse accident. I was told that a few years ago, Raptors had rampaged in the area, causing the road itself to deteriorate... Oh dear, even though dragons were not completely responsible, I was thinking I should still report to my family."

	Hal was informed that Orhime's family consisted only of herself and the grandfather.		Hal was informed that Orhime's family consisted only of herself and the grandfather.

	Naturally, there must have been a reason for that. Hal, too, had been living alone for a long time now. Native to Georgia, Asya had no family apart from her mother who lived at Istanbul. Although this was not the reason, Hal still tried asking:		Naturally, there must have been a reason for that. Hal, too, had been living alone for a long time now. Native to Georgia, Asya had no family apart from her mother who lived in Istanbul. Although this was not the reason, Hal still tried asking:

	"Hiiragi-san probably owes me a favor or two. Want me to talk to her?"		"Hiiragi-san probably owes me a favor or two. Want me to talk to her?"
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	"H-Haruomi!"		"H-Haruomi!"

	"It's fine even if it doesn't work out. Let's, how did it go last time?"		"It's fine even if it doesn't work out. Let's see, how did it go last time?"

	Ignoring Asya's protests, Hal began to search his memories.		Ignoring Asya's protests, Hal began to search his memories.
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	Hal and Hazumi walked through each floor together.		Hal and Hazumi walked through each floor together.

	Every room was empty. They checked whether the air conditioning, locks and lights were functioning ~~normal~~. There were no problems with any of them.		Every room was empty. They checked whether the air conditioning, locks and lights were functioning normally. There were no problems with any of them.

	"Looks like it's safe to move the materials at the previous Mansion over here. It's time to withdraw, I guess."		"Looks like it's safe to move the materials at the previous Mansion over here. It's time to withdraw, I guess."
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	"Fortunately, the checking task was relatively simple. If things always turn out like this, life would be much easier."		"Fortunately, the checking task was relatively simple. If things always turn out like this, life would be much easier."

	"Oh I've heard. Your job involves traveling all over the world to unearth magic-infused mystical artifacts and magic textbooks... Isn't that right?"		"Oh, I've heard. Your job involves traveling all over the world to unearth magic-infused mystical artifacts and magic textbooks... Isn't that right?"

	"That's basically correct. But there are various other matters to handle too."		"That's basically correct. But there are various other matters to handle too."
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	"That is truly dangerous..."		"That is truly dangerous..."

	"Speaking of the most dangerous missions, that would probably be investigating the trail and whereabouts of elite dragons that had come to earth. Although I experienced it once with Soth last time, there's nothing ~~worst~~ than having those things target you."		"Speaking of the most dangerous missions, that would probably be investigating the trail and whereabouts of elite dragons that had come to earth. Although I experienced it once with Soth last time, there's nothing worse than having those things target you."

	"That's for certain. Please be careful!"		"That's for certain. Please be careful!"
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	Hazumi was the witch tasked specifically with guarding Tokyo New Town and the surrounding region.		Hazumi was the witch tasked specifically with guarding Tokyo New Town and the surrounding region.

	Although she was rewarded with handsome monetary compensation and VIP treatment, a witch shouldering duties as a "protector" could not even leave her assigned region to travel on whim.		Although she was rewarded with handsome monetary compensation and VIP treatment, a witch shouldering duties as a "protector" could not even leave her assigned region to travel on a whim.

	A "mercenary" like Asya who fought in various places was actually quite rare.		A "mercenary" like Asya who fought in various places was actually quite rare.
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	"But I would feel bad if I miss activities often."		"But I would feel bad if I miss activities often."

	"Don't worry. Whether ghost members, part-time members who only show up once a month, or even ~~member~~ like Haruga here, I will shower them with love equally!"		"Don't worry. Whether ghost members, part-time members who only show up once a month, or even members like Haruga here, I will shower them with love equally!"

	Hazumi was obedient in nature while President M was powerful, but the rhythm of conversation was surprisingly fluid.		Hazumi was obedient in nature while President M was powerful, but the rhythm of conversation was surprisingly fluid.
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	The elite dragon with metallic silver luster arrived over Yokohama.		The elite dragon with metallic silver luster arrived over Yokohama.

	Having shifted to supersonic flight suddenly, the dragon had given 'serpent'-related personnel in the Kantou region any time or chance to react.		Having shifted to supersonic flight suddenly, the dragon had not given 'serpent'-related personnel in the Kantou region any time or chance to react.

	However, he did not do this for the purpose of avoiding conflict.		However, he did not do this for the purpose of avoiding conflict.
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	Then his voice, filled with masculinity and sense of honor, resounded clearly across the night sky of the Yokohama metropolis.		Then his voice, filled with masculinity and sense of honor, resounded clearly across the night sky of the Yokohama metropolis.

	The silver dragon scales glittered amidst light from the night scenery. Towering next to the dragon hovering motionlessly in the air was the symbol of Yokohama city, the Yokohama Landmark Tower.		The silver dragon's scales glittered amidst light from the night scenery. Towering next to the dragon hovering motionlessly in the air was the symbol of Yokohama city, the Yokohama Landmark Tower.

	"I shall bear the shame of admitting to my ignorance. Regarding these islands, the system governing your country and the political rulers in charge, I know very little. Perhaps even nothing at all."		"I shall bear the shame of admitting to my ignorance. Regarding these islands, the system governing your country and the political rulers in charge, I know very little. Perhaps even nothing at all."