Leviathan:Volume 3 Chapter 2 - Revision history

Zzhk at 16:10, 29 March 2016

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	Paired with that frilly black one-piece dress, she looked like an heiress out on a tour. However, that slender yet mature body of hers, brimming with feminine charm, was conveying her absolutely unshakable confidence as a master mage.		Paired with that frilly black one-piece dress, she looked like an heiress out on a tour. However, that slender yet mature body of hers, brimming with feminine charm, was conveying her absolutely unshakable confidence as a master mage.

	"Orihime-san, please take a good look at how potent the powers of a master-class 'serpent' are in peak condition rather than on the verge of death. Although she has serious problems in personality and disposition, Luna is blessed with rare gifts as a witch."		"Orihime-san, please take a good look at how potent the powers of a master-class 'serpent' are when in peak condition rather than on the verge of death. Although she has serious problems in personality and disposition, Luna is blessed with rare gifts as a witch."

	"She is Luna-san...?"		"She is Luna-san...?"

Nick Halden at 12:06, 29 March 2016

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Zzhk at 07:15, 7 February 2016

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Zzhk at 11:23, 5 November 2015

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	Roughly one kilometer ahead of them, the white fox-wolf was engaging in an aerial battle against dragons numbering in three digits at least.		Roughly one kilometer ahead of them, the white fox-wolf was engaging in an aerial battle against dragons numbering in three digits at least.

	Furthermore, neither Hazumi nor Minadzuki were present at Haneda's offshore.		Furthermore, neither Hazumi nor Minadzuki were present at Haneda's offshore waters.

	This was because they were on standby at New Town's shore, prepared to handle Raptors at the water's edge.		This was because they were on standby at New Town's shore, prepared to handle Raptors at the water's edge.
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	It was a lion ten-odd meters in length. No less impressive than Akuro-Ou in physique, she also had a beautiful mane. Her fur featured a vivid orange color.		It was a lion ten-odd meters in length. No less impressive than Akuro-Ou in physique, she also had a beautiful mane. Her fur featured a vivid orange color.

	And on the right shoulder—was a green head ~~of a dragon's~~.		And on the right shoulder—was a green dragon head.

	There was even a black goat head on the left shoulder!		There was even a black goat head on the left shoulder!

Cthaeh at 23:36, 4 November 2015

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	Presumably fully recovered from her trance, she immediately yelled, "Akuro-Ou! Use fire magic to blow them all away!"		Presumably fully recovered from her trance, she immediately yelled, "Akuro-Ou! Use fire magic to blow them all away!"

	Akuro-Ou roared in response to her ~~covanantee~~'s call.		Akuro-Ou roared in response to her covenantee's call.

	Kuohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!		Kuohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!
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	They looked back to see that Asya had arrived behind them.		They looked back to see that Asya had arrived behind them.

	Hal's childhood friend was dressed in her recent getup consisting of the school uniform with a military jacket on top. Asya swiftly motioned to the side with a glance. Her gaze ~~was~~ was directed towards another witch.		Hal's childhood friend was dressed in her recent getup consisting of the school uniform with a military jacket on top. Asya swiftly motioned to the side with a glance. Her gaze was directed towards another witch.

	A patrol helicopter happened to be landing on the deck.		A patrol helicopter happened to be landing on the deck.
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	===Part 4===		===Part 4===

	Her full name wa Mutou Natsumi.		Her full name was Mutou Natsumi.

	Haruga Haruomi aka Hal called her "Mutou-san." She was Hal's classmate and fellow club member. Another classmate, addressed similarly as "Funaki-san," had a full name of Funaki Kyouka, actually.		Haruga Haruomi aka Hal called her "Mutou-san." She was Hal's classmate and fellow club member. Another classmate, addressed similarly as "Funaki-san," had a full name of Funaki Kyouka, actually.
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	===Part 5===		===Part 5===

	The next morning after the battle offshore of Haneda and Tokyo was shrouded under a mist of suspended animation...		The next morning after the battle, offshore of Haneda and Tokyo was shrouded under a mist of suspended animation...

	At roughly 9am, Hal drove a passenger car to the area of Adachi Ward and downtown Kitasenju. Asya was sitting in the front passenger seat while Luna Francois was also seated in the back.		At roughly 9am, Hal drove a passenger car to the area of Adachi Ward and downtown Kitasenju. Asya was sitting in the front passenger seat while Luna Francois was also seated in the back.
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	Hal realized after reciting the words surfacing in his mind.		Hal realized after reciting the words surfacing in his mind.

	"I get it now. As long as Galad still lives, that dragon king who's called ~~Yukikdaze~~ won't be able to become Tokyo's ruler. That's why she's trying to find and eliminate him."		"I get it now. As long as Galad still lives, that dragon king who's called Yukikaze won't be able to become Tokyo's ruler. That's why she's trying to find and eliminate him."

	"But she's already the de facto ruler."		"But she's already the de facto ruler."
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	Just as Luna Francois nodded in agreement...		Just as Luna Francois nodded in agreement...

	A blue Raptor immediately flew towards them and descended. However, killing it in a single shot would be an effortless task for the magic gun held in Hal's hand. Just as the group decided to observe the Raptor's movements for now—		A blue Raptor immediately flew towards them and descended. However, killing it in a single shot would be an effortless task for the magic gun held in Hal's hand. Just as the group decided to observe the Raptor's movements for now—

	'We meet again, Lord Tyrannos.' nos.' nos.'		'We meet again, Lord Tyrannos.' nos.' nos.'

	Descending gracefully, the Raptor spoke with the voice of the old dragon, Exhos.		Descending gracefully, the Raptor spoke with the voice of the old dragon, Exhos.

	Hal came to a realization. This was also the magic of dragons. Employing a lesser dragon while taking control of its eyes, ears, nose and mouth to serve one's own purpose—		Hal came to a realization. This was also the magic of dragons. Employing a lesser dragon while taking control of its eyes, ears, nose and mouth to serve one's own purpose—
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	Hal nodded at the surprised Asya.		Hal nodded at the surprised Asya.

	The blue Raptors were circling all over Tokyo New Town with impunity. But perhaps wary of the dragonslaying bow, they had strictly reined in their behavior the whole ~~tie~~.		The blue Raptors were circling all over Tokyo New Town with impunity. But perhaps wary of the dragonslaying bow, they had strictly reined in their behavior the whole time.

	In that case, there was still a grace period. Hal wanted to use it to do something.		In that case, there was still a grace period. Hal wanted to use it to do something.

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Zzhk at 15:45, 30 October 2015

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	"We will be of little help even if we were to stay here. Why not head over to where information is pooled? Oh dear? What is that place called, Harry? This city's police headquarters."		"We will be of little help even if we were to stay here. Why not head over to where information is pooled? Oh dear? What is that place called, Harry? This city's police headquarters."

	"Are you perhaps referring to the MPD at ~~Kasumigaseki~~?"		"Are you perhaps referring to the MPD at Kanegafuchi?"

	"Yes, that one. True to the name of Harry, your reply truly hit the spot."		"Yes, that one. True to the name of Harry, your reply truly hit the spot."

	Incidentally, the vicinity of ~~Kasumigaseki~~ had been redeveloped into modernized commercial and office zones.		Incidentally, the vicinity of Kanegafuchi had been redeveloped into modernized commercial and office zones.

	~~The town filled with~~ the trappings of ''Shitamachi'', the low-lying and traditional part of Tokyo, from the previous century ~~were~~ no more, transformed into an urban space similar to Shinjuku Fukutoshin in the past.		This district, rich in the trappings of ''Shitamachi'', the low-lying and traditional part of Tokyo, from the previous century was no more, transformed into an urban space similar to Shinjuku Fukutoshin in the past.

	Hal shrugged and asked Luna Francois.		Hal shrugged and asked Luna Francois.

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Zzhk at 10:45, 29 October 2015

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Zzhk: /* Part 2 */

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	"O Jabones, curse your misfortune of appearing before me!"		"O Jabones, curse your misfortune of appearing before me!"

	The instant he yelled loudly, ~~Gala~~ extended his right palm towards the Raptor.		The instant he yelled loudly, Galad extended his right palm towards the Raptor.

	The center of his palm flashed with light. The brightness formed a rune consisting of a series of three Vs—the Rune of the Sword. This dragonslaying rune was fired in the form of a beam.		The center of his palm flashed with light. The brightness formed a rune consisting of a series of three Vs—the Rune of the Sword. This dragonslaying rune was fired in the form of a beam.
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	Paired with that frilly black one-piece dress, she looked like an heiress out on a tour. However, that slender yet mature body of hers, brimming with feminine charm, was conveying her absolutely unshakable confidence as a master mage.		Paired with that frilly black one-piece dress, she looked like an heiress out on a tour. However, that slender yet mature body of hers, brimming with feminine charm, was conveying her absolutely unshakable confidence as a master mage.

	"Orihime-san, please take a good look at how potent the powers of a master-class 'serpent' in peak condition rather than on the verge of death. Although she has serious problems in personality and disposition, Luna is blessed with rare gifts as a witch."		"Orihime-san, please take a good look at how potent the powers of a master-class 'serpent' are in peak condition rather than on the verge of death. Although she has serious problems in personality and disposition, Luna is blessed with rare gifts as a witch."

	"She is Luna-san...?"		"She is Luna-san...?"
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	In addition, a black-haired girl was standing on the giant turtle's wide forehead.		In addition, a black-haired girl was standing on the giant turtle's wide forehead.

	She was dressed in a white one-piece dress with her arms crossed in confidence, standing sternly upright with feet apart. Her appearance was as adorable as a snow fairy with a sense of serene beauty.		She was dressed in a white one-piece dress with her arms crossed in confidence, standing sternly upright with her feet apart. Her appearance was as adorable as a snow fairy with a sense of serene beauty.

	However, Hal pointed at the beautiful maiden and warned his companions.		However, Hal pointed at the beautiful maiden and warned his companions.
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	Emerging from the sea was a monster with a strange voice and appearance.		Emerging from the sea was a monster with a strange voice and appearance.

	It ~~definite~~ had the size and figure of an elite dragon's, but there was nothing more than bones. No skin, no flesh, no dragon scales either. It was merely a dragon skeleton.		It definitely had the size and figure of an elite dragon's, but there was nothing more than bones. No skin, no flesh, no dragon scales either. It was merely a dragon skeleton.

	And the voice coming from his mouth seemed like it was echoing from the depths of the earth.		And the voice coming from his mouth seemed like it was echoing from the depths of the earth.
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	The majority of the body had decayed, leaving only white bones. But even so, this old dragon must have lived for a long time.		The majority of the body had decayed, leaving only white bones. But even so, this old dragon must have lived for a long time.

	Furthermore, Hal discovered that parts of the body ~~was~~ not made of white bones.		Furthermore, Hal discovered that parts of the body were not made of white bones.

	Namely, the wings on the back. The only part made of steel, a pair of steel wings.		Namely, the wings on the back. The only part made of steel, a pair of steel wings.
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	During this time, Princess Yukikaze announced sonorously.		During this time, Princess Yukikaze announced sonorously.

	"Elder, Yukikaze shall proceed annex these islands—the country of Japan. If you happen to share the same objective, please make your choice between dying or escaping."		"Elder, Yukikaze shall proceed to annex these islands—the country of Japan. If you happen to share the same objective, please make your choice between dying or escaping."

	'In that case, I choose a third option—subservience under you.' you.' you.'		'In that case, I choose a third option—subservience under you.' you.' you.'
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	That meant Pavel Galad. Was he still alive!?		That meant Pavel Galad. Was he still alive!?

	'Although he seems to barely survived, this Tyrannos is most likely in no state to move around freely. He would become weak and powerless as soon as he transferred to land where miasma is low in concentration, rendered so destitute that even the crudest of magic will be beyond him—' ' '		'Although he seems to have barely survived, this Tyrannos is most likely in no state to move around freely. He would become weak and powerless as soon as he transferred to land where miasma is low in concentration, rendered so destitute that even the crudest of magic will be beyond him—' ' '

	"Well, I suppose you might be correct."		"Well, I suppose you might be correct."

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	The sky was quite clear today. The golden radiance—no, a terrifying gigantic creature—swept away the few clouds in the blue sky, descending upon Tokyo Bay like a meteor.		The sky was quite clear today. The golden radiance—no, a terrifying gigantic creature—swept away the few clouds in the blue sky, descending upon Tokyo Bay like a meteor.

	More bluntly stated, it was a super enormous ~~tortoise~~ a hundred meters long.		More bluntly stated, it was a super enormous turtle a hundred meters long.

	Furthermore, the giant ~~tortoise~~'s massive body was enveloped in golden light. This surreal creature was descending to Tokyo Bay.		Furthermore, the giant turtle's massive body was enveloped in golden light. This surreal creature was descending to Tokyo Bay.

	Only mere minutes had elapsed since he had noticed the light. It was falling rather fast.		Only mere minutes had elapsed since he had noticed the light. It was falling rather fast.

	However, as it neared the sea surface, the golden ~~tortoise-like gigantic~~ creature decelerated with astounding smoothness. Then quietly, it landed on Tokyo Bay's surface.		However, as it neared the sea surface, the gigantic golden chelonian creature decelerated with astounding smoothness. Then quietly, it landed on Tokyo Bay's surface.

	Despite its super large body, it was equipped with amazingly agile aerial mobility.		Despite its super large body, it was equipped with amazingly agile aerial mobility.
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	Hal's quiet comment made the three witches jump in fright.		Hal's quiet comment made the three witches jump in fright.

	At this moment, the golden brightness had vanished. In other words, the light surrounding the ~~tortoise-like~~ bizarre creature hovering in the air. Right now, the massive body's surface and shell looked greenish black.		At this moment, the golden brightness had vanished. In other words, the light surrounding the bizarre chelonian creature hovering in the air. Right now, the massive body's surface and shell looked greenish black.

	Surprisingly, the giant black ~~tortoise~~ landed on the water surface near the destroyer.		Surprisingly, the giant black turtle landed on the water surface near the destroyer.

	They were only ten meters apart. Observed from close range, the giant ~~tortoise~~'s visage exhibited sacred dignity befitting a humongous monster.		They were only ten meters apart. Observed from close range, the giant turtle's visage exhibited sacred dignity befitting a humongous monster.

	In addition, a black-haired girl was standing on the giant ~~tortoise~~'s wide forehead.		In addition, a black-haired girl was standing on the giant turtle's wide forehead.

	She was dressed in a white one-piece dress with her arms crossed in confidence, standing sternly upright with feet apart. Her appearance was as adorable as a snow fairy with a sense of serene beauty.		She was dressed in a white one-piece dress with her arms crossed in confidence, standing sternly upright with feet apart. Her appearance was as adorable as a snow fairy with a sense of serene beauty.
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	Terrified by the arrival of a sovereign standing at the pinnacle of their race, they were flying aimlessly all over the place in disarray.		Terrified by the arrival of a sovereign standing at the pinnacle of their race, they were flying aimlessly all over the place in disarray.

	"That insanely huge ~~tortoise~~ is her minion... It's just a flunkie..."		"That insanely huge turtle is her minion... It's just a flunkie..."
	[[image:Leviathan 03 067.jpg\|thumb]]		[[image:Leviathan 03 067.jpg\|thumb]]

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	GOAHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYH...		GOAHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYH...

	Carrying Princess Yukikaze on its forehead, the ~~tortoise-like~~ gigantic creature gave a low growl. Although the sound was not fervent enough to call roar, it spread far and wide like the rumbling of the ground.		Carrying Princess Yukikaze on its forehead, the gigantic chelonian creature gave a low growl. Although the sound was not fervent enough to call roar, it spread far and wide like the rumbling of the ground.

	This giant black ~~tortoise~~, a hundred meters long, was precisely "Genbu-Ou."		This giant black turtle, a hundred meters long, was precisely "Genbu-Ou."

	"Thus concludes Yukikaze's declaration. Should there be any objections, express them directly with a show of force instead of wasting words. Feeble rebellions have no value to speak of, this is a dragon king's way of conducting business. Even I, Yukikaze, am no exception!"		"Thus concludes Yukikaze's declaration. Should there be any objections, express them directly with a show of force instead of wasting words. Feeble rebellions have no value to speak of, this is a dragon king's way of conducting business. Even I, Yukikaze, am no exception!"
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	As a result, a streamlined white board flew over from the far end of the sky with speed too fast to capture with the eye. This object greatly resembled the surfboards of the human realm.		As a result, a streamlined white board flew over from the far end of the sky with speed too fast to capture with the eye. This object greatly resembled the surfboards of the human realm.

	The princess took a mighty leap and jumped off the forehead of the Genbu-Ou the giant ~~tortoise~~.		The princess took a mighty leap and jumped off the forehead of the Genbu-Ou the giant turtle.

	Then before she fell straight into the sea, she landed safely on the incoming surfboard-like object.		Then before she fell straight into the sea, she landed safely on the incoming surfboard-like object.
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	But at this moment, the escort ship began to shake violently.		But at this moment, the escort ship began to shake violently.

	This was because the nearby giant ~~tortoise~~ minion, Genbu-Ou, had crashed over lightly.		This was because the nearby giant turtle minion, Genbu-Ou, had crashed over lightly.

	"Kyah!?"		"Kyah!?"
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	However, there was no way for a ship to wrestle with this kind of giant monster. Although the gatling cannons on the ship's aft were already firing continuously, Genbu-Ou remained unshaken regardless how much gunfire it was under.		However, there was no way for a ship to wrestle with this kind of giant monster. Although the gatling cannons on the ship's aft were already firing continuously, Genbu-Ou remained unshaken regardless how much gunfire it was under.

	Furthermore, the giant ~~tortoise~~ was emitting terrifying growls from its mouth.		Furthermore, the giant turtle was emitting terrifying growls from its mouth.

	GOAHAAAAAAAAAAAAAATH！		GOAHAAAAAAAAAAAAAATH！
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	Then Genbu-Ou vanished together.		Then Genbu-Ou vanished together.

	However, the whole time before vanishing, the gigantic and imposing ~~tortoise~~'s eyes were watching the movements of Hal's magic gun intently as though keeping him under scrutiny. This too was the undeniable truth—		However, the whole time before vanishing, the gigantic and imposing turtle's eyes were watching the movements of Hal's magic gun intently as though keeping him under scrutiny. This too was the undeniable truth—

	===Part 5===		===Part 5===