Leviathan:Volume 3 Chapter 4 - Revision history

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	Galad left the girls and walked over to the window.		Galad left the girls and walked over to the window.

	He looked up at the night sky where only stars could be seen. However, he had definitely spotted the Rune of the ~~Bow~~ shining in the sky during the daytime. The white dragon king, Princess Yukikaze, had arrived in this city!		He looked up at the night sky where only stars could be seen. However, he had definitely spotted the Rune of the Arrow shining in the sky during the daytime. The white dragon king, Princess Yukikaze, had arrived in this city!

	"Urgh..."		"Urgh..."

Zzhk at 06:55, 25 November 2015

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	"The prior assumption is that I will be participating too, right?"		"The prior assumption is that I will be participating too, right?"

	"Are you sure? Although it seems like you'll be handsomely rewarded, life will most likely be tough. And the effort demanded might rival sweatshop labor. It even ~~makes me want~~ to revise the plan I've been brewing for many years, 'saving up a huge sum of money so as to retire in leisure at the age of thirty,' ~~and correct it~~ to the age of forty."		"Are you sure? Although it seems like you'll be handsomely rewarded, life will most likely be tough. And the effort demanded might rival sweatshop labor. There's so much work to do that it even feels like I've got no choice but to revise the plan I've been brewing for many years, 'saving up a huge sum of money so as to retire in leisure at the age of thirty,' postponing my retirement to the age of forty instead."

	"Haruga-kun, your plan is so dull and ~~lacking in vitality~~ even though you're only in your teens right now..."		"Haruga-kun, your plan is so dull and lifeless even though you're only in your teens right now..."

	After expressing her poignant opinion, Orihime said cheerfully, "Although I'm not one to go looking for hardship, I believe it is a good thing for work to be busier. Besides, it's not like I can keep foisting troublesome tasks on you and the others, Haruga-kun."		After expressing her poignant opinion, Orihime said cheerfully, "Although I'm not one to go looking for hardship, I believe it is a good thing for work to be busier. Besides, it's not like I can keep foisting troublesome tasks on you and the others, Haruga-kun."

Cthaeh at 01:33, 25 November 2015

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Zzhk at 13:53, 22 November 2015

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	Four days had already elapsed since the dragons ''occupied'' Tokyo New Town.		Four days had already elapsed since the dragons ''occupied'' Tokyo New Town.

	During this period, Mutou Natsumi aka Mutou-san stayed at a shelter the whole time. That particular facility was originally a large community center located at ~~southern Gasai~~ in the Edogawa ward. As a venue for theater performances, orchestra concerts and the like, it was quite spacious.		During this period, Mutou Natsumi aka Mutou-san stayed at a shelter the whole time. That particular facility was originally a large community center located at Minamikasai in the Edogawa ward. As a venue for theater performances, orchestra concerts and the like, it was quite spacious.

	"I really don't know when I'll be able to leave this place..."		"I really don't know when I'll be able to leave this place..."
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	The trio were looking at a blue Raptor soaring in the night sky.		The trio were looking at a blue Raptor soaring in the night sky.

	This area was ~~southern Gasai~~ in the Edogawa ward. The blue Raptor seemed to be flying at low speed in a large circle over this neighborhood, meanwhile gazing at the ground with a dragon's sharp gaze.		This area was Minamikasai in the Edogawa ward. The blue Raptor seemed to be flying at low speed in a large circle over this neighborhood, meanwhile gazing at the ground with a dragon's sharp gaze.

	Then Galad noticed.		Then Galad noticed.
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	An elite somewhere had probably cast detection magic. Even when the target was using Transformation magic to hide his appearance, those eyes would still be able to see the dragon flames hidden inside his body.		An elite somewhere had probably cast detection magic. Even when the target was using Transformation magic to hide his appearance, those eyes would still be able to see the dragon flames hidden inside his body.

	Circling in the sky over ~~southern Gasai~~, the blue Raptor suddenly began to cry out.		Circling in the sky over Minamikasai, the blue Raptor suddenly began to cry out.

	Kuahhhhhhhhhhhhhh! Kuahhhhhhhhhhhhh!		Kuahhhhhhhhhhhhhh! Kuahhhhhhhhhhhhh!

Zzhk at 13:25, 22 November 2015

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	===Part 2===		===Part 2===

	Hal and Asya arrived at ~~the~~ the school's infirmary, taking one other person with them.		Hal and Asya arrived at the school's infirmary, taking one other person with them.

	"Anyway, let her lie down here for now."		"Anyway, let her lie down here for now."
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	"...I think I understand it mostly."		"...I think I understand it mostly."

	After roughly ten minutes, Asya ~~finaly~~ opened her eyes and placed the magic gun on the table.		After roughly ten minutes, Asya finally opened her eyes and placed the magic gun on the table.

	Then sighing, she reported, "The principles behind this ritual magic. Its intent. The technique's key points. Also, what happened during the past two rituals, recorded in the Rune of the Bow in your possession..."		Then sighing, she reported, "The principles behind this ritual magic. Its intent. The technique's key points. Also, what happened during the past two rituals, recorded in the Rune of the Bow in your possession..."
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	Hal recalled the ritual last time.		Hal recalled the ritual last time.

	Indeed, so-called touching the heart&~~mdahs~~;Hal could not help but look up and meet Asya's gaze. With moistened eyes, his childhood friend nodded.		Indeed, so-called touching the heart—Hal could not help but look up and meet Asya's gaze. With moistened eyes, his childhood friend nodded.

	Then taking Hal's hand again, she moved it over to her breast.		Then taking Hal's hand again, she moved it over to her breast.
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	Riding the surfboard "wand," the princess descended near the ground again. Bored, the white dragon king stared at the unconscious Hal.		Riding the surfboard "wand," the princess descended near the ground again. Bored, the white dragon king stared at the unconscious Hal.

	"In that case, it can't be helped. I'll ~~hury~~ up and end everything with a beheading..."		"In that case, it can't be helped. I'll hurry up and end everything with a beheading..."

	"I-I won't let you do that!"		"I-I won't let you do that!"
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	Meanwhile—		Meanwhile—

	~~Depsite~~ heavy injuries, Asya still looked at Princess Yukikaze with eyes of unwavering fighting spirit.		Despite heavy injuries, Asya still looked at Princess Yukikaze with eyes of unwavering fighting spirit.

	She had not given up hope on seeking victory... Or rather. Hal understood. Asya had already banished all notion of winning and losing, instead putting her determination into fighting their way out of this severe predicament.		She had not given up hope on seeking victory... Or rather. Hal understood. Asya had already banished all notion of winning and losing, instead putting her determination into fighting their way out of this severe predicament.
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	"Then it's even more impossible for someone like me. I knew it, taking the secret techniques route is my only choice."		"Then it's even more impossible for someone like me. I knew it, taking the secret techniques route is my only choice."

	Hal looked up at ~~hte~~ sky. Then he recalled the matter of the red agate.		Hal looked up at the sky. Then he recalled the matter of the red agate.

	At that moment, the divine treasure that was formerly Hinokagutsuchi's heartmetal appeared in the right hand of Hal's conscious entity. As expected of the mental world, things could be conjured by imagination alone. How convenient.		At that moment, the divine treasure that was formerly Hinokagutsuchi's heartmetal appeared in the right hand of Hal's conscious entity. As expected of the mental world, things could be conjured by imagination alone. How convenient.
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	"Because you saw 'my past self'..."		"Because you saw 'my past self'..."

	"It suddenly occurred to me when I was making detailed inquiries to my gun ~~abot~~ whether the birth ritual could be held without you. What would happen if I tried to use this to conduct the ritual?"		"It suddenly occurred to me when I was making detailed inquiries to my gun about whether the birth ritual could be held without you. What would happen if I tried to use this to conduct the ritual?"

	It had been half a month since he had obtained this "magic wand" of a magic gun.		It had been half a month since he had obtained this "magic wand" of a magic gun.
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	There was an unbridgeable gulf between a dragon king and "imitation dragons."		There was an unbridgeable gulf between a dragon king and "imitation dragons."

	Nevertheless, Haruga Haruomi's heart had now absorbed a ~~fromer~~ dragon king's heartmetal—Hinokagutsuchi's. Hal focused his consciousness on this new internal organ of his.		Nevertheless, Haruga Haruomi's heart had now absorbed a former dragon king's heartmetal—Hinokagutsuchi's. Hal focused his consciousness on this new internal organ of his.

	Immediately, a giant crimson appeared in front of him.		Immediately, a giant crimson appeared in front of him.
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	"Haruga-kun, your plan is so dull and lacking in vitality even though you're only in your teens right now..."		"Haruga-kun, your plan is so dull and lacking in vitality even though you're only in your teens right now..."

	After expressing her poignant opinion, Orihime said cheerfully, " Although I'm not one to go looking for hardship, I believe it is a good thing for work to be busier. Besides, it's not like I can keep foisting troublesome tasks on you and the others, Haruga-kun."		After expressing her poignant opinion, Orihime said cheerfully, "Although I'm not one to go looking for hardship, I believe it is a good thing for work to be busier. Besides, it's not like I can keep foisting troublesome tasks on you and the others, Haruga-kun."

	Smiling in a carefree manner, Orihime looked dazzling as always to Hal.		Smiling in a carefree manner, Orihime looked dazzling as always to Hal.

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	"Deploy protection!"		"Deploy protection!"

	The ~~pearl-colored~~ light enveloped Hal and the four witches next to him.		The pearly light enveloped Hal and the four witches next to him.

	At that moment, pure-white lightning—the dragonslaying arrow—struck them.		At that moment, pure-white lightning—the dragonslaying arrow—struck them.
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	Hal had withstood Galad's technique of assured annihilation before, the "thunder god's sword." This attack was many times stronger than that.		Hal had withstood Galad's technique of assured annihilation before, the "thunder god's sword." This attack was many times stronger than that.

	However, the imperishable protection was able to defend Hal's group well. Although everyone inside the ~~pearl-colored~~ light lost balance and fell on the ground due to the severe impact, they did not suffer anything worse than bruises or concussions.		However, the imperishable protection was able to defend Hal's group well. Although everyone inside the pearly light lost balance and fell on the ground due to the severe impact, they did not suffer anything worse than bruises or concussions.

	But just like that time against Galad, Haruga Haruomi's heart stopped again.		But just like that time against Galad, Haruga Haruomi's heart stopped again.
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	"Hmm—!"		"Hmm—!"

	~~Pearl-colored~~ radiance manifested around the princess in the white dress.		Pearly radiance manifested around the princess in the white dress.

	Imperishable protection. Almost at the same time as the appearance of the light, the seven spheres fired by Luna—magic bullets for compressing targets through gravity control, thereby crushing them—arrived en masse.		Imperishable protection. Almost at the same time as the appearance of the light, the seven spheres fired by Luna—magic bullets for compressing targets through gravity control, thereby crushing them—arrived en masse.

	However, even as many as seven shots of gravity bullets still could not crush imperishable protection, simply squeezing the ~~pearl-colored~~ defensive field.		However, even as many as seven shots of gravity bullets still could not crush imperishable protection, simply squeezing the pearly defensive field.

	However, Princess Yukikaze frowned from behind her power of protection. She probably found it incredible for a witch to suddenly use pseudo-divinity.		However, Princess Yukikaze frowned from behind her power of protection. She probably found it incredible for a witch to suddenly use pseudo-divinity.
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	Her mortal enemy's revival made Princess Yukikaze's eyes shine. A dragon's style as one would expect.		Her mortal enemy's revival made Princess Yukikaze's eyes shine. A dragon's style as one would expect.

	~~Pearl-colored~~ light—imperishable protection—enveloped the fiercely belligerent maiden dragon king, blocking the Crimson Queen's flames completely.		Pearly light—imperishable protection—enveloped the fiercely belligerent maiden dragon king, blocking the Crimson Queen's flames completely.

	"Truly powerless, a body carrying the regrets of past death!"		"Truly powerless, a body carrying the regrets of past death!"