MM!:Volume 1 Chapter 1 - Revision history

58.111.228.7: /* Sharp, Descending First Love! */

2012-10-14T05:22:38Z

Sharp, Descending First Love!

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	“This is bad. I don’t have the time to be playing around with you. Later, Norayoshi.”		“This is bad. I don’t have the time to be playing around with you. Later, Norayoshi.”

	I waved my hand at the cat while heading towards the school building. It then folded its back leg and sat down and with a cry, saw me off. I reached the classroom 5 minutes after the first period had begun. While preparing myself to get ~~scold~~, I softly opened the classroom door. That's when I noticed that the classroom was a bit noisy.		I waved my hand at the cat while heading towards the school building. It then folded its back leg and sat down and with a cry, saw me off. I reached the classroom 5 minutes after the first period had begun. While preparing myself to get scolded, I softly opened the classroom door. That's when I noticed that the classroom was a bit noisy.

	“Huh?”		“Huh?”
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	"Someone like you should just die!"		"Someone like you should just die!"

	I still don't know why she hit me and why she said that thing to me. But her actions called forth and ~~awoken~~ something sleeping inside my body - a certain element or maybe I should say a certain attribute.		I still don't know why she hit me and why she said that thing to me. But her actions called forth and awoke something sleeping inside my body - a certain element or maybe I should say a certain attribute.

	Something unknown ~~gush~~ forth from the deepest parts of my body when she hit me, looked down on me with cold eyes and when she threw those harsh words at me.		Something unknown gushed forth from the deepest parts of my body when she hit me, looked down on me with cold eyes and when she threw those harsh words at me.

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	That something became a golden current which brought forth heaven-like pleasure and ran about my entire body. It ruled every cell which composed me with its overwhelming power which can compared to a catastrophe. I lost myself and then ~~clinged at~~ Yuuno's feet and said this.		That something became a golden current which brought forth heaven-like pleasure and ran about my entire body. It ruled every cell which composed me with its overwhelming power which can compared to a catastrophe. I lost myself and then clung to Yuuno's feet and said this.

	"More... Pleeeeeaseee hit me more!"		"More... Pleeeeeaseee hit me more!"
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	"..."		"..."

	I ~~awoken~~ at that time. ~~Awakened at~~ something called Mashochism. Moreover, half of the class was still left in the classroom. So it didn't take long for everyone in class to know that I was a hard M, M as in Masochist. And from that day, I was isolated. The guys looked at me from afar while grinning at me while the girls had their face warped from fear and disgust and didn't come near me. Those were hellish days.		I awoke at that time. Awoke to something called Mashochism. Moreover, half of the class was still left in the classroom. So it didn't take long for everyone in class to know that I was a hard M, M as in Masochist. And from that day, I was isolated. The guys looked at me from afar while grinning at me while the girls had their face warped from fear and disgust and didn't come near me. Those were hellish days.

58.111.228.7: /* Sharp, Descending First Love! */

2012-10-14T05:10:01Z

Sharp, Descending First Love!

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	After a 15 ~~minutes~~ ride on a train from a station near my house, I got off at Sakuramori station. A succeeding 10 minutes’ walk from there and I’d find the school I attended, Sakuramori Private High School.		After a 15 minute ride on a train from a station near my house, I got off at Sakuramori station. A succeeding 10 minutes’ walk from there and I’d find the school I attended, Sakuramori Private High School.

	“Ah.. I’m super late.”		“Ah.. I’m super late.”

ShirasagiMayuri at 07:55, 7 December 2010

2010-12-07T07:55:49Z

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	"For us who came from the same middle school to be in the same class..."		"For us who came from the same middle school to be in the same class..."

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	That something became a golden current which brought forth heaven-like pleasure and ran about my entire body. It ruled every cell which composed me with its overwhelming power which can compared to a catastrophe. I lost myself and then clinged at Yuuno's feet and said this.		That something became a golden current which brought forth heaven-like pleasure and ran about my entire body. It ruled every cell which composed me with its overwhelming power which can compared to a catastrophe. I lost myself and then clinged at Yuuno's feet and said this.

ShirasagiMayuri: /* Sharp, Descending First Love! */

2010-12-07T07:54:11Z

Sharp, Descending First Love!

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	“But it really is such a coincidence...” said Tatsukichi.		“But it really is such a coincidence...” said Tatsukichi.

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			"For us who came from the same middle school to be in the same class..."

			"I guess."

			Among those who attended Seiwa Middle School, there were only a few of us who decided to attend this school. Most of our former schoolmates attended a much closer public school. It was just the three of us - me, Tatsukichi and Yuuno Arashiko. And for us three to actually be in the same class. Not to mention there are nine sections in our grade level. I'm genuinely happy that me and Tatsukichi are on the same class but to be in the same class as Yuuno, to be straight, I really hated it. I absolutely hated it.

			"You're looking blue again. I think you shouldn't think of what happened back then that much." said Tatsukichi while smiling.

			'Shut up' I said as my mouth turned into an [へ] shape.

			It was a certain afternoon, we were third year middle school students--

			When Yuuno abruptly came into our classroom and suddenly slapped me. And with me confused and unable to comprehend what was happening said this;

			"Someone like you should just die!"

			I still don't know why she hit me and why she said that thing to me. But her actions called forth and awoken something sleeping inside my body - a certain element or maybe I should say a certain attribute.

			Something unknown gush forth from the deepest parts of my body when she hit me, looked down on me with cold eyes and when she threw those harsh words at me.

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			That something became a golden current which brought forth heaven-like pleasure and ran about my entire body. It ruled every cell which composed me with its overwhelming power which can compared to a catastrophe. I lost myself and then clinged at Yuuno's feet and said this.

			"More... Pleeeeeaseee hit me more!"

			"..."

			I awoken at that time. Awakened at something called Mashochism. Moreover, half of the class was still left in the classroom. So it didn't take long for everyone in class to know that I was a hard M, M as in Masochist. And from that day, I was isolated. The guys looked at me from afar while grinning at me while the girls had their face warped from fear and disgust and didn't come near me. Those were hellish days.

Matt122004 at 07:05, 22 November 2010

2010-11-22T07:05:32Z

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Darklor at 00:17, 20 November 2010

2010-11-20T00:17:18Z

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	It happened when I was a third year middle school student, at school after class. I, Sado Tarou, was chatting with my best friend, Hayama Tatsukichi. About half of my classmates were still in the classroom when the room's door opened noisily. A female student then entered the room. She headed straight towards us and then stopped in front of me. She was quite pretty. She had short hair which looked pretty soft and skin which was as white and as smooth as a baby. With her wide and beautiful eyes which really left an impression, she was certainly someone who you wouldn’t be embarrassed to call beautiful. She also had cute, thin and pink colored lips which for some reason made me feel uneasy. With a beautiful girl like that looking straight at me, here I was having no recollection of who this she was. Obviously, she was definitely not from my class.		It happened when I was a third year middle school student, at school after class. I, Sado Tarou, was chatting with my best friend, Hayama Tatsukichi. About half of my classmates were still in the classroom when the room's door opened noisily. A female student then entered the room. She headed straight towards us and then stopped in front of me. She was quite pretty. She had short hair which looked pretty soft and skin which was as white and as smooth as a baby. With her wide and beautiful eyes which really left an impression, she was certainly someone who you wouldn’t be embarrassed to call beautiful. She also had cute, thin and pink colored lips which for some reason made me feel uneasy. With a beautiful girl like that looking straight at me, here I was having no recollection of who this she was. Obviously, she was definitely not from my class.

Darklor: MM!:Volume 1 Teaser 1 moved to MM!:Volume 1 Chapter 1: starts with the beginning

2010-11-19T19:57:14Z

MM!:Volume 1 Teaser 1 moved to MM!:Volume 1 Chapter 1: starts with the beginning

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ShirasagiMayuri at 08:29, 19 November 2010

2010-11-19T08:29:54Z

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Darklor: for orientation but invisible

2010-11-16T06:41:58Z

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	It happened when I was a third year middle school student, at school after class.		It happened when I was a third year middle school student, at school after class.

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	I had no recollection of who this beautiful girl standing in front of me is. Of course, she was definitely not a girl from my class.		I had no recollection of who this beautiful girl standing in front of me is. Of course, she was definitely not a girl from my class.

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	The girl tightened her lips and as if to knit her eyebrows, glared at me. She looked angry yet scared at the same time, a very complicated expression. And for some reasons, her body was trembling a bit.		The girl tightened her lips and as if to knit her eyebrows, glared at me. She looked angry yet scared at the same time, a very complicated expression. And for some reasons, her body was trembling a bit.
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	I couldn’t say anything back.		I couldn’t say anything back.

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	The girl’s act of violence was just too sudden, too unreasonable.		The girl’s act of violence was just too sudden, too unreasonable.

EusthEnoptEron: Inserting line breaks (according to the 原作) 感謝しなさいよ

2010-11-16T05:18:24Z

Inserting line breaks (according to the 原作) 感謝しなさいよ

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+It happened when I was a third year middle school student, at school after class.
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+I, Sado Tarou, was chatting with my best friend, Hayama Tatsuki. About half of my classmates were still in the classroom when the classroom's door opened noisily.
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+A female student then entered the room.
-The girl’s act of violence was just too sudden, too unreasonable. She gave off a very cold glance as if looking down on something terribly disgusting. Her words were truly harsh. A normal person would have been furious right about now, especially after everything that has happened, it would be ridiculous otherwise. My whole body was shaking. I was shaking tremendously. A sudden gush of emotion was running from my head down to my toe which completely ruled my mind and my body. Everyone in class expected me,Sado Tarou, to leap up at the angry girl. Until I, suddenly clung to the foot of the girl who gave me a slap and screamed “More… pleeeaaaseee hit me more!”.