Maria-sama ga Miteru:Volume1 Chapter1 4 - Revision history

Leviticus: Form, format

2023-07-03T17:44:59Z

Form, format

Tiber Septim: Minor spelling fixes.

2018-11-11T01:00:44Z

Minor spelling fixes.

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	"Heeey. Victim, are you alive?"		"Heeey. Victim, are you alive?"

	The students whom were in the room slowly crept out, having noticed the crash. It was a line-up you could only see in a Yamayuri general meeting. Rosa Chinensis, Rosa Foetida, Rosa Gigantea. Next to Rosa Foetida were her bouton and her respective ~~petit~~ sœur.		The students whom were in the room slowly crept out, having noticed the crash. It was a line-up you could only see in a Yamayuri general meeting. Rosa Chinensis, Rosa Foetida, Rosa Gigantea. Next to Rosa Foetida were her bouton and her respective petite sœur.

	"Eh, I crushed someone!? Are you alright!?"		"Eh, I crushed someone!? Are you alright!?"
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	Yumi could understand why the Roses would be attentive of Sachiko-sama. But she could not comprehend why they would be staring so intently at her.		Yumi could understand why the Roses would be attentive of Sachiko-sama. But she could not comprehend why they would be staring so intently at her.

	"Rosa Gigantea. I would appreciate if you did not speak to Yumi so ~~off-handedly~~."		"Rosa Gigantea. I would appreciate if you did not speak to Yumi so offhandedly."

	Sachiko-sama stepped in front of Yumi, as if shielding her.		Sachiko-sama stepped in front of Yumi, as if shielding her.

Yobbin: /* Monday of Uneasiness. Part 4. */

2010-10-12T01:24:35Z

Monday of Uneasiness. Part 4.

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	It was a loud enough voice to have traveled through the door. When Yumi thought about how such a loud voice didn't seem befitting of the Rose Mansion, that same voice yelled once more.		It was a loud enough voice to have traveled through the door. When Yumi thought about how such a loud voice didn't seem befitting of the Rose Mansion, that same voice yelled once more.

	"This is tyranny! The onee-~~sama~~ are being mean!"		"This is tyranny! The onee-samas are being mean!"

	The word "mean" and the plate hanging from the doorknob reading "Please be quiet, as we are in the middle of a meeting" felt strangely unbalanced.		The word "mean" and the plate hanging from the doorknob reading "Please be quiet, as we are in the middle of a meeting" felt strangely unbalanced.

Vaelis at 11:55, 3 August 2008

2008-08-03T11:55:16Z

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	==Monday of Uneasiness. Part 4.==		===<noinclude>Monday of Uneasiness. </noinclude>Part 4.===

	The Lillian Girls' Academy High School Student Council was named the Yamayurikai (Mountain Lily Council) in homage to Maria-sama's soul.		The Lillian Girls' Academy High School Student Council was named the Yamayurikai (Mountain Lily Council) in homage to Maria-sama's soul.

Molenir: /* Monday of Uneasiness. Part 4. */

2008-07-31T10:53:32Z

Monday of Uneasiness. Part 4.

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	Maybe this is how it felt to be a frog hunted by a snake. Even though her name had "snake" in it, she wanted to be pardoned from this. If it weren't a snake, it was a briar forest. They say pretty roses have thorns, but she definitely realized the Roses weren't merely pretty onee-sama.		Maybe this is how it felt to be a frog hunted by a snake. Even though her name had "snake" in it, she wanted to be pardoned from this. If it weren't a snake, it was a briar forest. They say pretty roses have thorns, but she definitely realized the Roses weren't merely pretty onee-sama.

	Even though she had only hit my buttocks, her head felt light from the invisible pressure. What was Sachiko-sama planning to do after capturing a frail first-year?		Even though she had only hit her buttocks, her head felt light from the invisible pressure. What was Sachiko-sama planning to do after capturing a frail first-year?

	"Onee-sama. Would you please cease staring in that way? Look, Yumi is absolutely terrified."		"Onee-sama. Would you please cease staring in that way? Look, Yumi is absolutely terrified."

Iatheia at 17:51, 20 July 2008

2008-07-20T17:51:00Z

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	==4.==		==Monday of Uneasiness. Part 4.==

	The Lillian Girls' Academy High School Student Council was named the Yamayurikai (Mountain Lily Council) in homage to Maria-sama's soul.		The Lillian Girls' Academy High School Student Council was named the Yamayurikai (Mountain Lily Council) in homage to Maria-sama's soul.

220.255.7.238: 'crossed' to 'cross', capitalized an i

2008-06-29T15:41:50Z

'crossed' to 'cross', capitalized an i

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	"Then that voice was Sachiko-sama's…"		"Then that voice was Sachiko-sama's…"

	Yumi was, honestly, stunned. That Sachiko-sama would raise her voice in such a way, would use a word like mean and sound so ~~crossed~~ while at it. It seemed like Tsutako-san was just as stunned.		Yumi was, honestly, stunned. That Sachiko-sama would raise her voice in such a way, would use a word like mean and sound so cross while at it. It seemed like Tsutako-san was just as stunned.

	On the other hand Shimako-san just smiled, saying "it's always like this," and opened the door without knocking.		On the other hand Shimako-san just smiled, saying "It's always like this," and opened the door without knocking.

	And that exact moment.		And that exact moment.

220.255.7.232: headquarter to headquarters

2008-06-29T15:39:49Z

headquarter to headquarters

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	Shimako-san stopped and turned around at the highest step, briefly looking surprised before saying "Oh dear."		Shimako-san stopped and turned around at the highest step, briefly looking surprised before saying "Oh dear."

	"Why do you consider yourself an outsider? This building is being used as the Yamayurikai ~~headquarter~~, so the staff members maintain it, but each and every student is a member of the Yamayurikai. We more than happily welcome people who wish to speak to us. Of course, if a hundred students all pushed in at once the floor might collapse?"		"Why do you consider yourself an outsider? This building is being used as the Yamayurikai headquarters, so the staff members maintain it, but each and every student is a member of the Yamayurikai. We more than happily welcome people who wish to speak to us. Of course, if a hundred students all pushed in at once the floor might collapse?"

	Lowering her shoulders a bit, Shimako-san laughed.		Lowering her shoulders a bit, Shimako-san laughed.

220.255.7.233: changed 'Shikamo' to 'Shimako'

2008-06-29T15:37:28Z

changed 'Shikamo' to 'Shimako'

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	"This way."		"This way."

	~~Shikamo~~-san deftly walked up the stairs, holding down the pleats of her dress so they wouldn't rub against the stairs. Yumi and Tsutako-san looked at each other, nodded to each other, and followed suit.		Shimako-san deftly walked up the stairs, holding down the pleats of her dress so they wouldn't rub against the stairs. Yumi and Tsutako-san looked at each other, nodded to each other, and followed suit.

	Roughly half of a year since becoming a high school student. For Yumi, the Rose Mansion was as forbidden a space as a Sister's residential ward.		Roughly half of a year since becoming a high school student. For Yumi, the Rose Mansion was as forbidden a space as a Sister's residential ward.

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2008-06-29T15:36:02Z

changed 'lied' to 'lay'

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	Immediately inside was a blow-through floor. When you turned left, you were greeted by a steep staircase. Straight ahead as you reached the second floor was a stained-glass window the size of a door, and the evening sunlight stretched down like it had walked down the steps and to the lower floor.		Immediately inside was a blow-through floor. When you turned left, you were greeted by a steep staircase. Straight ahead as you reached the second floor was a stained-glass window the size of a door, and the evening sunlight stretched down like it had walked down the steps and to the lower floor.

	There was no sign of life on the floor. To the right and above that were rooms, but as Shimako-san said, there didn't seem to be anyone on the first floor. Knowing this, it was apparent that even had Yumi knocked on the door, it was likely that no one would have noticed anyways, causing her to feel exhausted even before beginning the monumental task that ~~lied~~ ahead.		There was no sign of life on the floor. To the right and above that were rooms, but as Shimako-san said, there didn't seem to be anyone on the first floor. Knowing this, it was apparent that even had Yumi knocked on the door, it was likely that no one would have noticed anyways, causing her to feel exhausted even before beginning the monumental task that lay ahead.

	"This way."		"This way."