Maria-sama ga Miteru:Volume1 Chapter1 5 - Revision history

Leviticus: Setting up TL notes

2018-11-25T05:55:50Z

Setting up TL notes

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	"Please."		"Please."
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	Then Rei must be the prince!? A splendid recital contest of two boutons.		Then Rei must be the prince!? A splendid recital contest of two boutons.

	It's beautiful just imagining. Too beautiful. It was getting into ~~[http://www.baka~~-~~tsuki~~.~~org/project~~/~~index.php?title=Maria-sama_ga_Miteru:Notes#Takarazuka Takarazuka]~~ territory.		It's beautiful just imagining. Too beautiful. It was getting into Takarazuka<ref>The Takarazuka Revue is a famous all-female theatrics group in Japan, in which women play both the male and female roles.</ref> territory.

	I have to secure a ticket, no matter what. I wonder if they hand out numbered tickets prior to the event, or something. It was something to look into before heading home.		I have to secure a ticket, no matter what. I wonder if they hand out numbered tickets prior to the event, or something. It was something to look into before heading home.
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	"You said I have no right to speak, as I cannot even find a petite sœur."		"You said I have no right to speak, as I cannot even find a petite sœur."

	"I did say that, but that did not mean 'Regardless of who it is, get a petite sœur.' To grab the first first-year you see upon stepping outside, how hasty, how simplistic. You ~~are not warashibechouja[http://www~~.~~baka-tsuki~~.~~org/project/index.php?title=Maria-sama_ga_Miteru:Notes#warashibechouja]~~ after ~~all~~."		"I did say that, but that did not mean 'Regardless of who it is, get a petite sœur.' To grab the first first-year you see upon stepping outside—how hasty, how simplistic. You cannot play the straw millionaire."<ref>Warashibechouja. Literally translated 'the straw millionaire,' is a fairy tale about a poor man who was down to some straw, and after he exchanged his straw, he continued to make exchanges until, in the end, he became extremely rich.</ref>

	(~~… Warashibechouja~~.)		(. . . The straw millionaire.)

	A bead of sweat appeared on Yumi's forehead.		A bead of sweat appeared on Yumi's forehead.
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	Well, thanks to their explanations, I can see what's going on, but this is becoming ridiculous.		Well, thanks to their explanations, I can see what's going on, but this is becoming ridiculous.

	"~~Warashibechouja~~, that is splendid. If I remember correctly, it had a happy ending, did it not?"		"The straw millionaire, that is splendid. If I remember correctly, it had a happy ending, did it not?"

	Sachiko-sama, now you're making no sense.		Sachiko-sama, now you're making no sense.
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	"Did you hand her your rosary?"		"Did you hand her your rosary?"

	"Not yet. I would not mind performing the ceremony in front of everyone, if you so desire?"		"Not yet. I would not mind performing the ceremony in front of everyone, if you so desire."

	"That sounds good."		"That sounds good."
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	If that hung around my neck, I would become the petite sœur of Sachiko-sama, whom I adored.		If that hung around my neck, I would become the petite sœur of Sachiko-sama, whom I adored.

	~~Botamochi[http://www~~.~~baka-tsuki~~.~~org~~/~~project/index~~.~~php?title=~~Maria-sama_ga_Miteru:~~Notes#botamochi~~] ~~from the shelf. A top from the gourd~~.		Impossible. This can't be happening. Why does she want ''me''? She could find someone much more useful than myself. Someone more reliable. <ref>PM/ED note: The original translation didn't lend itself to a coherent situational explanation, and has been recast. Refer to the [[Talk:Maria-sama_ga_Miteru:Volume1_Chapter1_5\|talk page]] for details.</ref>

	~~No, more like a horse. A spinning top from a gourd is no surprise. But if you plucked a horse out it would be like 'are you serious?'~~		Ahh, this isn't the time to be thinking about that. There is only one thing to think about.

	Ahh, this isn't the time to be thinking about that. There is only one thing to think about.

	Is this okay?		Is this okay?
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	Is it okay to just become a sœur like this?		Is it okay to just become a sœur like this?

	"~~Um, umm…~~"		"Uh-umm . . ."

	"Wait."		"Wait."
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	Yumi and Shimako-san simultaneously shouted.		Yumi and Shimako-san simultaneously shouted.

	"Sachiko-sama and the other onee-samas, everyone forgot the most important thing."		"Sachiko-sama, and the other onee-samas; everyone forgot the most important thing."

	"Important thing?"		"Important thing?"
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	"I will not presume. However, I feel it is proper to hear her feelings."		"I will not presume. However, I feel it is proper to hear her feelings."

	Shimako-san said this firmly. While you might not expect it from how she looks, when it comes to it, she stands up for her opinions. As expected from Rosa Gigantea en bouton. Even so, as a fellow first-year, it was an envious trait.		Shimako-san said this firmly. While you might not expect it from how she looks, when it comes to it, she stands up for her opinions. As expected from Rosa Gigantea en bouton. Even so, as a fellow first year, it was an envious trait.

	Anyways, the ceremony was halted, so I was thankful of Shimako-san.		Anyways, the ceremony was halted, so I was thankful of Shimako-san.

	"Indeed. Even if it is an offer from Rosa Chinensis en bouton, there are those like Shimako who ~~say~~ 'I'm sorry.'"		"Indeed. Even if it is an offer from Rosa Chinensis en bouton, there are those like Shimako who could respond with 'I'm sorry.'"

	Rosa Chinensis lightly threw a ball to ~~[http://www.baka-tsuki.org/project/index.php?title=Maria-sama_ga_Miteru:Notes#~~check ~~check]~~ Shimako-san. It seems that rumour was true.		Rosa Chinensis lightly threw a ball to check Shimako-san. It seems that rumour was true.

	"However, Yumi-san is Sachiko-sama's devotee. Of course she wouldn't refuse?"		"However, Yumi-san is Sachiko-sama's devotee. Of course she wouldn't refuse?"
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Ambjoorn: /* Monday of Uneasiness. Part 5. */ Fear of men => androphobia

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Monday of Uneasiness. Part 5.: Fear of men => androphobia

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	(But, hating men…)		(But, hating men…)

	She'd never thought about it, but Sachiko-sama and the description 'hating men' seemed to fit together perfectly. There were students in Yumi's class whom admitted to having ~~arrhenphobia~~ or simply hating men, and she did have the same sort of aura.		She'd never thought about it, but Sachiko-sama and the description 'hating men' seemed to fit together perfectly. There were students in Yumi's class whom admitted to having androphobia or simply hating men, and she did have the same sort of aura.

	(I wonder if she dislikes her father, too…)		(I wonder if she dislikes her father, too…)
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Stellarroze: Updating translation note links to 'baka-tsuki.org'

2012-10-27T16:51:20Z

Updating translation note links to 'baka-tsuki.org'

Yobbin: /* Monday of Uneasiness. Part 5. */

2010-10-12T01:39:31Z

Monday of Uneasiness. Part 5.

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	"Sachiko-sama! You're accepting the bet even without asking what it is!?"		"Sachiko-sama! You're accepting the bet even without asking what it is!?"

	Even though it might have been meddlesome, even Yumi burst out ~~out~~ this.		Even though it might have been meddlesome, even Yumi burst out at this.

	"It hardly matters. It makes no difference if I lose."		"It hardly matters. It makes no difference if I lose."

Goseebananafish: /* Monday of Uneasiness. Part 5. */ typo

2010-07-06T15:25:35Z

Monday of Uneasiness. Part 5.: typo

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	"I think Sachiko-sama and Yumi-san did not just meet."		"I think Sachiko-sama and Yumi-san did not just meet."

	Until then, she had faded into the background like she didn't exist. Like Rosa Foetida en bouton and her petite sœur, it might be that boutons are ~~supposed~~ not supposed to intrude unless needed. Sachiko-sama seemed to be the exception.		Until then, she had faded into the background like she didn't exist. Like Rosa Foetida en bouton and her petite sœur, it might be that boutons are not supposed to intrude unless needed. Sachiko-sama seemed to be the exception.

	"And why do you think so?"		"And why do you think so?"

Goseebananafish: /* Monday of Uneasiness. Part 5. */ gingko typo

2010-07-04T23:45:14Z

Monday of Uneasiness. Part 5.: gingko typo

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	"Remember this. I will absolutely become your sœur."		"Remember this. I will absolutely become your sœur."

	Even amidst the odorous fallen ~~ginko~~ nuts, the figure of Sachiko-sama standing straight and proclaiming the challenge was awesome.		Even amidst the odorous fallen gingko nuts, the figure of Sachiko-sama standing straight and proclaiming the challenge was awesome.

	"Gokigenyou. Do have a safe trip home."		"Gokigenyou. Do have a safe trip home."

Vaelis at 11:55, 3 August 2008

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	"Please."		"Please."

Molenir: /* Monday of Uneasiness. Part 5. */

2008-07-31T11:15:59Z

Monday of Uneasiness. Part 5.

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	Then, when everyone sat down, black tea was distributed. And that was where we were.		Then, when everyone sat down, black tea was distributed. And that was where we were.

	This room had an atmosphere unlike any other school facility. Just like the stairs and the hallway, the floor and walls were of worn, wooden boarding. Aside from the one adjacent to the hallway, the other three walls each had a wooden-framed bay window, and the clean cotton curtains for each were opened and fastened with a thin ribbon. The size was about half that of a classroom, and there was an arrangement of flowers on the elliptical table in the middle of the room that could probably seat up to eight people. Rather than a student council ~~headquarter~~, it felt more like an old, western-style dining room.		This room had an atmosphere unlike any other school facility. Just like the stairs and the hallway, the floor and walls were of worn, wooden boarding. Aside from the one adjacent to the hallway, the other three walls each had a wooden-framed bay window, and the clean cotton curtains for each were opened and fastened with a thin ribbon. The size was about half that of a classroom, and there was an arrangement of flowers on the elliptical table in the middle of the room that could probably seat up to eight people. Rather than a student council headquarters, it felt more like an old, western-style dining room.

	Of course, the three Roses were seated at the table, as were Sachiko-sama, Yumi, Shimako-san, and Tsutako-san, who was treated as a guest. Rei-sama and Yoshino-san pulled chairs over from around the washstand by the wall.		Of course, the three Roses were seated at the table, as were Sachiko-sama, Yumi, Shimako-san, and Tsutako-san, who was treated as a guest. Rei-sama and Yoshino-san pulled chairs over from around the washstand by the wall.

Seki at 17:43, 26 July 2008

2008-07-26T17:43:08Z

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	Then Rei must be the prince!? A splendid recital contest of two boutons.		Then Rei must be the prince!? A splendid recital contest of two boutons.

	It's beautiful just imagining. Too beautiful. It was getting into [http://www.baka-tsuki.net/project/index.php?title=Maria-sama_ga_Miteru:~~Volume1_Chapter1_5~~#Takarazuka Takarazuka] territory.		It's beautiful just imagining. Too beautiful. It was getting into [http://www.baka-tsuki.net/project/index.php?title=Maria-sama_ga_Miteru:Notes#Takarazuka Takarazuka] territory.

	I have to secure a ticket, no matter what. I wonder if they hand out numbered tickets prior to the event, or something. It was something to look into before heading home.		I have to secure a ticket, no matter what. I wonder if they hand out numbered tickets prior to the event, or something. It was something to look into before heading home.
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	"You said I have no right to speak, as I cannot even find a petite sœur."		"You said I have no right to speak, as I cannot even find a petite sœur."

	"I did say that, but that did not mean 'Regardless of who it is, get a petite sœur.' To grab the first first-year you see upon stepping outside, how hasty, how simplistic. You are not warashibechouja[http://www.baka-tsuki.net/project/index.php?title=Maria-sama_ga_Miteru:~~Volume1_Chapter1_5~~#warashibechouja] after all."		"I did say that, but that did not mean 'Regardless of who it is, get a petite sœur.' To grab the first first-year you see upon stepping outside, how hasty, how simplistic. You are not warashibechouja[http://www.baka-tsuki.net/project/index.php?title=Maria-sama_ga_Miteru:Notes#warashibechouja] after all."

	(… Warashibechouja.)		(… Warashibechouja.)
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	If that hung around my neck, I would become the petite sœur of Sachiko-sama, whom I adored.		If that hung around my neck, I would become the petite sœur of Sachiko-sama, whom I adored.

	Botamochi[http://www.baka-tsuki.net/project/index.php?title=Maria-sama_ga_Miteru:~~Volume1_Chapter1_5~~#botamochi] from the shelf. A top from the gourd.		Botamochi[http://www.baka-tsuki.net/project/index.php?title=Maria-sama_ga_Miteru:Notes#botamochi] from the shelf. A top from the gourd.

	No, more like a horse. A spinning top from a gourd is no surprise. But if you plucked a horse out it would be like 'are you serious?'		No, more like a horse. A spinning top from a gourd is no surprise. But if you plucked a horse out it would be like 'are you serious?'
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	"Indeed. Even if it is an offer from Rosa Chinensis en bouton, there are those like Shimako who say 'I'm sorry.'"		"Indeed. Even if it is an offer from Rosa Chinensis en bouton, there are those like Shimako who say 'I'm sorry.'"

	Rosa Chinensis lightly threw a ball to [http://www.baka-tsuki.net/project/index.php?title=Maria-sama_ga_Miteru:~~Volume1_Chapter1_5~~#check check] Shimako-san. It seems that rumour was true.		Rosa Chinensis lightly threw a ball to [http://www.baka-tsuki.net/project/index.php?title=Maria-sama_ga_Miteru:Notes#check check] Shimako-san. It seems that rumour was true.

	"However, Yumi-san is Sachiko-sama's devotee. Of course she wouldn't refuse?"		"However, Yumi-san is Sachiko-sama's devotee. Of course she wouldn't refuse?"
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	~~==Translator's Notes and References==~~

	~~===Takarazuka===~~
	* The Takarazuka Revue is a famous all-female theatrics group in Japan, in which women play both the male and female roles.

	~~===warashibechouja===~~
	* Literally translated, 'the straw millionaire,' it's a fairy tale about a poor man who was down to some straw, and after he exchanged his straw, he continued to make exchanges until, in the end, he became extremely rich.

	~~===botamochi===~~
	* I don't think this is a standard Japanese phrase. She's saying "it's like pulling a snack out of a shelf, our a horse out of a gourd," essentially trying to say it came out of the blue. I decided to leave it in, for cultural reference's sake.

	~~===check===~~
	* This is a baseball reference. Pitchers often throw balls back to their bases in order to, bluntly, try to tag out runners. This is called 'checking the runner,' and is in reality a way to keep fast runners honest, by ensuring that they don't get too greedy by stepping far away from the base. In this case, Rosa Chinensis was throwing a light jab to Shimako-san, as despite their being on relatively friendly terms, the latter DID reject her sister.

Iatheia at 17:52, 20 July 2008

2008-07-20T17:52:05Z

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	"Please."		"Please."

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	"Please."		"Please."

	A white cup was filled about seven tenths to the brim with a red, steaming liquid and placed in front of ~~me.~~		A white cup was filled about seven tenths to the brim with a red, steaming liquid and placed in front of

	This is a liquid called 'black tea.'		This is a liquid called 'black tea.'

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	Then Rei must be the prince!? A splendid recital contest of two boutons.		Then Rei must be the prince!? A splendid recital contest of two boutons.

	It's beautiful just imagining. Too beautiful. It was getting into [http://www.baka-tsuki.~~net~~/project/index.php?title=Maria-sama_ga_Miteru:Notes#Takarazuka Takarazuka] territory.		It's beautiful just imagining. Too beautiful. It was getting into [http://www.baka-tsuki.org/project/index.php?title=Maria-sama_ga_Miteru:Notes#Takarazuka Takarazuka] territory.

	I have to secure a ticket, no matter what. I wonder if they hand out numbered tickets prior to the event, or something. It was something to look into before heading home.		I have to secure a ticket, no matter what. I wonder if they hand out numbered tickets prior to the event, or something. It was something to look into before heading home.
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	"You said I have no right to speak, as I cannot even find a petite sœur."		"You said I have no right to speak, as I cannot even find a petite sœur."

	"I did say that, but that did not mean 'Regardless of who it is, get a petite sœur.' To grab the first first-year you see upon stepping outside, how hasty, how simplistic. You are not warashibechouja[http://www.baka-tsuki.~~net~~/project/index.php?title=Maria-sama_ga_Miteru:Notes#warashibechouja] after all."		"I did say that, but that did not mean 'Regardless of who it is, get a petite sœur.' To grab the first first-year you see upon stepping outside, how hasty, how simplistic. You are not warashibechouja[http://www.baka-tsuki.org/project/index.php?title=Maria-sama_ga_Miteru:Notes#warashibechouja] after all."

	(… Warashibechouja.)		(… Warashibechouja.)
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	If that hung around my neck, I would become the petite sœur of Sachiko-sama, whom I adored.		If that hung around my neck, I would become the petite sœur of Sachiko-sama, whom I adored.

	Botamochi[http://www.baka-tsuki.~~net~~/project/index.php?title=Maria-sama_ga_Miteru:Notes#botamochi] from the shelf. A top from the gourd.		Botamochi[http://www.baka-tsuki.org/project/index.php?title=Maria-sama_ga_Miteru:Notes#botamochi] from the shelf. A top from the gourd.

	No, more like a horse. A spinning top from a gourd is no surprise. But if you plucked a horse out it would be like 'are you serious?'		No, more like a horse. A spinning top from a gourd is no surprise. But if you plucked a horse out it would be like 'are you serious?'
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	"Indeed. Even if it is an offer from Rosa Chinensis en bouton, there are those like Shimako who say 'I'm sorry.'"		"Indeed. Even if it is an offer from Rosa Chinensis en bouton, there are those like Shimako who say 'I'm sorry.'"

	Rosa Chinensis lightly threw a ball to [http://www.baka-tsuki.~~net~~/project/index.php?title=Maria-sama_ga_Miteru:Notes#check check] Shimako-san. It seems that rumour was true.		Rosa Chinensis lightly threw a ball to [http://www.baka-tsuki.org/project/index.php?title=Maria-sama_ga_Miteru:Notes#check check] Shimako-san. It seems that rumour was true.

	"However, Yumi-san is Sachiko-sama's devotee. Of course she wouldn't refuse?"		"However, Yumi-san is Sachiko-sama's devotee. Of course she wouldn't refuse?"