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64.255.180.85: /* Part 1. */

2011-04-28T04:36:23Z

Part 1.

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	"What is this about?"		"What is this about?"

	As soon as everyone had been seated, Sachiko-sama reopened the matter for discussion, when Rei-chan asked the question, knowing nothing about the exchanges that had preceded this. Shimako-san, who had arrived at the same time as ~~Shimako~~-~~san~~, also inclined her head to wonder about what was going on.		As soon as everyone had been seated, Sachiko-sama reopened the matter for discussion, when Rei-chan asked the question, knowing nothing about the exchanges that had preceded this. Shimako-san, who had arrived at the same time as Rei-chan, also inclined her head to wonder about what was going on.

	"I wanted to find a soeur."		"I wanted to find a soeur."

184.2.66.20: /* Part 3. */ "maybe" should be two words, questions end with question marks, awkard wordings fixed, "too" should be "to," capitalization error, typo

2011-01-26T01:15:21Z

Part 3.: "maybe" should be two words, questions end with question marks, awkard wordings fixed, "too" should be "to," capitalization error, typo

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	"So, what's wrong? You really hate the auditions, don't you Yumi-san?"		"So, what's wrong? You really hate the auditions, don't you Yumi-san?"

	"Well, hating ~~maybe~~ too strong ..."		"Well, hating may be too strong ..."

	"What is with that look on your face! If you don't like something, just say that you don't like it! I want to have your input in the way the auditions are going to be run!"		"What is with that look on your face?! If you don't like something, just say that you don't like it! I want to have your input in the way the auditions are going to be run!"

	Yoshino-san began half-heartedly putting some pressure on Yumi-san to speak her mind. Yumi-san put up a face that said "I wonder what I should tell her", when all of a sudden, Yumi's savior came from behind.		Yoshino-san began half-heartedly putting some pressure on Yumi-san to speak her mind. Yumi-san put up a face that said "I wonder what I should tell her", when all of a sudden, Yumi's savior came from behind.
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	"Let me ask you something else then, Shimako-san! When people are elected to run for the student council, isn't that an issue of students picking students?!"		"Let me ask you something else then, Shimako-san! When people are elected to run for the student council, isn't that an issue of students picking students?!"

	"The elections are different. It's when every student in the school votes for a voice ~~who~~ will represent them in student affairs."		"The elections are different. It's when every student in the school votes for a voice that will represent them in student affairs."

	When Shimako-san became forward about her opinion, it would occasionally bother Yoshino. It wasn't enough that she disagreed. She would do the things that Yoshino herself could not do easily, which would make Yoshino admiring and jealous. But admiring was the opposite of what she needed to be now.		When Shimako-san became forward about her opinion, it would occasionally bother Yoshino. It wasn't enough that she disagreed. She would do the things that Yoshino herself could not do easily, which would make Yoshino admiring and jealous. But admiring was the opposite of what she needed to be now.
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	"Could a person accept a soeur who had been picked by majority rule?"		"Could a person accept a soeur who had been picked by majority rule?"

	"Of course~~, no~~."		"Of course not."

	And now even your soeur gets into this, Yoshino resigned. Noriko couldn't have been this much like a pre-prepared package for Shimako-san.		And now even your soeur gets into this, Yoshino resigned. Noriko couldn't have been this much like a pre-prepared package for Shimako-san.
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	"Yeah."		"Yeah."

	"That's why it's hard ~~too~~ understand this public/private thing."		"That's why it's hard to understand this public/private thing."

	OF course. Yumi put her explanation in terms of human perception.		Of course. Yumi put her explanation in terms of human perception.

	"So you're asking me to hold a tea party at my house, and to invite potential soeur candidates there?"		"So you're asking me to hold a tea party at my house, and to invite potential soeur candidates there?"
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	Yoshino had only asked the question in order to understand what the others in the room where thinking.		Yoshino had only asked the question in order to understand what the others in the room where thinking.

	Yoshino was being more self-conscious than usual. Maybe because Yoshino is used to being the center of attention with relatives and friends, she had not noticed this slip of hers. Of course, there were different degrees of her selfishness. She didn't treat Yumi-san and other close friends like everyone else. But for people like her who loved themselves, it isn't a bad thing to put yourself before others. But this was ~~embarassing~~, so she did not want to tell others.		Yoshino was being more self-conscious than usual. Maybe because Yoshino is used to being the center of attention with relatives and friends, she had not noticed this slip of hers. Of course, there were different degrees of her selfishness. She didn't treat Yumi-san and other close friends like everyone else. But for people like her who loved themselves, it isn't a bad thing to put yourself before others. But this was embarrassing, so she did not want to tell others.

	But from the beginning, Yoshino-san had something else to say that she hadn't.		But from the beginning, Yoshino-san had something else to say that she hadn't.

184.2.66.20: /* Part 2. */ "her self" should be one word in this instance

2011-01-26T01:11:02Z

Part 2.: "her self" should be one word in this instance

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	"Analyze, huh."		"Analyze, huh."

	If she thought about why she hated it so much, it seemed as if her best option was to write a one page paper on it. As she was thinking, the teacher who needed to know the word for 'leader' came in. A look at Yoshino-san made Yumi see that Yoshino-san had quickly found her word. Yoshino-san closed the dictionary, and put ~~her self~~ into a somewhat aggressive position.		If she thought about why she hated it so much, it seemed as if her best option was to write a one page paper on it. As she was thinking, the teacher who needed to know the word for 'leader' came in. A look at Yoshino-san made Yumi see that Yoshino-san had quickly found her word. Yoshino-san closed the dictionary, and put herself into a somewhat aggressive position.

	Question: Do you agree with an audition? (Yes \| No \| I don't understand the question)		Question: Do you agree with an audition? (Yes \| No \| I don't understand the question)

Yobbin: /* Part 4. */

2010-10-08T13:06:52Z

Part 4.

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	Touko said nothing more as she took out her dustpan and put in the dust that Noriko had collected earlier and put it into the trash.		Touko said nothing more as she took out her dustpan and put in the dust that Noriko had collected earlier and put it into the trash.

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	"Touko."		"Touko."

Yobbin at 12:38, 28 September 2010

2010-09-28T12:38:25Z

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	Rather than presuming more than they should and saying "We will do it this way", they decided to that it would be better to act as if they were offering their opinion and say "We want to do it this way".		Rather than presuming more than they should and saying "We will do it this way", they decided to that it would be better to act as if they were offering their opinion and say "We want to do it this way".

	"Basically"		"Basically."

	Rei-sama said.		Rei-sama said.

	"It's like a group Miai then?"<~~!--~~(S: A Miai is an event where two single individuals are introduced to each other to consider marriage. It is similar to the courting sessions of Medieval Western culture.)-->		"It's like a group Miai then?"<ref>(S: A Miai is an event where two single individuals are introduced to each other to consider marriage. It is similar to the courting sessions of Medieval Western culture.)</ref>

	"What an old fashioned idea. Isn't it more like a large group party?"		"What an old fashioned idea. Isn't it more like a large group party?"
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Yobbin: /* Maria-sama's Star */

2010-09-02T12:07:48Z

Maria-sama's Star

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	== Maria-sama's Star ==		== Maria-sama's Star ==
	===Part 1===		===Part 1.===

	"So, when are you holding it?"		"So, when are you holding it?"
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	Without hearing Yumi-san's opinion, she had been given parts of the work.		Without hearing Yumi-san's opinion, she had been given parts of the work.

	===Part 2===		===Part 2.===

	"I've heard that there is some audition thing going on?"		"I've heard that there is some audition thing going on?"
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	The door opened with a thud, and in the doorway stood Yoshino-san.		The door opened with a thud, and in the doorway stood Yoshino-san.

	===Part 3===		===Part 3.===

	"Please, tell me!"		"Please, tell me!"
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	Sachiko-sama did not come at all that day to the Rose Mansion.		Sachiko-sama did not come at all that day to the Rose Mansion.

	===Part 4===		===Part 4.===

	Why had Noriko thought something like that.		Why had Noriko thought something like that.
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	Noriko did not say anything else aloud, but the thought echoed in her mind.		Noriko did not say anything else aloud, but the thought echoed in her mind.

	===Part 5===		===Part 5.===

	"So?"		"So?"

Yobbin: /* Maria-sama's Star */

2010-08-29T09:39:49Z

Maria-sama's Star

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	== Maria-sama's Star ==		== Maria-sama's Star ==
			===Part 1===

	"So, when are you holding it?"		"So, when are you holding it?"
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	Without hearing Yumi-san's opinion, she had been given parts of the work.		Without hearing Yumi-san's opinion, she had been given parts of the work.

			===Part 2===
	~~<!--Section 3-->~~

	"I've heard that there is some audition thing going on?"		"I've heard that there is some audition thing going on?"
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	"Analyze, huh."		"Analyze, huh."

	If she thought about why she hated it so much, it seemed as if her best option was to write a one page paper on it. As she was thinking,the teacher who needed to know the word for 'leader' came in. A look at Yoshino-san made Yumi see that Yoshino-san had quickly found her word. Yoshino-san closed the dictionary, and put her self into a somewhat aggressive position.		If she thought about why she hated it so much, it seemed as if her best option was to write a one page paper on it. As she was thinking, the teacher who needed to know the word for 'leader' came in. A look at Yoshino-san made Yumi see that Yoshino-san had quickly found her word. Yoshino-san closed the dictionary, and put her self into a somewhat aggressive position.

	Question: Do you agree with an audition? (Yes \| No \| I don't understand the question)		Question: Do you agree with an audition? (Yes \| No \| I don't understand the question)
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	During third and fourth period, Yumi listened to only half of the lecture, and tried to used the remaining half of her brain, but could not.		During third and fourth period, Yumi listened to only half of the lecture, and tried to used the remaining half of her brain, but could not.

	As she walked towards the Rose Mansion with her lunch, she could do nothing but sigh. Today, everyone was talking about the soeur auditions. It's not as if she was invited to the Rose Mansion, or that there was much work for the Student Council to ~~finihs~~. On the way, Yumi had seriously thought about just spending today in her classroom, eating lunch, but she did not make any U-Turns as she walked up to the Rose Mansion.		As she walked towards the Rose Mansion with her lunch, she could do nothing but sigh. Today, everyone was talking about the soeur auditions. It's not as if she was invited to the Rose Mansion, or that there was much work for the Student Council to finish. On the way, Yumi had seriously thought about just spending today in her classroom, eating lunch, but she did not make any U-Turns as she walked up to the Rose Mansion.

	Yumi let out a yell of confidence, and opened the entrance to the Rosa Mansion. In front of her she could see the figure of a person hurriedly climbing up the stairs.		Yumi let out a yell of confidence, and opened the entrance to the Rosa Mansion. In front of her she could see the figure of a person hurriedly climbing up the stairs.
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	Shimako-san whispered and once again began walking up the stairs.		Shimako-san whispered and once again began walking up the stairs.

	"I'm not really in a position where I can oppose or approve of the ~~situaation~~."		"I'm not really in a position where I can oppose or approve of the situation."

	Picking the soeur was the job of the older sister, was Shimako-san's idea of it. Yumi once again followed Shimako-san up.		Picking the soeur was the job of the older sister, was Shimako-san's idea of it. Yumi once again followed Shimako-san up.
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	"How would you react to becoming Shimako-san's soeur in an audition?"		"How would you react to becoming Shimako-san's soeur in an audition?"

	Noriko-chan mulled over her answer and tried to figure out a way to answer the point that Yumi was driving at, but instead, cleverly threw a question back at ~~Yui~~.		Noriko-chan mulled over her answer and tried to figure out a way to answer the point that Yumi was driving at, but instead, cleverly threw a question back at Yumi.

	"Yumi-sama, you wouldn't dislike having a petite soeur, would you?"		"Yumi-sama, you wouldn't dislike having a petite soeur, would you?"
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	"Maybe."		"Maybe."

	Since Yumi became Sachiko-sama's petite soeur, she herself knew vaguely that she would have to have her own. The reason she still did not have a soeur by the second term was not because she was harshly ~~rejecedt~~, but that she had simply missed out on chances to look for soeurs.		Since Yumi became Sachiko-sama's petite soeur, she herself knew vaguely that she would have to have her own. The reason she still did not have a soeur by the second term was not because she was harshly rejected, but that she had simply missed out on chances to look for soeurs.

	"So then, are you simply against the concept of the audition itself?"		"So then, are you simply against the concept of the audition itself?"
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	The door opened with a thud, and in the doorway stood Yoshino-san.		The door opened with a thud, and in the doorway stood Yoshino-san.

			===Part 3===
	~~<!--Section 4-->~~

	"Please, tell me!"		"Please, tell me!"
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	When Yumi-san thought about Yoshino-san's proposal, she realized that she was fairly comfortable with doing the audition publicly.		When Yumi-san thought about Yoshino-san's proposal, she realized that she was fairly comfortable with doing the audition publicly.

	"If you do a Rokomi, then okay. I understand." (R: I have no idea what Rokomi means: "Rokomi nara OK, to. Nan to Naku Wakatta." E: I'm thinking its a made up English-Japanese word for "loco-meeting.")		"If you do a Rokomi, then okay. I understand."<!--(R: I have no idea what Rokomi means: "Rokomi nara OK, to. Nan to Naku Wakatta." E: I'm thinking its a made up English-Japanese word for "loco-meeting.")-->

	"Yoshino-san, you can't mean."		"Yoshino-san, you can't mean."
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	Sachiko-sama did not come at all that day to the Rose Mansion.		Sachiko-sama did not come at all that day to the Rose Mansion.

			===Part 4===
	~~<!--Section 5-->~~

	Why had Noriko thought something like that.		Why had Noriko thought something like that.
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	"Her face is never still, her mood is always plain. But her heart is with the people, so her head's just a scatterbrain."		"Her face is never still, her mood is always plain. But her heart is with the people, so her head's just a scatterbrain."

	Each of her lines began with an 'H' sound, and ended with a rhyme. Only the third rhyme was off. (S: The original Japanese had Touko start short sentences with the 'O' sound, and only her last sentence did not rhyme.)		Each of her lines began with an 'H' sound, and ended with a rhyme. Only the third rhyme was off.<!--(S: The original Japanese had Touko start short sentences with the 'O' sound, and only her last sentence did not rhyme.)-->

	"She is, but she's still pretty popular with the first years."		"She is, but she's still pretty popular with the first years."
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	Unlike Yumi-sama, Touko would purposefully misunderstand her questions, and would throw your questions back at you. She understood what Noriko had wanted to say, but she probably was dodging because she did not want to answer.		Unlike Yumi-sama, Touko would purposefully misunderstand her questions, and would throw your questions back at you. She understood what Noriko had wanted to say, but she probably was dodging because she did not want to answer.

	But ever since she had learned that lesson, she had learned to not give up asking questions that she wanted answered. (R: This probably refers to an earlier incident where Noriko was revealed to have a Juzu in her bag, which she was borrowing from Shimako. The incident was used by the Roses to make Shimako more comfortable about her Buddhist background, while being at a Catholic school.)		But ever since she had learned that lesson, she had learned to not give up asking questions that she wanted answered.<!--(R: This probably refers to an earlier incident where Noriko was revealed to have a Juzu in her bag, which she was borrowing from Shimako. The incident was used by the Roses to make Shimako more comfortable about her Buddhist background, while being at a Catholic school.)-->

	"Did you think that I had wanted to be Yumi-sama's petite soeur?"		"Did you think that I had wanted to be Yumi-sama's petite soeur?"
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	Noriko did not say anything else aloud, but the thought echoed in her mind.		Noriko did not say anything else aloud, but the thought echoed in her mind.

			===Part 5===
	~~<!--Section 6-->~~

	"So?"		"So?"
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	Rei-sama said.		Rei-sama said.

	"It's like a group Miai then?" (S: A Miai is an event where two single individuals are introduced to each other to consider marriage. It is similar to the courting sessions of Medieval Western culture.)		"It's like a group Miai then?"<!--(S: A Miai is an event where two single individuals are introduced to each other to consider marriage. It is similar to the courting sessions of Medieval Western culture.)-->

	"What an old fashioned idea. Isn't it more like a large group party?"		"What an old fashioned idea. Isn't it more like a large group party?"
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	Shimako-san had had this 'trial run' with Noriko-chan. The 'trial run' wasn't to test whether the candidate was incapable or not, but to test whether a petite soeur had a long-term affinity for her grande soeur. There was also the unwritten rule that if someone really could not find a soeur, then she would take the most useful volunteer in the Rose Mansion.		Shimako-san had had this 'trial run' with Noriko-chan. The 'trial run' wasn't to test whether the candidate was incapable or not, but to test whether a petite soeur had a long-term affinity for her grande soeur. There was also the unwritten rule that if someone really could not find a soeur, then she would take the most useful volunteer in the Rose Mansion.

	"I think I understand what you're trying to ~~acheive~~."		"I think I understand what you're trying to achieve."

	Sachiko-said, as she slowly raised herself out of her chair.		Sachiko-said, as she slowly raised herself out of her chair.
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	"The two of us will help out when we can. Behind the scenes, of course."		"The two of us will help out when we can. Behind the scenes, of course."

	As Sachiko-sama and Rei-san were exchanging glances and heading out of the room, Shimako-san interjected. (S: Her interjection comes below.)		As Sachiko-sama and Rei-san were exchanging glances and heading out of the room, Shimako-san interjected.<!--(S: Her interjection comes below.)-->

	Even though Shimako-san was a second-year, she was a grande soeur with her petite soeur first-year Noriko-chan, so she was the same as Sachiko-sam and Rei-sama. A person who, by the rules, was not allowed to attend.		Even though Shimako-san was a second-year, she was a grande soeur with her petite soeur first-year Noriko-chan, so she was the same as Sachiko-sam and Rei-sama. A person who, by the rules, was not allowed to attend.
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	It seemed as soon as the two left from the Rose Mansion, the atmosphere became a little cooler.		It seemed as soon as the two left from the Rose Mansion, the atmosphere became a little cooler.



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Darklor: New Marimite20 Chapter as translated by Rei and Sukoshi and edited by Erica Friedman at Okazu (Part2)

2009-12-14T06:56:31Z

New Marimite20 Chapter as translated by Rei and Sukoshi and edited by Erica Friedman at Okazu (Part2)

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