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Leviticus: Part 2 punctuation/form

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Part 2 punctuation/form

Leviticus: Part 1 tidy-up

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	"'The S&oelig;ur Tea Party is an experiment to create a special social setting. Your involvement in the tea party does not constitute a firm decision to obtain a s&oelig;ur.'"		"'The S&oelig;ur Tea Party is an experiment to create a special social setting. Your involvement in the tea party does not constitute a firm decision to obtain a s&oelig;ur.'"

	It had all started in the morning and continued on ~~now~~ into lunch; everyone was talking about the news that the Lillian Kawaraban ~~had~~ announced. It was not an exaggeration to say that the rumors of this S&oelig;ur Tea Party circulated as rapidly as a flower bloomed.		It had all started in the morning and continued on into lunch; everyone was talking about the news that the Lillian Kawaraban announced. It was not an exaggeration to say that the rumors of this S&oelig;ur Tea Party circulated as rapidly as a flower bloomed.

	"'In addition, Rosa Foetida en bouton and Rosa Chinensis en bouton are scheduled to attend.' Wow!"		"'In addition, Rosa Foetida en bouton and Rosa Chinensis en bouton are scheduled to attend.' Wow!"

	Noriko wondered how many times ~~now~~ she had heard "Wow!" throughout the day as she dropped her gaze onto her paperback book. If it was this loud, then how ~~can~~ the other book readers meet? Since Noriko had been at the school for over half a year, she had gotten used to the low hush of gossip at an all girls' school~~. But~~ today was different. Because this time, the gossip dealt with her, so she couldn't help but react to what she heard. She couldn't just dismiss it with a, "Ah, Kojima-san's gossiping again," today.		Noriko wondered how many times she had heard "Wow!" throughout the day as she dropped her gaze onto her paperback book. If it was this loud, then how could the other book readers meet? Since Noriko had been at the school for over half a year, she had gotten used to the low hush of gossip at an all girls' school — but today was different. Because this time, the gossip dealt with her, so she couldn't help but react to what she heard. She couldn't just dismiss it with a, "Ah, Kojima-san's gossiping again," today.

	"Hey hey, Noriko-san. We wanted to ask you about the S&oelig;ur Tea Party."		"Hey hey, Noriko-san. We wanted to ask you about the S&oelig;ur Tea Party."

	Again, classmates came to Noriko, believing that she would have top quality news.		Again, classmates came to Noriko, believing that she would have top-quality news.

	"Ah, well."		"Ah, well . . ."

	She didn't want to ignore them, so instead she tried to act friendly. "I don't know anything more than what's written in the paper about it, except that the boutons want anyone who meets the criteria and who is interested to apply as quickly as possible." Noriko raised her head out of her paperback ~~and gave~~ her best business smile.		She didn't want to ignore them, so instead she tried to act friendly.

			"I don't know anything more than what's written in the paper about it, except that the boutons want anyone who meets the criteria and who is interested to apply as quickly as possible," Noriko said, and raised her head out of her paperback, giving her best business smile.

	"Well, we want to, but —"		"Well, we want to, but —"
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	"The requirements . . ."		"The requirements . . ."

	The girls turned towards each other with sad faces. Of course, those two must be Atsuko-san and Miyuki-san, zealous participants in Bible Studies Club. But each of them had accepted a rosary from upperclassmen in the club, so they could not go to the S&oelig;ur Tea Party.		The girls turned towards each other with sad faces. Of course, those two must be Atsuko-san and Miyuki-san, zealous participants in the Bible Studies Club. But each of them had accepted a rosary from upperclassmen in the club, so they could not go to the S&oelig;ur Tea Party.

	Noriko decided she would spend no more time talking about the matter and returned to her reading, but the two girls didn't leave ~~from~~ the side of her desk. When Noriko was about to say something back to them, Atsuko-san spoke up.		Noriko decided she would spend no more time talking about the matter and returned to her reading, but the two girls didn't leave the side of her desk. When Noriko was about to say something back to them, Atsuko-san spoke up.

	"By the way, Noriko-san."		"By the way, Noriko-san."
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	"Touko?"		"Touko?"

	When discussing the S&oelig;ur Tea Party, she had prepared answers to questions regarding certain topics~~. So she had prepared a set of questions beforehand, and formulated answers for them~~. But she had not prepared for any questions dealing with the "Touko" topic. Why were these two s&oelig;urs of second-years the first to ask a question dealing with a proper noun, Noriko wondered~~, as she~~ inclined her head and pointed to the print that Miyuki-san held in her hand.~~<!-- Note 0 -->~~		When discussing the S&oelig;ur Tea Party, she had prepared answers to questions regarding certain topics. But she had not prepared for any questions dealing with the "Touko" topic. Why were these two s&oelig;urs of second-years the first to ask a question dealing with a proper noun, Noriko wondered. She inclined her head and pointed to the print-out that Miyuki-san held in her hand.

	"You've read the Lillian Kawaraban, right? So you know it said that the applicants are picked at random, right?"		"You've read the Lillian Kawaraban, right? So you know it said that the applicants are picked at random, right?"
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	"That's exactly who. I wonder how it'll go."		"That's exactly who. I wonder how it'll go."

	So then, Kanako-san was very high on the list of potential s&oelig;ur candidates. But right now, the person closest to becoming Yumi-sama's s&oelig;ur was Touko. Whenever people were found talking about the ~~Tea Party~~, they would keep whispering about a rumor that Yumi-sama would give someone special treatment — in other words, show attraction — as if it were true.		So then, Kanako-san was very high on the list of potential s&oelig;ur candidates. But right now, the person closest to becoming Yumi-sama's s&oelig;ur was Touko. Whenever people were found talking about the tea party, they would keep whispering about a rumor that Yumi-sama would give someone special treatment — in other words, show attraction — as if it were true.

	"Well then, good luck to Touko-san."		"Well then, good luck to Touko-san."
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	"Didn't she say 'I want to become a Rose some day' in middle school?"		"Didn't she say 'I want to become a Rose some day' in middle school?"

	And then ~~all of a sudden,~~ they fell silent. Perhaps they wondered what would happen if Noriko became angry. Noriko wondered would happen if she lost her cool as well. She took a deep breath and spoke again.		And then they suddenly fell silent. Perhaps they wondered what would happen if Noriko became angry. Noriko wondered would happen if she lost her cool as well. She took a deep breath and spoke again.

	"Well, that's not really true. . . ."		"Well, that's not really true. . . ."

Leviticus: Typo, formatting

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Typo, formatting

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	"Well? How many people are here?"		"Well? How many people are here?" Yoshino-san asked, as she began drafting the plans.

	Yoshino-san asked, as she began drafting the plans.

	"Starting at lunch today there were seven first-years and five second-years."		"Starting at lunch today there were seven first-years and five second-years."

	Mami-san was the one who answered. She didn't care whether she had to stay in the Rose Mansion through lunch or after school. For her, it was a mild distraction while spiritedly toiling at her life's work, the Lillian Kawaraban. The Newspaper Club underclassmen would come and go too, so the work was coming along. But for some reason, it seemed as if the place had become "Newspaper Club &~~mdasah~~; Rose Mansion Branch."		Mami-san was the one who answered. She didn't care whether she had to stay in the Rose Mansion through lunch or after school. For her, it was a mild distraction while spiritedly toiling at her life's work, the Lillian Kawaraban. The Newspaper Club underclassmen would come and go too, so the work was coming along. But for some reason, it seemed as if the place had become "Newspaper Club — Rose Mansion Branch."

	Now that the Newspaper Club personnel would come more, the third-years would come less.		Now that the Newspaper Club personnel would come more, the third-years would come less.
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	The day when they had decided to change it from an audition to a tea party, and when they decided to announce it in an extra in the Lillian Kawaraban had been Wednesday. From that day after school they had begun to receive applications, and up 'til today, the first day of the month, a little more than four days had passed. If you exclude the Sundays that they had off from school, then it would be only three days. <!-- Note 1 -->		The day when they had decided to change it from an audition to a tea party, and when they decided to announce it in an extra in the Lillian Kawaraban had been Wednesday. From that day after school they had begun to receive applications, and up 'til today, the first day of the month, a little more than four days had passed. If you exclude the Sundays that they had off from school, then it would be only three days. <!-- Note 1 -->

	"I don't think any of them really understand what the rules are though...."		"I don't think any of them really understand what the rules are though . . ." Mami-san said, as she looked through the application printed in the Lillian Kawaraban.

	~~Mami-san said, as she looked through the application printed in the Lillian Kawaraban.~~		"I think it would be best if we put big letters in the paper that simply say 'Submit Your Applications at the First Floor of the Rose Mansion.' That way, overenthusiastic people, and people who simply misunderstood the rules, would have no problems," Noriko-chan said. There were no mistakes in the Lillian Kawaraban, after all.

	"I think it would be best if we put big letters in the paper that simply say 'Submit Your Applications at the First Floor of the Rose Mansion.' That way, overenthusiastic people, and people who simply misunderstood the rules, would have no problems."

	Noriko-chan said. There were no mistakes in the Lillian Kawaraban, after all.

	For that matter, the restrictions were a bit harsh. Among the applicants who did not have petite — or grande — s&oelig;urs, nobody knew how many would actually be interviewed. Even amongst them, the amount that was thought of as willing to cooperate in the Tea Party was not really that large. <!-- Note 1.2 -->		For that matter, the restrictions were a bit harsh. Among the applicants who did not have petite — or grande — s&oelig;urs, nobody knew how many would actually be interviewed. Even amongst them, the amount that was thought of as willing to cooperate in the Tea Party was not really that large. <!-- Note 1.2 -->
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	She would remember it when, days later, she would meet with the real Naitou Shouko-san.		She would remember it when, days later, she would meet with the real Naitou Shouko-san.



	===Part 3===		===Part 3===

Leviticus: Form, Grammar

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Form, Grammar

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	"We will begin accepting applications to participate in the S&oelig;ur Tea Party! The rules permit ~~—~~"		"'We will begin accepting applications to participate in the S&oelig;ur Tea Party! The rules permit' . . ."

	The words came from all around.		The words came from all around.

	"The S&oelig;ur Tea Party is an experiment to create a special social setting. Your involvement in the tea party does not constitute a firm decision to obtain a s&oelig;ur."		"'The S&oelig;ur Tea Party is an experiment to create a special social setting. Your involvement in the tea party does not constitute a firm decision to obtain a s&oelig;ur.'"

	~~From~~ the morning ~~it had started,~~ and ~~had~~ continued on now into lunch~~. Everyone~~ was talking about the news that the Lillian Kawaraban had announced. It was not an exaggeration to say that the rumors of this S&oelig;ur Tea Party circulated as rapidly as a flower bloomed.		It had all started in the morning and continued on now into lunch; everyone was talking about the news that the Lillian Kawaraban had announced. It was not an exaggeration to say that the rumors of this S&oelig;ur Tea Party circulated as rapidly as a flower bloomed.

	"'In addition, Rosa Foetida en bouton and Rosa Chinensis en bouton are scheduled to attend.' Wow!"		"'In addition, Rosa Foetida en bouton and Rosa Chinensis en bouton are scheduled to attend.' Wow!"

	Noriko wondered how many times now she had heard "Wow!" throughout the day as she dropped her gaze onto her paperback book.		Noriko wondered how many times now she had heard "Wow!" throughout the day as she dropped her gaze onto her paperback book. If it was this loud, then how can the other book readers meet? Since Noriko had been at the school for over half a year, she had gotten used to the low hush of gossip at an all girls' school. But today was different. Because this time, the gossip dealt with her, so she couldn't help but react to what she heard. She couldn't just dismiss it with a, "Ah, Kojima-san's gossiping again," today.

	If it's this loud, then how can the other book readers meet? Since Noriko had been at the school for over half a year, she had gotten used to the low hush of gossip at an all girls' school. But today was different. Because this time, the gossip dealt with her, so she couldn't help but react to ~~the gossip~~ she heard. She couldn't just dismiss it with a, "Ah, Kojima-san's gossiping again," today.

	"Hey hey, Noriko-san. We wanted to ask you about the S&oelig;ur Tea Party."		"Hey hey, Noriko-san. We wanted to ask you about the S&oelig;ur Tea Party."
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	"Ah, well."		"Ah, well."

	She didn't want to ignore them, so instead she tried to act friendly.		She didn't want to ignore them, so instead she tried to act friendly. "I don't know anything more than what's written in the paper about it, except that the boutons want anyone who meets the criteria and who is interested to apply as quickly as possible." Noriko raised her head out of her paperback and gave her best business smile.

	"I don't know anything more than what's written in the paper about it, except that the boutons want anyone who meets the criteria and who is interested to apply as quickly as possible."

	Noriko raised her head out of her paperback and gave her best business smile.

	"Well, we want to, but —"		"Well, we want to, but —"

	"The requirements...."		"The requirements . . ."

	The girls turned towards each other with sad faces. Of course, those two must be Atsuko-san and Miyuki-san, zealous participants in Bible Studies Club. But each of them had accepted a rosary from upperclassmen in the club, so they could not go to the S&oelig;ur Tea Party.		The girls turned towards each other with sad faces. Of course, those two must be Atsuko-san and Miyuki-san, zealous participants in Bible Studies Club. But each of them had accepted a rosary from upperclassmen in the club, so they could not go to the S&oelig;ur Tea Party.

	Noriko decided she would spend no more time talking about the matter and returned to her reading, but the two girls ~~did not~~ leave from the side of her desk.		Noriko decided she would spend no more time talking about the matter and returned to her reading, but the two girls didn't leave from the side of her desk. When Noriko was about to say something back to them, Atsuko-san spoke up.

	When Noriko was about to say something back to them, Atsuko-san spoke up.

	"By the way, Noriko-san."		"By the way, Noriko-san."
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	"Touko?"		"Touko?"

	When discussing the S&oelig;ur Tea Party, she had prepared answers to questions regarding certain topics. So she had prepared a set of questions beforehand, and formulated answers for them. But she had not prepared for any questions dealing with the		When discussing the S&oelig;ur Tea Party, she had prepared answers to questions regarding certain topics. So she had prepared a set of questions beforehand, and formulated answers for them. But she had not prepared for any questions dealing with the "Touko" topic. Why were these two s&oelig;urs of second-years the first to ask a question dealing with a proper noun, Noriko wondered, as she inclined her head and pointed to the print that Miyuki-san held in her hand.<!-- Note 0 -->
	"Touko" topic. Why were these two s&oelig;urs of second-years the first to ask a question dealing with a proper noun, Noriko wondered, as she inclined her head and pointed to the print that Miyuki-san held in her hand.

	"You've read the Lillian Kawaraban, right? So you know it said that the applicants are picked at random, right?"		"You've read the Lillian Kawaraban, right? So you know it said that the applicants are picked at random, right?"

	"But ... well —"		"But . . . well —"

	"First of all, whether Touko will apply or not~~, I don't know~~. If you want to know about someone, why don't you ask her yourself?"		"First of all, I don't know whether Touko will apply or not. If you want to know about someone, why don't you ask her yourself?"

	After Noriko finished speaking, she realized, "Well now, Touko isn't with those two." As soon as the school year had started, they said to each other "I'm Touko," "I'm Atsuko," "I'm Miyuki," as if they were idols introducing themselves, and somewhere along the line they had become a group.		After Noriko finished speaking, she realized, "Well now, Touko isn't with those two." As soon as the school year had started, they said to each other "I'm Touko," "I'm Atsuko," "I'm Miyuki," as if they were idols introducing themselves, and somewhere along the line they had become a group.

	"Touko-san ... she wouldn't apply ... would she?"		"Touko-san . . . she wouldn't apply . . . would she?"

	"Eh?"		"Eh?"
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	"Maybe the party is just camouflage."		"Maybe the party is just camouflage."

	"But then who? Kanako-san?"		"But then, who? Kanako-san?"

	"That's exactly who. I wonder how it'll go."		"That's exactly who. I wonder how it'll go."
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	"Well then, good luck to Touko-san."		"Well then, good luck to Touko-san."

	"~~Hadn~~'t she ~~said~~ 'I want to become a Rose some day' in middle school?"		"Didn't she say 'I want to become a Rose some day' in middle school?"

	And then all of a sudden, they fell silent. Perhaps they wondered what would happen if Noriko ~~would become~~ angry. Noriko wondered would happen if she lost her cool. She took a deep breath, and spoke again.		And then all of a sudden, they fell silent. Perhaps they wondered what would happen if Noriko became angry. Noriko wondered would happen if she lost her cool as well. She took a deep breath and spoke again.

	"Well, that's not really true...."		"Well, that's not really true. . . ."

	"But, but that's something Noriko-san doesn't know about, right?"		"But, but that's something Noriko-san doesn't know about, right?"
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	In all innocence, in all straightforwardness, in all frankness, the angels were interfering too much today, thought Noriko.		In all innocence, in all straightforwardness, in all frankness, the angels were interfering too much today, thought Noriko.



	===Part 2===		===Part 2===

Leviticus: Flow, Form, Style, Punctuation, Clarity, Continuity, Translator's Notes added (Parts 1-3)

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Flow, Form, Style, Punctuation, Clarity, Continuity, Translator's Notes added (Parts 1-3)

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