Maria-sama ga Miteru:Volume22 Chapter1.3 - Revision history

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	The menu was exactly what it smelled like: curry and salad. The meal had been cooking from before Kashiwagi-san had called Yumi, so it was a surprisingly tasty spread.		The menu was exactly what it smelled like: curry and salad. The meal had been cooking from before Kashiwagi-san had called Yumi, so it was a surprisingly tasty spread.
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	"Don't hold back. I think Touko-chan is a great conversationalist." When Yumi heard her mother's words, conversely she wondered if she could become a good conversation partner for Touko-chan. .		"Don't hold back. I think Touko-chan is a great conversationalist." When Yumi heard her mother's words, conversely she wondered if she could become a good conversation partner for Touko-chan.

	Had Touko-chan not been picked up by Yuuki, she wouldn't have come to this house. Just why had she left home? That was one topic that they could not discuss. But why? What had happened? Maybe if she just asked once. Even though she hadn't come here looking for Yumi's help, if she asked the question after she let Touko-chan in the house, Touko-chan would hesitate. Then she would grow fearful. ''This is none of Yumi-sama's business.'' She'd be denied. When she thought of the denial, she felt too scared to ask.		Had Touko-chan not been picked up by Yuuki, she wouldn't have come to this house. Just why had she left home? That was one topic that they could not discuss. But why? What had happened? Maybe if she just asked once. Even though she hadn't come here looking for Yumi's help, if she asked the question after she let Touko-chan in the house, Touko-chan would hesitate. Then she would grow fearful. ''This is none of Yumi-sama's business.'' She'd be denied. When she thought of the denial, she felt too scared to ask.

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	"Oh, speaking of white rice. When Yumi and her friends went to her Onee-sama's summer house, the rice I had sent gave Yumi the nickname Princess Koshihikari. Did you know that, Touko-chan?" <ref>In the Vacation of the Young Lambs story arc, Sachiko had invited Yumi to her summer house to enjoy the summer together. There, they met Sachiko's 'friends', a bunch of self-conscious snobs, among whom was Touko, vying to come into the Ogasawara family's favor by thrusting themselves onto Sachiko. They considered Yumi to be not on their level and made fun of her, and socially slighted her, unaware that Sachiko hardly cared about the social class of Yumi. One of the names Yumi was called was Princess Koshihikari in reference to the Koshihikari brand of rice her mother had sent to Sachiko's summer house.</ref> Well she hadn't been expecting that subject to come up, but it was too late.		"Oh, speaking of white rice. When Yumi and her friends went to her Onee-sama's summer house, the rice I had sent gave Yumi the nickname Princess Koshihikari. Did you know that, Touko-chan?" <ref>In the Vacation of the Young Lambs story arc, Sachiko had invited Yumi to her summer house to enjoy the summer together. There, they met Sachiko's 'friends', a bunch of self-conscious snobs, among whom was Touko, vying to come into the Ogasawara family's favor by thrusting themselves onto Sachiko. They considered Yumi to be not on their level and made fun of her, and socially slighted her, unaware that Sachiko hardly cared about the social class of Yumi. One of the names Yumi was called was Princess Koshihikari in reference to the Koshihikari brand of rice her mother had sent to Sachiko's summer house.</ref> Well she hadn't been expecting that subject to come up, but it was too late.

	It wasn't as if Touko-chan had been the instigator that came up with the name, so Yumi thought it probably would not bother her excessively. ~~I mean, if~~ Touko chan wasn't the ~~'Person~~ who made the name~~' and was instead~~ the ~~'Person~~ who eventually laughed at the name~~' then they were two completely different things~~.		It wasn't as if Touko-chan had been the instigator that came up with the name, so Yumi thought it probably would not bother her excessively. If Touko-chan wasn't the "person who made the name" but rather the "person who eventually laughed at the name" she was not to blame.

	As expected, Touko-chan became obviously dejected, and whispered.		As expected, Touko-chan became obviously dejected, and whispered, "...There are some bad people out there in this world."

	"..~~. There are some bad people out there in this world."~~		"Touko-chan, you're being too hard on yourself." Yumi's mother laughed warmly.

	"Touko-chan, ~~you're being too hard on yourself~~."		Yumi explained to Touko-chan, "Mom really liked the name."

	~~Yumi's mother laughed warmly. Yumi explained~~ to Touko-chan.		"Princess Koshihikari?" Unable to fathom this, Touko-chan knit her eyebrows together.

	"~~Mom really liked~~ the ~~name~~."		"Yeah. Don't you think it has a much better ring to it than Princess Sasanishiki or Princess Hitomebore? I'm glad I sent Koshihikari. But you know, Princess Unwashed-Rice sounds more story-like, much more story-like." Wasn't Princess Koshihikari more than enough? Yet, as Yumi's mother was glowingly smiling, she let the irritation go, and even Touko-chan let out a small laugh.

			"Yumi-sama's family talks about almost everything."

	"~~Princess Koshihikari?~~"		At which point, Yumi's father laughed to himself. "Nope. There are a lot of things we don't talk about at home. Because there are a lot of things we don't understand." Like a bride's father, Yumi's father talked solemnly, and Yumi's mother suddenly caught on.

	~~Unable to fathom this~~, Touko-chan ~~knit her eyebrows together~~.		"Honey, why did you suddenly get so serious? That's what friends are for. Touko-chan, please engage Yumi in some good conversation."

	"~~Yeah~~. ~~Don't you think it has a much better ring to it than Princess Sasanishiki or Princess Hitomebore? I'm glad I sent Koshihikari~~. ~~But you know, Princess Unwashed-Rice sounds more story-like, much more story-like~~."		"I, well..."

	~~Wasn~~'t ~~Princess Koshihikari more than enough? But because~~ Yumi's ~~mother was glowingly smiling~~, she ~~let the irritation go, and even~~ Touko-chan ~~let out a small laugh~~.		"Don't hold back. I think Touko-chan is a great conversationalist." When Yumi heard her mother's words, conversely she wondered if she could become a good conversation partner for Touko-chan. .

	~~"Yumi-sama's family talks about almost everything."~~		Had Touko-chan not been picked up by Yuuki, she wouldn't have come to this house. Just why had she left home? That was one topic that they could not discuss. But why? What had happened? Maybe if she just asked once. Even though she hadn't come here looking for Yumi's help, if she asked the question after she let Touko-chan in the house, Touko-chan would hesitate. Then she would grow fearful. ''This is none of Yumi-sama's business.'' She'd be denied. When she thought of the denial, she felt too scared to ask.

	~~At which, Yumi's father laughed solitarily.~~

	~~"Nope. There are a lot of things we don't talk about at home. Because we don't understand a lot of things, so."~~

	~~Like a bride's father, Yumi's father talked solemnly, and Yumi's mother suddenly caught on.~~

	~~"Honey, why did you suddenly become so serious? That's what friends are for. Touko-chan, please engage Yumi in some good conversation."~~

	~~"I, well."~~

	~~"Don't hold back. I think Touko-chan is great with conversation."~~

	~~When Yumi heard her mother's words, conversely she wondered if she could become a good conversation partner for Touko-chan.~~

	Had Touko-chan not been picked up by Yuuki, she wouldn't have come to this house.

	Just why had she left home? That was one topic that they could not ~~converse about~~.

	~~Just~~ why.

	What had happened.

	Maybe if she just asked once.

	~~But even~~ though she hadn't come here looking for Yumi's help, if she asked the question after she let Touko-chan in the house, Touko-chan would hesitate.

	Then she would ~~become afraid~~.

	"This is none of Yumi-sama's business."

	She'd be denied. -- When she thought of the denial, she felt too scared to ask.

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	The menu was exactly what it smelled like -- curry and salad.		The menu was exactly what it smelled like: curry and salad. The meal had been cooking from before Kashiwagi-san had called Yumi, so it was a surprisingly tasty spread.

	The ~~meal~~ had been ~~being cooked from before Yumi had called Kashiwagi-san~~, so it was a ~~surprisingly tasty spread~~.		The Fukuzawa home's curry was made in huge quantities, so if one or two extra people would join them it would be fine. Yumi's mother also enjoyed cooking such huge quantities. Yumi's mother had been expecting Yuuki's friends to come over, so there was a very strong possibility that curry and stew would be common this winter. Steak and fish need to be prepared one-at-a-time, and if there aren't enough it's problematic to cook them in large quantities, as they would often run out.

	~~The Fukuzawa home's curry was made in huge quantities~~, ~~so if one or two extra people would join them it would be fine. Yumi's mother also enjoyed cooking such huge quantities.~~ Yumi's ~~mother~~ had ~~been expecting Yuuki's friends to come over, so there was a very large possibility that this winter would be filled with curry and stew~~. ~~But steak~~ and ~~fish need~~ to ~~be prepared one-at-a-time,~~ and ~~if there aren't enough it's too dangerous to cook them in large quantities, so they~~ would ~~often run out~~.		Shortly before Touko-chan and Yumi came downstairs, Yumi's father had returned. Now the full Fukuzawa family and Touko-chan added up to five people and would surround the dinner table.

	~~Shortly before~~ Touko-chan ~~and~~ Yumi ~~came down the stairs~~, ~~Yumi~~'s ~~father had returned~~. ~~This way~~ the ~~full Fukuzawa family~~ and ~~Touko-chan would become five people and would surround~~ the ~~dinner table~~.		Touko-chan sat in the seat next to Yumi, where Yuuki would normally sit. Yuuki sat in their mother's seat. Their mother would sit at the narrow part of the table, and so on. It wasn't the normal seating arrangement, so it took a bit of shuffling to get seated.

	~~Touko-chan would sit in~~ the ~~seat next to Yumi, where Yuuki would normally sit. Yuuki would sit in their mother's seat. Their mother would sit at the narrow part of the table,~~ and ~~so on. It wasn't the normal seating arrangement, so it took a bit of shuffling to get seated.~~		"Could you pass me the Meat and Curry Dumplings?"

	~~"Could you give me the~~ Meat and Curry ~~Dumpling Curry?"~~		Yumi was tense because her father really loved Meat and Curry Dumplings. But in front of his daughter's friend, he seemed not to act like he normally did.

	~~Yumi was tense because her father really loved Meat and Curry Dumplings.~~		"The salad dressing recipe was one I saw being made on TV. What do you guys think of it?"
	~~But in front of his daughter's friend, he seemed not to act like he normally did.~~

	"The salad dressing recipe was one I saw being made on TV. What do you guys think of it?"

	Both Yumi's mother and father were being excellent hosts.		Both Yumi's mother and father were being excellent hosts.

	"Everything is great, Mrs. Fukuzawa. You must be good at cooking."		"Everything is great, Mrs. Fukuzawa. You must be good at cooking."

	Touko-chan seemed to really find the food tasty. She asked about the type of cheese used in the meat dumplings, and asked for the amount of the secret ingredient ~~Balsamic Vinegar~~ in the dressing.		Touko-chan seemed to really find the food tasty. She asked about the type of cheese used in the meat dumplings, and asked for the amount of the secret ingredient, balsamic vinegar, in the dressing.

	She asked it all without flattery. Yumi did not know whether Touko-chan planned on really going back home and trying some of these recipes ~~out~~, ~~but~~ her mother was very happy when Touko-chan did not simply say the food was tasty, but also asked how the food was made and what ingredients went into it.		She asked it all without flattery. Yumi did not know whether Touko-chan planned on really going back home and trying out some of these recipes. Nevertheless, her mother was very happy when Touko-chan did not simply say the food was tasty, but also asked how the food was made and what ingredients went into it.

	"Is this rice ... white rice?"		"Is this rice ... white rice?"

	"It's a medley of brown rice, barley, and white rice. I prepare it with the curry."		"It's a medley of brown rice, barley, and white rice. I prepare it with the curry."

	Yumi's mother would change the ratio of one rice to the other in each batch, so she told Touko-chan that she couldn't give a definite number. Yumi didn't know anyone who'd ask a question about the ratio. Obviously her mother would know that brown rice and barley went into the mix, but how much of each she doubted that her mother kept track.		Yumi's mother would change the ratio of one rice to the other in each batch, so she told Touko-chan that she couldn't give a definite number. Yumi didn't know anyone who'd ask a question about the ratio. Obviously her mother would know that brown rice and barley went into the mix, but how much of each she doubted that her mother kept track.

	Yumi's mother was very happy to talk to Touko-chan about such things. She was talking much more than she normally would.		Yumi's mother was very happy to talk to Touko-chan about such things. She was talking much more than she normally would.

	"Oh, speaking of white rice. When Yumi and her friends went to her Onee-sama's summer house, the rice I had sent gave Yumi the nickname Princess Koshihikari. Did you know that, Touko-chan?" <ref>In the Vacation of the Young Lambs story arc, Sachiko had invited Yumi to her summer house to enjoy the summer together. There, they met Sachiko's 'friends', a bunch of self-conscious snobs, among whom was Touko, vying to come into the Ogasawara family's favor by thrusting themselves onto Sachiko. They considered Yumi to be not on their level and made fun of her, and socially slighted her, unaware that Sachiko hardly cared about the social class of Yumi. One of the names Yumi was called was Princess Koshihikari in reference to the Koshihikari brand of rice her mother had sent to Sachiko's summer house.</ref>		"Oh, speaking of white rice. When Yumi and her friends went to her Onee-sama's summer house, the rice I had sent gave Yumi the nickname Princess Koshihikari. Did you know that, Touko-chan?" <ref>In the Vacation of the Young Lambs story arc, Sachiko had invited Yumi to her summer house to enjoy the summer together. There, they met Sachiko's 'friends', a bunch of self-conscious snobs, among whom was Touko, vying to come into the Ogasawara family's favor by thrusting themselves onto Sachiko. They considered Yumi to be not on their level and made fun of her, and socially slighted her, unaware that Sachiko hardly cared about the social class of Yumi. One of the names Yumi was called was Princess Koshihikari in reference to the Koshihikari brand of rice her mother had sent to Sachiko's summer house.</ref> Well she hadn't been expecting that subject to come up, but it was too late.

	~~W... well~~ she ~~wasn~~'t expecting that subject to come up~~. But~~ it was too late.

	It wasn't as if Touko-chan had been the ~~main one to come~~ up with the name, so Yumi thought it probably would not bother her excessively. I mean, if Touko chan wasn't the 'Person who made the name' and was instead the 'Person who eventually laughed at the name' then they were two completely different things.		It wasn't as if Touko-chan had been the instigator that came up with the name, so Yumi thought it probably would not bother her excessively. I mean, if Touko chan wasn't the 'Person who made the name' and was instead the 'Person who eventually laughed at the name' then they were two completely different things.

	As expected, Touko-chan became obviously dejected, and whispered.		As expected, Touko-chan became obviously dejected, and whispered.

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	Yumi's mother was very happy to talk to Touko-chan about such things. She was talking much more than she normally would.		Yumi's mother was very happy to talk to Touko-chan about such things. She was talking much more than she normally would.

	"Oh, speaking of white rice. When Yumi and her friends went to her Onee-sama's summer house, the rice I had sent gave Yumi the nickname Princess Koshihikari. Did you know that, Touko-chan?"		"Oh, speaking of white rice. When Yumi and her friends went to her Onee-sama's summer house, the rice I had sent gave Yumi the nickname Princess Koshihikari. Did you know that, Touko-chan?" <ref>In the Vacation of the Young Lambs story arc, Sachiko had invited Yumi to her summer house to enjoy the summer together. There, they met Sachiko's 'friends', a bunch of self-conscious snobs, among whom was Touko, vying to come into the Ogasawara family's favor by thrusting themselves onto Sachiko. They considered Yumi to be not on their level and made fun of her, and socially slighted her, unaware that Sachiko hardly cared about the social class of Yumi. One of the names Yumi was called was Princess Koshihikari in reference to the Koshihikari brand of rice her mother had sent to Sachiko's summer house.</ref>

	~~(TL S:~~ In the Vacation of the Young Lambs story arc, Sachiko had invited Yumi to her summer house to enjoy the summer together. There, they met Sachiko's 'friends', a bunch of self-conscious snobs, among whom was Touko, vying to come into the Ogasawara family's favor by thrusting themselves onto Sachiko. They considered Yumi to be not on their level and made fun of her, and socially slighted her, unaware that Sachiko hardly cared about the social class of Yumi. One of the names Yumi was called was Princess Koshihikari in reference to the Koshihikari brand of rice her mother had sent to Sachiko's summer house.)

	W... well she wasn't expecting that subject to come up. But it was too late.		W... well she wasn't expecting that subject to come up. But it was too late.

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The menu was exactly what it smelled like -- curry and salad.

The meal had been being cooked from before Yumi had called Kashiwagi-san, so it was a surprisingly tasty spread.

The Fukuzawa home's curry was made in huge quantities, so if one or two extra people would join them it would be fine. Yumi's mother also enjoyed cooking such huge quantities. Yumi's mother had been expecting Yuuki's friends to come over, so there was a very large possibility that this winter would be filled with curry and stew. But steak and fish need to be prepared one-at-a-time, and if there aren't enough it's too dangerous to cook them in large quantities, so they would often run out.

Shortly before Touko-chan and Yumi came down the stairs, Yumi's father had returned. This way the full Fukuzawa family and Touko-chan would become five people and would surround the dinner table.

Touko-chan would sit in the seat next to Yumi, where Yuuki would normally sit. Yuuki would sit in their mother's seat. Their mother would sit at the narrow part of the table, and so on. It wasn't the normal seating arrangement, so it took a bit of shuffling to get seated.

"Could you give me the Meat and Curry Dumpling Curry?"

Yumi was tense because her father really loved Meat and Curry Dumplings.
But in front of his daughter's friend, he seemed not to act like he normally did.

"The salad dressing recipe was one I saw being made on TV. What do you guys think of it?"

Both Yumi's mother and father were being excellent hosts.

"Everything is great, Mrs. Fukuzawa. You must be good at cooking."

Touko-chan seemed to really find the food tasty. She asked about the type of cheese used in the meat dumplings, and asked for the amount of the secret ingredient Balsamic Vinegar in the dressing.

She asked it all without flattery. Yumi did not know whether Touko-chan planned on really going back home and trying some of these recipes out, but her mother was very happy when Touko-chan did not simply say the food was tasty, but also asked how the food was made and what ingredients went into it.

"Is this rice ... white rice?"

"It's a medley of brown rice, barley, and white rice. I prepare it with the curry."

Yumi's mother would change the ratio of one rice to the other in each batch, so she told Touko-chan that she couldn't give a definite number. Yumi didn't know anyone who'd ask a question about the ratio. Obviously her mother would know that brown rice and barley went into the mix, but how much of each she doubted that her mother kept track.

Yumi's mother was very happy to talk to Touko-chan about such things. She was talking much more than she normally would.

"Oh, speaking of white rice. When Yumi and her friends went to her Onee-sama's summer house, the rice I had sent gave Yumi the nickname Princess Koshihikari. Did you know that, Touko-chan?"

(TL S: In the Vacation of the Young Lambs story arc, Sachiko had invited Yumi to her summer house to enjoy the summer together. There, they met Sachiko's 'friends', a bunch of self-conscious snobs, among whom was Touko, vying to come into the Ogasawara family's favor by thrusting themselves onto Sachiko. They considered Yumi to be not on their level and made fun of her, and socially slighted her, unaware that Sachiko hardly cared about the social class of Yumi. One of the names Yumi was called was Princess Koshihikari in reference to the Koshihikari brand of rice her mother had sent to Sachiko's summer house.)

W... well she wasn't expecting that subject to come up. But it was too late.

It wasn't as if Touko-chan had been the main one to come up with the name, so Yumi thought it probably would not bother her excessively. I mean, if Touko chan wasn't the 'Person who made the name' and was instead the 'Person who eventually laughed at the name' then they were two completely different things.

As expected, Touko-chan became obviously dejected, and whispered.

"... There are some bad people out there in this world."

"Touko-chan, you're being too hard on yourself."

Yumi's mother laughed warmly. Yumi explained to Touko-chan.

"Mom really liked the name."

"Princess Koshihikari?"

Unable to fathom this, Touko-chan knit her eyebrows together.

"Yeah. Don't you think it has a much better ring to it than Princess Sasanishiki or Princess Hitomebore? I'm glad I sent Koshihikari. But you know, Princess Unwashed-Rice sounds more story-like, much more story-like."

Wasn't Princess Koshihikari more than enough? But because Yumi's mother was glowingly smiling, she let the irritation go, and even Touko-chan let out a small laugh.

"Yumi-sama's family talks about almost everything."

At which, Yumi's father laughed solitarily.

"Nope. There are a lot of things we don't talk about at home. Because we don't understand a lot of things, so."

Like a bride's father, Yumi's father talked solemnly, and Yumi's mother suddenly caught on.

"Honey, why did you suddenly become so serious? That's what friends are for. Touko-chan, please engage Yumi in some good conversation."

"I, well."

"Don't hold back. I think Touko-chan is great with conversation."

When Yumi heard her mother's words, conversely she wondered if she could become a good conversation partner for Touko-chan.

Had Touko-chan not been picked up by Yuuki, she wouldn't have come to this house.

Just why had she left home? That was one topic that they could not converse about.

Just why.

What had happened.

Maybe if she just asked once.

But even though she hadn't come here looking for Yumi's help, if she asked the question after she let Touko-chan in the house, Touko-chan would hesitate.

Then she would become afraid.

"This is none of Yumi-sama's business."

She'd be denied. -- When she thought of the denial, she felt too scared to ask.