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OtonashiDiva: translator note and some format standard fixes

2017-06-12T00:19:20Z

translator note and some format standard fixes

RedGlassesGirl at 22:34, 21 February 2017

2017-02-21T22:34:44Z

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	The Dugald’s speed craft was zooming ahead at three times the normal speed (compared to usual boats/ships).		The Dugald’s speed craft was zooming ahead at three times the normal speed (compared to usual boats/ships).

	Its hull was painted bright red because it was a gallant ship that was covered in the blood of its enemies in the second Central Red Sea naval battle. Therefore, people call it ‘The Red ~~Starfish’~~ as a way to instill that fear.		Its hull was painted bright red because it was a gallant ship that was covered in the blood of its enemies in the second Central Red Sea naval battle. Therefore, people call it ‘The Red Sea Comet’ as a way to instill that fear.

	“We Dugalds have been warriors of the sea for generations, and this would have to start from the tale of Lord Mindair Dugald, who fought the pirates in the north by himself...”		“We Dugalds have been warriors of the sea for generations, and this would have to start from the tale of Lord Mindair Dugald, who fought the pirates in the north by himself...”
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	There was a golden sign mounted on the entranceway with some small text inscribed on it. I read the text by tracing it with my fingers. It would be great if all the books in The Great Demon Kingdom were like this.		There was a golden sign mounted on the entranceway with some small text inscribed on it. I read the text by tracing it with my fingers. It would be great if all the books in The Great Demon Kingdom were like this.

	“But still, ‘The Red ~~Starfish~~?'”		“But still, ‘The Red Sea Comet?'”

	"It's like Char."		"It's like Char<ref>Reference to Char Aznable from Gundam, who pilots a red mecha and it's also called The Red Comet. The next comment Yuuri makes is probably a reference to Khan Oliver, a german soccer player Murata likes a lot.</ref>."

	“Who's that? Some german athlete?”		“Who's that? Some german athlete?”
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	Hey, don’t look down on me! I at least know Bundesliga and about the Series A.		Hey, don’t look down on me! I at least know Bundesliga and about the Series A.

	Anyway, if I had to describe how it feels like to travel across the sea at three times the normal speed, I would immediately think of watching a video recording at three times the usual speed. Our surroundings slid past us in a blur. There was the ocean, the waves, the sky, the clouds, the seagulls and the algae. As we were going round the coast of the southern shore, a normal ship would take nearly fifteen days for us to get to make the trip. However, as this was the incredible ‘Red ~~Starfish’~~, it would only take us approximately five days to get there.		Anyway, if I had to describe how it feels like to travel across the sea at three times the normal speed, I would immediately think of watching a video recording at three times the usual speed. Our surroundings slid past us in a blur. There was the ocean, the waves, the sky, the clouds, the seagulls and the algae. As we were going round the coast of the southern shore, a normal ship would take nearly fifteen days for us to get to make the trip. However, as this was the incredible ‘Red Sea Comet’, it would only take us approximately five days to get there.

	“Five days is still too slow, we need to get there in four days!”		“Five days is still too slow, we need to get there in four days!”
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	The grand farewell party continued for a long time.		The grand farewell party continued for a long time.

	The journey on sea was quite alright. Although this was a craft designed for maneuvering through narrow spaces, The Red ~~Starfish~~ still had enough facilities for a few dozen people. As it was basically a craft built for war, there were no semi-double beds. Although the three of us slept in the Captain’s quarters, it was hard to call comfortable.		The journey on sea was quite alright. Although this was a craft designed for maneuvering through narrow spaces, The Red Sea Comet still had enough facilities for a few dozen people. As it was basically a craft built for war, there were no semi-double beds. Although the three of us slept in the Captain’s quarters, it was hard to call comfortable.

	Not only were my days spent out on the deck, even my nights were spent in my stargazing. In other words, we were outside nearly all day long. We really would have to make winter preparations.		Not only were my days spent out on the deck, even my nights were spent in my stargazing. In other words, we were outside nearly all day long. We really would have to make winter preparations.
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	“If that’s the case, why do we have to hide?”		“If that’s the case, why do we have to hide?”

	The Red ~~Starfish~~ had almost completely stopped.		The Red Sea Comet had almost completely stopped.

	Josak was incredibly happy as he pushed Murata and me along by the shoulders.		Josak was incredibly happy as he pushed Murata and me along by the shoulders.

RedGlassesGirl at 20:14, 17 February 2017

2017-02-17T20:14:08Z

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	===Chapter 3===		===Chapter 3===

	The ~~Dugald’s~~ speed craft was zooming ahead at three times the normal speed (compared to usual boats/ships).		The Dougard’s speed craft was zooming ahead at three times the normal speed (compared to usual boats/ships).

	Its hull was painted bright red because it was a gallant ship that was covered in the blood of its enemies in the second Central Red Sea naval battle. Therefore, people call it ‘The Red Sea Comet’ as a way to instill that fear.		Its hull was painted bright red because it was a gallant ship that was covered in the blood of its enemies in the second Central Red Sea naval battle. Therefore, people call it ‘The Red Sea Comet’ as a way to instill that fear.

	“We ~~Dugalds~~ have been warriors of the sea for generations, and this would have to start from the tale of Lord Mindair ~~Dugald~~, who fought the pirates in the north by himself...”		“We Dougards have been warriors of the sea for generations, and this would have to start from the tale of Lord Dougard Mindair, who fought the pirates in the north by himself...”

	And with that, the long story of the ~~Dugald~~ family began.		And with that, the long story of the Dougard family began.

	There was a golden sign mounted on the ~~entranceway~~ with some small text inscribed on it. I read the text by tracing it with my fingers. It would be great if all the books in ~~The Great Demon Kingdom~~ were like this.		There was a golden sign mounted on the entrance way with some small text inscribed on it. I read the text by tracing it with my fingers. It would be great if all the books in Shin Makoku were like this.

	“But still, ‘The Red Sea Comet?'”		“But still, ‘The Red Sea Comet?'”

	"It's like Char<ref>Reference to Char Aznable from Gundam, who pilots a red mecha ~~and it~~'~~s also called~~ The Red Comet. The ~~next comment Yuuri makes~~ is ~~probably a reference to Khan Oliver, a german soccer player Murata likes a lot~~.</ref>."		"It's like Char<ref>Reference to Char Aznable from Gundam who pilots a red mecha called 'The Red Comet' that also went three times faster than normal. In the original Japanese, the name of the ship is actually 'the Red Starfish' and is a pun that does not make sense at all in English. The way comet is written in Japanese is 彗星(comet-star) and starfish is 海星(sea-star) so it's kind of like the word 'sea' was inserted into comet hence us using 'the Red Sea Comet' so the pun would still make sense in English.</ref>."

	“Who's that? Some german athlete?”		“Who's that? Some german athlete?”
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	“Five days is still too slow, we need to get there in four days!”		“Five days is still too slow, we need to get there in four days!”

	~~Captain~~ Hicks ~~Dugald the Second~~ told me assertively, “That’s impossible.”		The captain, Lord Dougard Hicks II, told me assertively, “That’s impossible.”

	“... Then I guess five days would do just as well...”		“... Then I guess five days would do just as well...”
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	Josak had concentrated on his beloved woodwork from the very first day. Dacascos, with his pencil behind his ear, was helping him with the coloring. Maybe Sizemore was not used to spending his time on board someone else’s ship as he kept pacing around the deck. Only Flynn spent all her time in her cabin. She was probably worried about leaving the rebuilding of Caloria in the hands of a foreign rescue troop.		Josak had concentrated on his beloved woodwork from the very first day. Dacascos, with his pencil behind his ear, was helping him with the coloring. Maybe Sizemore was not used to spending his time on board someone else’s ship as he kept pacing around the deck. Only Flynn spent all her time in her cabin. She was probably worried about leaving the rebuilding of Caloria in the hands of a foreign rescue troop.

	However, Gisela and a group of professional healers and relief workers were in the rescue troop from ~~The Great Demon Kingdom~~. It was definitely better to leave the rescue mission in their hands rather than let someone inexperienced handle it. Flynn just had to trust me on this.		However, Gisela and a group of professional healers and relief workers were in the rescue troop from Shin Makoku. It was definitely better to leave the rescue mission in their hands rather than let someone inexperienced handle it. Flynn just had to trust me on this.

	“I-i-i-i-i-i-t's really q-q-q-q-uite c-c-c-cold."		“I-i-i-i-i-i-t's really q-q-q-q-uite c-c-c-cold."
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	"A-a-a-and when you t-t-t-try to t-t-talk, you b-b-b-bite your tongue."		"A-a-a-and when you t-t-t-try to t-t-talk, you b-b-b-bite your tongue."

	As we were moving forward at three times the usual speed, we would have to be prepared to face three times the wind. The motor of this little craft was in really good condition. The inner portions of the motor had a strange smell. According to the engineers, this proved that the magic speed device was functioning properly. If it's being powered by ~~magic~~, why does it smell like sulfur?		As we were moving forward at three times the usual speed, we would have to be prepared to face three times the wind. The motor of this little craft was in really good condition. The inner portions of the motor had a strange smell. According to the engineers, this proved that the magic speed device was functioning properly. If it's being powered by maryoku, why does it smell like sulfur?

	This device was the proudly made product of Lady ~~Anissina~~ von Karbelnikoff. It was definitely different from the other products on the market.		This device was the proudly made product of Lady von Karbelnikoff Anissina. It was definitely different from the other products on the market.

	“W-w-w-what ‘s the p-p-p-p-pretty boy d-d-d-doing?”		“W-w-w-what ‘s the p-p-p-p-pretty boy d-d-d-doing?”