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	Adalbert tosses ~~the~~ filthy rolled-up carpet onto the ground~~, and~~ the caterpillar-like ~~thing groans softly, lying there~~.		Adalbert tosses a filthy rolled-up carpet onto the ground. A soft moan escapes from the caterpillar-like package.

	“Here, what you wanted.”		“Here, what you wanted.”
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	“I thank you on behalf of my father.”		“I thank you on behalf of my father.”

	“Torture him all you ~~want, the guy doesn’t~~ die ~~easily~~.”		“Torture him all you want．He won't die no matter what.”

	~~The~~ next generation of the von Christ clan, Gisela, ~~stands in the large captain’s quarters,~~ her hands on her hips and ~~her gaze cold as she~~ looks down at the thing wrapped up in the carpet.		In the large captain's quarters, the next generation of the von Christ clan, Gisela, places her hands on her hips and looks down with a cold gaze at the thing wrapped up in the carpet. Although her face is bloodless and has a sickly color, out of all the people in the room, she is the healthiest. Since she had just completed the long-term mission of aiding the restoration of Caloria, even though she can't use maryoku on account of the location, her body and soul are in top form.

	Although her face is ~~pale~~ and ~~bloodless~~, she is ~~actually in better shape than everyone else present~~.

	~~Having~~ just completed a long-term mission, aiding the restoration of Caloria, even though she ~~didn’t get an acclimatization period and can’t~~ use ~~magic here~~, her body and soul are in top form.

	As for her adopted father, Lord von Christ Günter, since he was nearly burned in a fire, and then he unfortunately fell into the sea, add that to the nausea brought on by the houryoku, and all three factors have finally defeated him, so he is currently collapsed in the adjacent room.		As for her adopted father, Lord von Christ Günter, since he was nearly burned in a fire, and then he unfortunately fell into the sea, add that to the nausea brought on by the houryoku, and all three factors have finally defeated him, so he is currently collapsed in the adjacent room.

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	“Thanks, Gurrier, I’m so tired<ref>Yuuri here is using a famous line from 'A Dog of Flanders' that a boy says to his dog right before the both of them freeze to death. It's made obvious by the fact that he's using 'boku' for 'I' instead of 'ore' which is what he usually uses.</ref> … Feel like sleeping… Eh, wait a sec! What’s with this tremor?”		“Thanks, Gurrier, I’m so tired<ref>Yuuri here is using a famous line from 'A Dog of Flanders' that a boy says to his dog right before the both of them freeze to death. It's made obvious by the fact that he's using 'boku' for 'I' instead of 'ore' which is what he usually uses.</ref> … Feel like sleeping… Eh, wait a sec! What’s with this tremor?”

	A small tremor different from the movement of the waves~~, is transmitted throughout my body from~~ my palms and knees on the ~~ground~~.		I felt a small tremor different from the movement of the waves through my palms and knees on the floorboards. It's not the gentle rocking of an ocean journey that I've gotten completely used to. It's a 'rocking' that feels stronger, like an electrical motor.

	~~Unlike the familiar rocking of a ship, this feels stronger, almost like the purr of~~ an ~~electrical motor~~.		"It's an ocean current."

	“It’s a ~~current~~!”		“It’s a giant octopus!” <ref>I realize giant squid have been established at this point, but Josak really does say octopus here XD</ref>

	~~“It’s a giant squid!”~~		The owner of the ship, Shou Shimaron king Saralegui, and the VETERAN soldier, Josak, make their predictions at the same time.

	~~The owner of the ship, Shou Shimaron king Saralegui,~~ and ~~the experienced soldier, Josak, make their predictions at the same time~~.		Sara hardens his expression and begins to explain.

	~~Sara says with~~ a ~~solemn expression~~,		“The ocean around Seisakoku has currents that change form according to the seasons, so there are only certain time frames throughout the year when they can cross the sea. We predicted that there were only a few more days for this year and thought that we should be able to make it across these waters in time, but after all the sea is also a part of nature. Perhaps the path of the current changed earlier than expected.”

	“Recently the ocean around Seisakoku has currents that change form according to the seasons, so there are only certain time frames throughout the year when they can cross the sea. We predicted that there should be a few more days for this year, and thought that we should be able to make it across these waters in time, but after all the sea is also a part of nature, perhaps the path of the current changed earlier than expected.”		I don't really understand, but maybe it's like the tides in a whirlpool. And the tremor that I could only feel in my hands and feet before is now getting more and more intense, the whole ship shaking so badly it makes one wonder if there’s a submarine approaching. The bottle on the table starts clattering and the liquid inside spills out.

	~~I’m a bit dazed after listening to that~~, but it ~~should be something~~ like ~~how, when~~ the ~~tide rises and falls, there are loud sounds at the bay caused by whirlpools~~.

	And the tremor that I could only feel in my hands and feet before is now getting more and more intense, the whole ship shaking so badly it makes one wonder if there’s a submarine approaching.

	The bottle on the table starts clattering~~. The~~ liquid inside spills out.

	“What’s the worst case scenario?”		“What’s the worst case scenario?”

	~~“I’m not too~~ sure~~, either, because~~ I ~~also~~ only experienced this when I was an infant. ~~But~~ I heard that if you get pulled into the current, even the most experienced ~~seamen~~ will find it ~~hard~~ to ~~get out; if it’s~~ an inexperienced cargo ship helmsman, then ~~we’ll~~ never reach Seisakoku no matter ~~what~~. And not just that, the chances of the ship sinking are also…”		“I can't say for sure. Even I only experienced this when I was an infant. However, I heard that it's over if you get pulled into the current and even the most experienced sailors will find it next to impossible to escape. If it's an inexperienced cargo ship helmsman, then we'll never reach Seisakoku no matter how hard we struggle. And not just that, the chances of the ship sinking are also…”

	“But the possibility of a big ~~squid~~ is not ~~zero~~! The guy that has ten thick white tentacles, hard skin but tender flesh.”		“But the possibility it's a big octopus is not gone! The guy that has ten thick white tentacles, hard skin but tender flesh.”

	The spy happily licks his lips~~, guessing ‘it should be~~ a squid~~, right?’~~ as ~~his hand even moves to his sword~~.		That's not an octopus anymore. The spy quite happily licks his lips and puts his hand on the sword at his waist.<ref>There is a squid pun in this last sentence. Squid is 'ika' and the way 'quite' is said in this instance is 'ika ni mo.' It's one of those puns you wouldn't even recognize if said out loud as it's simply written with different characters. イカ vs. 如何</ref>

	~~“I just happen~~ to ~~have a craving for squid tempura~~ right now. I ~~want to play the role of~~ a young wife ~~in the prime of her life~~ who wants to ~~challenge~~ creative cooking ~~perfectly~~, then chop off a leg or two. ~~LET’S~~ GO! ~~Bloody~~ housewife!”		"This is perfect. What I want to eat most right now is octopus tempura. I'll become a young wife who wants to try creative cooking, then chop off a leg or two. LET'S GO! Bloodthirsty housewife!"

	~~There’s some commotion outside the cabin~~.		"The impact of you saying that in an apron isn't quite right."

	When we open the door, we see that the crewmen, panicked with their first emergency situation, are scuttling all over the large deck.		There's an abrupt commotion outside the cabin. When we open the door, we see that the crewmen, panicked with their first emergency situation, are scuttling all over the large deck.

	~~“According to calculations~~, it ~~shouldn’t be possible!”~~		"... Based on the number of days, we shouldn't have run into it yet."

	~~I’m given a shock~~ by the ~~frustrated tone~~, ~~turning~~ my head to look ~~sideways,~~ and I see Saralegui biting his thin petal-like lips~~, probably regretting the mistake in~~ his calculations.		Startled by the uncharacteristically hateful voice, I turn my head to look next to me and see Saralegui biting his thin petal-like lips. He must have been incredibly annoyed that his calculations were just a bit off.

	~~“There~~ are times in life when things ~~don’t~~ go your way, Sara, especially when ~~you’re~~ dealing with nature.”		"There are times in life when things don't go your way, Sara, especially when you're dealing with nature."

	~~“No~~ matter ~~what…”~~		"No matter what…!"

	He grips his pretty slender fingers tightly, the freshly manicured nails digging deep into his fair skin.		He grips his pretty slender fingers tightly, the freshly manicured nails digging deep into his fair skin.

	“I cannot tolerate anything not going according to plan!”		"I cannot tolerate anything not going according to plan."

	That’s a feeling of fury a king of failures like me has never experienced before.		That’s a feeling of fury a king of failures like me has never experienced before.

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	“I’m putting on nail varnish. If you don’t mind using my things, please take some. It’s normal to get small wounds on trips, since this is different from the easy castle life, after all, so we have to be careful about cracked nails.”		“I’m putting on nail varnish. If you don’t mind using my things, please take some. It’s normal to get small wounds on trips, since this is different from the easy castle life, after all, so we have to be careful about cracked nails.”

	~~“Cracked nails~~? ~~I’m~~ not a ~~pitcher… That’s~~ not what ~~I’m~~ talking about, Sara!”		“A nail-strengthening MANICURE<ref>I actually had some trouble deciding whether to capitalize this or not to show that it is an English word. Usually when Yuuri says something in English it's to show that he's using a word from an Earth language and thus the people in the other world can't understand it. In fact, I suspect a lot of the English is there to show that he's actually saying something in <i>Japanese</i>. But, this case was a bit different because there is no Japanese-origin word for manicure — or if it does exist, it's so obscure that no one knows it. Japanese people just say manicure in English. Therefore, it's hard to tell what language he was speaking here for real.</ref>? No, I'm not a PITCHER… That's not what I'm talking about, Sara!”

	“What are you so angry about, Yuuri? Have I done something to make you angry?”		“What are you so angry about, Yuuri? Have I done something to make you angry?”

	“Those ~~shinzokus…”~~		“Those shinzoku!”

	The person behind me, either Josak or Lord Weller, closes the door in time.		The person behind me, either Josak or Lord Weller, closes the door just in time.

	“How could you treat the shinzoku like that!”		“How could you treat the shinzoku like that!”
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	I can’t stop thinking about what I just saw.		I can’t stop thinking about what I just saw.

	When we descended from the storage hold, those golden eyes had looked up in unison.		When we descended from the storage hold, those golden eyes had looked up in unison. Even by the rough count under the dim light, there were at least a hundred adults there. As for the girl we met on the deck, she was in a corner cutting the stolen food into tiny portions to share around. Although the people kept holding out their hands, indicating, 'I want some too, I want some too', the food she had hidden in her chest was clearly not enough. Even so, they didn't get particularly rowdy and those who didn't get any just looked sad and gave up. They're used to it. To there not being enough food.

	~~Under the illumination of the faint light~~, we ~~made a rough headcount~~, ~~there should be around~~ a ~~hundred adults there~~.		Luckily, there weren't any young children amongst them, but we can't deport them back to their country just because they're adults. To make matters worse, squeezed in a cold and damp cellar they're making the trip home under such horrible conditions.

	~~As for the girl we met on the deck, she was in~~ a ~~corner cutting the stolen food into tiny portions~~ to ~~share around. Although the people kept holding out their hands, indicating, ‘I want some too, I want some too’, the food she had hidden in her chest was clearly not enough~~.		Forcefully sending people who had become refugees due to certain reasons home without any protection really is a very cruel thing to do.

	~~But this didn’t cause a riot amongst them~~, ~~and those~~ who ~~didn’t get any just looked disappointed~~ and ~~gave up.~~		“What were you thinking, Saralegui! Why didn't you hide the shinzoku who managed to escape to Shou Shimaron and why are you deporting back to Seisakoku instead?!”

	~~As though they were long since used~~ to ~~a shortage of food~~.		Shou Shimaron’s boy king, Saralegui, appears to not understand my anger at all.

	~~Luckily, there weren’t any young children amongst them, but we can’t deport~~ them back to ~~their~~ country ~~just because they’re adults.~~		“Because they’re citizens of Seisakoku. Isn’t sending them back to the country they grew up in the happiest thing for them?”

	~~To make matters worse, they’re~~ squeezed in a ~~cold and damp cellar~~, ~~there’s no need for them to make~~ the ~~trip home under such horrible conditions.~~		“But those people ran away from their country! And there were so many of them squeezed on such a tiny boat. Although they were reaching out for help, they aren't just your average shipwrecked crew. They're refugees, right? I saw it too. I was there at the dock then!”

	~~Forcefully sending people who had become refugees due~~ to ~~certain reasons home without any escort~~, ~~really~~ is a ~~very cruel thing to do~~.		It's a secret that I happened to take custody of two shinzoku children by coincidence. And the fact that I'm carrying the letter those fraternal twins, Zeta and Zuusha, gave me is a matter of utmost secrecy.

	~~“What on earth were you thinking? Saralegui! Why didn’t you hide the shinzoku who had gone through~~ so ~~much to escape to Shou Shimaron, and why are you deporting back to Seisakoku instead~~?!”		“Refugees… Is that so? That may be right.”

	~~Shou Shimaron’s boy king, Saralegui, replies with a look of confusion~~,		Ticked off by his nonchalant reaction, I punch the wall in my rage.

	~~“Because they’re citizens of Seisakoku, isn’t sending them back to the country they grew up in the happiest thing for them?”~~		“If so! If that is so, isn't it bad to deport them back? People flee their country because they're being persecuted or their lives were in danger. You have no idea what will happen to them if you send them back to Seisakoku without helping them!”

	“But didn’t these people just escape from their country? And there were so many of them squeezed on such a tiny boat. Although they were reaching out for help, they aren’t just your average shipwrecked crew. They should be refugees, right? I saw something like this before, at the dock!”

	~~But I don’t mention anything about incidentally saving two shinzoku children.~~

	~~And the fact that I’m carrying the latter those fraternal twins – Zeda and Zisha-- gave me, is a matter of utmost secrecy.~~

	~~“Refugees… Is that so? Maybe.”~~

	~~I’m ticked off by his nonchalant reaction, punching the wall in my rage.~~

	“If so! If that is so, ~~isn’t~~ it ~~worse~~ to deport them back? ~~They were oppressed, and felt~~ their lives were in danger~~, that’s why they dared~~ to ~~make a break for it! If~~ you ~~refuse to lend them a hand and~~ send them back to Seisakoku ~~instead, who knows what’ll happen to~~ them!”

	“Is that so?”		“Is that so?”

	Saralegui puts his pointer finger on the bridge of his glasses, then pushes it upwards~~, his movements light~~ as a feather.		Saralegui puts his pointer finger on the bridge of his glasses then lightly pushes it upwards as if he was handling a feather. His light red lips curve into an innocent smile.

	~~The~~ light red lips curve into an innocent smile.

	~~“They were oppressed? How come I never heard of that, who did you hear it from, Yuuri?”~~

	~~“I…”~~

	~~Faced with his question~~, ~~I’m at a loss for words.~~		“They were oppressed? I didn't know. Who did you hear that from, Yuuri?”

	~~Actually I didn’t hear it from anybody~~, ~~it’s just I concluded it those people begging for help at the dock, and the two children we protected earlier.~~		“… No, I…”

	I didn’t hear any ~~special inside information,~~ because we can’t understand each other, so even if I wanted to ask for the details, it is nearly impossible.		Faced with his question, I’m at a loss for words. I didn’t hear it from anybody. I just concluded it from watching those people begging for help at the dock and the two children we protected earlier. I didn’t hear any explanations because we can’t understand each other, so even if I wanted to ask for the details, it was nearly impossible.

	~~“So~~ I ~~didn’t hear it from anyone, actually I’m not too sure~~, ~~either~~.”		“No, I haven't confirmed that, really.”

	~~To be precise, even~~ if I ~~wanted~~ to ~~make sure~~, ~~I can’t~~.		Even if I had tried to, it would have been impossible.

	“But isn’t it obvious just looking at them?”		“But isn’t it obvious just looking at them?”

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	~~The large door is~~ roughly ~~pushed~~ open without ~~even a knock~~, ~~shocking~~ the owner of the ship ~~into looking~~ up.		When I roughly open the door without knocking, the head of the owner of the ship snaps up. The pale golden hair that looks almost translucent is still sticking to his fair face.

	The pale golden hair that looks almost translucent is still sticking to his fair face.

	“Yuuri?”		“Yuuri?”

	“Saralegui, do you know what ~~you’ve done~~?!”		“Saralegui, do you know what you’re doing?!”

	~~He just cocks his head slightly, looking at me through the thin lens.~~

	Slender fingers are spread across his ~~knees,~~ and there’s an undecorated bottle next to his chair.		He just cocks his head slightly, looking at me through the thin lenses. Slender fingers are spread across his lap and there’s an undecorated bottle next to his chair.

	“I’m putting on nail varnish. If you don’t mind using my things, please take some. It’s normal to get small wounds on trips, since this is different from the easy castle life, after all, so we have to be careful about cracked nails.”		“I’m putting on nail varnish. If you don’t mind using my things, please take some. It’s normal to get small wounds on trips, since this is different from the easy castle life, after all, so we have to be careful about cracked nails.”

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	It’s true, on the letter Zeda and Zisha gave me, there was nothing about seeking help.		It’s true, on the letter Zeda and Zisha gave me, there was nothing about seeking help.

	All it said was that they wished to save someone or somewhere called ~~Benila~~, and even the knowledgeable Lord von Christ Günter can’t decipher which it is.		All it said was that they wished to save someone or somewhere called Venera, and even the knowledgeable Lord von Christ Günter can’t decipher which it is.

	Then I simply let my imagination run wild, concluding on my own accord that the shinzokus are refugees.		Then I simply let my imagination run wild, concluding on my own accord that the shinzokus are refugees.

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	“Young Master, you can do it! Keep going, Young Master!”		“Young Master, you can do it! Keep going, Young Master!”

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	I’m trying. But even though I’m putting my all into it, there’s a new obstacle every time, and in that instant I’m feeling a little dejected.		I’m trying. But even though I’m putting my all into it, there’s a new obstacle every time, and in that instant I’m feeling a little dejected.
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	Unable to withstand the terror of Gisela’s aura and etcetera, people start crashing to the ground, one after another.		Unable to withstand the terror of Gisela’s aura and etcetera, people start crashing to the ground, one after another.

	“Hey, Maxine. You have siblings too, right? Don’t make them too upset. Just pretend you’re doing it for your old mom who will cry for you, just confess to compensate for your crimes. After you confess, I’ll bring you some katsudon(1).”		“Hey, Maxine. You have siblings too, right? Don’t make them too upset. Just pretend you’re doing it for your old mom who will cry for you, just confess to compensate for your crimes. After you confess, I’ll bring you some katsudon<ref>Katsudon (カツ丼?) is a popular Japanese food, a bowl of rice topped with a deep-fried pork cutlet, egg, and condiments. The dish takes its name from the Japanese words tonkatsu (for pork cutlet) and donburi (for rice bowl dish).
			It has become a modern ritual tradition for Japanese students to eat katsudon the night before taking a major test or school entrance exam. This is because "katsu" is a homophone of the verb 勝つ katsu, meaning "to win" or "to be victorious". It is also a famous gag of Japanese police films: many people think that suspects will speak the truth with tears when they have eaten katsudon and are asked, "Did you ever think about how your mother feels about this?" Even nowadays, the gag of "We must eat katsudon while interrogating" is popular in Japanese films.
			(Source from Wikipedia, of course.)
			</ref>.”

	The muscleman is actually the good cop taking the sentimental approach, what a surprising Adalbert.		The muscleman is actually the good cop taking the sentimental approach, what a surprising Adalbert.
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	1. Katsudon (カツ丼?) is a popular Japanese food, a bowl of rice topped with a deep-fried pork cutlet, egg, and condiments. The dish takes its name from the Japanese words tonkatsu (for pork cutlet) and donburi (for rice bowl dish).
	~~It has become a modern ritual tradition for Japanese students to eat katsudon the night before taking a major test or school entrance exam. This is because~~ "~~katsu~~" ~~is a homophone of the verb 勝つ katsu, meaning~~ "~~to win~~" or "~~to be victorious~~". ~~It is also a famous gag of Japanese police films~~: ~~many people think that suspects will speak the truth with tears when they have eaten katsudon and are asked,~~ "~~Did you ever think about how your mother feels about this?" Even nowadays, the gag of "We must eat katsudon while interrogating" is popular in Japanese films.~~		{\| border="1" cellpadding="5" cellspacing="0" style="margin: 1em 1em 1em 0; background: #f9f9f9; border: 1px #aaaaaa solid; padding: 0.2em; border-collapse: collapse;"
	~~(Source from Wikipedia, of course.)~~		\|-
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	Wolfram leans on the walking stick that was once Yuuri’s—‘Windpipe Number 1’, pointing at the man on the ground as he says,		Wolfram leans on the walking stick that was once Yuuri’s—‘Windpipe Number 1’, pointing at the man on the ground as he says,

	“It’s him! This is the guy who attacked Yuuri and I!”		“It’s him! This is the guy who attacked Yuuri and I, jari!<ref>The suffix Wolfram uses at the end of a sentence when he's upset/being childish. Similar to Günter's -tosa.</ref>”

	Having just recovered, his voice is still very raspy, so much so that he can’t enunciate his words properly, evoking sympathy from everybody.		Having just recovered, his voice is still very raspy, so much so that he can’t enunciate his words properly, evoking sympathy from everybody.
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	Timid Maxine is almost scared out of his wits, going one on one with the force of the Sergeant mode.		Timid Maxine is almost scared out of his wits, going one on one with the force of the Sergeant mode.

	“Let’s pretend I have here Lady von Karbelnikoff Anissina’s new ~~prototype—MaChicken~~ Danger ~~Serum~~ I and II! Do you bunch of idiots think Lady von Karbelinikoff Anissina is scary?!”		“Let’s pretend I have here Lady von Karbelnikoff Anissina’s new prototype— MAjor Danger(*) Potion I and II<ref>In Japanese マージョルノキケーン; 'maajoru no kiken' the maajoru part is a mix of "MA" and "major". So 'maajoru no kiken' can be understood as "MAjor's Danger" : the MA Sergeant Gisela's dangerous potion; but it can also refer to the side effects of mixing both potions, which as the users' manual states is (very dangerous) a major danger. </ref>! Do you bunch of idiots think Lady von Karbelinikoff Anissina is scary?!”

	“Scary, Sergeant!”		“Scary, Sergeant!”
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	“Hmph!”		“Hmph!”

	After what sounds like the yell of someone accustomed to using brute force, Gisela forces open Maxine’s jaw, stuffs the green ~~Serum~~ I inside, then she pushes the jaw joint back up, closing his mouth, setting the bones into place then grabs his head and shakes it forcefully.		After what sounds like the yell of someone accustomed to using brute force, Gisela forces open Maxine’s jaw, stuffs the green Potion I inside, then she pushes the jaw joint back up, closing his mouth, setting the bones into place then grabs his head and shakes it forcefully.

	“Since you refuse to spill, then I have no qualms using force to get you to confess! Right. Be honest with me, tell us your motives!”		“Since you refuse to spill, then I have no qualms using force to get you to confess! Right. Be honest with me, tell us your motives!”
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	Crop Pony is rocking forward, backward, left, right.		Crop Pony is rocking forward, backward, left, right.

	After ~~Serum~~ I is thoroughly shaken in Maxine’s mouth, light green bubbles start flowing down the cropped beard, symbolic of his military status.		After Potion I is thoroughly shaken in Maxine’s mouth, light green bubbles start flowing down the cropped beard, symbolic of his military status.

	And then Gisela pinches a horizontal long bottle, raising it high into the afternoon sun.		And then Gisela pinches a horizontal long bottle, raising it high into the afternoon sun.

	“After that, this seems to be the blood red ~~Serum~~ II. After drinking ~~Serum~~ I, if you drink ~~Serum~~ II within a certain timeframe…”		“After that, this seems to be the blood red Potion II. After drinking Potion I, if you drink Potion II within a certain timeframe…”

	“Blergh—What happens if you drink that?! Bleergghh—If those two mix, will it be dangerous or not?! Or is ~~Serum~~ II the antidote? What the hell is it? Blergh?!”		“Blergh—What happens if you drink that?! Bleergghh—If those two mix, will it be dangerous or not?! Or is Potion II the antidote? What the hell is it? Blergh?!”

	“If you want to know, hurry up and spill it! Might as well tell you, the manual says, ‘Anissina is composed half of gentleness’… Hmph!”		“If you want to know, hurry up and spill it! Might as well tell you, the manual says, ‘Anissina is composed half of gentleness’… Hmph!”
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	Succumbing to the tense atmosphere, Dakaskos falls backwards like a log.		Succumbing to the tense atmosphere, Dakaskos falls backwards like a log.

	Although he didn’t take the MaChicken Danger ~~Serum~~, but he’s foaming in the mouth and white in the eyes.		Although he didn’t take the MaChicken Danger Potion, but he’s foaming in the mouth and white in the eyes.

	Even the cold onlooker, the only anti-mazoku Adalbert speaks up,		Even the cold onlooker, the only anti-mazoku Adalbert speaks up,