Monster Hunter:Volume1 Chapter2 - Revision history

Barnnn: Fixed paragraphs' structures to be closer to the raws

2017-08-02T10:29:13Z

Fixed paragraphs' structures to be closer to the raws

Barnnn: fixed typo

2017-07-16T14:38:03Z

fixed typo

← Older revision		Revision as of 14:38, 16 July 2017
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	“Is it strange?”		“Is it strange?”

	“You see, I’ve wondering about how teams are formed.”		“You see, I’ve been wondering about how teams are formed.”

	“Well...”		“Well...”

Barnnn: Fixed Translation Error (Diablos Hammer > Diablos Maul)

2017-07-03T14:57:38Z

Fixed Translation Error (Diablos Hammer > Diablos Maul)

← Older revision		Revision as of 14:57, 3 July 2017
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	“But you were wrong?”		“But you were wrong?”

	“Yes. It was an impressive display. Even in the thick jungle, she wielded the Diablos ~~Hammer~~ effectively. She looked for the pack’s alpha and rushed it down, crushing its head with her hammer... The Iopreys, seeing the young lady lift her blood-soaked hammer from the alpha's pulverized head, immediately fled. Only a first-rate hunter could land a blow that swift and accurate.”		“Yes. It was an impressive display. Even in the thick jungle, she wielded the Diablos Maul effectively. She looked for the pack’s alpha and rushed it down, crushing its head with her hammer... The Iopreys, seeing the young lady lift her blood-soaked hammer from the alpha's pulverized head, immediately fled. Only a first-rate hunter could land a blow that swift and accurate.”

	“She really doesn’t look the part though...”		“She really doesn’t look the part though...”
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	“...Is everyone ready?”		“...Is everyone ready?”

	Elmeria looked around once equipped her Rathalos Vambraces, then picked up the Diablos ~~Hammer~~, resting it on her shoulder.		Elmeria looked around once equipped her Rathalos Vambraces, then picked up the Diablos Maul, resting it on her shoulder.

	Gannon silently put on his Diablo Helm.		Gannon silently put on his Diablo Helm.
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	“It’s here! ---Let’s go! Zeeg, stay back!”		“It’s here! ---Let’s go! Zeeg, stay back!”

	With that said, Elmeria put away the Diablos ~~Hammer~~ on her back and picked up her bag.		With that said, Elmeria put away the Diablos Maul on her back and picked up her bag.

	She then took out a Flash Bomb and held it in her hand.		She then took out a Flash Bomb and held it in her hand.
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	“Hereee Goes!!”		“Hereee Goes!!”

	Without hesitating, she swung down the Diablos ~~Hammer~~ with all her strength.		Without hesitating, she swung down the Diablos Maul with all her strength.

	The hammer made a direct hit to the Rathalos’ head, causing a loud thumping sound.		The hammer made a direct hit to the Rathalos’ head, causing a loud thumping sound.

Sir Trollface: /* Chapter 2 - First Quest */ Typo fix: feld to fled

2017-04-28T11:33:03Z

Chapter 2 - First Quest: Typo fix: feld to fled

← Older revision		Revision as of 11:33, 28 April 2017
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	“But you were wrong?”		“But you were wrong?”

	“Yes. It was an impressive display. Even in the thick jungle, she wielded the Diablos Hammer effectively. She looked for the pack’s alpha and rushed it down, crushing its head with her hammer... The Iopreys, seeing the young lady lift her blood-soaked hammer from the alpha's pulverized head, immediately ~~feld~~. Only a first-rate hunter could land a blow that swift and accurate.”		“Yes. It was an impressive display. Even in the thick jungle, she wielded the Diablos Hammer effectively. She looked for the pack’s alpha and rushed it down, crushing its head with her hammer... The Iopreys, seeing the young lady lift her blood-soaked hammer from the alpha's pulverized head, immediately fled. Only a first-rate hunter could land a blow that swift and accurate.”

	“She really doesn’t look the part though...”		“She really doesn’t look the part though...”

Barnnn: Added V1 Chaper 2

2017-04-24T03:53:18Z

Added V1 Chaper 2

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