Monster Hunter:Volume1 Chapter5 - Revision history

Barnnn at 20:06, 18 June 2018

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	“Those people really are idiots... Thinking they can contain us just by putting us in here.”		“Those people really are idiots... Thinking they can contain us just by putting us in here.”

	Elmeria let out a merry laugh while sitting cross legged on the floor. During her time here, she ~~has~~ lost count of the amount of beer she drank. ~~After chugging~~ down another, she banged the mug on the floor.		Elmeria let out a merry laugh while sitting cross legged on the floor. During her time here, she had already lost count of the amount of beer she drank. Cugging down another, she then banged the mug on the floor.

	“What do you mean?”		“What do you mean?”
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	The strike was so strong that his shoulder could have been dislocated.		The strike was so strong that his shoulder could have been dislocated.

	Her brute strength shouldn’t be surprising, since the girl ~~can~~ wield the massive Diablos Maul without breaking a sweat. However, her build ~~doesn’t give~~ Zeeg ~~that~~ impression ~~at all~~, causing the boy to let his guard down.		Her brute strength shouldn’t be surprising, since the girl could wield the massive Diablos Maul without breaking a sweat. However, her build never gave Zeeg such an impression, causing the boy to let his guard down.

	“You listening? This vet will get you up to speed.”		“You listening? This vet will get you up to speed.”
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	To express her hopelessness for the boy, Elmeria shook her head.		To express her hopelessness for the boy, Elmeria shook her head.

	“How, you ask? First of all, the weapons are pointed to the outside right? If they’re going use it on us, there would be one pointed at the gathering hall from the beginning. They require the use of Aptonoths to move around, so they wouldn’t do something inefficient like pointing the weapons outwards just to turn them back later. And of course, pointing the cannons at us from the start will work really well as intimidation. That means they’re trying to use those weapons here to do something, and us hunters will get in their way- How’s that for an explanation!?”		“How, you ask? First of all, the weapons are pointed to the outside, right? If they’re going use it on us, there would be one pointed at the gathering hall from the beginning. They require the use of Aptonoths to move around, so they wouldn’t do something inefficient like pointing the weapons outwards just to turn them back later. And of course, pointing the cannons at us from the start will work really well as intimidation. That means they’re trying to use those weapons here to do something, and us hunters will get in their way- How’s that for an explanation!?”

	The girl swung her arm again, but this time Zeeg anticipated it and dodged.		The girl swung her arm again, but this time Zeeg anticipated it and dodged.

	The ~~force from~~ her missed strike caused the girl fall over, and Gannon grabbed her before she hit the ground. From the looks of it, she ~~has~~ been drunk this whole time.		The momentum of her missed strike caused the girl fall over, and Gannon grabbed her before she hit the ground. From the looks of it, she had been drunk this whole time.

	“Ah, drunk already? ~~That’s~~ a rare sight.”		“Ah, drunk already? That is a rare sight indeed.”

	Feeling someone’s presence and hearing a familiar voice, Zeeg instantly turned around.		Feeling someone’s presence and hearing a familiar voice, Zeeg instantly turned around.
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	Elmeria's clear voice made Zeeg blink in confusion.		Elmeria's clear voice made Zeeg blink in confusion.

	It was like she sobered up instantly. Even though her cheeks are still slightly red, she ~~has~~ a determined look in her eyes.		It was like she sobered up instantly. Even though her cheeks are still slightly red, she had a determined look in her eyes.

	Fradio nodded, then stood up and walked up to the quest board. He took out the roll of paper that was slipped on his waist, opened it up, and flattened it on the board.		Fradio nodded, then stood up and walked up to the quest board. He took out the roll of paper that was slipped on his waist, opened it up, and flattened it on the board.
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	All of the hunters laughed merrily.		All of the hunters laughed merrily.

	Lao-Shan Lung... Zeeg ~~has~~ also heard of that name.		Lao-Shan Lung... Zeeg had also heard of that name.

	The name means “Old Mountain Dragon”- and the classification is completely different from the Rathalos. Ancient creatures that have lived since the antiquity, their sheer size is what makes them a threat.		The name means “Old Mountain Dragon”- and the classification is completely different from the Rathalos. Ancient creatures that have lived since the antiquity, their sheer size is what makes them a threat.
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	(“Wha...What was that!?”)		(“Wha...What was that!?”)

	It was a sound that he ~~has~~ heard once before.		It was a sound that he had heard once before.

	Not too long ago, in fact.		Not too long ago, in fact.
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	Fradio nonchalantly spoke up while looking at the sky from the King room’s window.		Fradio nonchalantly spoke up while looking at the sky from the King room’s window.

	Standing next to him is Narumi who, like Zeeg, ~~has~~ gone pale due to not covering her ears in time. Looking at the girl, Elmeria let out her usual arrogant snort and shook her body as if to show off her Rathalos equipment.		Standing next to him is Narumi who, like Zeeg, had gone pale due to not covering her ears in time. Looking at the girl, Elmeria let out her usual arrogant snort and shook her body as if to show off her Rathalos equipment.

	After the meeting in the gathering hall, the hunters made their way to the guest houses using a secret passage.		After the meeting in the gathering hall, the hunters made their way to the guest houses using a secret passage.
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	The destructive power was so great that it could have a chance at defeating the Lao-Shan Lung... that was the thought that popped up in the boy’s mind.		The destructive power was so great that it could have a chance at defeating the Lao-Shan Lung... that was the thought that popped up in the boy’s mind.

	But at the same time, Zeeg ~~has~~ mixed feelings about it. He couldn’t get the conflicting thoughts out of his head- that this method of killing is wrong.		But at the same time, Zeeg had mixed feelings about it. He couldn’t get the conflicting thoughts out of his head- that this method of killing is wrong.

	That it makes the wyvern’s death meaningless.		That it makes the wyvern’s death meaningless.
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	Even though there is a swarm of fire wyverns in the sky, only one cannon was used to intercept them. Part of the reason was because of the weapon’s weight, but it was mostly due to fear of the Lao-Shan Lung that the he didn’t approve the use of other cannons.		Even though there is a swarm of fire wyverns in the sky, only one cannon was used to intercept them. Part of the reason was because of the weapon’s weight, but it was mostly due to fear of the Lao-Shan Lung that the he didn’t approve the use of other cannons.

	In any case, everyone rejoiced the fact that the cannon’s first shot was able to easily take down a Rathalos. The Dragon Destroyer has exhibited even ~~more~~ power than expected!		In any case, everyone rejoiced the fact that the cannon’s first shot was able to easily take down a Rathalos. The Dragon Destroyer has exhibited even greater power than expected!

	However, they also knew as a fact that preparing the second shot will take time.		However, they also knew as a fact that preparing the second shot will take time.
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	One of the knights who were tied up on the ground shouted out in surprise.		One of the knights who were tied up on the ground shouted out in surprise.

	It was the knight who provoked Gannon earlier. Black burning spots appeared all over his armor, and his hair ~~has~~ turned to charcoal. His face also suffered quite a severe burn.		It was the knight who provoked Gannon earlier. Black burning spots appeared all over his armor, and his hair had turned to charcoal. His face also suffered quite a severe burn.

	“H...Help... Please...”		“H...Help... Please...”
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	Hearing a commotion break out in the gathering hall, Zeeg heads to the plaza- which has now become the hunting grounds.		Hearing a commotion break out in the gathering hall, Zeeg heads to the plaza- which has now become the hunting grounds.

	Hot winds constantly blew in the area. It’s like he was in the volcano region which he ~~has~~ heard about.		Hot winds constantly blew in the area. It’s like he was in the volcano region which he had heard about.

	(“S...Scary...”)		(“S...Scary...”)
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	Elmeria, who is ahead of him, is carrying even a bigger roll.		Elmeria, who is ahead of him, is carrying even a bigger roll.

	Outside, groups of hunters are fighting against the Rathalos with all they have. Quite a few have already fainted, but Gannon is still standing strong. He rushed into the fray, drawing as much attention as he can. One of the Rathalos ~~has~~ already fallen, and another got its tail cut off.		Outside, groups of hunters are fighting against the Rathalos with all they have. Quite a few have already fainted, but Gannon is still standing strong. He rushed into the fray, drawing as much attention as he can. One of the Rathalos had already fallen, and another got its tail cut off.

	''GUOOOOOOHHHHH!!''		''GUOOOOOOHHHHH!!''
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	The presence of death thrashing all around him gave the boy goosebumps.		The presence of death thrashing all around him gave the boy goosebumps.

	This experience ~~has~~ made Zeeg realize that his existence is so small. He’s scared to death- but he never stopped his hands.		This experience made Zeeg realize that his existence was so small. He’s scared to death- but he never stopped his hands.

	A light flashed from the other side of the wall, followed by a thunderous explosion kicking up a large amount of earth and sand.		A light flashed from the other side of the wall, followed by a thunderous explosion kicking up a large amount of earth and sand.
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	“Hah Hah Hah Hah!”		“Hah Hah Hah Hah!”

	Zeeg caught his breath vigorously, as if he ~~has~~ been forgetting to breathe. His lungs ached.		Zeeg caught his breath vigorously, as if he had been forgetting to breathe. His lungs ached.

	He tried blinking repeatedly to fix his blurry vision, but his tears just wouldn’t stop.		He tried blinking repeatedly to fix his blurry vision, but his tears just wouldn’t stop.
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	The brilliance caused the boy’s tears to well up again.		The brilliance caused the boy’s tears to well up again.

	Two others stood beside her. Gannon, who ~~has~~ injuries all over his body, one of the horns on his Diablo Mail broken. Fradio, who ~~has~~ sustained light ~~burn injuries~~ on his bare chest.		Two others stood beside her. Gannon, who had injuries all over his body, one of the horns on his Diablo Mail broken. Fradio, who had sustained light burns on his bare chest.

	“Yeah.”		“Yeah.”

Barnnn: Fixed paragraphs' structures to be closer to the raws

2017-08-02T11:08:40Z

Fixed paragraphs' structures to be closer to the raws

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Barnnn: Fixed Translation Error (Diablos Hammer > Diablos Maul)

2017-07-03T14:59:45Z

Fixed Translation Error (Diablos Hammer > Diablos Maul)

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	The strike was so strong that his shoulder could have been dislocated.		The strike was so strong that his shoulder could have been dislocated.

	Her brute strength shouldn’t be surprising, since the girl can wield the massive Diablos ~~Hammer~~ without breaking a sweat.		Her brute strength shouldn’t be surprising, since the girl can wield the massive Diablos Maul without breaking a sweat.

	However, her build doesn’t give Zeeg that impression at all, causing the boy to let his guard down.		However, her build doesn’t give Zeeg that impression at all, causing the boy to let his guard down.

Sir Trollface: /* Chapter 5 - Monster Hunter */ Typo fix: Destoryers → Destroyers

2017-04-28T14:11:54Z

Chapter 5 - Monster Hunter: Typo fix: Destoryers → Destroyers

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	Overhead, a Rathalos let out a roar and swooped down, shooting a fireball as it flew past.		Overhead, a Rathalos let out a roar and swooped down, shooting a fireball as it flew past.

	It hit one of the Dragon ~~Destoryers~~- the very one that shot one of its kind down.		It hit one of the Dragon Destroyers- the very one that shot one of its kind down.

	The cannon was smashed to pieces in the explosion.		The cannon was smashed to pieces in the explosion.

Sir Trollface: /* Chapter 5 - Monster Hunter */ Typo fix: Rahalos's → Rathalos's

2017-04-28T14:02:12Z

Chapter 5 - Monster Hunter: Typo fix: Rahalos's → Rathalos's

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	Fradio placed his Gypceros hide-covered hand on the paper.		Fradio placed his Gypceros hide-covered hand on the paper.

	“Apparently, this weapon is called the ‘Dragon Destroyer’. In simple terms, they copied the mechanisms of the ~~Rahalos’s~~ fireball attack and used scientific enhancements to increase its firepower. Its core is made from a large amount of Fire Wyvern Marrows, and the barrel is forged from high-purity Machalite. One cannon requires at least 200 Machalite Ores to create.”		“Apparently, this weapon is called the ‘Dragon Destroyer’. In simple terms, they copied the mechanisms of the Rathalos’s fireball attack and used scientific enhancements to increase its firepower. Its core is made from a large amount of Fire Wyvern Marrows, and the barrel is forged from high-purity Machalite. One cannon requires at least 200 Machalite Ores to create.”

	Someone whistled out in astonishment.		Someone whistled out in astonishment.

Barnnn: Fixed some typos

2017-04-28T09:50:09Z

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Barnnn: Created page with "== Chapter 5 - Monster Hunter == “Master... can you feel that?” Called by Becky, the old man calmly opened his eyes. Obviously, he felt it. A strangely uniform tremor..."

2017-04-25T03:36:09Z

Created page with "== Chapter 5 - Monster Hunter == “Master... can you feel that?” Called by Becky, the old man calmly opened his eyes. Obviously, he felt it. A strangely uniform tremor..."

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	Part of the reason was because of the weapon’s weight, but it was mostly due to fear of the Lao-Shan Lung that the he didn’t approve the use of other cannons.		Part of the reason was because of the weapon’s weight, but it was mostly due to fear of the Lao-Shan Lung that the he didn’t approve the use of other cannons.

	In any case, everyone rejoiced the fact that the cannon’s first shot was able to easily take		In any case, everyone rejoiced the fact that the cannon’s first shot was able to easily take down a Rathalos.

	~~down a Rathalos.~~ The Dragon Destroyer has exhibited even more power than expected!		The Dragon Destroyer has exhibited even more power than expected!

	However, they also knew as a fact that preparing the second shot will take time.		However, they also knew as a fact that preparing the second shot will take time.
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	Back at the gathering hall, the knights have been tied up on the floor surrounded by fully armed hunters.		Back at the gathering hall, the knights have been tied up on the floor, surrounded by fully armed hunters.

	Explosions could be heard coming from outside, the tremors causing dust on the ceiling beams to fall off.		Explosions could be heard coming from outside, the tremors causing dust on the ceiling beams to fall off.
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	Brandar crawled in a struggle and grabbed Gannon’s leg, but the large man didn’t take notice of him at all.		Brandar crawled in a struggle and grabbed Gannon’s leg, but the large man didn’t take notice of him at all.

	Successive fireball explosions can be heard coming from the plaza, with the hot wind blowing into the gathering hall ~~at times~~.		Successive fireball explosions can be heard coming from the plaza, with the hot wind occasionally blowing into the gathering hall.

	“P...Please... Help... Please do something about them...”		“P...Please... Help... Please do something about them...”
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	The old man grinned, then reached into his pocket and took out a blank sheet of paper and a fountain pen.		The old man grinned, then reached into his pocket and took out a blank sheet of paper and a fountain pen.

	Passing the pen to ~~brander~~, he whispered something into the knight’s ear. He nodded once.		Passing the pen to Brandar, he whispered something into the knight’s ear.

			Brandar then nodded once.

	With another person supporting his hand, he started signing his name on the blank paper.		With another person supporting his hand, he started signing his name on the blank paper.