Monster Hunter:Volume2 Chapter2 - Revision history

Barnnn: Minor revision

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Sir Trollface at 15:18, 21 September 2017

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	From under his Ioprey Helm, Zeeg kept an eye on the Genpreys that have lost their vision, then took a deep breath and sharpened his five senses so that he would feel any change in the surrounding environment.		From under his Ioprey Helm, Zeeg kept an eye on the Genpreys that have lost their vision, then took a deep breath and sharpened his five senses so that he would feel any change in the surrounding environment.

	The wyverns that he have fought up until today- be it the Rathalos, Rathian, Yian Kut-Ku, or even the Cephadrome, if a ~~Falsh~~ Bomb was thrown, all of them would be distracted by the object’s arc.		The wyverns that he have fought up until today- be it the Rathalos, Rathian, Yian Kut-Ku, or even the Cephadrome, if a Flash Bomb was thrown, all of them would be distracted by the object’s arc.

	However, it is different for this Monoblos. When it feels a threat, the wyvern will follow its instincts and burrow underground, with the person who threw the Flash Bomb ending up being the only one to get their vision interrupted.		However, it is different for this Monoblos. When it feels a threat, the wyvern will follow its instincts and burrow underground, with the person who threw the Flash Bomb ending up being the only one to get their vision interrupted.
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	Probably because it’s too close to the summit.		Probably because it’s too close to the summit.

	Elmeria has never seen any living things in the surrounding area- though there were rumors that Rathalos could be encountered here.		Elmeria has never seen any living things in the surrounding area- though there were rumors that a Rathalos could be encountered here.

	A little further ahead is where the valley ends, and to their left is a path that leads to the cliff on the other side. From where they are standing, molten rock could be seen spewing up endlessly.		A little further ahead is where the valley ends, and to their left is a path that leads to the cliff on the other side. From where they are standing, molten rock could be seen spewing up endlessly.

Barnnn at 14:39, 13 July 2017

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	“What do we do, then? The solution is simple. Just hunt the Monoblos. The reward money for this quest will be from the Shopkeeper’s Guild, the Trader’s Guild, and also this village’s funds. Anyone will do. Is there anyone who thinks they’re up for the challenge? The contract fee will be... let’s see, 800 Zenny! And how about 3400 Zenny for the quest reward money?”		“What do we do, then? The solution is simple. Just hunt the Monoblos. The reward money for this quest will be from the Shopkeeper’s Guild, the Trader’s Guild, and also this village’s funds. Anyone will do. Is there anyone who thinks they’re up for the challenge? The contract fee will be... let’s see, 800 Zenny! And how about 3400 Zenny for the quest reward money?”

	The Village Chief looked around at the ~~hunter~~ once more, but there was no one who raised their hand.		The Village Chief looked around at the hunters once more, but there was no one who raised their hand.

	Anyone whose eyes met with the Village Chief’s would turn their faces away in a panic.		Anyone whose eyes met with the Village Chief’s would turn their faces away in a panic.

Barnnn: fixed typo

2017-07-13T14:36:09Z

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	On occasions, Gannon would say,		On occasions, Gannon would say,

	“All this is for you to have no worries when it comes ~~them~~ time for me to leave your side.”		“All this is for you to have no worries when it comes the time for me to leave your side.”

	Elmeria initially thought it to be about hunters acknowledging that death can arrive at any moment. Ever since she became aware of the incident however, she suspected that Gannon could be intending to return her to the so-called House Elbrenfort one day.		Elmeria initially thought it to be about hunters acknowledging that death can arrive at any moment. Ever since she became aware of the incident however, she suspected that Gannon could be intending to return her to the so-called House Elbrenfort one day.

Barnnn: fixed grammar

2017-07-11T11:08:17Z

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	If that is true, then the horn should be in the Village Chief’s house, but Zeeg doesn’t remember seeing it when he went there once.		If that is true, then the horn should be in the Village Chief’s house, but Zeeg doesn’t remember seeing it when he went there once.

	Then again, the boy ~~didn’t know~~ about the old man’s status as a hero, so he ~~didn’t pay~~ any attention to the details of the house’s interior.		Then again, the boy hadn't known about the old man’s status as a hero, so he hadn't paid any attention to the details of the house’s interior.

	“The caravan has been completely wiped out...”		“The caravan has been completely wiped out...”
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	After he has been patched up, the merchant continued speaking in an exhausted state.		After he has been patched up, the merchant continued speaking in an exhausted state.

	This man ~~got~~ on the carriage of a merchant caravan that happened to be headed in the same direction. While crossing the desert to get to the oasis, they were met with the wyvern’s assault.		This man had gotten on the carriage of a merchant caravan that happened to be headed in the same direction. While crossing the desert to get to the oasis, they were met with the wyvern’s assault.

	The caravan seemed to have five wandering hunters as guards, but they have been swept away by the Monoblos, and also pursued by the Genpreys that have gathered around the scene, ultimately ending in their annihilation.		The caravan seemed to have five wandering hunters as guards, but they have been swept away by the Monoblos, and also pursued by the Genpreys that have gathered around the scene, ultimately ending in their annihilation.
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	(“That’s expected.”)		(“That’s expected.”)

	Zeeg understood those hunters’ feelings. The boy’s past self would have immediately ~~raise~~ his hand, but now he knows that the Monoblos is no easy foe, both from the Hero’s story, and also the fact that the caravan guards were useless against it. Then again, those hunters failing could also be due to them accepting the job with a group of five members, which is considered to bring bad luck.		Zeeg understood those hunters’ feelings. The boy’s past self would have immediately raised his hand, but now he knows that the Monoblos is no easy foe, both from the Hero’s story and also the fact that the caravan guards were useless against it. Then again, those hunters failing could also be due to them accepting the job with a group of five members, which is considered to bring bad luck.

	Finally, the Village Chief’s line of sight stopped at Vivi. The hunters, Zeeg included, didn’t understand why the Chief would look at the maid in black.		Finally, the Village Chief’s line of sight stopped at Vivi. The hunters, Zeeg included, didn’t understand why the Chief would look at the maid in black.
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	“...I’ll give it a try.”		“...I’ll give it a try.”

	The boy gave an answer, not saying ~~“leave~~ it to me” or “This will be easy” like he used to.		The boy gave an answer, not saying “Leave it to me” or “This will be easy” like he used to.

	Just as the Village Chief said, the hunt has no absolutes. A single error in judgement can easily lead to one’s death. Moreover, if the opponent is a wyvern, it is equal to having death follow oneself like a shadow.		Just as the Village Chief said, the hunt has no absolutes. A single error in judgement can easily lead to one’s death. Moreover, if the opponent is a wyvern, it is equal to having death follow oneself like a shadow.

Barnnn: Fixed some typos

2017-07-09T15:25:44Z

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	The Village Chief looked at all of the hunters that have gathered here.		The Village Chief looked at all of the hunters that have gathered here.

	“If the desert route is not useable, the merchants would have to take a large detour in		“If the desert route is not useable, the merchants would have to take a large detour in order to get to this village. If that is the case, the prices of the goods will rise significantly. The time it takes for delivering requested items will also increase. We cannot have the clients handle the transportation costs, which means reward money for quests will be reduced.”

	order to get to this village. If that is the case, the prices of the goods will rise significantly. The time it takes for delivering requested items will also increase. We cannot have the clients handle the transportation costs, which means reward money for quests will be reduced.”

	Voices of dissatisfaction sounded among the hunters, and the Village Chief nodded.		Voices of dissatisfaction sounded among the hunters, and the Village Chief nodded.
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	Zeeg has already seen countless examples over the past year.		Zeeg has already seen countless examples over the past year.

	Many parties would drink merrily at the gathering hall only to become charred remains along with their armors and weapons, leaving city in small boxes.		Many parties would drink merrily at the gathering hall only to become charred remains along with their armors and weapons, leaving the city in small boxes.

	That hasn’t happened to Zeeg or anyone in Elmeria’s party, but there’s no guarantee on what will happen in the future.		That hasn’t happened to Zeeg or anyone in Elmeria’s party, but there’s no guarantee on what will happen in the future.

Barnnn: Created page with "== Chapter 2 - Their Days Off == “That would be the one-horned herbivore wyvern, Monoblos.” After hearing the merchant’s story, the Village Chief made that declaration..."

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