Monster Hunter:Volume2 Chapter5 - Revision history

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	“But- From now on, you should never party up with anybody else again.”		“But... From now on, you should never party up with anybody else again.”

	“Elmeria!”		“Elmeria!”
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	“Right.”		“Right.”

	Freda moved away from Fradio and knelt down in front of the Khezu’s corpse, then took out a carving knife ~~distributed to every hunter~~ and stripped off a sheet of Flabby Hide.		Freda moved away from Fradio and knelt down in front of the Khezu’s corpse, then took out her hunter-issued carving knife and stripped off a sheet of the creature's Flabby Hide.

	It was the very moment that reminded everyone that she’s certainly a hunter.		It was the very moment that reminded everyone that she’s certainly a hunter.
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	“Eh!?”		“Eh!?”

	~~That surprised~~ Zeeg.		Zeeg was taken by surprise.

	“You’re going already-”		“You’re going already-”
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	His first kiss, shared with Freda, had the faint taste of blood.		His first kiss, shared with Freda, had the faint taste of blood.

	“Gwuoh-!”		“Gwuoh--!”

	A thump sounded as stars scattered right ~~before~~ the boy’s eyes.		A thump sounded as stars scattered right inside the boy’s eyes.

	He knew that a solid fist had been brought down on the top of his head, but he needed a little more time until he fully realized it.		He knew that a solid fist had been brought down on the top of his head, but he needed a little more time until he fully realized it.
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	Elmeria snorted arrogantly while waving her fist.		Elmeria snorted arrogantly while waving her fist.

	“What was that for-!”		“What was that for--!”

	“It’s because you were spacing out! Get your act together! It’ll be annoying if we don’t get back to the basecamp before it gets dark, you know!”		“It’s because you were spacing out! Get your act together! It’ll be annoying if we don’t get back to the basecamp before it gets dark, you know!”
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	While grumbling to himself, Zeeg fastened his Ioprey Helm to his waist, picked up the Diablo Spear, and went to Gannon to lend him a shoulder.		While grumbling to himself, Zeeg fastened his Ioprey Helm to his waist, picked up the Diablo Spear, and went to Gannon to lend him a shoulder.

	“...Sorry.”		“...Sorry for the trouble.”

	Gannon expressed his gratitude to Zeeg in a straightforward manner as he stood up, ~~but somehow a~~ puzzled expression ~~was~~ painted on his face.		Gannon expressed his gratitude to Zeeg in a straightforward manner as he stood up, albeit with an apparently puzzled expression painted on his face.

	Elmeria lent Fradio her shoulder and walked up to the other two, then gave the boy another glare.		Elmeria lent Fradio her shoulder and walked up to the other two, then gave the boy another glare.
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	(“I just don’t get it.”)		(“I just don’t get it.”)

	However, Zeeg did not inquire anyone for the reason. He ~~just doesn’t~~ want to spark any arguments ~~right now~~.		However, Zeeg did not inquire anyone for the reason. He simply did not want to spark any arguments for the time being.

	As all four members made their exit from the cave, night had already started its fall, apparent from the encroaching darkness.		As all four members made their exit from the cave, night had already started its fall, apparent from the encroaching darkness.

	~~Keeping~~ wary of any Ioprey or Genprey encounters, Zeeg and the others walked off, their destination being the basecamp.		Staying wary of any Ioprey or Genprey encounters, Zeeg and the others walked off, their destination being the basecamp.

	“Good grief... I truly want to wash my body right now, more than anything.”		“Good grief... I truly want to wash my body right now, more than anything.”
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	Fradio gave that answer.		Fradio gave that answer.

	The answer felt so genuine and relatable that Elmeria ~~couldn’t~~ help but break into laughter. ~~It’s~~ as if she had completely forgotten the motives behind hitting Zeeg’s head earlier.		The answer felt so genuine and relatable that Elmeria could not help but break into laughter. It was as if she had completely forgotten the motives behind hitting Zeeg’s head earlier.

	~~And that’s why~~ Zeeg also joined in the laughing, forgetting that he had just been hit. He thought of it as making an oath to not ask her why the girl did what she did.		For that reason, Zeeg also joined in the laughing, forgetting that he had just been hit. He thought of it as making an oath to not ask her why the girl did what she did.

	Roars of thunder could be heard in the distance, as the night approached ~~together~~ with the deepening fog.		Roars of thunder could be heard in the distance as the night approached with the deepening fog.


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	Zeeg and the others made it safely back to the basecamp, but Freda was nowhere to be found.		Zeeg and the others made it safely back to the basecamp, but Freda was nowhere to be found.

	They instead met another hunting party that had arranged to use the basecamp, ~~the explanation being~~ that the girl had ~~already left after borrowing~~ a boat.		They instead met another hunting party that had arranged to use the basecamp, with them explaining that the girl had borrowed a boat and already departed.

	-However, nobody was surprised.		--However, nobody was surprised.

	They had a feeling that it would turn out like this. ~~That is beause~~ the girl had already said her goodbye.		They had a feeling that it would turn out like this. After all, the girl had already said her goodbye.

	Even so, Elmeria had a bitter expression painted on her face. She was probably thinking about how the words she spoke earlier could have been what drove Freda away.		Even so, Elmeria had a bitter expression painted on her face. She was probably thinking about how the words she spoke earlier could have been what drove Freda away.
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	Turning away from the river, Elmeria looked at Zeeg before suddenly wiping the boy’s lips with her thumb.		Turning away from the river, Elmeria looked at Zeeg before suddenly wiping the boy’s lips with her thumb.

	“Wha-! What was that for-!”		“Wha--! What was that for--!”

	“-It’s all bloody.”		“--It’s all bloody.”

	With an expression showing that she was angry for some reason, Elmeria wiped her thumb on her thigh before nudging Zeeg’s arm.		With an expression showing that she was angry for some reason, Elmeria wiped her thumb on her thigh before nudging Zeeg’s arm.
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	“Right... I’ll leave it to you.”		“Right... I’ll leave it to you.”

	With that, Elmeria went back to her usual expression ~~that’s~~ written with sarcastic remarks like ~~“It can’t be helped”~~, before lightly grabbing Zeeg’s arm and walking onwards.		With that, Elmeria went back to her usual expression, written with sarcastic remarks like “what would you do without me?”, before lightly grabbing Zeeg’s arm and walking onwards.

	Members of two parties ~~surrounded~~ the bonfire, already ~~starting~~ to drink. The boy and the girl walked on, welcomed by the warm radiance of fire and the merry laughter among comrades.		Members of two the parties, gathered around the bonfire, had already started to drink. The boy and the girl walked on, welcomed by the warm radiance of fire and the merry laughter among comrades.

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Barnnn at 10:30, 8 May 2018

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	== Chapter 5 - Albino Wyvern ==		== Chapter 5 - Albino Wyvern ==

	The surrounding area was filled with a burning smell, with white smoke ~~different~~ from fog drifting from the ~~great number~~ of corpses half-submerged in water.		The surrounding area was filled with a burning smell, with white smoke aside from fog drifting from the multitude of corpses half-submerged in water.

	Deep red skin and swollen head- ~~they’re~~ small bipedal carnivore monsters, the kind that spit poison from sacs inside their throats.		Deep red skin and swollen head- they were small bipedal carnivore monsters, the kind that spit poison from sacs inside their throats.

	All six of them, dead.		All six of them, dead.
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	-''BWOOOOOH...''		-''BWOOOOOH...''

	A bizarre roar sounded from its headless neck. However, it ~~didn’t~~ seem to have any intention to land, but rather keep its altitude as it slowly flew away.		A bizarre roar sounded from its headless neck. However, it did not seem to have any intention to land, but rather keep its altitude as it slowly flew away.

	(“That’s a Khezu...?”)		(“That’s a Khezu...?”)

	Zeeg focused his eyes. However, he ~~couldn’t~~ get a good look due to the fog’s obstruction.		Zeeg focused his eyes. However, he could not get a good look due to the fog’s obstruction.

	“Gannon, that’s-!!”		“Gannon, that’s-!!”
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	At any rate, Zeeg understood fully that he’s unable to do anything by himself in the current situation.		At any rate, Zeeg understood fully that he’s unable to do anything by himself in the current situation.

	Keeping his eyes on the Khezu, Zeeg crept towards Elmeria and the others. In his head, the boy was trying to shake off negative thoughts, ~~like~~ the possibility of their internal organs having been cooked well-done like those Iopreys from earlier.		Keeping his eyes on the Khezu, Zeeg crept towards Elmeria and the others. In his head, the boy was trying to shake off negative thoughts, such as the possibility of their internal organs having been cooked well-done like those Iopreys from earlier.

	“Elmeria! Freda! Gannon!”		“Elmeria! Freda! Gannon!”
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	Zeeg shook up the bodies of those three.		Zeeg shook up the bodies of those three.

	Although there was a burnt smell, it ~~wasn’t~~ as bad as when they found the Iopreys. The only apparent external effect was only a small amount of burnt hair.		Although there was a burnt smell, it was not as bad as when they found the Iopreys. The only apparent external effect was only a small amount of burnt hair.

	The first one to ~~come to their senses~~ was Elmeria.		The first one to regain consciousness was Elmeria.

	“Elmeria!”		“Elmeria!”

Barnnn at 10:12, 8 May 2018

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2018-02-15T05:29:38Z

Chapter 5 - Albino Wyvern

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	Its blood sprayed into the puddle, causing ripples.		Its blood sprayed into the puddle, causing ripples.

	The Genprey was cut clean as its internal organs ~~and~~ scattered from the cross section; its life ended in one attack.		The Genprey was cut clean as its internal organs scattered from the cross section; its life ended in one attack.

	“If it’s these things, then I have no complaints about making this baby’s debut!”		“If it’s these things, then I have no complaints about making this baby’s debut!”

Barnnn at 01:12, 2 September 2017

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	A great sword is unable to reach all the way up to the ceiling.		A great sword is unable to reach all the way up to the ceiling.


	At any rate, Zeeg understood fully that he’s unable to do anything by himself in the current situation.		At any rate, Zeeg understood fully that he’s unable to do anything by himself in the current situation.

Barnnn at 01:08, 2 September 2017

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	Freda nodded, as if to state her agreement.		Freda nodded, as if to state her agreement.

	“There’s one more thing you need to know when fighting him. Flash Bombs won’t work. It’s because his eyes have regressed greatly. The methods he uses for finding prey are currently unknown. It’s said that he does not by listening to sound, but by sensing smell and temperature.”		“There’s one more thing you need to know when fighting him. Flash Bombs won’t work. It’s because his eyes have regressed greatly. The methods he uses for finding prey are currently unknown. It’s said that he does not do it by listening to sound, but by sensing smell and temperature.”

	“But that does not mean it does not have a sense of hearing.”		“But that does not mean it does not have a sense of hearing.”

Barnnn at 16:55, 27 August 2017

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	She’ll definitely hit its head, was what Zeeg thought.		She’ll definitely hit its head, was what Zeeg thought.

	However, the Khezu instantly shortened its neck, causing the ~~Breat~~ Core’s swing to shred the air as it banged on the crystal wall. A tremor could be felt throughout the whole cave along with a thunderous echo, as the impact left a large round hole on the wall.		However, the Khezu instantly shortened its neck, causing the Breath Core’s swing to shred the air as it banged on the crystal wall. A tremor could be felt throughout the whole cave along with a thunderous echo, as the impact left a large round hole on the wall.

	Parts of the wall and ceiling then crumbled.		Parts of the wall and ceiling then crumbled.

Barnnn at 16:04, 27 August 2017

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	Upon hearing Freda’s words, Zeeg turned to her. She was kneeling down in front of a puddle, looking at something.		Upon hearing Freda’s words, Zeeg turned to her. She was kneeling down in front of a puddle, looking at something.

	Going near her, soil piled up in a cone shape with a flat top.		Going near her, he could see soil piled up in a cone shape with a flat top.

	“Khezu’s that white wyvern, right? And this was caused by that thing?”		“Khezu’s that white wyvern, right? And this was caused by that thing?”

Barnnn at 15:46, 27 August 2017

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	Freda pointed at the cone-shaped soil pile on the ground.		Freda pointed at the cone-shaped soil pile on the ground.

	“This is a mark from being clung onto by a Khezu’s tail. Besides there’s also how the ~~Ioprey’s~~ died. That couldn’t have been caused by anything but a Khezu.”		“This is a mark from being clung onto by a Khezu’s tail. Besides, there’s also how the Iopreys died. That couldn’t have been caused by anything but a Khezu.”

	“Well, why’s that?”		“Well, why’s that?”

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2017-08-27T15:37:11Z

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