Mushi:Vol1 Ch4 - Revision history

Brynhilde at 00:30, 24 April 2017

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Brynhilde at 10:51, 22 April 2017

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Brynhilde at 23:03, 19 April 2017

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	She was thinking of Sakaki, her beloved.		She was thinking of Sakaki, her beloved.

	Humans will always part from one another. Even if they do nothing, separation will come in the form of ‘death’. Although Rinne could understand such things, she never thought about it before. They won’t be in a teacher-and-student relationship once she graduates from high school. They would become a ordinary couple, and will one day marry and be together forever. They just have some uncertain, sweet dreams. They were not thinking about the separation that will arrive one day at long last. But ow she had to think of death and separation. She had to think how she, who won’t even be granted death, will part with Sakaki. One day Sakaki will die, but she could not. Therefore, she must decide on when she will bid farewell to him. Rinne’s tears fell splattering to the ground.		Humans will always part from one another. Even if they do nothing, separation will come in the form of ‘death’. Although Rinne could understand such things, she never thought about it before. They won’t be in a teacher-and-student relationship once she graduates from high school. They would become a ordinary couple, and will one day marry and be together forever. They just have some uncertain, sweet dreams. They were not thinking about the separation that will arrive one day at long last. But now she had to think of death and separation. She had to think how she, who won’t even be granted death, will part with Sakaki. One day Sakaki will die, but she could not. Therefore, she must decide on when she will bid farewell to him. Rinne’s tears fell splattering to the ground.

	“No...”		“No...”

Brynhilde at 23:01, 19 April 2017

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Brynhilde at 00:52, 13 April 2017

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Brynhilde at 05:11, 19 January 2014

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	== '''Night 4: Loneliness ← Kodoku → Insect Poison''' ==		== '''Night 4: Loneliness ← Kodoku → Insect Poison''' ==
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	As the season had long changed into winter, the air that remained in the school corridors seemed to be particularly cold late at night. Even the hazy scene that seemed to float in the darkness gave off a feeling of a piercing chill. When people talk about an ordinary school rarely praised or criticized, they meant exactly a place like Kannonsakazaki Private High School. However, this ordinary scene was currently showing something incongruously strange. The moonlight that shone in through the window made the corridor glisten with light as if it were a mirror, and a few human figures were wobbling along the bright corridor.		As the season had long changed into winter, the air that remained in the school corridors seemed to be particularly cold late at night. Even the hazy scene that seemed to float in the darkness gave off a feeling of a piercing chill. When people talk about an ordinary school rarely praised or criticized, they meant exactly a place like Kannonsakazaki Private High School. However, this ordinary scene was currently showing something incongruously strange. The moonlight that shone in through the window made the corridor glisten with light as if it were a mirror, and a few human figures were wobbling along the bright corridor.
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	“Anyways, sensei saved me at the risk of his own life. He then resuscitated me, who was hovering near death – Ahh, Guriko, why are you allowing me to say this!”		“Anyways, sensei saved me at the risk of his own life. He then resuscitated me, who was hovering near death – Ahh, Guriko, why are you allowing me to say this!”

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	”Bam", Rinne suddenly knocked on Guriko’s head.		”Bam", Rinne suddenly knocked on Guriko’s head.

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	Then, Guriko launched spoons into the air with the speed of rapid-fire bullets. Spoons pierced the monster’s entire body, thudding into its flesh one after the other, as purple body fluids hemorrhaged from the wounds.		Then, Guriko launched spoons into the air with the speed of rapid-fire bullets. Spoons pierced the monster’s entire body, thudding into its flesh one after the other, as purple body fluids hemorrhaged from the wounds.

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	Guriko rapidly drew forth new spoons.		Guriko rapidly drew forth new spoons.

Brynhilde: /* Night 4: Loneliness ← Kodoku → Insect Poison */

2013-12-21T03:46:00Z

Night 4: Loneliness ← Kodoku → Insect Poison

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	“That’s right!”		“That’s right!”

	Rinne smiled and laid across the prepared bed. The heated kotatsu table had long ago been pushed to the corner of the room, and the preparations before sleep were already complete.		Rinne smiled and laid across the prepared bed. The heated <span id="Kotatsu">[[Mushi:Vol1_TLnotes#Kotatsu\|kotatsu table]]</span> had long ago been pushed to the corner of the room, and the preparations before sleep were already complete.

	“It’s probably just like that. But my dad – I didn’t have a mom - he didn’t understand my thoughts, and told me off very harshly: ‘don’t ask for such things’. Since I couldn’t understand it, I kept throwing fits. That was probably… the beginning.”		“It’s probably just like that. But my dad – I didn’t have a mom - he didn’t understand my thoughts, and told me off very harshly: ‘don’t ask for such things’. Since I couldn’t understand it, I kept throwing fits. That was probably… the beginning.”

Brynhilde at 02:58, 21 December 2013

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Brynhilde at 08:42, 20 December 2013

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Brynhilde at 08:05, 20 December 2013

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	The scene was changing. ~~She’s~~ always felt that before – before she met Sakaki Guryū, the town had always felt so old and without charisma just like now. Was it going back to the way it was before? Usagawa Rinne sighed, then wiped away the tears that trickled down without her noticing.		The scene was changing. She always felt that before – before she met Sakaki Guryū, the town had always felt so old and without charisma just like now. Was it going back to the way it was before? Usagawa Rinne sighed, then wiped away the tears that trickled down without her noticing.

	The time was seven fifty, almost eight o’clock. Having just finished ~~with~~ her work at the fastfood outlet, Rinne was currently riding her bicycle ~~that was creaking with weird sounds since~~ she hasn’t used it for many years. Every method of keeping herself warm was useless in the winter city after sunset. Rinne curved up her body, enduring the chilling air that seemed to almost erode her body. Apparently she still had residue feelings of ‘pain’ concerning temperature. According to Guriko, it looks like it’ll take a long time for those feelings to disappear.		The time was seven fifty, almost eight o’clock. Having just finished her work at the fastfood outlet, Rinne was currently riding her bicycle she hasn’t used it for many years, creaking with weird sounds. Every method of keeping herself warm was useless in the winter city after sunset. Rinne curved up her body, enduring the chilling air that seemed to almost erode her body. Apparently she still had residue feelings of ‘pain’ concerning temperature. According to Guriko, it looks like it’ll take a long time for those feelings to disappear.

	However, it was said the heartache won’t disappear.		However, it was said the heartache won’t disappear.
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	“What… should I do?”		“What… should I do?”

	She muttered as if she were speaking about someone else. ''What should I do?'' She had always regarded herself as some ~~special~~ existence before she met Guryū. This ~~speciality~~ wasn’t ~~meant~~ in a good way, but in a bad way, as a blemished work, a failure, a malfunctioning ~~thing~~, a piece of crap ~~– however, only~~ after meeting Guryū did she realize she was definitely not some ~~special~~ existence. There is no such thing as a ~~special~~ existence ~~in a~~ good or bad ~~way~~. Everyone breathes, eats, sleeps, and lives ~~as such~~. It is humanity itself that used poverty, personality, social states, and thoughts to classify itself. When she was fifteen, she followed the distinctions that humans made ~~on a whim~~, thinking that she was a ~~special~~ existence, thinking that she was not worthy, useless even ~~she's~~ alive, and thus ~~wanted~~ death. Only when she met Guryū did she understand how to enjoy an ordinary life, and feel that she ~~isn’t special~~, just an ordinary human.		She muttered as if she were speaking about someone else. ''What should I do?'' She had always regarded herself as some different existence before she met Guryū. This 'difference' wasn’t in a good way, but in a bad way, as if she was a blemished work, a failure, a malfunctioning object, a piece of crap. Only after meeting Guryū did she realize she was definitely not some different existence. There was no such thing as a different existence, good or bad. Everyone breathes, eats, sleeps, and lives in the same way. It was humanity itself that used poverty, personality, social states, and thoughts to classify itself. When she was fifteen, she followed the whimsical distinctions that humans made , thinking that she was a different existence, thinking that she was not worthy, useless even alive, and thus desired death. Only when she met Guryū did she understand how to enjoy an ordinary life, and feel that she wasn’t different, just an ordinary human.

	However – she was no longer an ordinary human. How can someone who has eternal life be ordinary? She ~~hasn’t~~ eaten anything, but can still move and speak~~; does~~ such a creature count as human? How can it, how can it be!		However – she was no longer an ordinary human. How can someone who has eternal life be ordinary? She hadn’t eaten anything, but can still move and speak. Does such a creature count as human? How can it, how can it be!

	“Sensei…”		“Sensei…”

	She is thinking of Sakaki, thinking of the existence of her beloved.		She was thinking of Sakaki, thinking of the existence of her beloved.

	Humans will definitely one day part once they meet. Even if they do nothing, one day separation will arrive in the form of ‘death’. Although Rinne could understand such things, ~~she’s~~ never thought about it before. They won’t be in a teacher-and-student relationship once she graduates from high school~~; they’d~~ become a ordinary couple, and will one day marry… and be together forever, just ~~having such~~ uncertain sweet dreams, not thinking about the separation that will arrive one day at last, just living ~~as such~~. However… now she ~~has~~ to think of ~~this; she has~~ to think how she, who won’t even be granted death, part with Sakaki. One day Sakaki will die, but she cannot die. Therefore, she must decide ~~the time~~ to ~~part herself~~. Rinne’s tears fell splattering to the ground.		Humans will definitely one day part once they meet. Even if they do nothing, one day separation will arrive in the form of ‘death’. Although Rinne could understand such things, she never thought about it before. They won’t be in a teacher-and-student relationship once she graduates from high school. They would become a ordinary couple, and will one day marry… and be together forever. They would just have some uncertain sweet dreams, not thinking about the separation that will arrive one day at last, just living on that way. However… now she had to think of these things. She had to think how she, who won’t even be granted death, will part with Sakaki. One day Sakaki will die, but she cannot die. Therefore, she must decide on when to say farewell to him. Rinne’s tears fell splattering to the ground.

	“No…”		“No…”

	No, no, no, Rinne murmured. The bicycle crossed the shopping street, galloping on the uneven ground. The moonlight shone down silently, the grass waved with a rustle, but Rinne was not in the mood to enjoy them.		''No, no, no,'' Rinne murmured. The bicycle crossed the shopping street, galloping on the uneven ground. The moonlight shone down silently, the grass waved with a rustle, but Rinne was not in the mood to enjoy them.

	“How can this be, how can this be…”		“How can this be, how can this be…”
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	She suddenly wanted to see Sakaki very much.		She suddenly wanted to see Sakaki very much.