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	On either side of the highway stretched endless snow-covered fields with coppices scattered here and there. The only man-made object in the rural landscape was a chain of giant electric transmission towers going beyond the horizon… No, wait. There was more, five MiG-21s, walking toward the West.		On either side of the highway stretched endless snow-covered fields with coppices scattered here and there. The only man-made object in the rural landscape was a chain of giant electric transmission towers going beyond the horizon… No, wait. There was more, five MiG-21s, walking toward the West.

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	Gretel reacted just as Irisdina predicted.		Gretel reacted just as Irisdina predicted.
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	Inside the hangar’s fortified suit storage locker room, Katia put on the East German fortified suit she’d just received and stood in front of the mirror, looking herself over as she turned this way and that. “It certainly is the same type as the West… The only difference is in the color…” Katia spun delightedly in front of the mirror. “The size is also a perfect fit for me!” Theodor watched her coldly; she seemed happy for some reason.		Inside the hangar’s fortified suit storage locker room, Katia put on the East German fortified suit she’d just received and stood in front of the mirror, looking herself over as she turned this way and that. “It certainly is the same type as the West… The only difference is in the color…” Katia spun delightedly in front of the mirror. “The size is also a perfect fit for me!” Theodor watched her coldly; she seemed happy for some reason.

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	“—Sounds like you had it tough, young lady.”		“—Sounds like you had it tough, young lady.”

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	The most dangerous of the debris—the right wing’s No. 3 engine, which was more than six meters long, was hurled on a direct course towards Theodor by the enormous blast. The flash, the explosion, the flames, the shock—amidst all these, Theodor clearly saw it coming towards him. He instinctively knew that it was already too late to use the jump units.		The most dangerous of the debris—the right wing’s No. 3 engine, which was more than six meters long, was hurled on a direct course towards Theodor by the enormous blast. The flash, the explosion, the flames, the shock—amidst all these, Theodor clearly saw it coming towards him. He instinctively knew that it was already too late to use the jump units.

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	“—The Ministry of National Defence Political Headquarters and the Ministry of State Security are separate organizations! Don’t group us with them!”		“—The Ministry of National Defence Political Headquarters and the Ministry of State Security are separate organizations! Don’t group us with them!”

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	Theodor froze at the scene that was unfolding before him. He was so overwhelmed with fear that he couldn’t make a move.		Theodor froze at the scene that was unfolding before him. He was so overwhelmed with fear that he couldn’t make a move.

Gabgrave: /* Chapter 2 The Girl from the West */

2014-03-16T03:32:13Z

Chapter 2 The Girl from the West

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158.117.22.34: /* Chapter 2 The Girl from the West */ Updated with edits by DT MkIII. This is an unvetted edit, and I will do corrections once I have time.

2014-03-14T06:34:21Z

Chapter 2 The Girl from the West: Updated with edits by DT MkIII. This is an unvetted edit, and I will do corrections once I have time.

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SirEatALot at 06:46, 12 March 2014

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	On both sides of the highway, stretched endless snow-covered fields with coppices scattered here and there. The only man-made object in the rural landscape was a chain of giant electric transmission towers going beyond the horizon ... No, wait. There was more, five MiG-21s, walking toward the West.		On both sides of the highway, stretched endless snow-covered fields with coppices scattered here and there. The only man-made object in the rural landscape was a chain of giant electric transmission towers going beyond the horizon ... No, wait. There was more, five MiG-21s, walking toward the West.

Gabgrave: Updated 'Company' to 'Squadron' across, changed a few phrases.

2013-11-13T08:22:14Z

Updated 'Company' to 'Squadron' across, changed a few phrases.

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Ssj6piccolo: Made Heading from Title

2013-11-03T15:24:38Z

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	~~<big>~~Chapter ~~two</big>~~		==Chapter 2 The Girl from the West==


	~~<big>'''~~The Girl from the West~~'''</big>~~

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2013-09-22T04:27:59Z

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	Irisdine held out her right hand. Realizing the meaning, Katia grasp it tightly with a smile across her face.		Irisdine held out her right hand. Realizing the meaning, Katia grasp it tightly with a smile across her face.

	~~“Yesu~~~! Thank you very much!”		“Yes! Thank you very much!”

	“In our squadron, we are always short of pilots. Therefore I would like to assign you as a pilot. Is that acceptable?”		“In our squadron, we are always short of pilots. Therefore I would like to assign you as a pilot. Is that acceptable?”
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	“Humph, Fighting the BETA isn’t the only job a Commissar has.”		“Humph, Fighting the BETA isn’t the only job a Commissar has.”

	“E-~~Excusu~~~ me! There was one more thing I wanted to ask…”		“E-Excuse me! There was one more thing I wanted to ask…”

	Katia tried to ask Gretel.		Katia tried to ask Gretel.
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	“Ah, you mean your personal belongings that were in the control unit? No need to worry, I am holding on to it for now. I checked the contents just to be sure, but there wasn’t anything suspicious in it. I’ll return it once things have settled down.”		“Ah, you mean your personal belongings that were in the control unit? No need to worry, I am holding on to it for now. I checked the contents just to be sure, but there wasn’t anything suspicious in it. I’ll return it once things have settled down.”

	“Ah, thank you very much~~~su~~!”		“Ah, thank you very much!”

	“Then, for the familiarization of the base, adjustment of the fortified suit, and your duties in the squadron, you will be under the guidance of ''Unterleutnant'' Theodore Eberbach.”		“Then, for the familiarization of the base, adjustment of the fortified suit, and your duties in the squadron, you will be under the guidance of ''Unterleutnant'' Theodore Eberbach.”
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	“Is our relationship close enough that you can call me by name?”		“Is our relationship close enough that you can call me by name?”

	~~“…Su~~~…”		“…Auu~…”

	“And secondly, don’t treat me like a savior. I was only following orders. On the battlefield, helping someone is just an everyday thing...”		“And secondly, don’t treat me like a savior. I was only following orders. On the battlefield, helping someone is just an everyday thing...”
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	“…Eberbach.”		“…Eberbach.”

	~~“Ah…su~~~! S-sorry!”		“Ah…! S-sorry!”

	“…Third, don’t bother trying to get close to me.”		“…Third, don’t bother trying to get close to me.”

	“Ehh-~~su~~~? Why…?”		“Ehh-? Why…?”

	“Because I don’t like it.”		“Because I don’t like it.”
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	Taking his place was Katia in her fortified suit, who had just exited the locker room, looking as happy as always.		Taking his place was Katia in her fortified suit, who had just exited the locker room, looking as happy as always.

	“I put on the second one ~~su~~~!”		“I put on the second one!”

	“…”		“…”
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	Katia placed her hand to her cheek in a daze, confused about what just happened to her.		Katia placed her hand to her cheek in a daze, confused about what just happened to her.

	“A-ah, what… it hurts~~-su~~!”		“A-ah, what… it hurts!”

	This time, Katia received a backhand slap to the right cheek, knocking her to the floor.		This time, Katia received a backhand slap to the right cheek, knocking her to the floor.

Gabgrave at 15:09, 18 September 2013

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	“Commander of the TSF battalion “Werewolf”, Major Beatrix Brehmer…”		“Commander of the TSF battalion “Werewolf”, Major Beatrix Brehmer…”

	As if they were preparing to suppress an enemy, the TSF battalion called “Werewolf” took up battle positions, their assault cannons firmly ~~locked~~ on to them...		As if they were preparing to suppress an enemy, the TSF battalion called “Werewolf” took up battle positions, their assault cannons firmly locking on to them...

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Gabgrave at 15:08, 18 September 2013

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	“Commander of the TSF battalion “Werewolf”, Major Beatrix Brehmer…”		“Commander of the TSF battalion “Werewolf”, Major Beatrix Brehmer…”

	As if they were preparing to suppress an enemy, the TSF battalion called “Werewolf” took up battle positions, ~~staring at them down the barrels of~~ their assault cannons.		As if they were preparing to suppress an enemy, the TSF battalion called “Werewolf” took up battle positions, their assault cannons firmly locked on to them...

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Gabgrave at 15:00, 18 September 2013

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	“Commander of the TSF battalion “Werewolf”, Major Beatrix Brehmer…”		“Commander of the TSF battalion “Werewolf”, Major Beatrix Brehmer…”

	~~The~~ TSF battalion called “Werewolf” took up battle positions, ~~as if they were preparing to suppress an enemy, adjusting~~ the ~~sights~~ of their assault cannons.		As if they were preparing to suppress an enemy, the TSF battalion called “Werewolf” took up battle positions, staring at them down the barrels of their assault cannons.

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