Nogizaka Haruka no Himitsu:Volume1 Chapter4 - Revision history

Rxls at 13:19, 4 April 2017

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	===Chapter 4===		==Chapter 4==

	July.		July.

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2012-09-16T00:11:42Z

Chapter 4

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	"Sign......"		"Sign......"

	I threw all the letters into the furnace. I had wanted to just leave them there on the ground, but these letters all had my name written on it, so I don't get rid of them, I'll probably be seen as the person responsible for writing all the letter. The hate mail writers are really smart to even take that into account! If they were willing to use those brains of theirs in more constructive ways, our steadily regressing standard of living would be better wouldn't it?		I threw all the letters into the furnace. I had wanted to just leave them there on the ground, but these letters all had my name written on it, so if I don't get rid of them, I'll probably be seen as the person responsible for writing all the letter. The hate mail writers are really smart to even take that into account! If they were willing to use those brains of theirs in more constructive ways, our steadily regressing standard of living would be better wouldn't it?

	I sighed as I opened up a few of them.		I sighed as I opened up a few of them.

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2011-06-06T03:20:39Z

Chapter 4

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	Even though it sounds like a piece of profound knowledge that she was trying to impart, it was actually only drunken rambling. The more Yukari continued to ramble, the more excited she became, even giving me a thumbs up.		Even though it sounds like a piece of profound knowledge that she was trying to impart, it was actually only drunken rambling. The more Yukari continued to ramble, the more excited she became, even giving me a thumbs up.

	"How about this, Yuu-~~cham~~? Let's save the earth together!"		"How about this, Yuu-chan? Let's save the earth together!"

	"I'll have to politely decline!"		"I'll have to politely decline!"

187.36.132.92: /* Chapter 4 */

2011-06-06T03:19:25Z

Chapter 4

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	If she uses this to bombard me, my heart will be very painful.		If she uses this to bombard me, my heart will be very painful.

	"Yuu-chan, you're like a male zebra during the mating season. You're channeling all your pent-up desire into Haruka. I'm trying to stop you because of the potentially disastrous consequences. Do you ~~that~~ that it is an extremely tiring job to hold down a wild animal full of pent-up desire?"		"Yuu-chan, you're like a male zebra during the mating season. You're channeling all your pent-up desire into Haruka. I'm trying to stop you because of the potentially disastrous consequences. Do you know that it is an extremely tiring job to hold down a wild animal full of pent-up desire?"

	"Don't talk about your own fantasies as though they were real!"		"Don't talk about your own fantasies as though they were real!"

Starkiller4299 at 20:27, 1 April 2011

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	Having managed to successfully stave off the threat of holiday classes (I barely scraped through quite a few subjects), I was chatting with the three idiots and a block head (Nobunaga, but subjectively, people probably think of us as the five idiots) as usual during the lunch break.		Having managed to successfully stave off the threat of holiday classes (I barely scraped through quite a few subjects), I was chatting with the three idiots and a block head (Nobunaga, but subjectively, people probably think of us as the five idiots) as usual during the lunch break.

	"It's summer, so we should go to the beach. The crashing waves, the hot sun, the burning sands, and the passionate watermelon-hitting competition. This is how we Japanese people ~~enjoy~~......but why are there only guys!"		"It's summer, so we should go to the beach. The crashing waves, the hot sun, the burning sands, and the passionate watermelon-hitting competition. This is how we Japanese people relax......but why are there only guys!"

	"You're right. Our second choice is to go into the mountains to get away from the heat, this is how a Japanese summer should be......but we might be attacked by bears!"		"You're right. Our second choice is to go into the mountains to get away from the heat, this is how a Japanese summer should be......but we might be attacked by bears!"
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	In the end, the situation persisted all the way until Haruka graduated from middle school. Which means that Haruka ended her middle school life on an extremely bad note.		In the end, the situation persisted all the way until Haruka graduated from middle school. Which means that Haruka ended her middle school life on an extremely bad note.

	"~~One~~-chan had originally planned to continue studying in the high school section of the Seijyukan Girls School, but...Because of that incident, she had no choice but to transfer to Hakujō Academy. Since there's quite a bit of distance between the Seijyukan Girls School and Hakujo Academy, so no one would know about onee-chan's hobby."		"Onee-chan had originally planned to continue studying in the high school section of the Seijyukan Girls School, but...Because of that incident, she had no choice but to transfer to Hakujō Academy. Since there's quite a bit of distance between the Seijyukan Girls School and Hakujo Academy, so no one would know about onee-chan's hobby."

	The Seijyukan Girls School has a full nineteen-year educational system, that goes all the way from kindergarden to university, with the aim of grooming true ladies (rumour has it that almost 80% of the students in the school uses honorifics in their daily speech; It is also rumoured that you can throw a pebble into a crowd of Seijyukan Girls School students and definitely hit the daughter of a company president...The school's canteen also provides french crusine), an extremely famous school in our district. Now that I think of it, it is a little strange for someone like Haruka to study at a school like Hakujo Academy, but after hearing about that incident, I completely understand this arrangement.		The Seijyukan Girls School has a full nineteen-year educational system, that goes all the way from kindergarden to university, with the aim of grooming true ladies (rumour has it that almost 80% of the students in the school uses honorifics in their daily speech; It is also rumoured that you can throw a pebble into a crowd of Seijyukan Girls School students and definitely hit the daughter of a company president...The school's canteen also provides french crusine), an extremely famous school in our district. Now that I think of it, it is a little strange for someone like Haruka to study at a school like Hakujo Academy, but after hearing about that incident, I completely understand this arrangement.
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	Haruka cut Sasaoka off.		Haruka cut Sasaoka off.

	"Yuuto-san is an ~~extreely~~ good person. He's kind, caring, and one of the people I really respect. It's such a pity that you're insulting him like this, so I would really appreciate it if you were to stop now."		"Yuuto-san is an extremely good person. He's kind, caring, and one of the people I really respect. It's such a pity that you're insulting him like this, so I would really appreciate it if you were to stop now."

	"Ha...Haruka-san?"		"Ha...Haruka-san?"

74.129.160.183: /* Chapter 4 */

2011-03-30T19:56:11Z

Chapter 4

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Dragonst: Finished up the proper translation of previously unknown words.

2010-12-19T15:46:24Z

Finished up the proper translation of previously unknown words.

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	Hazuki-san knocked on the door, only garnering a muffled squeal in response.		Hazuki-san knocked on the door, only garnering a muffled squeal in response.

	"Onee-chan, onii-chan bought cake from the ~~----~~, let's eat it together!"		"Onee-chan, onii-chan bought cake from the Ginkadou, let's eat it together!"

	Thump, thump, we heard a sound that suggested that the occupant of the room was locked in a struggle between her feelings and temptation.		Thump, thump, we heard a sound that suggested that the occupant of the room was locked in a struggle between her feelings and temptation.
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	In the end, the situation persisted all the way until Haruka graduated from middle school. Which means that Haruka ended her middle school life on an extremely bad note.		In the end, the situation persisted all the way until Haruka graduated from middle school. Which means that Haruka ended her middle school life on an extremely bad note.

	"One-chan had originally planned to continue studying in the high school section of the ~~圣树馆女学院~~, but...Because of that incident, she had no choice but to transfer to Hakujō Academy. Since there's quite a bit of distance between the ~~圣树馆女学院~~ and Hakujo Academy, so no one would know about onee-chan's hobby."		"One-chan had originally planned to continue studying in the high school section of the Seijyukan Girls School, but...Because of that incident, she had no choice but to transfer to Hakujō Academy. Since there's quite a bit of distance between the Seijyukan Girls School and Hakujo Academy, so no one would know about onee-chan's hobby."

	The ~~圣树馆女学院~~ has a full nineteen-year educational system, that goes all the way from kindergarden to university, with the aim of grooming true ladies (rumour has it that almost 80% of the students in the school uses honorifics in their daily speech; It is also rumoured that you can throw a pebble into a crowd of ~~圣树馆女学院~~ students and definitely hit the daughter of a company president...The school's canteen also provides french crusine), an extremely famous school in our district. Now that I think of it, it is a little strange for someone like Haruka to study at a school like Hakujo Academy, but after hearing about that incident, I completely understand this arrangement.		The Seijyukan Girls School has a full nineteen-year educational system, that goes all the way from kindergarden to university, with the aim of grooming true ladies (rumour has it that almost 80% of the students in the school uses honorifics in their daily speech; It is also rumoured that you can throw a pebble into a crowd of Seijyukan Girls School students and definitely hit the daughter of a company president...The school's canteen also provides french crusine), an extremely famous school in our district. Now that I think of it, it is a little strange for someone like Haruka to study at a school like Hakujo Academy, but after hearing about that incident, I completely understand this arrangement.

	"Onee-chan's extremely afraid of the possibility of her secret being exposed, and I should think that it is because of the psychological scars from that bad experience that onee-chan's acting like this now. Onii-chan, I'm placing my trust in you because you're the only person I know of who doesn't shun her in any way after knowing of her secret."		"Onee-chan's extremely afraid of the possibility of her secret being exposed, and I should think that it is because of the psychological scars from that bad experience that onee-chan's acting like this now. Onii-chan, I'm placing my trust in you because you're the only person I know of who doesn't shun her in any way after knowing of her secret."
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	"It won't be like that."		"It won't be like that."

	I understand what Haruka meant, but I didn't think that everyone will react like that. Maybe otakus are strange people in the eyes of the ~~圣树馆女学院~~ ladies, but...in normal schools, one in ten students probably don't mind otakus don't they?		I understand what Haruka meant, but I didn't think that everyone will react like that. Maybe otakus are strange people in the eyes of the Seijyukan Girls School ladies, but...in normal schools, one in ten students probably don't mind otakus don't they?

	Haruka shook her head in response to my reasoning.		Haruka shook her head in response to my reasoning.

Dagger: Oni-chan -> Onii-chan

2010-12-17T09:55:32Z

Oni-chan -> Onii-chan

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2010-12-17T09:44:44Z

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	"Isn't that Ayase from year 2? I heard that he tried to hit on Haruka-sama..."		"Isn't that Ayase from year 2? I heard that he tried to hit on Haruka-sama..."

	"He's trying to woo another girl without taking his eyes off Haruka-~~sams~~?"		"He's trying to woo another girl without taking his eyes off Haruka-sama?"

	"He seems to be enjoy being called 'oni-chan'"		"He seems to be enjoy being called 'oni-chan'"
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	And immediately after that, Haruka pushed the door open with tremendous force as she came out of the room with her arms flailing.		And immediately after that, Haruka pushed the door open with tremendous force as she came out of the room with her arms flailing.

	"On...Only Yuuto-san's off limits! I can let go of everything else, but I won't let go of Yuuto-san! I...I'm the ~~onl~~ one who can go to Akihabara with Yuuto-san!"		"On...Only Yuuto-san's off limits! I can let go of everything else, but I won't let go of Yuuto-san! I...I'm the only one who can go to Akihabara with Yuuto-san!"

	"..."		"..."
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	And it's back to square one. No, not square one, we might even be at square minus three, minus four.		And it's back to square one. No, not square one, we might even be at square minus three, minus four.

	"...Right now, the only thing we can do is to break in. Haruka-sama hasn't ~~eated~~ for the past three days, I'm worried that she's going to collapse."		"...Right now, the only thing we can do is to break in. Haruka-sama hasn't eaten for the past three days, I'm worried that she's going to collapse."

	The maid-san stepped forward.		The maid-san stepped forward.
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	"Hand on, maybe I should try talking to Haruka."		"Hand on, maybe I should try talking to Haruka."

	I stopped Hazuki-san just as she was going to slice the door into half with her chainsaw (her solution's definitely not going to help.		I stopped Hazuki-san just as she was going to slice the door into half with her chainsaw (her solution's definitely not going to help).

	Actually, this problem should be solved the moment I tell Haruka that I've helped her cover up. Because from what Mika told me, I'm thinking the main reason for Haruka's behaviour is because she thinks that her secret has been exposed.		Actually, this problem should be solved the moment I tell Haruka that I've helped her cover up. Because from what Mika told me, I'm thinking the main reason for Haruka's behaviour is because she thinks that her secret has been exposed.
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	After I told Haruka what I had done after she ran off (third-grade acting and cheesy lines included), Haruka's facial expression changed drastically.		After I told Haruka what I had done after she ran off (third-grade acting and cheesy lines included), Haruka's facial expression changed drastically.

	"SO you're saying that, everyone thinks that you're the owner of that megazine?"		"So you're saying that, everyone thinks that you're the owner of that megazine?"

	"Probably."		"Probably."
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	Haruka didn't seem to feel the same way.		Haruka didn't seem to feel the same way.

	"Yuuto-san, you don't understand, you don't understand what this is really about. You don't know how the people around you will treat you once they find out that you have an interest		"Yuuto-san, you don't understand, you don't understand what this is really about. You don't know how the people around you will treat you once they find out that you have an interest that's different from everyone else..."

	that's different from everyone else..."

	Large tears started to roll around in Haruka's eyes.		Large tears started to roll around in Haruka's eyes.
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	And just like that, Haruka's secret was exposed.		And just like that, Haruka's secret was exposed.

	When Haruka was in middle school, she was also extremely popular, which means that her special hobby soon became the talk of the school. From then on, the atmosphere around ~~haruka~~ changed.		When Haruka was in middle school, she was also extremely popular, which means that her special hobby soon became the talk of the school. From then on, the atmosphere around Haruka changed.

	Although she wasn't bullied or ~~insuled~~, the attitude of Haruka's classmates and the way they looked at her completely changed. Even the classmates whom Haruka had thought of as her good friends started to keep their distance from her. At that time, Haruka was like a politician who had just lost an election.		Although she wasn't bullied or insulted, the attitude of Haruka's classmates and the way they looked at her completely changed. Even the classmates whom Haruka had thought of as her good friends started to keep their distance from her. At that time, Haruka was like a politician who had just lost an election.

	According to Mika, Haruka's behaviour at that time was extremely unsettling.		According to Mika, Haruka's behaviour at that time was extremely unsettling.
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	"This is why you won't be alone, Haruka. No matter what happens, I will never leave you."		"This is why you won't be alone, Haruka. No matter what happens, I will never leave you."

	...What am I saying! Am I not saying things that sound like a love confession? What I'm saying now sounds like how a guy would say 'I want to see the reflection of the fireworks in your		...What am I saying! Am I not saying things that sound like a love confession? What I'm saying now sounds like how a guy would say 'I want to see the reflection of the fireworks in your eyes' to a girl when they're watching fireworks.

	eyes' to a girl when they're ~~watchin~~ fireworks.

	"Yuu...Yuuto-san..."		"Yuu...Yuuto-san..."
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	"...Please stay by my side forever."		"...Please stay by my side forever."

	I answered her with another hug. I haven't noticed until now, but the soft, sweet smell of Haruka's hair seems to have a calming effect on people. I really want to stroke her lush, long		I answered her with another hug. I haven't noticed until now, but the soft, sweet smell of Haruka's hair seems to have a calming effect on people. I really want to stroke her lush, long hair...

	hair...

	"...I'm very sorry for spoiling the atmosphere."		"...I'm very sorry for spoiling the atmosphere."
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	Haruka laughed happily.		Haruka laughed happily.

	Ever since that day, Haruka returned to her normal, energetic self (with the aura befitting a daughter of a rich family), the expression on her face devoid of any clues that would point to		Ever since that day, Haruka returned to her normal, energetic self (with the aura befitting a daughter of a rich family), the expression on her face devoid of any clues that would point to how upset she had been merely a week ago.

	how upset she had been merely a week ago.

	"I'm really looking forward to the summer holidays. Ah, right, do you still remember what you promised me the last time?"		"I'm really looking forward to the summer holidays. Ah, right, do you still remember what you promised me the last time?"
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	All in all, things are going well.		All in all, things are going well.

	Through that incident (the one where Haruka's secret was almost exposed), even though Haruka still hasn't been able to fully let go of her bad memories, but--at least she has learnt how to		Through that incident (the one where Haruka's secret was almost exposed), even though Haruka still hasn't been able to fully let go of her bad memories, but--at least she has learnt how to face up to that bad experience. On the other hand, it also turned out to be a blessing in disguise, as the distance between Haruka and I have been shortened by a lot.

	face up to that bad experience. On the other hand, it also turned out to be a blessing in disguise, as the distance between Haruka and I have been shortened by a lot.

	Under the current circumstances, only one problem was left unsolved.		Under the current circumstances, only one problem was left unsolved.
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	To tell the truth, many of my classmates are also members of Haruka's fan club (and they all belong to the more reactionary faction).		To tell the truth, many of my classmates are also members of Haruka's fan club (and they all belong to the more reactionary faction).

	"Would you like to go for a round of wrap-the-~~ayase~~ on the rooftop?"		"Would you like to go for a round of wrap-the-Ayase on the rooftop?"

	"Burying him in the garden as fertilizer for the flowers would be good too!"		"Burying him in the garden as fertilizer for the flowers would be good too!"
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	"It's more exciting to dip him upside-down into the school swimming pool!"		"It's more exciting to dip him upside-down into the school swimming pool!"

	...I should be able to welcome my summer holidays in relative ~~safetly~~, right?		...I should be able to welcome my summer holidays in relative safety, right?

	...No, I seriously doubt that...		...No, I seriously doubt that...

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	Naigai suddenly asked me. Is he trying to drag me down into this as well?		Naigai suddenly asked me. Is he trying to drag me down into this as well?

	"No, no, no, the UV rays at the beach are too strong, they're not ~~goo~~ for health. Camping in the in the mountains full of fresh air is the clever thing to do."		"No, no, no, the UV rays at the beach are too strong, they're not good for health. Camping in the in the mountains full of fresh air is the clever thing to do."

	"Don't you think that having a party at the public park is the best choice? We won't need to spend a lot of money too."		"Don't you think that having a party at the public park is the best choice? We won't need to spend a lot of money too."